Maaneet FF**Back in your arms**Updated on Pg 108 - Page 6

Originally posted by: mayuri.vet

Maaneet FF**Back into your arms**

Well guys as I promised you the first part of my FF will be updated to day. Here it goes. I am sure you all know the concept. Please ignore minor mistakes as this is my first ever FF in Geet forum. Hope you guys will enjoy

I am new here guys so don't know many of you here. Positive criticism is and shall always be welcome!

Part 1

Geet is standing facing towards the moon on the terrace. She was thinking about what all happened today. Maan getting to know the truth about dev betraying me. Thought he is Maan's brother; still for my sake and that I should get justice Maan put him behind the bars. I am the cause for all the trouble that is being brewing in the Khurana house. Including dadi's illness. She had to somewhere draw the line she thought. She had to leave her Maan for their as well as his happiness sake. She was in tears now. The very thought of leaving her Maan and to go away from him was killing her. Her heart was bleeding. She was dying a death; it was as if someone was piercing her heart with needles.

Meanwhile Maan helped dadi go to her room. He made her sleep and tucked her in. as he was about to leave, she stopped him. She made her promise her that he should in any case be their with Geet now and support her. She also told him that I don't to even want to see dev in my house now. Did I fail so miserably to bring up my grand sons that dev committed such a sin? Please tell me Maan where did I fail. Blabbering about how she was unsuccessful in bring up dev, she felt asleep. She had too much for the day. The truth had mentally worn her out. Maan saw this and kissed her forehead promised that no harm shall come to them now. Everything was over. Now there would be only happiness everywhere. Saying this he leaves. Switches off the lights, shuts the door behind and goes to the terrace. He knew that Geet would be there only.

Maan sees Geet there, he felt relived that she hadn't gone anywhere. He constantly feared that would any day run away from his life before even he could stop her. His face which showed only pain he caused her; was very visible. He slowly went towards her. She could very well sense that he was very near.

To be continued very soon.

Guys m really sorry for the short part''next update I have to still work it out

Hope you will love this part'..enjoy!!!!........and drop your comments!!!!!....will love to read them'.your comments make my creative cells to work and inspire me to write more parts'

I really dont know all of you guys out here so please it would really sweet of your if you could give a little intro about yourself....

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Hi Mayuri😊

Originally posted by: Absoluv

Good work, Mayuri ...👍🏼...going to the next part...😊

Originally posted by: kellz

plz update soon

Originally posted by: shivangi783

Hi Mayuri😊

This is Shivangi here.

A warm welcome to the Geet forum😊

I just read part 1. Its interesting.

Can you please add me to the PM list?

Part 2

Geet was still standing there facing the sky. Her heart knew that her Maan was there. Right behind her. He slowly came from behind her and gently put his hands on her shoulders. It was an assurance that may the whole world go against her; but he shall always be there with her. That he will and shall always be her strongest support. He slowly turned her towards her. Her face now towards him. She slowly raised her eyes to meet his; all she saw in those eyes was love and love only for her. She thought that she would soon burn due to the intensity and passion of his love. She knew that he could easily read her mind. So carefully he gently pressed his lips against her. She responded the kiss with equal gentleness. They part for some air. She lessened the distance between them and whispered in his ears that "I love you Maan". He was the happiest man alive on earth he thought. He pulled her again for another kiss. After their kiss; both part. She was still in his arms. Her heaven. Her rightful place she thought. The place where she finds peace.

He un wraps her arms around his neck. Very carefully picks her up in his muscular arms. Goes to his room and places her on the bed. Seeing her so mentally exhausted he takes her in his arms. She cried her heart out. She needed that shoulder to cry and he was right there; next to her, to take all her pain away. He was her strongest support; her healer. May the whole world leave her but not Maan. Her Maan. She buried her face in his chest and cried to her heart's content. He didn't stop her as this was the only way that she could relive her pain. The pain and loneliness that she had been carrying for such a long time. After she stooped crying he told her to sleep now. She did as he said. He tucked her in the blanket. Gave a quick peck on her forehead. Said good night and was about to switch the lights off when he felt his arm tugged. Geet made him sit next to her. She told him that unless she feels asleep; he should stay next to her. He followed her instructions. Sat beside her. He was very lovingly stroking her hair until she fell asleep. She started snoring. He finally knew she was fast asleep. And as he was about to get up and head out of the room; he realized that his fingers were entwined with his. He had no option other than sleeping next to her. He once again looked loving at her innocent face; gave her a good night kiss and slept next to her. The much in love couple had finally found peace in each other's embrace.

The sun rays entering their room through the curtains woke up Geet fro her deep sleep. She found that Maan was sleeping next to her. She even couldn't get up because of his arms protectively wrapped around her waist. As to signify that no harm shall come to her when she is with him. And she heard someone knocking on the door. She was too shocked as to how to explain why was Maan here.

To be continued very soon.

Guys m really sorry for the short part. Next update I have to still work it out

Hope you will love this part. Enjoy!!!! And drop your comments!!!!! Will love to read them. Your comments make my creative cells to work and inspire me to write more parts…

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Loads of love❤️❤️

Mayuri❤️❤️

Hi Mayuri...I m Dhara...😃 I just cam eacross ur ff and it sounds very happy happy to me...pls add me to ur pm list and put up the next part soon....😃

Originally posted by: Dhara_s

Hi Mayuri...I m Dhara...😃 I just cam eacross ur ff and it sounds very happy happy to me...pls add me to ur pm list and put up the next part soon....😃

Originally posted by: mayuri.vet

Part 2

Geet was still standing there facing the sky. Her heart knew that her Maan was there. Right behind her. He slowly came from behind her and gently put his hands on her shoulders. It was an assurance that may the whole world go against her; but he shall always be there with her. That he will and shall always be her strongest support. He slowly turned her towards her. Her face now towards him. She slowly raised her eyes to meet his; all she saw in those eyes was love and love only for her. She thought that she would soon burn due to the intensity and passion of his love. She knew that he could easily read her mind. So carefully he gently pressed his lips against her. She responded the kiss with equal gentleness. They part for some air. She lessened the distance between them and whispered in his ears that "I love you Maan". He was the happiest man alive on earth he thought. He pulled her again for another kiss. After their kiss; both part. She was still in his arms. Her heaven. Her rightful place she thought. The place where she finds peace.

He un wraps her arms around his neck. Very carefully picks her up in his muscular arms. Goes to his room and places her on the bed. Seeing her so mentally exhausted he takes her in his arms. She cried her heart out. She needed that shoulder to cry and he was right there; next to her, to take all her pain away. He was her strongest support; her healer. May the whole world leave her but not Maan. Her Maan. She buried her face in his chest and cried to her heart's content. He didn't stop her as this was the only way that she could relive her pain. The pain and loneliness that she had been carrying for such a long time. After she stooped crying he told her to sleep now. She did as he said. He tucked her in the blanket. Gave a quick peck on her forehead. Said good night and was about to switch the lights off when he felt his arm tugged. Geet made him sit next to her. She told him that unless she feels asleep; he should stay next to her. He followed her instructions. Sat beside her. He was very lovingly stroking her hair until she fell asleep. She started snoring. He finally knew she was fast asleep. And as he was about to get up and head out of the room; he realized that his fingers were entwined with his. He had no option other than sleeping next to her. He once again looked loving at her innocent face; gave her a good night kiss and slept next to her. The much in love couple had finally found peace in each other's embrace.

The sun rays entering their room through the curtains woke up Geet fro her deep sleep. She found that Maan was sleeping next to her. She even couldn't get up because of his arms protectively wrapped around her waist. As to signify that no harm shall come to her when she is with him. And she heard someone knocking on the door. She was too shocked as to how to explain why was Maan here.

To be continued very soon.

Guys m really sorry for the short part. Next update I have to still work it out

Hope you will love this part. Enjoy!!!! And drop your comments!!!!! Will love to read them. Your comments make my creative cells to work and inspire me to write more parts'

Please press the like button

Loads of love❤️❤️

Mayuri❤️❤️

Hey sweetie...