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Posted: 14 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: sweetkhushii

yaar nice effort..really😊 n acha h apne group ka name dekhkar ar acha lga



HEY THNX A LOT DEAR.......BT WAT U MEAN BY..................................acha h apne group ka name dekhkar ar acha lga??????

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Edited by jannat4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Edited by jannat4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#93


AR-rona band kar chal shonna ko audi mein leke chalte hai....thoda rest karegi toh theek ho jaygi.......turned to shilpa...........come shonna lets gooooooooo plzzzzzzzzzzz

and their good luck shilpa without further arguements agreed...................

ALL IN COLLEGE AUDITORIUM

shilpa rested for 2 hours nd now she fine..............

but now their is one more tension.........ofcourse guyz their RESULT..................




suddenly J.P came in audi

J.P(worriedly) - hey guyz result agya..😕

now all are worried nd shocked nd in heart all said--RESULT???KYU AGYA???HUME KOI JALDI NAHI THI....2-4 SAAL BHI NAHI ATA TAB BHI.....🥱

RA (anounced) - LETS GO GUYZ....WE HAVE TO CHECK😲

SI (with SO-WAT-LOOK) -tum jao main shilpu ke pass rukta hu...😕

AR-mera result bhi check kar lena .........😊

AT(excited) - bhai..tu bhi shilpu ke pass rukega kya???😛

AR(teasingly) - champ is hateli(pointing towards shilpa) ka dhayan rakhne ke liye ye hatela (turned to sid) hai na..main apni sweetheart se mil kar ata hu......aj subah se nahi mila...i m sure wo naraz hogi... (saying this he left from audi)😉

all went to see the result and arman is going towards his fav. place to meet his someone special....


IN GARDEN

AR(tensed)😕 -kaha reh gai ab tak nhi ayi???ab toh ajana chahiye tha??WHERE ARE YOU SWEETHEART???


GIRL voice (ANGRY) -MUJHE PTA THA BHUL JAOGE....AAJ MAIN TUMHE NHI CHODUGI...SUBAH SE EK BAAR BHI FACE NHI DIKHAYA........

(hearing her voice arman turned and almost jumped in joy after all his sweetheart is in front of him )😛

" tum???oh i missed you sooooo muchhhhhh.......oye hoye some one is looking very beautiful" arman said with a wink 😉

girl - sachi???sharam nahi ati tumhe itna late ate hue???😲

"oh come on.....ok i m shooooo shorryyyyyyyy" arman said in a baby voice 😛 and gave a choclate to the girl

GIRL (happy) - for me??????oh i love you handsome (saying that she hugged him)

arman phone rang............

he talked on phone fora while and after cutting the call turned to his sweetheart.........

AR (excited) - hey my angel hum sab pass hogye..............now i have to goooooo...kal milte hai...

GIRL - really?oh great..........and watt abt my treat???

AR - ofcourse.......lets gooooooo

GIRL - HYE HANDSOME abhi nahi........abhi mujhe kuch kaam hai......nxt time....

AR - as u say angel 😉

(after little bit chit chat arman came back to his gang)

SH (SHOUTED) - AMMI MAIN PASS HOGAI 👏.......i dnt believe it

"shonna pass hona itna wired lag raha hai toh bta do hum princi se baat karke fail kara dete hai tumhe" arman said with a wink😉

SH (SAD)- no ammi fir mujhe alag class mein baithna hoga..........fir sid bor ho jayga na(blushed)😳

AT(SHOUTED) - AMMI MERE BHAI HUM PASS HOGYE

AR (SHOUTED) - CHILL CHAMP TU ITNA UCHAL KYU RAHA HAI????😲 MUJHE SMJH NHI ATA TUM SAB AAJKAL ITNA CHILATE KYU HO??KYU MERE KAANO KA POSTMARTAM KARNE PE TULLE HUE HO????😲

AT-ammi mere bhai hum pass ho gaye 👏

RA-SACH????hume toh pta hi nhi tha...abbe gadhe kuch dair pehle tune hi ammi ko ph. karke btaya tha na ki hum pass ho gye ??😕

AT-OH REALLY???main bhul gaya tha....chod ..(turned to arman)acha galle toh lag mere bhai..hum pass hogye 🥱

ARMAAN THOUGHT "Ist SEMESTER MEIN PASS HONE PE AESE HALLA MACHA RHA HAI JAISE 3rd WORLD WAR JEET LI HO ISNE"😆

AR- MERE LAAL PILO AB GHAR CHALE YA YAHI BASNE KA IRADA HAI????😉

SH (sad) - bt ammi itni mushkil se toh hum pass hue hai.plz celebrate karte h na??😕

SI - REALLY??CELEBRATE???BESHARAMI KI HADD HOTI H😲

AR - JAANI HUM DUNIYA KE PEHLE BESHARAM HOGE JO 40% MARKS ANE PE ITNA KHUSH H.........AUR AKHIR BURAI KYA H 40% MARKS MEI...AGAR HUM HI HAR FIELD MEIN TOP KAREGE TOH BAKI STUDENTS KYA KREGE??KUCH RESPONSIBILITIES UNHE BHI UTHANE DO.....😉


SI - AMMI 😡

AR-WATT AMMI?????abbe tera dil itna chota hoga hmara nhi h jo dusro ke jyada marks na dekh sake...chal ab rona band kar...aur hume plan bnane de....akhir hum pass hue hai....😉

MU-rite hero i agree aur oye rahul better hoga tu bhi agree ka signal de de varna 😡

RA- arre tu mujhe kyu darra rhi h??maine toh kehta hu abhi chalo....😊

AR-hey aaj nhi kal celebrate krege i m tired...aur subah se jo humne kia h wo ek din ke liye kafi h.........ab ghar chalo kal milege...kal ka pura din hmare 40% marks ke naam....😊

AFTER DISCUSSING THEIR PARTY TIME AND LITTLE CHIT CHAT THEY WENT TO THEIR HOMES.....................😉


SHIMLA ( NIGHT 9 'O' CLOCK)


DEEP SILENCE IN ROOM

A GIRL STANDING NEAR WINDOW WITH TEARS IN HER BEAUTIFUL EYES AND LOOKING AT GLOWING MOON

A MAN ENTERS IN HER ROOM

MAN (sadly) - riddhima beta....

(finally riddhim's entry in ff ....happy guyz????????😆now back to d track)


riddhima wiped her tears nd turned towards d man

RI (with fake smile) - hey dad watt happen

SH-bachhe kya tumhe bilkul khushi nahi hui??tumne puri university mein top kia h...u got 95% marks...den also u are looking sad

RI (trying to control her tears)-ya dad finally after so much hardwork i got...wat i needed the most for my next step....i m fine dad dnt worry

SH-tumhe itna pareshan dekh kar kaise worry na karu???akhir yeh sab

RI(cutting her in b/w) - plz dad ab aap wo sab fir se yaad mat dilaiye....pause....aur ha main apko btana bhul gai main kal ki flight se ja rhi hu...mujhe waha addmission mil gya h...

SH(tensed) - tumne mujhe pehle kyu nhi btaya???aur tum waha akeli kaise rahogi???tum toh kabhi shimla se bahar nhi nhi gai???fir



RI-aap jante hai mere pass apke kisi sawal ka jawab nhi h..aur mere pass waha jaane ke alawa koi option nhi h...i have to go dad..i have to..varna sab khatam ho jayga..

SH-theek h main tumhe nhi rokuga ..par main bhi tumhare sath chaluga..aise akeli apni beti ko kahi nhi bhej sakta main

RI(with tears) - plz dad kam se kam aap toh mujhe samjhiye ..plz dnt make things worse...mere liye ye sab bahut mushkil hai...aap aur mushkile mat badhaiye..plz..aur fir yaha apka business bhi toh h...aap tension mat lijiye...main sab handle kar lugi..

SH (with helplessness) - shayad tum thik keh rahi ho aur koi option nhi...kitne bje ki flight h aur tumne packing kar li????

RI(with fake smile) - ya dad packing ho gai h....kal afternoon ki flight h 3 'o' clock ki....dnt worry dad waha hostel mei baat kar li h maine...ab aap jaiye aur so jaiye u know na tension is not gud for ur health...

riddhima's dad left the room bcoz somewhere he also knows he cnt stop her


RI (talking to herself) " WHY ME??? I DNT WANT TO GO...JIN MARKS KE LIYE MAINE ITNI MEHNAT KI THI AAJ WO MUJHE MIL GAYE PAR UNKI KOI KHUSHI NHI H MUJHE...KYUKI SHAYAD YE MERI BARBADI KI SHURUWAT HAI..JISE CHAH KAR BHI MAIN NHI ROK SAKTI " (crying bitterly)



PRECAP :- ARMAAN'S MEETING WITH HIS SWEETHEART 😉

RANBOW GANG CELEBRATION 😆 😛

RIDHIMA'S SUDDEN ARRIVAL TO DELHI 😳

(BUT WATS THE REASON BEHIND HER SUDDEN ARRIVAL...??????😉)

HIIIIIIIII FRNDS


thnx to all of u who pressed d like tab nd for ur wonderful comments........thnx a lot 😛

Dis PART 3 of my ff hope you all liked it''''..😛

plz read it and tell me if u like it or even not like it.........open to any kind of criticism .....so i can make some improvements..........All criticism, suggestion and questions are most welcome.


plz leave your precious comment, they mean a lot to me..........

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Edited by jannat4ever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yeeepeee! Iam the first one to comment....now come to d part.....aswesome part asusual....OMG they got only 40% marks but still dey r happy.....cool haan.....nd our Armaan, He is so cute adorable and so naughty......so ridzy is also coming to delhi....i wonder who is ammy's girlfrnd....curious to know......do update nxt part soon.....thanx for the PM dear....

Love u dear
Geet
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Posted: 14 years ago
#95
hey amazing part dear and thanx for pm
love u
salina
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Posted: 14 years ago
#96
Awesome updates ,gud work Jannat 👏👏👏,am falling in love wiz this ff,plz continue soon cant wait 4 ridz arrival,anyway thx 4 the pm
Edited by ammyridz600 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#97

woowww amazing part dear...

simply superb...

they r celebrating for getting 40% marks...

hahahaha....kya baat hai apne rainbow gang ki....

y is rids crying n aisa kya hai jo woh itna pereshan hai,...

plzzz yaar dont make us wait for long...

update soon...

thnx for the pm.............

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Posted: 14 years ago
#98
Hiiii
Awesome update
Love the gang
They r hilarious
Celabrating 40%
Who is the girl armaan is meeting
What is ridzys past
Can't wait 4 find out
Con soon
Thanks 4 da pm
Edited by ARMAANKSGFAN - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#99
very interesting and funnyyyyy...and hope to see AR meet sooonnnn

update soooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome blossom work
ridz very confusing man....do reveal her mystery soon ok...
loved it ..was wonderful part...very cutely written.....
do update soon

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