~Bag Of Love~ AR OS

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey guys its me Sazi :D back with another OS. This OS was inspired by this story i read once, and i found the concept amazing, therefore i originalized it. Please enjoy and leave your comments.
SHOUT OUT TO ALL KaShianzzz for 500+ threads... WE ROCK GUYZ!
BAG OF LOVE:

She walked to the front of his house and knocked on the door with anger.

"That's it, I don't want anything to do with him anymore. What does he think, he can choose to love me whenever he wants. NO, NEVER". Ridhima tapped her foot on the ground impatiently. She was ready to kick the door open, if he doesn't open the door any second.
"ARMAA'" before she can finish her sentence the door opens. He looks at her weirdly, "What's wrong with you? Do you have any idea what time it is?"
"I don't really care. I came here to give something back to you'"
"Ridhima it's 4 in the morning. What ever you had to give back, why couldn't you wait a couple of hours?"
"Because I want something back in return'. And I wont leave until I get it back'"
"UHGG Ridhima.. Your impossible! What do you want to give back to me, give it now'" he said with irritation.
"Hold on, it's in the car" she stomped her feet on the ground.

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FLASH BACK:

"Oh my god Armaan, this place is so beautiful. Dinner at the beach, never done that before" she looked at the beautiful beach site.
It was there 2 years together, and they were very happy with one another. Armaan surprised Ridhima with a romantic candle light dinner at the beach. He set up a mini table, with a huge umbrella on top. Curtains around them for privacy, and romantic background music.
After a romantic moonlight dance, Armaan took her to the table, and sat her down.
"To us, and a happy future" he cheered along with her.
Sudden silence took over them, as she said a "happy future". Armaan had mixed emotions, what did she mean by happy future?
Ridhima looked at his blank page, she was getting impatient. Is he never going to propose to me? That's it, she had enough, if he wasn't going to ask her, she will.
"Are you never gonna propose to me?" she said randomly, stunning Armaan.
"What?" he looked at her blanky.
"You know something.. Forget it.." she took her purse, the keys, and walked away.
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"Muskaan you have no idea how I feel' I mean I give 5 years of my life to this guy, took him 3 years to ask me out, so imagine how long it will take him to propose to me. When asked him if he will ever propose to me, he didn't say anything. NO WORDS out of his mouth. What am I supposed to take that as?" she said in a frustrated voice.
"Ridhzi I think I know what you have to do' just move on' you cant waste your time on a guy who doesn't give a damn about your feelings' Go get everything back from him, maybe he'll realize what he's loosing."
"You are right Muskaan' I'm going over there right now' I need to give/get back something very important' Even if it's 4 in the morning now" She marched back into the car.
FLASHBACK ENDS:
"Here' all your stuff" she said coming out of the car.
"What are these?" he saw red bags on her hands.
"In these bags are all the love that you gave me' I don't want them anymore.. So here just take your love, and give me all of my love back." she looked at him coldly.
"Ridhima this is crazy'" he made a pathetic look.
"NO! don't say anything' I want all my love back.. SO JUST GIVE IT TO ME!"
"FINE! You want your love back. OKAY!" He walked into his room and took a small bag.
"Here all your love!" he handed her the bag.
"WHAT! You thought my love for you was only this much? See you
never knew me" she stomped out of the house.
As she was walking away with tears, she realized that the bag wasn't empty. As she opened the bag, her eyes filled with tears again.
"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH' OMG! ARMAAAN!!!" she ran back, only to see his arms spread out for her.
Ridhima ran into his arms, as he grabbed her tightly. "If you waited a couple of hours more, maybe I could have done a decent proposal" he chuckled at how impatient she was.
"OMG! I can't believe it' the ring is soooo beautiful" she has tears of joy in her eyes.
Armaan took the ring and placed it on her ring finger. She accepted his proposal, and hugged him tightly.
"I love you so much baby' and ALL the love we have for each other is inside this ring' undefined love baby" he kissed her, and she kissed him back.
It was such a beautiful and blissful night for both.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Now that was really sweet. Really a nice one

Love
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aww!! its so beautiful!!!
im usually not a fan of one shots but i randomly decided to read yours and im glad i did..i really loved it!
great job!
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Hi Sazi How R Uits really a mind blowing one cool one & thanks for the pm







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hey sazi great one shot loved it do write more take care and thanks for the pm.
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res......................finally u wrote something...................i will comment after comming from office
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hey.......... how cute OS waz dat.......... damn cute ........ loved it .......... pls write soon ............ take care ........love aish ..........
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG saz u wrote a OS finally
lovely concept
u know i totally love enrique takin back my love song a lot n finally reading this piece made KaSh fit in it so perfectly,
to add the song,it so goes with situation
awesome OS
swetha
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sazoooo🤗 Cute one...
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saz grt os
U R BACK AND WE R EAGERLY WAITING FOR UPDATE OF REVENGE MARRAIGE PLZZZZZZZZZZ UPDATE SOOOOOOOON😔

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