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Posted: 14 years ago
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oohhuwwayayy!!
kya baat hay dono bhagg gay hahaha gr8!!!! ncont soon n big thank u 4 the pm!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Oh suja

I'm so damn enjOying d ff

loved d update

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey!u write really well..!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi guys, whats up?

wel, m here again with new update. hope you like it.

but first of all, i'd love to thank you all, who likes my work ... comment on it & also pressed the Like tab.

Thank you so much guys.

if u all r not giving me support, i'd not able to write further. Thank u so much guys .... I Love you.


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PART : 5

I didn't know, who was he? Was it safe to go with him or not? I really didn't know anything. We just run and run in dark. He hold my hand, never loose his grip even for a second. We tried our best to run fast, but heavy rain, slippery mud & dark night are obstacles on our way.
"aur ……… nahi ……… bhag ……. sakti." I breathed heavily. My legs ware paining ………. I need some oxygen … some rest .
He look at me as I sat on the earth. he also breathed heavily. Suddenly we heard screams. I look behind, and found most horrible scene in my life. The robbers ware ignite our busses and murdering them, who was trying to escape.
"bhago …….. jaldi." he pulled me up. But our way was blocked by debris, boulders …… no road to escape ……… I look at him.
"who rahe dono." We looked back …….. a robber 's coming with a gun. We are trying to climbed up on boulder, but it was not easy, specially for me. I slipped down from boulder, he look back, the robber was close, "jaldi karo" he said, trying to pull me up on a huge boulder.
But before he could pull me, the robber come & hit him hard on his leg with gun. I scream as he slipped down from boulder.
"bhagna chahta hai tu?" robber kicked his back hard. He groaned in pain.
The robber laughs, but his laughs converted into moan as he kicked hard in between the robber's thigh.
He broke down in pain, the gun fall form his hand.
We notice, other robber are coming with guns.

We know, we couldn't fight with all of them alone .. There is no other option. "jump.." he shout and pull me with him. We jumped into dark … he still hold my hand tightly as we rolling down on to mud. I closed my eyes tightly in fear … I only sensed that he also rolling down with me, and we rolling down from dark to darker. Suddenly I feel my head was hit with something … I tried to scream, but a palm quickly press my mouth tightly, I know, it was he. I felt dizzy then slowly lost my sense. I remember he tell me something, but I couldn't understood a bit and lost my consciousness.

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I open my eyes and shut immediately …….. I groaned as bright sunlight hit my eyes. I was trying wake up, but my body was aching. Why? Why my body aching so badly? What happened yesterday?

With great difficulty I sat, holding my head tightly, it was throbbing badly. I again closed my eyes tightly, as I rested my head against my plam. Feeling cool breeze brushing me, decreasing my physical pain.

I remember yesterday night. I ran out form my home, maa and papa would never agree, they'd definitely force me to marring that stupid idiot jungle bhalu. I always dreamt to marrying my dream-man, who love me unconditionally, who respect me and my ambitions, I don't want any prince, but also don't want a jungle bhalu too.

But maa, papa? What were thy thinking? Is marriage a game? Marrying this stupid was bad as a suicide. It was MY LIFE afterall .. now I am running from everything. Running form that stupid jerk, running form my marriage.

This thought made me cheerfull. WAH!!!!! Ab main aazad hun!!!!

I open my eyes with so much happiness, but immideately my expression change into a deep shock.

"jungle? Ab ye jungle kahan se aa gaya?" I was in great shock.

I found myself lost, completely lost in the jungle. I dint know where I am! I didn't know where I was supposed tobe, I remembered that I was running behind the bus, and now I find myself in the middle of the jungle.

I was panicked. I looked around here and there, but didn't see anything, there were just trees blocking the way. I was all alone in a jungle.

"ab main kya karun?!" I asked myself. My heart was beating loudly … understand the situation …

agar main aaj mar bhi jaun, to kissi ko pata bhi nahi chalege!

SHUT UP! SHUT UP NUPUR! what the hell was I thinking?! But there wasn't anyone around who could help me. the tears, I hold them from hours, suddenly come out with great force. I was broke down and sat down on the ground, hugging my knee, started crying hysterically. I felt so lonely, crying loudly.

Now, I slowly remember incidents of last night, I was in the bus, the guy, robbers .. and last our jump.

Who ladka! Kahan gaya who? Kal to who mere sath hi tha!

I quickly remove my tears, look my sides. He was laying little far. I quickly reached near him. He was fully cover with mud, which was half dried now and dry mud also cover with dry blood.

"hello ... sunoo … " I patted her cheek.

No response .. he was unconscious or … ???. I placed my hand on her chest ….. ohh!!! relief… he is alive.

I look for water and there was ditch, now filled with clear rain water ….. I silently thanking God.

First I wiped off mud form my dupatta, wet it and rinsed off mud from his face. I did it again and again. Now his face viewing properly …. blood marks on his forehead and his lip.

I trying to wake him up, but no, he was still unconscious. I continue splashing water, but no …. nothing happened, no response.

Tear welling up form my eyes again. I feel restless. "koi haiiii???? please helppppp!" I shout top of my lungs. But no one can answer, only birds cheeping.

I was helpless. Kya mujhe bachane wals aise hi ……. !!!! No, god. Please, do something …. plz plz.

I hold his hand and cried silently. I feel some movement of his fingers. I look at him with hope … he moving his head slowly. I hold his hand tightly, brushing his hair, "hey, are you ok???"

He smile weakly.

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I open my eyes and found myself in front of a pair of beautiful eye. Those eyes were so beautiful, so deep and full with concern. Who is she? Is she a fairy or she is a fairytale itself? Am I dreaming or dead?

"hey. Are you ok?" a sweet voice soothing my ear. My body paining terribly, but her sweet voice lessened my pain. I smile slowly. Who is she?

"yes" I whisper, trying to sit, she hold my hand and made me sit. I shook my head to remove dizziness. Now I remember everything.

I leaved my home. But what about ma? How would she manage without me? and papa? What would he do without me? and dadaji? How dare I forgot him? I am his ladla and today I hurt him.

I love them a lot, and nhow I was running away from them, my family.

I had told maa back that I never planned to get married so soon. If I'd fall in love, then I'd consider in marriage. But the idea of fall in love with someone was next to impossible for me.

OHHH!!!!! SHUT UP!!!!! SHUT UP!!!!!! Don't be weak! It not suited me!

Okay, breath in, breath out. Breath in, breath out …

Now I am ok, and the reality is, I was leave my home permanently.!!!!!

"kya hua, tum thik to ho na?" I jerked out fr my thought.

The girl was still sitting in same position, looking at me with concern.

"mm, kuch nahi, just feel dizzy." I said, rubbing my head.

"pani piyoge?"

"haan, par pani kahan hai?"

She pointed her finger, "hum vaha yeh mud saf kar sakte hai, aur mere pas ek mineral water ka bottle hai." She smiles, "yeh lo." She handed me the bottle.

I immediately drunk some water and feel peace.

I placed my hand to her to stand. We smile each other as we silently thanked our luck.

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Hey Guys,
here's Part>5.
i really hope you liked the part.
i wish that you enjoyed it and that you would want to read in the future too.
please leave your comments, good or bad & please press the 'LIKE' button, as your comments mean a lot to me. they encourage me to write further.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86
nice update one again!
do cont soon!
n thnx for d pm!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely update mayur risked his life for nups so sweet thanks for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it....gr8 yaar...i love the way u cum with gr8 diffrnt concepts..thanks 4 pm...n sorry for late comenting
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi there.......just read first chapter............it's goood........nice intro of both of their families...............👍🏼 will go through other chaps.............😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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chapter -2
hey....it was okk...not so good not so bad...........actually all d convo between smita n nitin was little boring.............😊 but i like nupur's words..just like d nupur from d show..............😆😆 i think nupur in ur ff also knows how to shut everyone's mouth.................😆 wll see wat happns in nupur n mayank's first meet...............😊

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