The World's Oldest Story!! #4 AR - Page 13

Originally posted by: caprigurl

OK if there was one part in the whole FF that I i hate from the core of my heart- it was this
You know why cos it is written so brilliantly that i can feel the exact amount of pain and anguish that Riddhima is going through- and i hate that
And becuase this reminds me a lot of when in the show Armaan left Riddhima when she came looking for him in Panchagani- and i hated that too

And Armaan being emotional i can feel, broken is understandable, guilty i can pardon , but being so helplessly blind to What Riddhima's life is gonna be like is plain dumb :|

The part was awesome;y written- i've always felt like i'm a part of the story when i read this :D
But this was also very very very sad :-(
How can he just Give Up?
Oh right- now i get the Title -____-

Just one thing- I found Armaan a bit emotionless towards the end
If he still loves her- Why the dispassionate statements?
But then maybe thats a facade !

yaar you made me cry

🤣 I loved the part dudette, just same as before
So I need to thank you !!
Its just that i fail to see how Guys can be Thick at times :D

P.S - I needed to add this btw ,hats off to you for actually making a character like Armaan take a step like that in the story.But TBH even though however sad all of it was I think it was the best part in terms of the way you have written it.

Originally posted by: zephyrr

Armaan is relieved that he has at least one supporter!! lol!! 😆

Two 😆

caprigurl : tell me about guys being thick headed.. dont get me started.. this thread is not enough!! 😆

heyyy dear,
awesome part
continue soon
thanks for PM.


love
Riddss

Originally posted by: zephyrr

Ok i am getting hate posts now!! for Armaan!! 🤣 i am sorry guys, but Armaan is as flawed as any other human being.. all the characters are flawed.. That's how the story moves ahead.. and he was the only one who wasnt hated till now.. so i had to add him to the hate list!! i am so sorry.. but they'll see each other sooner than you think.. sooner than they think!! 😉

WORK OF FICTION!!!

Originally posted by: zephyrr

ok people.. relax.. no Sid.. guys you really think i'll go there.. after the dee em gee fiasco.. i hated that track as much as you did..

apart from that, please let armaan deal with the consequences of his actions.. he's lost his head.. let him find it.. and please dont hate me yaar..😆 next to next update will see him face to face with Riddhima.. so chill!! and dont make me give away the story to you..

Sorry Rachna for behaving childish and stupid earlier.I was really frustrated and sad after reading the part .May be because I have taken this story into my heart and cant see Ridhima in such a situation because I am relating to myself as Ridhima.The problem is with me only.After reading the "Love is a lie part",I feel that Ridhima is me.I think you know the reason why.

Sorry once again.By the way you are also responsible for my condition now.You write so beautifully,emotionally and touchy that I cant differentiate between the reel and real life.

I want to add I dont hate you yaar.It was just that moment's frustration.