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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Reet...glad things turned out in your favor...hopefully things will continue going that way 😊

This was a great update!! Loved how you showed the emotional turmoil Geet is going through after her escape. Please do add me to your PM list.
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update
loved it
geet feels so guilty
maan's trust on her has gone
like dev
seems like a nice guy
cant wait till maan and geet meet
cant wait 4 da next part
con soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Reet,
Welcome back.... I was very happy to see ur PM.... 😛😃
Meery Christmas and a Happy New year in advance...
Nice update....story movign very nicely.... now am waiting for the update on Bin Tere....
Will call u in a day or two....
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Posted: 14 years ago
thank u reet for continuing.... loved the update but i want to find out who the BOSS is, i mean we all know its maan... but we wnat to know why he is doing all this to geet.... so waiting for u to cont....
Glad u told us the reasons for why u couldnt update.... also glad that u got what u wanted(no marriage)... but why fear? u have to do it someday!... its really not that bad.....Trust me... I m loving it, mine was also arranged... but i was ready for it when it happened.... but anyhow, u got waht u wanted... now u give us what we want... updates...pls cont soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
guyz.....i would have remaind unaware of the fact that people outside my college are so good.....if i would nt have met you in indiaforum ....trust me ..i was an unsocial nerd allover .a total bore person....i dont watch much tv ...nt at all a movie buff ....i dont know much about romance ...but this IF experience made me romantic .....
u guys are so good....ur words have touched my heart ..
all of you .....i mean each one...and specially ...gouri swati dharadi ....navpreet ...drashtee ...reva..uzma...ansah...shivangi ...afsha(darling i will msg u soon ).....ankita ..anu_luv maan....kads ...bonojotsna ....blue dream ....shining moon..cyberprincess..saweet pari..chubzy ..asmaa and sofna.......
and evryone ..who remembered this fic and me...and always given their heartful support ....
the world outside is really good...
love you loads guys...
keep rocking my dearest galz......
bringing up an update for you ......
in about half n hour
Edited by maanmeet_Reet - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

hiii dear...

how can we forget a fantastic ff and above all a terrific writer.and above all a very warm and sweet person........

one of best things to happen to me after i have joined IF is having found u and ur ff .........its truly amazing.........

ur words just made me blush...

thanxx for coming back and ur return is surely the best gift of 2010......

god bless you

reva

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Posted: 14 years ago
love you reva ....ur words always inspired me..i m myself nothing....its you who are still trying to get the best out of me.....
...i wont thank you ...cause that will be a very tiny word to express my feelings for you .....
god bless you darling ,....
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Posted: 14 years ago
**plz read page number 57 a note for u **
well well.....guyz..........got a good amount of update ...
hope u dont get bored...just go through it and please let me know how it was
part 10

boss.....the flight is late .....adi informed HIM ....as he tapped his finger on the laptop lid....

he gave a slight nod .....and resumed his work in it ....while adi watched him with narrow eyes........

monologue : Aaditya Kashyap ....

"chief" that's what we call him .....looks calm .....Precisely bit calmer than usual ....what does that signify for ....? he didn't even look up to ask me any details about the flight ...

he is working his asses off after he got discharged from that stupid hospital ........ is he a machine....programmed by some stupid nerd who has forgotten to add mind in him .....i chuckled .....okay ...that's what I used to think about him .....until that kalabharti incident took place....that girl .........

chief was so close to death......and more over he didn't even mention about her a single time after he gained his senses after 4 days and 9 hours .....he was calm ......all silent about the matter......i can remember when he ended up mishandling the stitches ..and it again started bleeding .....and the doctor had to re do it ....she didn't get the scope to push the local anesthesia ...as he laid his ice cold look on her and ordered her to stitch that right away.......as she stitched the nurses hissed ...her own hand trembled.....as she took bites by the sharp needle on his scalp (each stitching procedure is generally called bite ..)..but all he did ..lay there with a clenched fist with this ice cold expressionless face ....huh ...!!!

I often doubt what his sensory nervous system is made of......!!!

but ...whatever it may be .....he was affected by that girl ...or else what the hell this deadly silence stands for.....? well he is not a talkative person...but still ..man should have some reaction about this grave matter ... none else than the persons closely worked with him can understand .......he was slightly disturbed.....very little......but I know...at least I thought so ..... ....he couldn't concentrate on the plans like old time ......and that's why we are here in Dubai ......landed up here .......entangled with endless problems ....

earlier ....his plans used to be foolproof... lacking a single flaw........but a little mistake and we had to fly off to Dubai........i m not sure ..what sunaina is facing there handling those bustards there .......

but sometimes I doubt on myself...whether I m going on in the right track of analyzing my boss..... ......like now ....i m having doubt ....whether he was at all affected about the incident ......what should I call it ...accident ..? attempt to murder ...? .....lolz........i smirked........gosh ...if I would tell it to sunaina and rishi ..the other two members of our gang who works closely with the chief ....they are not going to buy this at all........

Even now .......look at him .. sitting opposite me ......seems like he is a robot ..... not a single wrinkle on his face ...not a single emotion in his dead eyes.....there was never any ....whatever may be the problem is ..his void face reflects nothing .....the flight has been postponed for indefinite reason ...and he is scanning the laptop like he is in his own drawing room ....

does he even realise ....how much risky this is ..? .....though we are in disguise....but the cops are everywhere around us ......they will be at Mumbai airport also ....i don't have any idea how will we fool them today ........they are searching for us crazily ....we had no time to make new false passports ....so we had to come with the old ones....probably cops have pictures of this identities of us....i m not aware of what will be the charges against us .....if I summarize ......!! nobody will be there to arrange a bail for us....and we will be passed straight to the hangman i guess....noooo....may be we will get a long imprisonment .......i snapped out myself ....and again glanced at him .......still in the same position ......ohh man ...!!!

........the merciless straight face .....those ice cold eyes.........this morning only ..he seemed like disturbed a little ...but he is unreadable u see......as of now he is perfectly normal .....shall I say more than normal ....? who can say this person has got anything else other than brain .....yes......that he has......a superlative smart brain .....acting so fast ....that keeps Mumbai police their wits end to catch him and his gang .....means us .... ...and whole underworld dons too.... I wonder .....he does have a heart ....or even balls (ignore the word u lil kid readers ....wink )....he never keep his gaze on any hot babe ...nothing impresses him ......

he was admitted into that hospital for 7 days ...beaten up by that crazy girl .... I pursed my lips .......moreover in that f**king hospital ...he got all the privileges of a posh hospital of Mumbai ...cause his drop dread handsome looks .,.....man he seems to be blind to look at those beautiful chics ...i mean doctor ...what was her name ..ohh yes.. doctor riddhima and some nurses like nakusha mona and anjali .....uhhh.....seriously man ....i wonder ...is he a gay ...? no....that cant be.........well.....dont think I m a gay myself ........thats why I can recognize him ....its because ..i m the closest person in his life .....and ahem...i m quite handsome myself .....and he never showed......ahem ........leave it man ....!!! I m going nuts .....what to do it with me if he lacks interest in girls ....

did you say something Amit.......he snapped out in front of my face ...!!!!!....

thats my name is the fake passport ...

what .?????...omg .....can he read my thoughts ..???...be careful dealing this piece aadi .....i scolded myself.....he has x ray eyes...

nooo...nothing sir..... which project you are working on sir ...?

Amit ...... how many times do I have tell you ....u are my brother here ... call me bro ...instead that "sir".....a stern whisper burned my ears ......

Sorrri .....sss....bro......i gulped down .....

Better ..and behave like a spoilt little brother ....he gave a look that clearly implied ..i should behave properly .....

I chuckled inwardly ......relations.....lolz.....and that too with this person .....nobody would get into this mess...i bet on that ...!!!!

But I often think do I know him at all . ...i guess no ....he is beyond our imagination...we all are intimidated by his persona and powers ...he is an enigma .....

...the day ....when I first met him ...he turned out to be my savior....my god ......what he actually turned out to be....i can never repay it ...after which I joined him ...trust me....he didn't force me to join him ...neither he asked me a single time .......he asked none of us to join him .......as we know the path we have chosen ... there is no way back towards home ....thats why he never asked me to do so .....never ....i swear ...but I felt it's the only way I guess I can pay him back .....i can do anything for him ......not going into the blood relationships ....but I can die for him ....i trust him ...he can never cheat on us ....i guess every single member of our gang relies on us ....i m grateful .....to his huge deed for me.........i felt my eyes getting moistened by the memories....noo get a grip aadi ..u belong to chiefs brainy gang ....u must not have a heart ....u must not remember anything that can make u weak ....i sighed and took a glance on my wrist watch ....and sighed ...

Its still 2 hour from now........

Me the chief monologue

I know aadi is staring at me.....i can read him .....i concealed a chuckle ......what a waste of time ...they keeps on trying analyzing me ......yeah ...thats what I represent myself.....they cant explore me...i wonder how long they will try .....just why don't they give up ......

I again concentrated on the screen ...few more minutes .....i will get the job done ....then I will concentrate on other things ......aadi must be thinking why didn't I ask him how long the flight is late .....i didn't ask ......because I have nothing to do with that ...and to be specific ....i trust aadi ...yes I do ........i know he often grits his teeth thinking about me the robot ....often wastes his pretty good time trying analyzing me ......but I know at the end of the day he can die for me..... ......! I concentrated on the screen .......

The fellow sitting beside me is playing a song in his laptop ....he can use the headphone to listen to that .....but he has given it on speakers...

the lyrics is something like this .......

You hit me faster than a shark attack
You saw my picture
On the Backstreet's Back, alright


And you were more than just a pretty face
But how you fooled me, I'm still amazed baby
But I should have known that I would be
Another victim of your sexuality
But now we're done and over with
I don't want you back

i hate songs....i was just going to ask him to use the head phones....but I didn't ...actually the lyrics of the song ....well should I say nice ...or I needed the song right now....coincidence huhhh!!!

This reminds me of the woman ..................................that woman....!! I snapped her out of my thoughts ....and listened to the song again ...

Don't want you back
'Cause you're no good for me
I know
That's all I can say
Don't want you back
Forgive my honesty but you gotta go
I don't want you back

You started going out with so-called friends
But I was blind and so I lost all common sense
But there were things that made me realize
Like all the hundred no, thousand lies

A doubt must have played in their mind ......that crazy woman ....geet .....has a silly effect on me.....haah ...what a joke ....woman and me.....can never be a combination .......i paused......wait .....m I trying to reach it to my own ears.....????

No......nothing sort of that going on here ....its just that ....uhh.....well....often I m thinking about her ...but its because she tried to kill me....when I did cause no harm to her ...well at least some kisses are of no harm.....

Is it really so ...? I asked myself....kisses are of no harm ..? when I myself hated woman ...okay why m I using past tense...i still hate woman ..and I hate her most .....above everything in this world.....

If someone will ask me why did I kiss her ....i have no ready answer...i searched inside me for the answer....its complicated.....may be just a physical attraction played at that moment ...and I did let myself loose in that ...or may be I enjoyed my effect on her ...her increased heartbeats against my own chest ...her hot moist breaths on my face ....her skinny waist in my grip .......her trembling hands.....on my shoulder ...her chest pounding against mine..my lips rubbing against her soft delicate skin.....i still remember every moment of that what we shared together ....

its just physical ......and that's it ....

But this doesn't satisfy myself.....if it is so .....why didn't I ever show interest on any other woman ....there were lot of woman around me...tried hitting on me.....i didn't feel anything except irritation ...so...? may be she was the exception ....she revolted ....she showed repulsion ....and that had hurt my male ego ..so I stalked her ....that's it .....cummon man ...u know all this psychology thingy ....dont waste ur brain after all these shits.....i reassure myself.....no matter why I keep on thinking about her in my sleepless nights ...i think about her .......her disobedient locks of hair that falls on her face .....her flushed cheeks as I touched them,..........her supple rosy lips.....well I m kinda physically attracted to her ...i have to admit this.....and that too because she is kinda revolting type ....that pinched my male ego ....i have read Sigmund Freud ---this psychological .....the flinched male ego go bonkers over the stubborn repulsive girl.....

Well this answer kind of satisfies me......i again deviated myself to the song ...well some songs are really good for someone at some point of life .....

Baby, don't bother telling me your reasons why

Just let us sing this story 'bout you and I
Don't want you back
That's all I know
Don't want you back
All I can say
Don't want you back
You know you gotta go

[ backstreet boyz]

But my question is that...when i was so lenient to her ....i almost listened to her every plea....though she made very few ...why did she try to kill me.....why ?she first hits me and then she leaves me in that deserted garage only to die...i cant stand this .....she tried to kill me.....this fact ignites fire in my head .....whyyy....how dare she ..... ? there are a lots of people tried to kill me..my life runs on the edge of hollowness of death ...thats nothing new to me...but SHE tried to kill me......the fact ignites fire in my soul .....i will take revenge geet handa.....i will never forgive you ...you will beg death infront me.....i will make your life hell.....i promised myself....

I did mistake....mistake of trusting her brown eyes....the spell of her juicy lips misguided me... ...her taste still lingered in my mouth .....but woman can never be trusted ...i had forgotten the universal truth .......

Ahhhh....this throbbing headache .....!!!! still my wound hurts so much ...and every time it reminds me about her

Miss geet handa .....watch out ...u underestimated me .......i had done nothing but beaten by u ....and let u leave me half dead in that deserted place .my only mistake I had kept ur hands unchained ...did the mistake of thinking u are too nave to dodge me.....watch out geet handa...u silly little woman .....i gritted my teeth....nobody dares to mess with me .i felt my blood boiling out of rage ..

I must control myself....anger and emotion this two thing deviates one from work ...man devoid with this two things can achieve anything ...i have lots of better things to do ...like arrangement of money...we are running out of money ....got to do something about it.....fish ...!!! why did I waste so much time thinking about that silly woman .....i cursed myself....

Flight number 0293 are requested to go for their security check at .......the announcement snapped me out of my thoughts .we got up from our seats and headed towards the security check.....i have transferred the guns through the bag ...along with the documents that allows it ...but I have one tiny pistol hidden in my shoes....well I know they are never gonna find it ........

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Sunday night ....@ 12 am

Geet monologue

As the cold drops of the shower fell on my body ........i closed my eye to feel it through my skin....may be it can relax my taut body n soul......i don't know why ...i m feeling very much unrest today .....i feel my body heated up.....

Its almost close to midnight...........and still I was not able to sleep .....after a lot of tossing and turning on the bed...i got up leaving the idea of catching some sleep ...and decided to have the shower...and after that a little walk on the terrace ....

I sat indolently on the swing at the terrace...there was absolute silence around me..........but there is still a roaring storm inside me....why m I so unrest today ...m I anxious about the case of tomorrow at puna high court ..??may be .. ....it will be a hard day ahead ....i m all done with the paper works ..i talked with the witnesses whom I made ready for the case ....i made the draft of the case my self.... it will be my first case to appear alone for the day.....though dev would be there ...but he instructed me to handle the case myself.. ..i was looking for this for a long time..now the chance has come to prove myself......i should be excited ...but I m anxious .......why ..? this will be the first time I will handle all the petitions interrogation myself......uhh common geet u r a strong girl .....dont worry u will do it .....i told myself again ......

Or Is it because of the dream which I had in this afternoon as I had fallen asleep while working on my desk ...............why do I have the same dream.....or nightmare .....all the time....its the masked face stalking me .....blood dripping from his head ...its almost 5th time I m having the same dream.......and I woke up with beads of perspiration on my forehead ....why do I dream about him .....the chapter is over ......there is no sign of his....may be he had died that night .....a bloody criminal .....why do I dream about him .......?? but i dream.....is he really that low ...? when i utter ...do i feel it ?

may be my guilt conscious mind making me see the same dream again n again .....i know .....there was my fault ....i shouldn't have done that ....i hope he is alive....babaji.....i mumbled the prayer .....

i shrugged off to get rid of his obnoxious presence in my mind..i should get rid of it ....the whole thing has ended....the chapter is closed......then why m I feeling so uncanny .....such an eerie feeling sinking me....seems like......................................something is going to happen.....

I sighed......shook my head to get over with it .

Naah ...i should better get going downstairs.....i must catch some sleep before tomorrow....i cant let dev down ...when he is counting on me.......... ........i must compose myself....i must concentrate on my track......babaji madat karo.....

I turned on my favorite music in my ipod and leaned over the back rest of my bed....

Dhundhla jaayein jo manzilein
Ek pal ko tu nazar jhuka


Jhuk jaye sar jahan wahi
Milta hain rab ka rasta


Teri kismat tu badal de
Rakh himmat bus chal de
Tera saathi, mere kadmon ke hain nishan

Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda
Tu na jaane aas pass hain khuda

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Kaam kya hai ....?????an arrogant kiddish voice broke his concentration....

Chief raised his head from the book he held in his hand....and looked sideways to see the source..

a boy of around 12 years stood arrogantly in front chief.....with his hands on his hip.... behind him there a group of vagabond little masters stood defiantly ...some had two piece cloths with numerous holes in them .....or some didn't bother cover their trunk.....just a shorts .....and that too much worn out to understand its actual colour ....the gang of street beggars and workers of roadside tea stalls or hotels...but their actual occupation is stealing or pick pocketing ......the boy stood infront of them is the oldest amongst all of them..and his attitude of talking clearly implied his leadership amongst those...

His lips curved in a chuckle....eying the gang in front of him ... he really adored this group of vagrant boys...they works for him ...being shorter in size and age..they can roam around freely and gather information according to his need.. hide themselves easily from the eyes of police and doesn't catch suspicion of common people......

Ayeee bosss woh smile wile bad me deneka........khalipili bheja fry mat kar.......kaam ki bat bata ....itni rat gaye kiu bulaya apunlogonko........

Kiun re chotu .....tu kabse din aur rat me fark karne laga ....chief retorted...with a pinch of sarcasm in his voice....

Chotu didn't reply but stood there crossing both of his arms on his chest...he just didn't feel like to answer this silly question ...

Aree boss....apunlogon ka cinma(cinema) jane ka plan hai ... .... kaam ki bat bata na......nilu another boy said

Ohh yeh bat hai.....kaunsi film .....

Aye boss...tu batata hai ..ya apun jaye ......chotu couldn't stand it anymore....

Akshaykumar ka cinma hai boss.....isiliye to chotu bhai ka dimag fir gaya hai tere bulanepe ......Again nilu interfered to calm chotu ..

He chuckled and came directly to the point .... chotu usi ladki ke bareme information chahiye ......aur wo bhi aaj rat ke andar .....

Otteri......reflex reaction came from nilu ...getting their idea for movie is at stake ...

Kal se pehle kuch nahi hoga .....!!! chotu retorted.....

Aaj matlab aajhi ......chief bent over chotu and slipped two 500 rs note in his chest pocket....

Sala tu bhi na eeda hai ..............chotu couldn't control the temptation of 1000 rs ....but he was not in the mood to waste his favorite hero's movie....itne paise se nai hoga ....he said as a matter of fact ..

Kaam karke aa.....baki mil jayega ....chief assured him ....

Aye......chal ..!!!!!...chotu turned back with his group to walk out ......but stopped at the threshold...and turned back at chief ....

Eek baat bata bosss....tereko yahi ladki mili thi line marne ke lie ....??? .....itna shana ho kar ek chori ke piche khali pili time waste karta hai tu .....sun boss .....lubb shubb ke chakkar me nahi padhneka... nahi to akshaykumar se tushar kapur ban jayega ....fir nai bolne ka ...apun ne tereko toka nahi tha............................chotu finished his lecture ...

Chief was astounded hearing his comment ...... couldn't react for a moment ..

tu kuch jada nahi bolne laga hai chotu ....? kahi screw to nahi gir gaya dimag ka......jara tight kar du kya .......he said while twisting chotu's ear between his two fingers ......

oye ...kaan pe hat mat laganeka .....apun ka bhi koi ijjat hai ....!!

chief smirked and patting on his back pushed him outside.....

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At early morning Geet and dev started for pune by car....after reaching there they had a little breakfast there and the hearing started for their case...

Dev was busy with some other clients while leaving the case totally on geet ....he decided to stay at bar association leaving geet alone in the court room .....so that she doesn't look for support from dev and becomes able to handle all responsibilities herself......his prediction was right ..she was just perfect .

The day went well for geet ....she herself handled the whole case ..she pleaded her clients side very convincingly to judge .... not only she gave proper evidences by her side witnesses ... ......she also proved the opponent parties concocted evidence ..while cross examining opponents witness ......she was doing well......until the opponent lawyer started corss examining her witnesses....she made them ready for her evidences preparing leading questions ...but she didn't have the faintest idea...the case can turn to this side.....however eventually she appealed for time petition ....and was granted by the court ....thus saved her clients from big problem ....

Still now her side of the case was strong ....but not that much she expected it to be......she was sulking ......but clients were satisfied by her intelligent move and time petition file....she felt little lighter after this ....but her sullen mood was not yet over ....she again started discussing the case with her witnesses after the court hours .....made them ready for next date...after that she was pretty much hopeful that verdict will go in their favor at the next date ....

All these things took a long time .... they were so much late that they didn't get the time for lunch ...they just decided to take lunch at any good restaurant come in their way.....as it was becoming cloudy once again outside.....and a heavy rain could be anticipated ........

they started for Mumbai at 4 pm .........

very soon it started raining ...actually pouring heavily .. ..raining so much that nothing was visible through the windscreen ....the driver had to stop the car at a small roadside dhaba..... as the car stopped dev went down to arrange some food ....asking geet stay in the car .......

sometimes people do things thinking confidently that he is right ...but god keeps something totally different in his store.....dev left geet in the car with the drive r sitting at front ....he didn't want to take a woman in that shabby dhaba thinking it will not be safe for geet .....

some time had passed and yet dev didn't return back..... geet tried to look through the window by sliding it down a little......but she couldn't find any sign of dev ...in stead of dev she was caught by some pairs of eyes .......though it dark outside ....but the eyes were sharp enough to catch the glimpse of the beautiful face . lust flickered in their eyes.....

she was about to dial dev's number when there was a knock on drivers window.....as slid down the window.....a pair of hands dragged him out of the car and himself got into the car .....

geet was too shocked to shout ....and within a fraction of second two other persons got into the car on each side of geet ..and another in the passenger seat ..

helpppp.......bachaoooooo....helppppp..........................she shouted for help ...with the pitch of her voice.....threw her hands and legs randomly to get rid of them.....leave me I said......deeeeeeeeeev........../devvvvvvvv......she shouted again .......dev unaware of these thing was talking with the dhaba owner quite away from the car ......

she punched and kicked the goons....at the same time she cried for help ....but as the windows were closed her voice didn't reach to dev's ears.....as she tried to punch the a goon again he slapped her so tight that blood oozed out from the corner of her lips....they held her tight while the other goon drove the car .....she tried to wriggle out from their grasp........but they were strong enough to handle her ......the other who sat on the front seat started the car .......at the sound of the ignition of the engine dev turned back only to find the injured driver moaning in pain laid in the ground....and the trailing way of the car ......he ran madly after the car .......desperately shouting them to stop .....but it was of no use as he slipped and fell on the road .......in front of his eyes the goons took his car with geet in it ,......

leave me......leave me.....plz leave me.....she begged at the goon who rubbed his knuckles on her cheek.......warm tears rolled down from her eyes at the anticipation of their intention...all of these were going on when the other goon drove the car at high speed through the road....

please let me go.....she again pleaded .......but the odor of alcohol gave her no reassurance ....and the grip on her hands became more tight

one of the goon grabbed her scarf from her shoulder and snatched it away .......

she clasped the end of it tight ....but poor woman was failed miserably to keep her scarf to herself.......they tied up her hands not even caring at her repeated pleas ....she knew her world is coming to an end.....her dreams...her life everything is going to shatter .....

ohh my sweet chick common baby .......the goon sat on her right side pulled her in a jerk making her sit on his lap .....she contracted each of her body muscle to get rid of his grip....and yelled in cry .......to stop her the person closed her mouth by his hand....and then geet bit his hand with all her might ,.....

as he winced in pain ....the other goon slapped her hard again on her wounded cheek ..

and the wounded goon clasped her sleeve in anger and torn it in single pull......they jumped on her to rape her .......

at that moment the car stopped with a sudden at jerk as the goon pressed the break hard...

idiot why did you stop the car ....? one goon asked from behind while the other was trying to rip her clothes...

abe a jeep has blocked our way .....

then overtake it na....

cant ....as the jeep is pushing our car backward ......he mumbled in a horror stricken voice.....

abe utaaaaaar ............the goon from backside jumped out of the car ....and that moment the jeep stopped....causing their car to stop .....

geet rolled out from the car ....she was about to run away but suddenly one goon caught her hairs and grabbed her again....as she fought to get herself free another goon came out to help his friend .......

LEAVE HER .......a groan made them look backward .....

the goons found a tall robust person clad in black aiming his gun towards them......he had a black mask on his face ....

nahi to kya kar lega ....? one of them took out his gun and pointed at the masked man .....

WILL KILL YOU ......

the sentence made geet to look up to the source of the voice......but coudnt see properly as he stood amidst the shadow of darkness... but seemed like ..... familiar...

at that moment the driver goon fired ....but HE ducked and soon another gun fired to lie down the driver ........this time aadi is the one who did it ...sitting on the bonnet of the jeep .. sunaina was sitting on the engine of the jeep knowing it very well she will not be needed ...she and aadi were basically the spectators of the drama..they knew chief alone enough to handle it .....

taking advantage of this situation the 2 goons who held geet was taking heir steps backward......as geet wriggled to set herself free....one of them hit her once again ....she winced in pain ........

this distracted HIM....HE didn't notice he is being aimed by someone else from behind the car ...

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I SAID LEAAVVVEE HERR.....

the voice roared making chill run through their spines....HE moved forward making the head light of the car fall on his face .......and geet saw HIM.

Geet couldn't speak a word as she got his sight ...she went numb.....she forgot all the pains all over her body ....and stared at him ...he is alive.......she didn't know before...... that she was expecting him to be alive.. as she saw him right there standing in front of her .....

His eyes fall on her staring gaze....again that innocent brown emerald eyes...that inexplicable language that she used to speak whenever she was in his arms.......that old uncanny sensation ...that always drove him crazy ....made him do things that he never wanted to do ........ he couldn't tear the gaze....he didn't notice the goons heading at him ......

Ankhiyon Hi Ankhiyon Mein
Ratiyaan Yeh Kaatne Do


Neend Meri Udhi Udhi Re
Chaandni Mein Aaj Bheeg Lo,
Roshni Se Jism Seench Lo

He didn't know he was staring at the woman he hates most in the world.......he didn't know how much he craved for this moment ......may be to take revenge ....or may be......

All this things went unnoticed by sunaina and aadi...as sunaina's phone rang....it was rishi ....both aadi and sunaina was talking something important to him ...

at that moment the other goon who was sitting by driver's seat came and started a fight ....along with one of them who held geet .....they fired at HIM...causing a bullet hitting his shoulder ...blood sprouted from his shoulder ......

but instead of firing at them chief targeted at the goon who was with geet and was dragging her away ....which didn't go unnoticed by HIM...

the sound of firing caught sunaina and aadi's attention ....but before they could reach out for their gun ...another sound of firing occurred ....

he ignored the immense pain in his shoulder ..and raised the gun to hit the goon held geet ...the moment he pressed the trigger one of the other goons again fired at him ......his hand trembled as the bullet had hit his hand..so it had hit the goons leg ... the goon shouted in pain and released the grip on geet ...

... this was totally unexpected from chief ...aadi who had no idea that chief will not try to save himself .....was nt ready to stop the goons...but soon he involved into the fight...and they took good care of the goons.....after that they turned to chief .....as they saw the most unexpected thing ......nature stopped..winds stopped blowing .......trees stopped waving their leaves as the most unexpected thing of the earth occurred.....

Now All Night Slow It Down Boy,
B'coz I'm With You Tonight............


My Eye On My, Let's Get It On Boy
B'coz You Are Mine Tonight......


It's All About To Not
Just See You All Night
Yeeeeeah.........


It's All About To Not
Just See You All Night
ohhhh......Yeah

They saw the enemies clinging to each other .....

when geet realised she had been set free.....she didn't know what made her do so ...but she just ran........ rushed to chief and clung to him .......she hugged him tight by locking him between her hands... she sobbed pressing her face in his chest ....neither he could back off.......he stood like a statue.......as his enemy hugged him tight ....her panting chest throbbed against his taut trunk ......as sky poured on them ...there was no sound aroud them except the noises of rain that hided the loud beats of their frantic heartbeats.....there was no moon in the sky ....not a single ray dared to spot the sinners....yes... it was sin to them ...being in the arms of their enemy's ....

....rain washed away blood...hatred...and all other feelings that always hindered them to come close to each other ...........he unknowingly reached out his hand to touch her head ....her grip around him tightened..............

Veeni veeni khusbu uski jism ka dubne laga tha uske jehen me....na jane kya tha us pal me...na jane kaunsi ahesas thi uske bahon me......

Jaagti Huwi Raaton Ko
Neend Bakhsh Do


Bezubaan Se Khaamoshi
Ko Lafz Bakhsh Do
Khuwahishon Sa Utho,
Barishon Sa Bhigo


Dil Kashiiiiii, ...........Hai Dil Kashi,
Dil Kashiiii........, Hai Dil Kashi

Dilkashiiiiiiii.................................

he raised his other hand to reach her back to support her ...sooth her ....

her sobs grew stronger ......She didn't know why ......but through her touch she complained....through her sob she complained....why didn't he come earlier .....where had he been all this during .....like he had promised her to be with her for eternity ....she had forgotten she hates him ....she had forgotten he is the criminal.......she complained through all her sobs ......she clutched his shirt to complain about the goons who tried to rape her .......she found him her own ....she sought shelter in his broad chest ......she found herself safe and protected......amidst the darkness.....standing beneath the open sky and consistent raining in the arms of the person whom she tried to kill few days ago......she found solace.....she didn't know before how much she craved to be in her enemy's arms......

Harf Harf Na Hoton Se
ayatein Likho Jismon Pe....
Kal Subah Padhenge Chain Se


Har Taraf Uchalu rab Mein
Sashon Ki Siyaahi Le Ke
Kal Subah Sunenge Chain Se

And he......................................................he couldn't detach her from himself....he couldn't pull away ....she was again addicting him .....driving him euphoric......he found his own arms around her ...protecting from all fears and problems .....he found peace of eternity holding her shaking body to him.....the vulnerability of the petite frame strengthened his grip around her ...

Khushbu Ke Nishaan Na Honge
Kal Hum Tum Jawaan Na Honge

Aaj Hey Masti


Dil Kashi, Hai Dil Kashi,
Dil Kashi, Hai Dil Kashi
Dilkashiiiiiiii.................


he never had any emotions...but whatever it was he was feeling at that moment got over his hatred ....each fiber of his muscle relaxed as her wet stresses clung to his face......as she pressed herself more against his strong chest .....he forgot all reasoning.....the person devoid of heart held his enemy within his strong arms......

Now All Night Slow It Down Boy,
B'coz I'm With You Tonight


My Eye On My, Let's Get It On Boy
B'coz You Are Mine Tonight

It's All About To Not
Just See You All Night Yeah
It's All About To Not
Just See You All Night Yeah

They had no relations......yet they always felt they belongs to each others only ...they stood in each others arms...and forgot the rest of the world......he forgot his wounded shoulder .....she forgot the wounds on her body given by the goons....they forgot the corpses around them......they forgot two pair of eyes stared at them ........

Ishq Ko Sanwarta Dekhun
Kuch gulaal Mein Bhi fekun
Rangon Mein Ghuloon Mein Rang Sa

Haye.......


Aati Jaati Saansain Meri
Keh Rahi Ke Dhadkan Thehri
Mehki Jaane Kyun Main Yaar Saaaa.......

They didn't know in their subconscious mind how much they had craved for this moment only .....they forgot what ought to do...and what they not .....

This type of moment comes in everybody's life .....people find solace in arms of their enemies ....they trusts the person more than themselves ...whom could never be trusted.....their step slips to the sin ......and they do it because their heart says so ....

Trust me.......no matter what a sin it may be ....the heart never says the wrong ...a person should always listen to his heart ...cause the first call of heart is the call of god ......

Mere Toote Toote Se Sapne
Jora Tukdha Tukdha Hai Rab Ne
Jab Se Tu Hai Mili
Dil Kashi, Hai Dil Kashi,
Dil Kashi, Hai Dil Kashi
Dilkashiiiiiiiiiiiii....................


Jaagti Huwi Raaton Ko
Neend Bakhsh Do
Bezubaan Se Khaamoshi Ko
Lafz Bakhsh Do

Khuwahishon Sa Utho,
Barishon Sa Bhigo

--
Dil Kashi, Hai Dil Kashi,
Dil Kashi, Hai Dil Kashi
Dilkashiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

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REEET!
i really really loved d update!
d ending of d update wz FAB!
they hugged!
me really really happy!
loved it sooooooooooooooo much!
finally they r together!
there wz something between them tat pulled them even though they hated each other so much!
really beautiful update!
loved it beyond words!
thnxxxxx for such a wonderful update!
ur back baby!
BIG HUG 🤗

love
Navpreet
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its just awesome loved it

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