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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aj_madz

shut up

n hello am i taking with sum1

plzzzz😳. luv ya just take care of urself
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
nice os.
its called a true lovestory.
waiting more from u.
thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#83
FIZA,
it was awsome yar.........
i read it 2day wid details..........
well u oging 2b a gr8 writer in future inshaAllah if u;ll continue ths......
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
kamoshi part 1-

wow

i just love the story

even nupur is falling for mayank


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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
part 2-

so touching

simply love it a lot

amazing job


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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

A very Happy New Year to all😃

Thanku so much for listening to khamosh🤗i😳….u don't know what khamoshi meant to me😕….u listen to I felt so gr8😳…though initially I though u might nt feel love in it…as there is no confession…no words there….thanks a loooot

Enough of rona n dohona😆

Now sumthing in Fizasih style…😎

So here it is n small little stupid new year gift for u all😆

Love u…

Have a blissful Newyear n life a head😃🤗

Fiza

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87

Farwell

What a day it is. Feeling of achievement, feeling of detachment . detachment from an institute that has provided me everything, simply everything . From a solid career to life time opportunity to complete my post-graduate at Hayward…..just imagine……… and above all the true meaning of life………life tht was just about breathing until I found YOU.

Its our last day and I know you expect sum unsaid words from me but than I always love playing along with you…pull your leg…..until you lost hope and than I fulfill your desire…….though apparently its true but the truth is …..im too selfish……being a selfish person there is a small little problem with me…..i just cant c u hopless…without life..ur eyes without the spark….ur lips without a shy smile…ur cheeks without the blush…I make u have….just to gave you what you desire ..Though I know its not always upto mark

I know tht very well but you being sweetheart always excepted me as I am ……its not that you dnt know what is in my heart …rather in my soul for you …..its just that I haven't said that…saying whatyou feel …never I found a great experience………ok ok ..i am sadu…but words can never say what I feel for you…what I am experiencing along with you…so why to use such an underestimating method of expression…I believe in gestures….my gestures….

My gestures are extremely clear to her..she completely understood them…but she being sadu's girl…never loss the battle of making me say what she want to hear…but me being Me never said wht she really wanna hear.

I hate games played at farewell parties….so childish I tell you…special those one when ur juniors made you do sumthing…seems like thy are raging you at the last day the way you did the first day of colloge….

But than sumtimes what you hate the most gives you an opportunity to deliver what you want ….fortunately or unfortunate the spot light randomly stopped at me…ya ya….i am the " BAKRA" they got..ok now what they want me to do was the most surprising ….they want me to sing a romantic song…just imagine..

Every1 in the hall started to laughed…

MR. Mayank Sharam…singing a ROMANTIC song ….ask him to explain newtons law…

Hahah…so funny…I do explain them newton's law….by giving a dead look to there haha hehehe….

Among these stupid children stand far my angel…smiling actually grinning mischievously saying " Bacho ab tu bhass gay"….i know..how long one can hide that music is my hobby and romantic nos are the only type of songs I listen…

my angel …my dear Ms.Nupur Bhushan…standing in the corner….looking gorgeous as usual…wearing a white dinner gown…isn't it sweet …she hates white but always wear it on special time…because I love her in it…

so here I am on the stage, with a guitar, sitting like rishi kapoor of sagar on a chair singing :

na jany kab yeah hua na kisi ko khaber na khud ko pata

khao khao rahy thy hum ya

silsilo ka silsila hai hoa shooro ab jo nikalay bhi jan

ab se hai hum rahi chahato k

true I dint know when how …it happens….even I could'nt belive it happened with me….but whn ur beside me…along me….my soul is complete…my destiny is with me

yeah jasay pehla nasha, woh pehli nazar , pehla khumar

yun lagay muhabbat hi jaha hai

doosto ki doosti yaaro ki yari kam lagny lagi

behky hum behka yeah sama hai

the first time i saw you little nervous…dam attitude. Tacking ur hairs behind your ears…soon u made me forget surrounding …made me restless….so much tht only I found peace just within you ..you made me live …just because I have you

kasay samjho tumhain

mera pehla pehla pyar hai yeah hai

ankho mein atebar hai yeah

mera pehla pehla pyar hai yeah hai

ankho mein atebar hai yeah

so than how I can found words worth expressing what I feel

huwa bhi mili thi humain jhoko mein pooch rhi thi

pyar yeah agar nhi tu phr kya hai

aay asamn tu bhi aj kal sanagn chalta hai

sath lay ker chand tarey

just i need…my soulmate along with me…just I need you to hold me

kasay samjho tumhain

mera pehla pehla pyar hai yeah hai

ankho mein atebar hai yeah

I gave guitar to the person on base while singing the last few lines….n proceed towards her looking straight into her eyes…she was getting nervous..she looked around signaling…..every1 is looking …I don't care ….today I just D.O.N.O.T.. care ….reaching in front of her I asked her hand in mine..she didn't even think for a second…I jerked her in my arms twirled her around n stoped singing bowing her down in my arms..looking in her eyes…

mera pehla pehla pyar hai yeah hai

ankho mein atebar hai yeah

Nupur: hmmm ..so Mr. secret Sharma….singing pehla pehla pyar hai yeah …in front of every one

She laughed

Mayank: sooo…don't u like it…me publicly claiming …Mera pehla pyar hai yeah

I said it looking straight in her eyes…n saw a beautiful glitz in her eyes…ahh…abhi yeah hai tu tab kya hoga……I holded my heart …

Mayank: nups..lets go out….i feeling suffocated here…ok she said as she knows I am asthmatic…so suffocations is bad for m…she would'n ever question me she trust me too much …n moreover cares for me…even wont spare Ant if she bites me…

We enter the garden outside..n went to sit on a bench

Nupur: so wht is it u wana say…y u askd me to cum out

Opps..me and my bad habits….i forgot she knows me wll to much…cant lie.even I don't want to …but than it gave immense pleasure to evry time lie n get to know she knows u beyond ur expectations…

Mayank: you know what I wanana say

Nupur: I know nthing

Mayank: acha..thats gr8…u can read my silence but cant read my gesture…your stubborn

Nupur: that I m

Mayank: ok …fine I gave up….

I sat in front of her kneel down …holding her hands in mine…she looked at me surprisingly …..i know you don't expect such hindi film scenes from me but than thy say na " love is the seven sense wch destroy all six sense" so here im with an example…n so I love doing this…even I have prepared what actually should I say…but I have forget what I was suppose to say…what…Oh God ..Mr.mayank Sharma forgotten…man w.h.a.t i.s. in these eyes yaar….i haven't blink for a sec

I found her heart beating rising with my gaze…sumthing was sounding to loud also in side me

Mayank: I love you…will u tolerate me beside you forever

I said that …the smile that appear on her face..ahhh…if justknew that…if just I knew that ….that iam gonna get that …I kept on confessing ever sec of my life

She slide down from the bench and embrace me in her arms….i hugged her back nuzzled inside her….what happen after that I don't remember …..we broke apart when I found my knees paining

I move back n lookd at her..griped her shoulders n made her sit , accompanying her…she resting her head on my shoulder..me keep stroking her hairs

Mayank: y are u so quite

Nupur: asay hi

Mayank: asay hi matlab

Nupur; asay hi matalb..asay hi

Mayank: whatttt

Nupur: what what

Mayank: nupuuuurr

Nupur: mayank

Mayank: so dnt u need to say sumthing

Nupur: ahh really ….what ???

Mayank: hey hello madam…even I have a heart who wants to hear sum words from you

Nupur: ohhh…I though u gave that to me ….so whos there to listen my words

Mayank: ohhoo..i thought u gave urs to me

Nupur: uff such a overestimation mr.sharma….who say so

Mayank: no body needs to I know

Nupur: so that the point ….why need words…u know no need to say

Mayank: nupurrrr….plza naaa

Nupur: hmmmmmm…acha mjhy kya milay gay

Mayank: jo mein chaho….mischievously

Nupur: sorry

Mayank: acha na….ek surprise

Nupur: mjhy surprise ach nhi lag ga tu

mayank: uffuuu ..go to hell….i don't wana talk nor listen

I broke aprt she chukled…very funny

Nupur: why r u feeling s bad haann…."words are nt expressive" hain na ….so what happen now

Ya ya..but I didn't looked towards her…she came close to me n whispered

Nupur: I love you

I turn back quickly enough nt giving her time to back off..n peck her lips

Nupur: haa…dnt u dare to ..u don't have tht right

Myank: I have very right Mrs. Would be Mayank sharma

Nupur: what …what did u said

Mayank: I took a ring from my pocket n sliped it in her finger….congratulation …ur engaged now…n ..v r getting married next week..i have already asked uncle n anty n they r more than happy…after all its me …n you have almost 5 days to shop….nt only for ur grand weding but also wht u need in US as vr leaving to Boston just after 2 days of wedding ….n as im nt A.T.A.LL going alone anywhere ….so u need to be like a gud wife accompany me,,,ok,,,gud

Her jaw droped..evry time she tries to speak I made her silent….

Mayank: close ur mouth ….(came close) else I'll make u do that…grining

She close it immediately …..she is so cute …she look around like finding sumthing …when didn't got sumthing

Whts ths start hiting with her hands

Nupur: mayank k bachy

Mayank: woh bhi hojay gay..thora sabar kero

She was hiting n a was saving n running ….nupur wht is ths ur beating ur hubby

Nupur: sab kuch decide kerliya…mjhy bataya bhi nhi…pocha bhi nhi…ek week…ek week mein tu tailor kapary stitch kerk nhi dayta …tum ko biwi chaiay …BY God…jao nhi kerti shadi

I griped her shoulder n pinned her against wall

Mayank: don't say that again…suna tum ny….i know I didn't ask u ..planned everything by myself…I know u have thought abt ths day from long time …but you know my semester is unexpectedly starting earlier so as my job..n if went away will cum back after 3 years…n tht I cant tolerate…I cant live without seeing u a day …3 year nt possible….plzz Nupur don't say no..i need you really …

God knows what got on me….the fear of living without u can be so strong I didn't knew… I myself was surprise by my reactions….she slided her hands on my face

Nupur: I just planned to live with u…I was , am n wil always b urs…if its happening forever within a week …wht else can be better than that

I hugged her tight ths time…insuring she is inside me…feeling the completeness…secure. relived…

Edited by drfizaahmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful OS......................so loving n cute moments......................n beautiful song simply perfect for Mr. n Mrs.Perfect😊.........................!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
Beautiful OS Fizza
It was sweet, simple and nice

do write more
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Posted: 14 years ago
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woww......
its just a mindblowing os........⭐️
love it yar......i was completely lost whn i was reading ths.......😊

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