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Posted: 14 years ago
i really love ur story wooooow its truelly great
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i want more and more
i am waiting next part ssoooooo excite
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Lakshmi86

Hi,

Both the parts were awesome......
👏👏👏
you know what was more interesting, though these updates were without Maan,
it was equally wonderful,
I wish Geet's CV could have done same magic these days, without Guru,
Kya appke FF ka Maan bhi Bimar hai, so sad😭

Fight was fabulous,
I am so glad that Geet have not misunderstood Maan,
and she can all so well,
i mean how she blasted on Sameera,
too good!!!!!!!!!!!!

Well, All the best for your exams,
please do extremely well, hamra izzat ka sawaal hai,

Well, I miss the update,
but you can do it later exams, ok,

All the very best..........


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Posted: 14 years ago
Part 31 -> Geet is claiming her husband...exposing Sam's untruths! Good for her...

Good luck with your studies...I'm sure you will do good in your exams!

-Sona
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Posted: 14 years ago
Love cat fights between Sam Geet😆, brilliant update😳
Wish you all the best for ur exams👍🏼🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
ohhhhh.....
real fight.....
geet is real jungly billii....
loved it.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just read all ur updates great work seriously really enjoyed keep up the good work & update asap😊
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sorry for mistake mob update
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part 32


Adi: calm down... Calm down.....
Geet: uski to mi...
Adi: nothing... You will do nothing... Now through that CD way....
Geet: tell her... If she dosnt withdraw the project... We will publish this cd...
Adi: no... No...'no....
Geet: want me to call maan...
Adi: fine!

Adi: geets av you two option!
Sam: what option.... Who the hell is she to give me opetion?
Shasha: what's going on Adi? Who gave her this right?
Adi: maan and maan!
Shasha: I am calling MK now! Who the he'll is she.
Adi: just one suggestion... He will kill you... One word against geet...
Shasha+ sam: what?
Adi: opetion.... Withdraw your Project... Or face humiliation....
Sam: what?
Adi: yep...
Sam: I won't leave maan for this....

Shasha run after sam... Mam! Mam! Mam!

Adi: happy!
Geet: perfect!
Adi: she won't let us go that easily!
Geet: we shall see...

Few days have passed... Geet still no where near talking to maan... Not answering his phone... Not even home phone...

Dadi: beta... Maan!
Geet: tell him I am busy!
Dadi: what happen? You still mad at him?
Geet nodes...
Dadi covers the speaker phone... But why? Sammera problem is solved...
Geet: he have lots of explaining to do!
Dadi smiles... Seeing there little nok johk!...

Dadi: beta... She is sleeping!
Maan: Dadi I can here her... Stop ling to me!
Dadi: umm....
Maan: what happen to her phone?
Geet snatches the phone from Dadi and cuts the call...
Dadi: ok... I am out... You keep the phone!
Geet: dadi please take the phone!
Dadi: I want to have a good night sleep...

Geet kept the phone...
Maan kept ringing...
She covers her ears with the pillow....
Geet: GO WAY....
Ringing...
Geet: for god sake... Maan go way....
Maan: how could I go way! Your love always brings me back!...
Geet: what... She shocked... Brought the phone out... Ummm.... She looked at the phone... Turned it round... "I didn't answer the phone!... Umm.... She turned the light on....
Then suddenly there was slow whispers on her ears.... Nearly touching... I love you....
Geet twist her self round... Bit shocked... "maan!.. Au me.... I thought you are coming next week!"
Maan lands on Geet.... "ha... But someone wouldn't answer the phone... So I had to finish all the work quick!"
Geet: umm...
Maan: where is your phone?
Geet: au....
Maan: au me what? I was worried sick! And you...
Geet: I couldn't be bothered!
Maan: what?
Geet: ha...
Maan: you were not bothered to answer my phone!
Geet: ha... You are so boring to talk to... She teased...
Maan didn't like that.... : boring? Fine... Stay....
He was about to walk way... Geet pulls him back in....
Kissing his lips.... A long passionate kiss... "I didn't miss you at the begging... But then... I started to miss you allot.... And didn't like to answer the call... I knew I would be flying to Australia in next minute....
Maan smiled... He liked that.... Kissed her back.... Longer passionate....
Maan: what about me... Dying over there.... I don't care about your heart....
Maan: aca!
Geet nodes.... "only my.... I couldn't bare the pain! It was weird pain..."
Maan smiled again.... Kissing her every time.... Every parts of her face....
Maan: your heart beats are Extreamly selfish.
Geet: umm... Of course... Did you just realised....
Maan nodes.... "I don't like selfish heart"
Geet: tough....
Maan: why tough?
Geet: why do you think?
Maan: umm... You love me!
Geet laughs... "I told you... I don't love you...."
Maan: then why are in my arm....
Geet: because you love me....
Maan: why do you care?
Geet: umm.... I don't know.... I feel sad when I am not with you... And angry.... When you ignore me... Umm... Anoide.... When you don't call me.... Paranoid when you with someone els... But then after while I forget everything... So no... I don't love you....
Maan smiled and kissed her with every word....
Geet: why you not angry with me?
Maan: I am.... But.... He kisses her lips.... But I can't stay angry with you for long time... Your talks takes over me....
Geet: that's pretty bad for MSK.....
Maan: umm.... Only MSKs wife is capable of doing that....
Geet: really....
Maan kisses her lips again....
Geet: now get fresh... You just came back....
Maan: if you help me...
Geet: are you sure?
Maan nodes....
Geet: think about it....
Maan: already have...
Geet: you can't blame me twomoro....
Maan picks her up and walks to the bathroom.... Turning the warm water on... In the bath tub....
Geet takes his shirt off... Slowly... Stroking his bare skin...
maan nibles on her lower lips... While stroking her waist.....
It tickles geet....
Geet: hmm... Where is the 8 pack....
Maan smiles... Taking her hand down below....
Geet starts to seduce him further... Takes his trousers off....
Geet jumps in the bath... Flowing maan............


It's 11am....
Maan and geet still in bed... Geet embraced in maans arm....
Geets phone was ringing non stop.... Late for office...
Geet no where getting up.... Last night maan really made her warn out...
Maan answers the phone... Half sleep...
Maan: helloo...
Shasha: geet! Can you please give the phone to geet....
Maan bit surprised.... Not recognising her boss voice....
Shasha thinking... "che che.... With a man... This time of the day....
Maan: umm... She is sleeping... You can tell me...
Shasha: she suppose to be at work...
Geet started to be come irritated with the noise... Biding her face in maans chest...
Maan: Shasha we will call you later....
Shasha shocked!... How does he know my name????
Geet: Ae phone bhi hamko sokunse sone Nahi deta...
Maan smiles.... Kisses her forehead... And falls back to sleep... Cuddling geet in his arm....

Shasha: Just wait till maan comes back... I will not leave a single.... Ahhhh.... She have to be fired.
Adi: fire who?
Shasha: geet... when maan is coming back?
Adi: he came back last night....
Shasha: what? Why I don't know?
Adi: umm... It was unexpected...
Shasha: and that geet... Still in bed... A man answers the phone... And weird enough.... Knows my name! I feel disgust!
Adi guessed.... Why might that be....: umm... You will be surprised... It's there personal stuf.... I think it's better to keep out of it!
Shads: whatever....
Adi walks out.... "umm..... Ok!"

Geet: who was it?
Maan: don't worry.... Sleep...
Geet Huggs him tighter...

Maan and geet eventually woke up.... 1 pm... Geet who was still being lazy... Maan went to his workout... At 2pm he came back.. Just before he could enter.... Vicky disturbs him....

Vicky: bro?????
Maan gives his surprised face a weird look... "what?"
Vicky: why did you cone back?
Maan: "umm.... Nice thing to ask your bro!"
Vicky: since my babe came in this house... You always in house! Go back!
Maan slaps his head....
Vicky runs in there room...
Maan tries to stop... Knew the state of there room....
Vicky: oh... What happen to your room!
Geet who was still in bed... Jumped up.... ... Looking at her self.... Luckily covers by the duvet....
Geet: Vicky! Shocked!
Vicky: here you go... Your money.... He looked at maan... Hate you... Why couldn't you come back next week... Then walks out....
Maan locks the door... Geet relaxes back....
Vicky: thanks for closing the door on my face..
Geet: sorry BF...
Maan: shut up....
Maan walks in the washroom....
Geet gets up... Covers her self with the spread... Tides the floor... That was covered by there clots...
Geet waits by the door... Maan pulls her in....
Maan: when did you learn waiting....
Geet: since you came in my life...
Maan: hmm....
Geet: do you want me to tell the whole story.....
Maan smiles kissing her lips.... Another two hours in the bathroom.....

Bothe finally arrives in the office... It's 5... Maan had a meeting....
Geet: why have you brought me?
Maan: we are going somewhere after this...
Geet: you... And surprise! Hmm.... That dosn't sound right!
Maan gave her an angry glare and walked out.... Geet flowed....
Geet: umm....
Maan: what is it?
Geet: what is the surprise!
Maan: gav her another look.... Bit angry... He walks in... Geet flowing....
Geet: well if you don't tell me... How I suppose to know????
Maan: nothing....

Shasha: now SHe decides to come... Then she sees MK....
Geet walks in to her cabine....

Shasha: MK... Heloo... How was your trip...
He was bit p off.... By geets talk....
Maan: what is it?
Shasha: it's geet... She just came in!
Maan: so!
Shasha: so?... MK she is late... Super late!...you are not reacting... And top of all.... She blackmailed Sammera....
Maan: what? How? Extreamly shocked...
Adi: they had a fight!
Shasha: geet forced her to withdraw the project!
Maan: what? How?
Adi: umm.... Long story.... You would kill your self laughing... I mean of course you don't laugh...
Maan walks out and runs in to geets cabine....
Pules her close.... Geet confused...
Geet: maan! You didn't let me sleep last night.... And you starting here again.... Wasn't last night enough??? We managed to sleep at 6 in the morning...
Maan was Cheking her.... "I hard you had a fight with Sammera???"
Geet: not a physical fight.... She understood... What he was doing...
Maan: then?
Geet: oh... I just blackmailed her with words...
Maan: umm... How did you do that? Bit surprised...
Geet: I made her mad with words.... She went wiled... Then recorders... And then blackmailed... She really didn't have any opetion.... Can you belive..... She was Clamming to be your wife...
Maan: what?
Geet: yea... So of course I will go mental.... Bitch!
Maan: geet....
Geet: she is.... Omg.... If I see her again.... I will kill her....
Maan: please do... So went possisive.... Maan hugged he tight.....
Geet: of course.... My husband.... How dare she....
Maan smiles.... Kisses her lips.... A very long passionate one...,
Shasha who was waiting outside......

Shasha: now... Let's see.... What happens to miss geet Handa.....
She peaps.... And faints straight way....
Making a boom noise... Adi runs up....
"Shasha! Shasha!"
Geet and maan runs out...
Geet looks at her and starts laughing....
Maan: geet....
Geet: sorry.... She realises why she fainted....
Geet covers her mouth with her hand... Still laughing...
Maan bit imbrassed... Swing his wife couldn't stop laughing...
Maan: umm... Ehh... Sault her out.... Geet let's go....
Maan dragged her out....
Maan: postpone the meeting!
Adi: yes sir....

Maan and geet walks out... Geet laughing he head off...
Maan: geet... What's wrong with you?
Geet: have you realiged why she fainted...
Maan: no and I don't want to know... Don't spoil my mood....
Geet: ok... Sorry....
Geet was still laughing... She cones and sits on maans lap...
Maan: what is it?
Geet cups his face....: who is Sammera?
Maan sat there bit shocked at her question... Didn't knew how to answer...
Maan: I don't know!... Are clint!
Geet: you are not lying... Are you?
Maan: no... Of course not!
Geet Hughes him.... : don't you ever... Because I will hate you... More then anything... From that day on....
Maan didn't like that answer at all.... He wanted to say everything.... But was scared... She won't be able to Handel....
Maan and geet relaxed for a moments... Then drove off to some place...

Geet: where are we going?
Maan: it's a surprise!
Geet: umm... A hint!
Maan: no!
Geet: 2nd hint!
Maan: no...
Geet: 3rd hint!
Maan: no!
Geet looked at him for whole... Then screamed.....maan stopped the car straight way....
Maan: what happen? Shocked!
Geet: oh... Someone was not giving me a hint!
Maan: geeeetttttt.....
Geet starts to laugh.... Maan pulls her in his lap..... Forces her against his body.... Hugging tight.....
Geet: was this the surprise?
Maan: if you want!
Geet: na.... You have to work hard....
Maan kisses her lips.... And starts driving again.... They arrives in a different town in deli.... big posh hotel...
Maan: we have a party to attend!
Geet: that was the surprise? Bit disappointed.... You and your surprise... Exacly the same!
Maan: I didn't say it will be exiting!
Geet: yea.... Very.... I am not even dressed....
Maan: you have designer waiting for you!
Geet walks out thanks....

After 2 hours....

Geet was wearing a cream blue dress... With high heel... It was sexy... Sowing all her curves... At the same time professional...
Maan who also dressed up... Looked dashing...

Geet walks in... For the first time... She looked like Mrs Maan Sing Khurana... Maan couldn't remove his gaze... She walked in... Confidence... Perfect... She looked round... For maan... Maan smiles...
The whole world was looking at them... Tv... Maan walks in... And holds her by waist...
Geet: I hop you don't have any plan to say everything!
Maan: if you want me to...
Geet: no....
Maan: my personal... Personal.... Secretary....
Geet smiles... "and you are my.... Husband!"
Maan: that's unfair....
Geet: why?
Maan: you calling me husband and I am not allowed to call you wife...
Geet: I decide...
Maan: not with MSK...
Geet: tough!
Maan: only in bedroom... Out here my right....
This is the First time geet blushes in public....
They were in telly.... Looking dashing.... Bothe perfect....

Shasha fainted again.....

It was a business party.... A well published party.... Maan always attend this party.... Have to be in couple... In past it was Sammera.... Then Shasha.... Pari..... And last geet.....



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Edited by FIRESafiReFIRE - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i'm speechles what can say mesmerized pls cont soonnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 14 years ago
OMG! Amazing Updateeeeeeeeee! AHH! Maaneet scenes! you alwayss kill meeeeeeeee with ur maaneet scenes! they are soo intense! AHHH! amazing!
bath scene was sooo HOT! Maan is soo sooooo naughty! hee loves geet soo soo much! ;))
OMG! Wonders what happens at the partyy...
Can't waitt! :))
I m not liking Sameera! ;(( dang! geet is soo angryy! possessivee wifeeee! haha!
Keeeeep it upp! Amazing Updt as always!

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