Finally All Over Again - Mayur FF *NEW*

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello,
I am here with a new thing
Actually when I closed Horoscopes and Perfection and Imperfection without even updating , I felt little sad

So here is a short story, Its combination of the above two.

I am fad up of writing past and present in my ongoing ff...
So here, this ff is totally on present with no flashbacks...

I will be free for few days after exams, so I will finish this like I finished Life is simple.


This is not inspired by anything
Just a figment of my imagination!

Please scroll down..
It will have 6 parts only...


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The story revolves around two people, somewhat different, somewhat similar. Both busy in their own life, striving to set a perfect career. They will meet, again. And now again their life will take a change. A way to new life. A way to experience new things'. The things which they purposely ignored and left behind in their way '..

Part 1

Finally I can drove back home now. After such a long tiring day, finally! I love my work, no doubt in that, but feeling of home, is something great. She parked her car, in the parking area, took out her labcoat, and bag from car , locked the doors .

I love my car, the vehicle which carries me home, and a gift by my mother, for my 21st birthday! I was so shocked with the gift.When I was 16, she gave me a scooty, and at 21, I got a car.I never like such gifts, truly! But when its my mother, nothing should be expected!She will make it sure that I have the best in my life. And that's the reason, I want to achieve the best in my Life. '..

And finally the door opened, usually there is no time when I reach home back. Being a doctor, that's actually the disadvantage. No proper timing, anytime emergencies but then that's what I am suppose to do. But today after so long, I am at home, aound 6 pm, that means, I can chat with my mom, my little demon, in short my notorious sister, a spoilt brat and what not! I call her, Demon! I can watch a movie, go online and chat on facrebook and what not! But the actual thing I want to do is Sleep'sleep and sleep.....Its been ages now... Enough exaggerations!

"Nupur, aaj jaldi" Here comes my mom, with a gorgeous smile on her face."Yeah, today half duty" I looked at her, narrowing her brows. She is more concerned about my profession than me. "I mean, no emergencies today and new batchof interns have joined" After so many days, I can have a nice sleep for 8 hours today. He thought only gives such a peace, but I guess there are lot of things to be done....

"Chalo , get ready, we need to go out for party" Thud, my bag fell down, I looked at the floor, Party,

"What party maa?" I hate this social things, "Its Suhani's engagement party, my friends daughter, Neela aunty's daughter re" Ah! Yeah, the lady with short hair, who always go on praising her daughter. But

"Suhaani is younger to me na, and she just finished her studies, if I am not wrong" I cant believe some girls, how can they get married without even thinking about their carriers, is marriage the ultimate thing in life. " Yeah, but she found her life partner, " Lifepartner! What the hell? "But maa, this is so ridiculous!"

"Whats ridiculous my child?" I chuckled. My child, makes me feel I am in KG. Ok, back to convo, "Marrying so early" I murmered. "All are not like you" Yeah, I know, all are not like me, but I have my own reasons, I cant marry until I am 30 cross, Wow, I wont have to marry because I need to get M.D. then D. M. then degree from Royal society. Oh my God! So much to study! Wow.

"So get ready"

"Maa, am not coming" I hate social things. I so hate them, they remind me of somethings, which I try to run away.. "You are also a human being, a social animal!" I heard my mom saying that. "Animal, who hates attending parties! Maa.." I said in a tune. "Take the demon!" I said loudly, she was nowhere to be seen. "She is busy in her projects! And I want to take you" Projects, my foot! She will be just roaming around.

"But I don't want to" I was reaaly pissed off now. "But you have to, you need to socialize my gal"

Socialise, but why? "I don't want to."

"You are coming, go and get ready" Ok, I lost, I am not so stubborn, I know that, I lose always to my mom. I am no more interested in arguing now. And somewhere may be she is right, I need to SOCIALISE!Need to change my way of living!

I am just staring at my wardrobe since last 15 minutes now. I don't want to go.

"Mom, I don't have good clothes to wear, so I cant come," I shouted, exploiting my larynx. Suddenly the door opened and my mom entered. "Stop the lame excuse, " I looked at her, she went through all my clothes and I was shocked, to know that I have so many dresses. Wow, I never knew this. I know , there are a lot of things in my life, which I am not aware of. Sigh! I need to explore my wardrobe one day now....She gave me a dress, pink colour, anarkali, I hate such salwaars, Where I have to manage my dupatta. Instaed of asking her, it was better if I had wore blacktrousers with white top. But now, be a pinky pinky pinky. Ah! I hate pink.

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Finally I am at the party outside the venue, I am damn sure, something is gonna happen, something stupid, I am feeling that. I have felt like this earlier..... May be another problem, because my friends say, I attract Problems!


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Next update in 15 days....exactly!


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Edited by -sam- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Its will be a fast moving story unlike Another Chance and I am stuck On Fiery Love
But will update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Solly again i am late
this looks like someone's story , i told you
the one with whom i was talking on mobile 😉😉😉😉
anyways if it is not the same also i liked it
Start is good nupur is Dr and doesn't want to socialize
achha hi hai i too dont like
so boring it is 😆😆😆😆
then her excuses of not getting proper cloth
sach me
thats too nice
Now when u already said 6 parts i remembered ur first FF
i just want you to finish it the way u want
not because of exams hurry bhary
do it aram se
Luv,
Di
Edited by arunabehere - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wwoo..that was a great start...loved nupurs character...waitibg 4 mayu's intro.............
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OK... I dont know abt the scooty and Car, but this definitely looks like your story... doctor ki life doc hi jaane...Nice update .. and wht are you gonna title this SS/FF...
Anyway, I want an update for AC asap
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey sam
nice 1 dude!!! i waiting for next part!!! dont forget to pm me!!


love
komal❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi Sam
Wow a new Mayur FF
Haye thanx a lot my jerry
muahhhhhhhhhhh

ur first part was awesome
here u potrayed nupurs char in a different way
totally unsocial,stubborn and maa ki ladli
i loved it re
an n.mom and nups bonding was very nice

loved ur first part

fab update

keep it up
Edited by fariaa70 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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A fresh story 😊

AT -I agree.. Mujhe bhi Nupur se jyada koi aur yaad aa raha hain ye part padke 😉
Gudiya - 15 days baad hi next update karna (Till then exams will be over, right?)
Edited by Nirvrithi - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sami 🤗
It's absolutely amazing! I so love it <3
It's fresh, peppy and I loved Nupur to bits 😆
All the best for this one!!

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