Mayank&Nupur SS-Hum Jo Na Keh Paye[Last Part PG23]

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manjeet

@love.mayurarti

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#161

wow wow wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

beautiful

lovely ending......n tnx u fr giving us a happy ending

luved mayur confession

vry well written

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Natasha

@OddiYulle

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#162

Sajjak Aka My Miss Teacher !!🤗This jorney was to short , but im sur we ll carry on.Well about this story . It was a very different concept and then Ms. Teacher writes also so well😉. The Ego , Pride And love fight we can say , and Love if True Is triumphant, and thats your motive too. I Didnt expect it t oend so soon . because i loved the pace at what you were going .I am not taking Morals from this story , but to be really frank it was the best story i came across. I will miss you in writing thiss ff . Im Sure you had as much fun as i had in reading it. Its a pleasure to recieve your Pms on you updating your Ffs .Please start some thing new, If you are not Busy ! And please do write a epilogue for this if you ca nas a sweet MaYur Moment , which we didnt get, i meant the elaborated one . So please if you can do write a Epilogue and start a brand new ff and ill be waiting for that. Once Again thanks for giving the best confession and the best story which made me laugh and cry at the same moment and will always cherish in my heart.
Natasha

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#163

Sajjal.. lovely ending and just Lovely...

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Dilbole_ShiOmRu

@Dilbole_ShiOmRu

Stunner

Posted: 14 years ago

#164

Wow beautiful ending loved it do write more

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#165

YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hugs to you dear girl...like millions of them😃😃😃😃 You gave us a happy ending and such a beautiful one at that😃

I read this chapter more than thrice😃😃😃😃 it touched me real deep and yeah, Mayank and Nupur are the meant to be's.....😃😃😃

Love ya Sajjal for writing such a beautiful and an awesome ending😃😃😃😃

Hugggggggssssssssssssssssss once again.....😃😃😃😃😃

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Divya

@dbr_kmichi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#166

hay,,...

read 3 chaps together...nice😊

nice happy ending..😊

it was small n sweet..😊

Edited by dbr_kmichi - 14 years ago

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#167

Sajjal [>:D<]
Early morning reading such a happy ending, wow...

I really loved it...
Finally Ego lost to Love...
It was a lovely ride
You have written it nicely....

Thanks for the Happy ending
Do keep writing.....

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relentless.

@relentless.

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#168

How beautiful was that! 😍 OMG Sajjal, you ended it so beautifully, im so amazed!

Pleaseee write more hon!🤗

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Nirvrithi

@Nirvrithi

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#169

Hi Sajjal, you are a wonderful story teller.. You had a unique style of telling story . Kabhi Nupur ke soch - kabhi Mayank ke - Kabhi tumhare/hamare... I loved the way you put everything together.. You will be an amazing teacher too 😊Lucky kids in your KG

You know what -I was even prepared for a sad ending ; because their ego even deserved it.. But in the second last part - I had a feeling that it will have a happy ending😃 And I am really happy that finally...

Finally the love got some sense to leave the ego behind and move towards a new lifeboat which have every emotions,but ego.

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Auroni

@Auroni.92

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#170

Awwww thnx a ton sajjal for giving us a happy ending...I enjoyed every bit of this ff...
And now we all know the reason of their being egoistic...Simply amazing..
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