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Posted: 13 years ago



yes dear...😛...i m going to update an installment as the part will be long...😊...it will take 15min.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hey Di! OMG! I just caught up with this FF and it's just brilliant! I love the love and bond Rainbow share. It's just beautiful. You don't get to see that kind of relationship anywhere else. I love Riddhima's character here. But it's very confusing. I mean, what's going on with her? Please update as soon as possible and thanks for the PMs.


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Medzi
welcum on Rolits dear...😛
hope u will enjoy the coming updates too
thanx lot for the wonderful comment


lots of love
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Posted: 13 years ago




Hiii Friends...🤗



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Hellooo...hiii to everyone...Hope you all are fine...sorry lovey dovey buddies but this time i m not replyng to every comment as i little busy this wek...hope you all understand my problem...

sorry for all the grammatical or spelling errors my English is not that good...do post your long comments and your views about the below part..i tried to make it less confusing... i seriously i felt it little clumsy...
.other installment depends on your comments...as soon i will be satisfied with your comments i'll write the other part...😳 😉 nice deal...wat say???????? 😳...but yes if you are waiting for only happy moments of Rainbow gang then this is defiantly will not be a treat for you...and yes soon you all will get to know Riddhima more...dont be confused any query just ask me here...

i'll try my best to answer you...and yes from now the Rolits is going to turn into thriller, action, romantic & ful of Fun FF...toh be ready for the roller coaster ride of ROLITS





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Edited by jannat4ever - 13 years ago
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" Commence of Fluctuations "



All looked at Armaan who was looking so pissed as if he is planning to kill them with his eyes...only if eyes could kill anyone

Sid shifted on his feet seeing him glaring at him

"Saale ko pta chal gya kya ki yeh sab mera idea tha???? ghur toh aise raha hai jaise aankho se hi kha jayga...ab mujhe kya pta tha mamla itna serious hai ki yeh Riddhima ki judai mei "tere naam" ban jayga I thought seh lega 2-3 hours ki toh baat hai...uff mere talent ki toh kisi ko kadar hi nahi hai" sighed Sid while thinking about Armaan's plans

"Yeh sab tum logo ne kia???? tum sabne ????" asked Armaan still unsure about the truth

"hehehheh Ammy …..wo we thought to help you...sach" Atul giggled nervously

"ya Ammy we didn't did this intentionally...we are really sorr" tried Muskan but cut off by armaan's voice

"OMG...wow guyz I'm totally impressed …...awesome job...i mean I still cant believe you all planned this it was flawless...wowww" said Armaan enthusiastically but only he knew how excited he felt right now...cant god or we say law allow 5-6 murders...he would have killed them right here if only he could

Only Armaan knew what he had felt when her fingers shad lipped out of his hand...


but still he can't show his feelings atleast not now when he himself is not sure about the damn thing he is feeling

They all hugged him...one by one...happily

"Nice act dude..."whispered Rahul in armaan's ear who instantly stiffened in his hold

"wh...what??" asked Armaan still hugging him

"You acted nice in "Riddhima-doesn't-bother-me-act"but sweat on your forehead is showing your true kahani …..try to act better Ammy... atleast next time don't let anyone catch your feelings or try not to let her go "" whispered Rahul while patting his shoulder in soothing way

Armaan gulped "...ok...Rahul caught me...why this dude can't ignore the feeling I'm trying to hide...MINE???? Well Ammy he is a master in catching feelings which we try to hide toh forget it..."

"We did a good job????? Thank god we were so worried about your response" announced Shilpa and hugged Armaan whereas Riddhima stood on her spot aghast...no word could describe her emotion right now...

His word echoed in her ears making her tremble in wrath


"It was flawless"

"Awesome job"

"I'm totally impressed "


"bas**** impressed haan??? now toh no one can stop me from impressing you...not even you...this is the last straw by you" mumbled Riddhima who was not at all interested in their oh-so-well-job

"agar tum sab ka "Kidnap Riddhima celebration " khatam hogya ho toh chalne ki taiyari kare??? " asked Riddhima sarcastically

all turned and looked at her...swallowing the fear...they stared at her …...seeing her looking at them with straight face...no smile neither any trance of anger...which some where scared them

"Riddhima we are really sorry we didn't mean to" started Muskan but cut off by Riddhima's words

"CUT THE CRAP...if you think I-M-Blind then let me make it clear I Am NOT...i can see…..very well ……how much you all care about others……. when it comes to you all..." screeched Riddhima and turned towards other side making them face her back

"Don't you dare to talk to her like that..." shouted Armaan astonished by her behaviour

"fine they kidnapped her but it wasn't a big deal...ok it was but that damn doesn't give her any right to shout on Muski" thought Armaan angrily

Riddhima at once turned and looked at him...she stared in his eyes...

"Want to dare me???? ………..sigh……..Bring it on..." she answered in thick and dark voice making Armaan look at her in shock

"you...your voice..." muttered Armaan at which Riddhima realized what she has done

"if you all think by standing here like statues we will reach Goa ….then please tell me HOW" asked Riddhima, a little try to divert armaan's mind from her voice...oh damn what was the need to talk so gravely Riddhima someday you will definitely invite an unwanted problem...

"What…….. you are ready to come with US????" asked Anji flabbergasted by Riddhima's yes


"ya I'm ready..." answered Riddhima


"ufffo ho ……..agar Riddhima ready thi toh humne itni mehnat kyu ki??? Isse iski marzi se lejane mei kya problem thi yar???" asked atul and pouted as if he was the one who carried her till here

"Shut up AJ...lets go we don't have time …." snapped Anji and walked out of the house

Finally all sighed mission accomplished...no matter how bravely they told Armaan...they were actually hell scared of his reaction...but for one thing they were sure no matter how much he shout on them……… they will take Riddhima with them……They can't always burden Armaan for solving this Contract problem…they have been always together in every mess then why leaving this one…they all grinned widely at their thoughts……..




They all stepped out of the Dabolim Airport and looked around...everything silent…..the atmosphere complimented the silence

Rahul pulled Muskan into a side hug,….who was admiring the view of Dabolim Airport ….

"Liked it????" questioned Rahul while planting a kiss on her forehead

"Yeah...it's nice...so peaceful…….everything is looking so full of life..." replied Muski and tightened her grip around his waist

Anji and Atul sipped the coffee they buyed while coming out

Shilpa clicked one more picture...

"come on yar shilpu we haven't even entered in Goa...like u know proper enter ….we are on airport...stop clicking pics or you will get bored by your "I-M-Photographer" hobby..."Sid sighed and pleaded to Shilpa who smirked in response...

"Ok" she quickly replied and walked beside Sid

"Now where is that jerk Jacob yar...i had ordered him to come on time..still.." asked Armaan and pulled his jacket on his shoulder, he looked around to see if anyone is waiting for them

She looked around to see if any unwanted gift waiting for her...

" naahhh "

Riddhima grinned widely feeling the familiar air …...she slowed down her pace and looked at the people walking past her...

"thoda jaldi chalne ki taklif karegi aap...Maharani Sahiba….as we aren't planning to stay at the airport only.." asked Armaan mockingly when he realized her walking pace is equally slower to tortoise...maybe she is planning to give company to tortoise…..he snorted at his thoughts

But Riddhima's eyes were glued to something else...she inhaled deeply to calm herself but that something or someone still didn't bothered to look away...

"Few people know very well how to get on your nerves Riddhima….just relax….." Riddhima tried to console herself

"is it ok to scare a teenage guy????...ya may be…….and like I believe "Why should boys have all the fun…""Thought Riddhima and glared at the teenage guy who was looking at her like she is some lolipop and he is the owner...

The guy gulped seeing her glaring at him

He slowly walked upto her whereas at the same time Armaan turned and looked at Riddhima but found her staring or rather glaring

He felt his anger rising..."saala teenage idiot ...himmat kaise hui iski …..Trying to hit on MY GIRL" he thought angrily and walked upto Riddhima at the same pace…..without even knowing what he had blurted out right now……… and now the scene looked like a perfect triangle

"Are You Ri...Ri..." the guy stammered but cut off by Ridhima's angry glare and he stopped scared to even breath

"NONE OF YOUR BUSINESS" snapped Riddhima harshly and walked pass him but not before giving him last quota of her furious glare scaring the hell out of the poor teenage guy who flinched and ran away from there at once

"What the hell just happened now???? Did I just called her MY GIRL...hell no...when she became your girl Ammy
??? ohhh I'm dead sure I need a good nooo a famous and perfect oc physiatrist...this cant be happpening...no way...yeh ladki chahti kya hai??? why is getting on my nerves???? I mean ek pal bilkul innocent & sweet aur dusre hi pal rude, angry...god why she is such a mystery..????. " complained Armaan to god when he comprehended what he had blurted out few seconds before... speechless by his own words...and he turned and walked behind Riddhima who was already out of the Airport

Riddhima looked at them seeing AJ(Atul), Anji, Muski, Rahul, Shilpa, Sid standing near a men...who was gawking at her in bewilderment

She rolled her eyes ………..at the same response…….but next moment she look daggers at him and he at once stumbled back and opened the door for them while his eyes glued at the floor

Riddhima smirked

"wow ………." She mumbled and felt thrilled after all she is back in town……..this will surly going to change RAINBOW's future………and she will make sure it does………

"Now let me show them the "Commence of Fluctuations"……….they absolutely needs to know the bitter sides of life…………let's see who wins in the end ……" Riddhima smirked while looking out of window whereas other were busy in making plans of parties, shopping and sightseeing before the shoots………



"wowww awesome place Ammy...you designed it so well...i loved it..." Shilpa looked at the house and all equally agreed with her……while admiring the house interior…

Armaan looked at them while standing in the corner

"guys sabke rooms ke samne name plate hai toh we all can find our rooms while roaming...and Rahul you and Muski can decide whether they both want to share a room or want to stay in their own rooms" Armaan teased Rahul and Muskan at which Muskan blushed and glared at Armaan

"seriously Ammy...you did a great job yar...i thought itne kam time mei it won't come out as you wanted it...but you made it..." Sid hugged Armaan praised him

"ya last time when I came here I made sure it is ready for us..." Armaan responded while showing the balcony

"yeh ghar tumhara hai????" asked Riddhima in shock


ya...Armaan replied and shrugged his shoulders...

"But I didn't knew you have your own house in Goa" asked Riddhima in amazement

"Tum mujhe janti kabse ho Riddhima??? aisa bahut kuch hai mere baare mei jo tumhe nahi pta…...Armaan looked in Riddhima's eyes….anyway we always wanted a house in Goa as Goa is our favorite place for vacations...one place where we all agree without any arguments………last time we came here was like 1 year before" answered Armaan

"And then Armaan gave us the biggest surprise by buying this land and making R.O.L.I.T.S Villa here ……..that too in only 1 yr. " completed Anji...


R.O.L.I.T.S Villa



"yeh banda pakka pura pagal hai...i mean kon gadha apne dosto ki khushi ke liye ghar kharid kar baith jata hai??? wo bhi only for vacations???? par yeh toh kuch bhi kar sakte hai Ridddhima...they are insanely in love with each other" thought Riddhima while looking at them

"If you don't mind...how much this house cost you???" asked Riddhima hesitantly as she felt it's not her right to ask such a personal question

Armaan suddenly looked at the floor as if searching for something precious...totally uncomfortable by her question

"what?????" asked Riddhima she looked at them with raised brows...waiting for the answer...

"6" said Armaan in barely audible voice

"what??? 6 lakh??? itna sasta???" gasped Riddhima in surprise but bit her lip in order to stop herself from laughing ….she knows rates of properties very well...but still she thought to teasing Armaan when she understood he is not comfortable in talking about money

"Nearly 6 crore 75 lakh... " he replied and before Riddhima could even breathe out

"after a boring 2 hour flight … time for some rest …...like till evening ……than we will go at the dona paula beach for party …..That Jacob was saying it's one of greatest and amazing party on dona paula beach" announced Armaan

From now on the updates will be from Riddhima's POV till...well till next 3-4parts...

And others chuckled at his lame attempt... nodding their heads they all left to have a look at whole house...thats when I realized they all knows that he hates to talk about money matters ……this guy...arghhh...kamina kuch jydad hi acha hai but sirf UNKE liye


Sneak Peak in R.O.L.I.T.S Villa




Room for Boys...same for all boys ...or you can choose


"Your room is beside mine..." I heard him and looked at him for explanation…..i mean m I some child???

"I can't trust you with them... I know you are very angry with the fact that they kidnapped you...but trust me they did that only for me so that I don't have to beg to you for coming here….." Armaan answered to me as i was looking at him with open mouth

"Ok fine rather than lying he is speaking the truth...atleast once he said the truth...i also want you to not to trust me Armaan….."

"Aren't you angry with them????? You ...you know...you were so worried when those goons kidnapped... Me..." i asked him doubtfully

Armaan smiled at me and shook his head

"Nope …..but tell you the truth …...yes I was shocked actually horrified...but then I realized its wat I wanted from the moment you were kidnapped...you to be safe...that's wat exactly happened …...rather than seeing you b/w some unwanted goons I would love to see you ……being kidnapped by US" he replied while winking and leading the way to our rooms...and leaving me shocked again

"This is your room..." I heard him again and looked up to see the beautiful room...


Now



This Room is for Girls...same for all girls ...including Riddhima


"Liked it???" I turned and looked at Armaan who was leaning on the door...

"it's beautiful..." I replied while looking at the amazing room…….everything just perfect……. and he chuckled at my reply……..god knows why

"yes it's location is just perfect" I heard his voice which made me confused but when I looked up he wasn't there...

I sighed and picked my bag which was near the door...thats when I understood another fact... that he is the one who brought my luggage to my room...i was toh busy with my hanging mouth


"M I sure to show them ……wat I'm about to show...???? …..sigh...i totally confused and telling you folks they are too good in confusing people…….but today is the last day of their happy go lucky life...before I become one of them …...i think now it's high time to send The-Sweet-Riddhima on vacations...as I need the bitch in me more...i smirked and went to freshen up...giving time to others to get ready for the blasts...and making myself ready to face Goa again…….it will be hard hell hard……


Do Read Imp.

" Pm's will be done when part will be completed...i tried to make it less confusing... i seriously i felt it little clumsy....other installment depends on your comments...as soon i will be satisfied with your comments i'll write the other part...😳 😉 nice deal...wat say???????? 😳...but yes if you are waiting for only happy moments of Rainbow gang then this is defiantly will not be a treat for you...and yes soon you all will get to know Riddhima more...don't be confused any query just ask me here...i'll try my best to answer you...and yes from now the Rolits is going to turn into thriller, action, romantic & ful of Fun FF as per my plan...toh be ready for the roller coaster ride of ROLITS "



Will Be Continued...😍





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Edited by jannat4ever - 13 years ago
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I am first again...kya kaun Ab toh aadat si ho gayi hai😳...Chlo ji finally we got the update that too after long ONE month...ONE MONTH😲...yaah...OMKSG...You are so bad yaar...Seriously😡...Hamesha itan wait karwati ho update ke liye and for that we both hate you so much😭... Accha I want to ask you one thing...Aisa kya hai ROLITS mein yaar ki whenever I even start reading it ,a sweet smile form on my face and never leave its place throughout the part...Seriously...ye secret aaj tak mujhe samjh nahi aaya😕...And I don't want to know yaar...I love ROLITS and that's it❤️...Now coming to the Installment...As I said earlier...jaise hi I started to read it a sweet smile form on my lips...The way Sid said those funny lines...Superb👏...The RAINBOW is truly unique yaar...But just love their bond and Love...Remarkable👏...Then Ms. Riddhima Gupta...She is a mystery...What she do, What She want, why she is doing all this...Everything is just soo confusing😕...Everyone in Goa knows her and more then that scared by her...Who is she man??..really want to know...She have that soft corner for RAINBOW and ARMAAN,but still she want to do something very bad for them...which can change thier life...but the question is WHAT,WHEN and WHY?...ARRGGHHH..Tumhe bahut mazza aata hai na hume Pareshan karne mein😡...you better revel this mystery soon...And Last but certainly not the least...Our Angel...Armaan Mallik😍...Sigh...Why he is so Kind,good,cute,Mature,Hnadsome,hot,understanding,loving etc etc...gosh...I mean I fell in love with him all over again...Sachi muchi☺️...He is such a sweetheart I tell u...The way he react when he got to know that Riddhima is kidnapped by RAINBOW...he want to shout but remain calm just because for his Friends...He Actually buy a Beach house for his friends which cost 6 Crore 75 Lakh😲...Are you serious...just for his friends sake..Awww...Sachi..we are so right...He is indeed an Angel..OUR ANGEL⭐️...Just Love him to the death...ROLITS villa is also very beautiful yaar aur ho bhi kyun na after all 6 crore 75 lakh ka jo hai😉.😆..Really want to read more so you better update soon...nahi toh Mein sachi mein gussa ho jaaungi...ooppss...Mein nahi HUM gussa ho jayengee😡...Take care

Lots of Love

GEET

Edited by sweetdesire - 13 years ago
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kya baat hai already here...hmmm..lagta hai badi jaldi hai ...😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jannat4ever



kya baat hai already here...hmmm..lagta hai badi jaldi hai ...😉

mujhe bhi...😆 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jannat4ever



kya baat hai already here...hmmm..lagta hai badi jaldi hai ...😉


You toh just don't talk to me😡...Inform bhi nahi kiya...But see Still I am First one...Kya karun Main hu hi super fast...😉
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Originally posted by: sweetdesire


You toh just don't talk to me😡...Inform bhi nahi kiya...But see Still I am First one...Kya karun Main hu hi super fast...😉



hehhehe i was about to msg you but you were already here yar...see your super fast speed...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey nice part
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Edited by vidu87 - 13 years ago

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