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Mujhe mera update kab milega...?????????????😭😭😭😭
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Jannat di ur back.yippeee i am dancing now. i read ROLITS in one go before and due to no updates i thought u had stopped writing. but then i see this message now and am sooo happy. plzzz plzzz jaldi updates do.plzzz .i will give u long wala comments too.plzzz. ek request. culd u plzzz update talash fast. i am dieng to read it and i am the no 1 fan of that ff.plzzz plzzz
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where is update u said u'll update on sunday but sunday has gone where is update we want update we want update pleeaasshh update soon
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"W…wo…ma..main" Shilpa tried her best to speak but stammered badly coz of fear


"MOVE" replied Armaan curtly who was looking at her with straight face yet anger could be easily seen in his eyes

"But…a..ammi……maine" spoke shilpa again but her chocked voice didn't let her speak more than two words

And she was cut off by his final voice


"MOVE…DIDN'T YOU HEARED ME???? NOT A SINGLE WORD SHILPA….i Have already heard and seen so much and I think dats more than enough for today …………." Burst out Armaan who was trying his best to control his anger but failed miserably




Shilpa flinched in fear as she heard him shouting at her which was totally new for her and what shocked her was he called her SHILPA that proved no one can save her today from him

And other looked at him with cocked eyes……………..



"She is gone Rahul……damn he just called her Shilpa ….see us standing here like statues can't we just stop for once????" asked Muskan hesitantly though she knew the answer but whats the harm in trying

"NO" came an instant reply from Sid


Atul looked at Shilpa who had tears in her eyes and felt bad for her but what about the rules no one have the permission to break them and d worst part they didn't planned any emergency rules



"Right…You know na muski we never brakes RAIBOW RULES….and its one of them….we can't interfere in this mess till one of them ask us and here comes another rule we can't involve any other person including one of us also in our fights so they have only one way "DO OR DIE " said Anji and sighed helplessly

Shilpa slowly looked at others and saw all eyes were on her……….




MUSKAN, RAHUL, ATUL, ANJI, RIDDHIMA, SID???? All are looking at her but no one is taking her side…why??? She thought in confusion

"aisa kya kia hai maine???" thought Shilpa in tears

"I have enough of now………… I'm going out ….You all can go home" Shilpa came out of her thoughts by Armaan's voice who had already turned to go

On the other hand when Armaan looked at Shilpa she was still standing on her spot…not moving an inch forget changing the clothes………….which did nothing but infuriated him more and he thought rather than shouting it's better to leave

Rainbow looked at him as if he was some alien


"Matter is going out of our hands" whispered Sid to others

"Really???? Matter hamare hatho mei tha hi kab sid……… jo hatho se jayga" whispered Anji in anger

"Very funny anji……..waise toh tum kabhi joke nhi marti fir aaj hi kyu try kar rhi ho???" asked Sid sarcastically

"tum dono bakvas band karo and better think something …………I think Armaan ko yaha se bahar lekar jaan theek rahega…..look at Shilpa ……….kitni darri hui lag rhi h………ammi ne aaj tak kabhi shilpa se iss tarah se baat nhi ki h……….aur is waqt wo rukega bhi nhi …………uska gussa hi uski sabse badi problem hai …………." Said Rahul and sighed as he looked at teary Muskan and Shilpa………

Sid nodded



Riddhima looked at Anji, Rahul and Sid whispering something to each other


She felt like kicking them and glared at Armaan who was about to leave the audi……….

"wats wrong with these guyz??? Ek yeh gadha Armaan h jo choti si I mean thodi si badi baat par itna hungama kr raha hai……bichari shipa ko kitna kuch sunna raha h…….aur yeh baki bevkuf issse rokne ki jagah faltu baate kr rhe h" shouted Riddhima mentally


"D..dnt go ammi….sniff…sniff…..i ..i m going" said Shilpa in a weak voice

Armaan stopped walking as soon he heard shilpa's voice and turned to her


But before anyone could even realize what had just happened Shilpa ran out of audi leaving everyone shocked

All looked at the door and sighed helplessly






"ammi u know wat……this was the limit…………I mean u know na how nave she is ….but still u shouted on her????...u very well know she would have never done dis if she had a slight hint dat dis was wrong" said Sid and tried to put some piece of mind in armaan's brain





"I know Sid but she is a girl…………..she shouldn't forget dat……I'm not saying to wear suits or cover herself but damn it exposing like dis was disgusting and……. Wat if …….today she did dis and tomorrow she don't have us near her ………..someone tries to miss behave with her coz of her dis so called awesome act……????? Will she be able to handle those cheap boys which actually exist on earth and in our college too??? She can't handle it…and dats wat i hate…………….SID I dnt know about other girls but Rainbow girls definitely don't have dis permission………." Yelled Armaan

All lowered their gaze as they felt he is actually right……………

"I know u r right at ur place ammi…but shilp…" started Sid but stopped as he saw rather than listening Armaan walk passed him and before he could stop him

"THUD"

Their eyes popped out as they saw rocky fell on floor as Armaan punched him hard on his face

(Rocky – member of Yuvi's gang)

And before anyone could even blink their eyes just in 2 seconds another shock


"THUD"

"THUD"

2 punches a another guy fell on floor

"Neeraj????" a dazed Muskan whispered as she saw face of another guy


"wat is wrong with Armaan yar…..why the hell he is beating yuvi's gang members????" asked Rahul in irritation




"bahut shauk hai na tujhe entertainment ka???? Dance ka??? Aaj itne dose duga ki puri life entertainment ka nasha nhi utreaga tera………."boomed Armaan and pulled rocky up by his collar

"I had already told your gang not to drag girls b/w any of our fights….but still u both did dat….i think Yuvi has lost his hearing power ……but this time I'm going to make it crystal clear to Yuvi and his gang…Wat Armaan Mallik is…." Said Armaan in rage and punched him in his stomach



He punched rocky few more time in rage ….Rocky fell on floor tiredly and winced in pain

Rainbow looked at him confused and shocked……………mortified

Sid was more than shocked and knew very well that there is lots more in story

"Plz Rahul,…..Sid do something …stop him damn it…." Shuddered Anji as she saw Armaan beating Nikhil badly


Shilpa who just entered in audi after changing her clothes was shocked beyond her wits as she saw rocky and neeraj getting beaten up by Armaan…

"Armaan …stop it yar" shouted Sid

"DON'T" came a stern reply from Armaan

Riddhima's eyes were on verge of popping out in shock….seeing Armaan so angry….she gulped ……

"So much anger for such a small incident…wat if he comes to know about me???? Damn" thought Riddhima and stepped back

"What the hell is wrong with your Mallik?????" yelled a baffled Yuvi who just entered in audi with his other gang members and saw his rocky and Neeraj lying on floor and Armaan still kicking Neeraj

"ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR MIND MALLIK???? MAR JAYGA WO ………..LEAVE HIM MALLIK" barked YUVI and pulled rocky out of Armaan's grip

Armaan pushed Yuvi away

"YOU ARE GONE SINHA…………….dis time you crossed all the limits…we had already a deal…..which u conveniently forgot dat no one of us going to drag girls b/w our fights…..but YOU" retorted Armaan but cut off by a confused Yuvi

"Mallik wake up now….give me a break dude as far as I remember I just entered in college five mins back with rest of the gang …………and I don't even know what fu** are you talking about forget the planning and how dare you beat them"

"DON'T YOU DARE TO DARE ME SINHA ……ARE YOU TRYING TO SAY THAT YOU HAVE NO IDEA WHAT CRAP THESE TWO DOG PLANNED …….what crap your so called buddies putted in shilpa's brain????????…." questioned Armaan sarcastically

Where as Rainbow's eyes shot up towards Shilpa as they heard Armaan ….




Shilpa lowered her eyes in guilt






Sid shook his head in annoyance as he realized why she danced like dat

"Can't we just kill these dogs of Sinha????" asked Sid angrily



"NO" he heard Rahul's reply and groaned

Sid looked at armaan who was busy in arguing with Yuvi

"Dnt worry everything will be fine …nothing will happen to ammi…u now him na usse gussa jyada ata hai….but we are here ………" said Rahul to a hell scared Muskan who was hugging him in panic as if her life depends on this hug …….."

She nodded slightly but only she knew to which extent she hate fights ………….

"SHILPA???? How she comes in this matter now???" inquired Yuvi in impatiently

Armaan glared at him and pulled Neeraj up by his collar

"ASK HIM" suggested Armaan and pointed at Neeraj

Yuvi looked at Armaan and then turned towards Neeraj

Only by seeing his petrifying expression Yuvi was sure they surely had done something which boiled ARMAAN MALLIK to this extent

"WHAT YOU TWO DID????" questioned YUVI

Neeraj looked at Armaan and saw him daring him to lie

"Actually when Armaan sang for that new girl same day in afternoon we saw Shilpa was walking in corridor alone ………….toh we made up this plan yuvi…."

yuvi glared at him…….

"for .. Revenge …we started talking about how Armaan danced for this new girl to impress her and she actually agreed to be his partner………..coz he sang for her in front of everyone…if Shilpa also do something like this dance, singing, full on seducing act for Sid he will fall for her we suggested a song too…."


" an….and added dat Armaan going to be so happy if they will be together….but we also made sure that she made it a surprise so dat they can't be able to stop her…we only"

But before Neeraj could complete he received a hard punch form Yuvi who was equally boiling in anger


"YOU SON OF BI***….who asked to be over smart……..???? Didn't I told you all that I will how to handle this Malik???? " asked Yuvi in fury

"Sorry Yuvi but we did for you…. I thought after that…." Said Neeraj but cut off by

"Happy???? Summit just throw him out of sight before I kill him "shouted Yuvi on another gang member

"And you both losers….leave it upto me how I want to tackle Mallik….i don't need these kind of bull shit plans" Yuvi pointed at Neeraj and Rocky


"Look who's saying" said Atul and chuckled in tensed atmosphere and his comment really did a wonder dat all smiled leaving a boiling Yuvi Armaan, Shilpa and Riddhima


"Shut your mouth AJ" whispered Anji to save Atul

Yuvi turned to Armaan in anger which had just touched the new heights by Atuls' comment



"It was a just a misunderstanding Mallik but which you did was over the board……….you surely have to pay for this…I won't forget their bruises Mallik….NEVER" Yuvi spoke in fury


"NEITHER WILL I SINHA……you have to pay for this one…….i will make sure …you pay… this time I left them alive next time if they dared to even think anything I will kill them with my bare hands…and I swear none will be able to stop me nor YOU neither can your gang" said Armaan thickly in dangerous tone scaring Riddhima to core

Yuvi walked out in anger too

Armaan turned and looked Shilpa was back and she had changed her clothes


But was this enough to calm the angry tiger how was ready to pounce any moment


"WILL YOU GONNA EXPLAIN????" roared Armaan




All looked at him shouted by his tone

But Riddhima had enough of his anger and threating session


"JUST SHUT UP ARMAAN…….why the hell are you shouting??? Is she looks deaf to you????...(she pointed at Shilpa) can't you talk like normal people???Why so much shouting on her only???" asked Riddhima exasperated by his constant jabbing on Shilpa





"This good for nothing Armaan surely had been released from some mental hospital. I'm dead sure" thought Riddhima in irritation


"YOU……don't you dare to interfere between US…YOU ARE NONE …..DID YOU HEAR ME???? NO ONE ….YOU HAVE NO RIGHT U GOT DAT…..YOU ARE JUST A PARTNER IN CONCERT DON'T TRY TO BE PART OF OUR LIFES…..it would be better if you close your mouth or just leave " blurted Armaan who didn't even realized what blunder he had done





But for Riddhima they were most harsh words she had ever heard in her life and hearing them from Armaan hurt her more

Her eyes welled but what irked her more was why his words were affecting her so much???His words were constantly ringing in her mind…..she bit her lower lip to stop the tears which were ready to spill out any moment

Sid shook his head as he heard Armaan's words ….he felt bad for Riddhima


"When he will realize she is not just partner for him……..apne pairo pe kulhadi marna koi iss gadhe se sikhe" thought Sid

Atul pouted as he really liked Riddhima


Rahul and Muskan were shocked by his bitterness


Anji was not that much affected as she wasn't very big fan of Riddhima she was ok with her


And Shilpa got the hint that she dead for sure today

Where as Armaan who was still unaware of his words depth looked at Shilpa




"U LIED????? U actually lied to US???? For that disgusting plan….None of us knew about this…you played so well….knowing dat we all hate lies and liars you had the guts to lie???"Asked an astonished Armaan





Shilpa looked at Armaan with tears in her eyes

"n..nhi ammi…maine jaan bujh kar nhi kia sach…wo…wo mujhe lagaa tum sabko acha lagega" she answered in low voice

"How you were so sure that we will surely like this???Who was the jerk which gave you this so called hope???? Asked Armaan sarcastically and was ready to beat the hell out of that guy but next moment his jaws dropped till knees as he heard her answer

"YOU" whispered Shilpa

All sniggered as they heard her leaving Armaan who was confused

"DID SHE JUST SAID IT WAS ARMAAN…… WHO INSPIRED HER FOR THAT CRAP???? "Asked AJ in daze


Armaan stared at her baffled by her answer


Anji stomped his feet and glared at him


Whatt ME?? Shouted Armaan in shock

Shilpa nodded

"How on earth I inspired you????" he asked her stunned

"WO……….you also did all this for Ridz na …and she actually agreed to be your partner" said Shilpa innocently

All realized the blunder and how everything went in flow


She did heard Rocky and Neeraj but what made her believe them was Armaan and his act



"I INSPIRED YOU???? I SHOULD BE HANGED TILL DEATH FOR INSPIRING YOU" snapped Armaan


He sighed

"But don't you know I am a guy shil….i mean Shona…..nothing gonna happen if I rom around shirtless…..but YOU are a girl you shouldn't forget dat I'm not asking you to be dressed like 60 but still what u wear today was not even near the decent,……..seducing SID????Dancing and singing was ok but seducing???You all are free to wear anything but that doesn't mean to wear nothing" said Armaan irritably as those scenes again refreshed in his mind

"Can't you cut this crap now?" questioned Riddhima shocking him again



But Riddhima was on verge of killing him as she saw the guilt, tears on Shilpa's face which affected her more than she had thought

"What's your problem???? I'm talking to her not you" snapped Armaan

"TALKING???? You must be kidding right………can't you see you dumb head …..You are just scaring her more and more….can't you see her wet cheeks, teary eyes or you are blind" retorted Riddhima

When she didn't get any reply

"You are behaving as if she had murdered someone" she said sarcastically

"And as far as her security concerns….she pointed at his muscle …..Are these muscles of urs….your so called 6 Packs…..are for your marketing????? Can't you good-for-nothing and pig headed guys protect her????" she asked sarcastically and challenged them boldly which shocked the guys out their wits




Where as girls looked at her as if she was speaking in some other language

Riddhima looked at Shilpa sadly who was literally shivering coz of so much crying and hiccups hearing Armaan's harsh words

Then turning to Armaan Riddhima walked upto them and bending a little over him she whispered in his ear

"It would be better if you rather than scaring her for this fiasco,…have a talk with her that too decently…..coz jo hona tha wo ho chukka hai you can't change it now…stop making it worse for her….or else she will live under the guilt that she lied to you….(she sighed and continued)…….she has already realized her mistake don't push her so far dat she brake down….i m sure you don't want that….. talk to her…SHE NEEDS YOU ARMAAN" said Riddhima in barely audible voice for others but Armaan heard all her words

All looked at them wid raised brows as they only heard whimpering voice

Before Armaan could react she moved back and went little far from him but not before blinking her eyes to assure him that she is right

Armaan felt like punching himself and cursed himself mentally as he saw Shilpa's state

"What the hell is wrong with me???yeh kya kar raha hu main???? Riddhima who is a complete stranger for her realized everything and here me……..damn Armaan Mallik…….i so messed up everything………..damn I need fresh air I'm feeling so suffocated……." Thought a guilty Armaan and was about to leave but stopped by a voice

"am…ammi I'm so…sorry……..sniff..…plz forgive me…..you can punish m…sniff……..me pakka but don't leave me" Armaan heard Shilpa's chocked voice and stopped in his tracks




And forgetting everything all anger….irritation and frustration………. he turned and spread his arms wide towards Shilpa ……….total filmy way for others but for him he knew this was the best step he had taken from morning till now"



Shilpa who looked at him shocked blinked to stop her tears just ran toward him and hugged him as tight as she could while he hugged her and rubbed her back to calm her as he felt her sobbing ….in his arms


Riddhima looked away when she saw them hugging ……..she didn't knew why but she didn't liked the hug

"I'm so ridiculous…………after giving him such a big lecture here I'm getting jealous great….issi ki kami thi" she shouted mentally

She sighed and looked at Armaan and Shilpa

Riddhima released her breath which she was holding back from the moment Armaan had hugged Shilpa

She saw him breaking the hug and trying to calm Shilpa who was looking wreaked out in his arms as she was waiting for him to forgive her

Riddhima was not jealous of Shilpa but for sure she didn't liked the closeness b/w Armaan and Shilpa

Anji, Atul, Rahul, Muski and Sid sighed and a sweet smile spread on their faces when they saw a worried Armaan trying his best to calm Shilpa

"I don't understand one thing" started Atul but cut off by Anji

"Clear it dude you don't understand anything" she smirked

"kya smjh nhi ata tujhe AJ???" asked Sid

"yahi ki when Ammi can't handle her tears why on earth he tries to be angry young men with her???" asked Muskan on behalf on Atul

"Coz he can't tolerate when anyone try to harm any of us….and Shilpa is still a kid by heart who need guidance but she thinks she knows everything…like all of us…….that's why Ammi is more worried for her" spoke Rahul

Riddhima heard them and looked at them in awe…………..

"They are aliens for sure……….." screamed Riddhima mentally

Armaan felt Shilpa shivering …………………her sobs turned into hiccups

He knew she was still crying badly

"Don't….don't cry…i will not shout on pakka " whispered Armaan in shilpa's ears

He rubbed her back and gave her enough time to compose herself

But Shilpa was not ready to calm herself may be he was more than harsh

"Shilpa???? " whicpered armaan helplessly

"STOP CALLING ME SHILPA DAMN IT" shouted Shilpa shocking all out of their wits




May be this day was not in their favor………….things were getting worse whenever they thought now everything is fine

"Ok….ok Shonna………I'm so sorry…..dobara kabhi nhi chilauga …..i swear…………..plz stop crying,………." He begged to Shilpa ……..Shilpa shook her head in NO


"Can we interfere now???? You both are dumbs…………so just call us na yar we are fad up now………… I so want to kick u both" yelled Anji




"NO…….." answered Shilpa

"no one will interfere " whispered Shilpa which all heard

Anji sighed helplessly she was loosing her temper now



Riddhima was on verge of fainting

"FINE you both go to hell…………and Shilpa stop crying now…………..bahut hua tum dono ka………….. you both have only one option now………… just talk NO CRYING OR SHOUTING or else we gonna walk out from here………you both will get silent treatment from all of us for next one month ………ur wish" spoke Anji while glaring at them

Both nodded

"SIT and TALK" Anji ordered and pointed at chairs behind them

Both quietly followed her order in terror of silent treatment

"First I'm sorry……….i shouldn't have shouted on you………….it's my mistake I could have done all this in better way………..i m a big time jerk" said Armaan

"no ….i m so…sorry…sniff…….meri galati thi mujhe kisi aur ki baat nhi sunni chaiye thi…………its always about us and will be…………" she slowly answered

"Leave this topic I'll make sure you don't do anything like this again……..just tell me why you did this>?????" he asked politely

Though he knew the answer very well but still decided to ask her directly to make her understand the truth which he always avoided so that it doesn't hurt her………… but now he knew he has to make few things clear to her

All sighed in relief as they saw them talking

But this time they didn't hoped for best in fear but were ready for another worst situation

Riddhima just stood there waiting for their so called talk she was surprised when she saw their baffled expression when Anji declared the silent treatment threat

"wo…..main…she sighed…….mujhe lagaagar main aisa krugi toh SID …sniff……ko acha lgega……….jaise Ridz ko lga tha……." Said shilpa

Armaan turned and looked at Sid who immediately started looking here and there


Armaan pulled Shilpa's hand in his and spoke


"listen shonna……….its different ………let me explain….what I did for riddhima was for US not for her………….." he spoke but didn't felt it right when he looked at riddhima and saw the hurt expression on her face


But ignored as he felt right not shilpa need him more

"I don't like or lo…love her……." He stammered while speacking

"big time liar" shouted Sid but mentally

Riddhima felt her eyes moist and looked down……….

"US??? You all are right it was always about you all………..not me…….He thinks I'm toy …jab jarurt hui use kia aur jab jarurt na ho faik dia….. " thought Riddhima she came out of her thoughts when she heard him speaking

"I mean …I wanted to apologize to her…..shonna what I did for her was just dance and singing I never seduced her….just" Armaan stopped as he realized what he was saying and hurriedly looked at Riddhima whose eyes were boring into his asking thousand questions






"KAH FAS GAYA MAIN?????" thought Armaan as he looked at Riddhima and Shilpa


Shilpa was confused as she didn't get what he was trying to say


Where as Riddhima felt as if HE cheated her... used her for their benefit………….

TO BE CONTINUED...šŸ˜


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Phew 30 pages in word ...wow i really did broke all my records... such a long update...😊now toh i surely deserve long comments after such boring length ...😳toh wat are you all waiting for shuru hojao yaar...i dyeing to know the response

dats all for dis update...i would have written more but have to do office work see no Sundays or holidays for me 🤢...will send the pm's tomorrow as now i m very tired ..šŸ˜•.hope you all like the part sorry for the mistake and if i have disappointed any one with update...😳


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He looked mortified ….


He ran as fast his feet were allowing him...the scenario in front of his eyes made his brain jam hammered

he looked here and there while running no one was their to help him...


"RIDDHIMAAA" He screamed as he saw them taking her away from him she was still away from him

He tried to hold her hand from the window but as their fingers just brushed he was pushed back by two strong hands

ARMAANNN ……she cried as she saw him falling on his back with a thud coz of sudden push


"ARMAAN HELP MEEE" she screamed in tears for help and tried to free herself from their grips but all her attempts failed



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He kneeled down and stared at the empty road

She was here in front of him……asking nothing but help………

Tear fell down from the corner of his eye as he realized the loss


SHE WAS GONE ….WHERE ??? HE DON'T KNOW……….WITH WHOM???? HE DON'T KNOW……..

The pain was unbearable…….his head was spinning

He knew only one thing….and was determined for that ….NO matter how he have to get her back



TO KNOW STAY TUNED...


"RHYTHM OF LOVE IN TRUE SOULMATES"


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JANNAT...😳

Edited by jannat4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Heyyy...Yeeppiieee I am First one to comment ...As always(collar up)šŸ˜‰...Finally we get what we are waiting from Ages...Our Much Awaited Update...Gosh Sweetheart...itna Wait...but As I know the Reason so maaf kiya tumhešŸ˜›...ok now coming for the update...Superb My DSSšŸ‘...Simply Amazing...Right from the start...Gosh Our Armaan and his Anger...I Myself got scared yaar...Poor Shona...Have to bear Ammy's Anger😭...But it shows how much Armaan care for his shona...And what can I say about Shona...she is one of its kind...she is actually inspired by Armaan...god😲?..Armaan was right...KAHAAN PHASS GAYA BEECHARA?šŸ˜†?..But Shona is indeed very nave and innocent...Love the way Riddhima knock some senses in Armaan mind...But Armaan The Great again created a new mess...he unintentionally hurt RiddhimašŸ˜•...Poor Soul...feeling bad for her...Lets see what will happen next..so you better updated soon otherwise you know me very well😈...And OMKSG the Precap...so scaring and interesting yaar...plzzz do continue soon...thanks for the PM...take care...😊

Lots of Love

GEET

(UR JAANA)

PS: Someone also want to say something to you...šŸ˜‰

Hey Princess,

How r u My Love...?..just Love the way you writešŸ‘šŸ¼...keep it up the good work and makes me proud as u do alwazzz😊...take care...Love u 1,2,3 raise to infinity...ā¤ļøā¤ļø

Take care

urs Angel
Edited by sweetdesire - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

yaay first time on IF i'm second to comment

wow what an amazing part it was i was so lost in reading that i dint realise when it start n ended ,when it ended my exp.was inne jaldi ended but when i scrolled up i had to agree with u iit was a very long part n thnx for giving such long part .now coming to part man armaan's anger i also got scared i'm feeling sad for shona poor she has to suffer armaan's anger but i'm agree with arman she shouldn't did al this but why riddhima got scared seenig armaan's anger is she upto something ...yaar seriously i wanted to punch that guys but our ammy did this n i was enjoying the fight my angry yong men ..atleast riddhima gave some peice of mind to our ammy ..omg what he did he created blunder man sid is right ise kahten hain apne pair pe kulahdi marna..i'm feeling bad for riddhima ..armaan shud think before speaking ab kya hoga ...n i realy enjoyed AJ's dialoge's he is so sweet..omg ur preview scared me who kidnapped riddhima ..what they wants from riddhima u seriously give me a little heartattack with ur preview
Edited by MONIKAluvsAR - 14 years ago

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