FF- PYAAR KE LIE (8june) part 23, pg 99 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
hey great FF... love the concept, hope they grow up soon ;)
cont soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
awsome parts.
love it..
plzzz...continue soon..
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hi liked it nice start pm me too when u update thanks
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PART-3

everything is settled... finally d day come...

GEET already slept... n it's going to be 12 within few seconds...

everyone,,, RANO, AUNU, DADI, PRERNA and ofcouse maan is also there to wish her b'day...

The moment, clock hits the 12... dey starts singing..."Happy b'day to you, happy b'day to dear geet" n geet wakes up n very very happy to see all of them,, they ol hugged her, wished her n give gifts... n now its maan's turn... he just wished her formally... n left her room... she felt bad but than thinks "i know wo aisa hi hai" n smiled...

on the other hand,,, maan is praying for her in mandir, which is at his home, that "plz GOD..always make geet happy and gave her everything she wants...take care of her"...maan always cared for geet, but never show his emotions to anyone...

n all go n sleep...

next day at HANDA's mansion at 7 pm:

mansion is decorated with all colour ballons, teddy's and flowers... just like princess diaries...

GEET is dressed in white.. like princess dress... she looks very beautiful and cute....

everyone is just staring at her...

even maan also noticed first time that she is dat much cute...

den the cake cutting time comes...

cake is very beautiful and yet tasty, yummy, geet's fav: strawberry flavor... n maan hates this flavor, he loves chocolate...

but he can't do anything,,, because it's her b'day not his....

Geet cut's the cake and feed it to mamma, she calls prerna as choti maa, n papa(AUNU), meera, pinky, yash and adi, but not to maan...

he became xtremely angry when she doesn't feed him...n gave her an angery look...

den geet took cake piece and move towards him... n ask for her gift first,,, n maan said" tujhe kal gift dia to tha sabne, abi aur kitne gift legi, chupchap muje cake khila chuhiya nahi to ?????"

GEET: "nahi to kya ??? kya karlega bandar??? BTW kal tune muje koi gift nahi dia n aj b nahi de raha,, to tu to bhul ja is cake ko,,,""""

MAAN: "han, life me phli baar tune kuch thik baat kahi hai,, wese b i don like this bachon wala cake,,, yuckkk,,, strawberry,,i hate dis...tu hi kha ise to...

geet gets angry after hearing that "strawbeery cake is for kids,,, she thinks i m 13 now,, n not a kid..."

so in anger and frustration she puts all cake on maan's face suddenly...

n he is like "FREAK"...

how dare u... maa, choti maa, papa n ol of his frnds including all guests are laughing on him... he got highly irritated and take cake piece n throws it towards geet,, but she moves back n ol cake goes to yash's face...

he also take piece n throw it to meera,

meera throw it to adi, n adi to geet, geet to pinky, pinky to maan,maan to dad,, even elders also enjoying this cake fighting,AUNU throws cake on prera n prerna on RANO...

after half- an -hour they stopped...n almost evrybody is covered with cake...

they all start laughing...

party goes really well.. its like laughing therepy party...jise sabne enjoy kia....

after dinner, dey all left for their homes...

geet took shower n comes outside n saw a very beautiful teddy on her bed...

but nothing is mentioned who gave this to her, no name, nothing,, but there is something she felt in her heart that it is given by maan...n smiled😊

after that she fall asleep...

(yes this is given by maan, i already mentioned, he never expressed his emotions to anyone...dats y he just place d the teddy at her bed....)

PRECAP: 5 years leap...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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really awesome dear...so loved it...great update...
now waiting for the leap....keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing update pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnn thanks pm
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Add me to the PM list please....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thats Awesome......👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏........
Loved it soooooooooooooooooooo much.....❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️....
Loved the Cake Fight.....🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣.........
Loved Maan's character sooooooooooooooooooo much....❤️❤️❤️.....
Thanq so much for the PM....🤗........
Eagerly waiting for the next part......😍😍😍......The Leap............
Pls Update Sooooooooooon............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awww so sweet pls make it long
X and more update :D
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PART-4

AFTER 5 years:

GEET took the admission in the maan's college…

MAAN is in first year of MBA.. n GEET is in first year of BBA… MEERA n PINKY are in GEET's class and YASH and ADI are in MAAN's…

It seems like nothing can keep them apart… they ol share same school and now same college…

First day of college:

GEET is very excited n bit nervous for first day, dat's why she got up early and decided to go for morning walk to calm herself down…. She decided to go to the park which is near her house, where she always used to go… she wore her pink color track suit and moved towards the park… it's early morning (5:45am ), so there are not that much crowd, only few people say(joggers) are there…

She is running in excitement and talk with herself,, no no I mean with her babaji J :

"hey babaji!! Aap to jante hai aj mera clg me first day hai,, wo b us Bandar maan ke clg me, pta nahi maa b na, muje usi clg me kyu bhejna chahti hai jahn wo sada hua karela padta hai,,, oh no Babaji… me b subh subh na jane kiska naam le rahi hu, mera poora din kharab ho jayega…lookin at the sky…

Chage the topic geet(geet to herself)…den suddlenly she falls on someone….. n closes her eyes… she is on the top of of someone who was doing pushups…geet falls on the back of that person… but suddenly she pushed beside by him.. n opened her eyes and both shouted """" tummmmmmm"… (yes, dat boy is none other than maan)….

Before maan could say anything geet starts:

GEET: "oye Bandar,, tuje subh subh mere samne aana jaruri tha??? Hey babaji,, iska naam lia to gir gayi,,, ab ise dekh lia hai to pakka poora din kaharab hoga,,, aap mere sath aisa kyu karte ho hamesha,, haaannnn…. L "

MAAN:"ho gyi tumahari complaints khatm tumhare babaji se???? ab me kuch bolun… BTW complaints to muje karni chaiye, ek to mere upar itni jor se aakar giri, upar se mujhe hi suna rahi hai>>> chuhiya kahin ki…."

Geet's mouth widely opened… n says" dekh muje tujhse aj ladne ka bilkul mood nahi hai, phle hi itni nervous hu, upar se tu… n BTW mene nahi kha tha tuje yahn pushups karne k lie, pure park me tuje yahi jagah mili thi…???? It's all your mistake, Bandar….

MAAN: "han han tu to galti karti hi nahi, hamesha me hi galtiyan karta hu,,…. Hai na???? tera to pta nahi, but lagta hai aj mera pura din kharab jaega,, tera chehra jo dekh lia hai…"

GEET: u….u…..teri bakwas sunne ka tym nahi hai mere pass… sayin this she leaves from there….

MAAN:jaja,,,, mere pass b tere lie faltu tym nahi hai,,, samjhi chuhiya…

She heard all this… n said bandar to him.

AT HANDA's MANSION:

GEET , meera and pinky are on phone…

Yaar geet and pinky, what you both are goin to wear today??? Jeans-top, ya salwar-kameez, meera is askin while searching for something to wear…

Pinky: yaar I'll wear jeans-top…

GEET: n m wearing pink jeans-kurti wid scarf…

Meear: ok den, I'll wear long skirt wid top…

GEET: g8….c u at clg…

Bye

All said bye and cut the call…

Rano serves breakfast to geet,, when dadi, papa and choti maa comes for wishing her good luck for first day….

Choti maa says" GEET beta,, wish u ol d best 4 today,,,"

Geet thanx them….

PAPA: geet, today maan will drop u to the clg…

Geet is not at all interested in going with him… but she also cannot refused to papa…

So she just nodded her head… papa says" ok den have your breakfast… n maan is waiting for you in his car"

Geet finished her breakfast… took blessings of ol n move towards maan's car…

Just like geet, maan also forced by papa for dropping her clg…

Maan saw her coming towards the car and thinks" aaj sab clg me kya sochenge?? Maan wo bhi ek ladki k sath(maan always used to stay away from girls, but girls ???? u knw na…)… aaj tak mene clg me kisi ladki se baat bhi nahi ki aur geet ko drop kar raha hu… sach me aj ka din ajeeb hi jane wala hai…"

His thoughts broke by geet, when she hopped in his car,, nxt to driver's seat…

N said " chalne ka irada hai ya nahi, me tumhari wajah se late hui na first day, to dekh lena"""….

MAAN gave her a stirn look….n starts driving….

PRECAP:

First day in college….

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