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Hi friends

Im going to write a story named ' Pyaar Ka Ehsaas' kahani do pyaar karne walon ki ki first of all i would like to introduse u with the charecters.

WADHWA's

Kul Wadhwa =He is a producer of film's,he is very good father

Veena Wadhwa= She is a house wife,she is good mother & also love & very close her son SUMIT.

Sumit Wadhwa= He is a very intelligent & successful business man.he is handsome & loves his family he is very close to his mama & He is soft by heart.He following love with KUMKUM .(You will know soon abt kumkum)

Nandini Wadhwa=She is elder sis of sumiti she is sweet & very close to sumit & to . She love & respect her parents.

Akshat Wadhwa=He is younger son of wadhwa's He is intelligent & good in study.

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GAREWAL's

Anurag Garewal = A business man.He loves his family alot.He is a good frined of Kul.

Komolika Garewal =She is a house wife loves her family and very close to her daughters.

Kumkum Garewal =A quite Sweet girl & she love SUMIT,she is very beautiful girl .

(But can not say to each other)

Miile Garewal = She is a sports lover. She loves Basket ball and Foot ball.she is kumkum's little sister & she love her elder sister kumkum .

Karan Garewal = He is a Very Intelligent. he shares his every feeling with kumkum ,he love his sis's kumkum & Miile.

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SINHA,s

Rohit Sinha= he is very good friend of kumkum & sumit , He is business partner of sumit.

Piyush Sinha= he is elder bro of rohit ,piyush is very clever & wicked & greedy person.

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So friend that's charecters of my story I hope so u r like my story charecters plzzzzzzzzzz do send me ur suggetions & views about this.(Kyunki aap ke reply dekhne ke baad hi main apni kahani ko aage likhongi if ur not interested in my story"s charecters i will not post it) ,

mujhe intizar rahe ga aap ke reviews ka & sorry about spelling mistakes .

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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow yaar, very nice intro....plz continue soon!!!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Good intro👏👏

plzz continue😃

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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey dear
nice intro 👏 😃
pleez continue
m eagerly waitng 2 read ur story 😊
btw..y is akhsit sumit's YOUNGER bro?! 😆 😆 😉 kiddng! 😳
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwww juhi, its nice plz continue 😃
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hi friend


Here is a 1ST PART of my story i hope u like it plzzzzzzzzz ager aap ko pasand na aaie to mujhe batana to i stop my story .




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WADHWA HOUSE

Its morning veena ne pooja kar le hai aur sumit apne kamre main tayar ho raha hai veena enter sumit's room

veena=beta tayar hogaie ye lo arite

sumit=good morning maa

veena=jalde neeche aao breakfast tayar hai aur ha akshat ko uthate aana

sumit=ok maa
(sumit akshat ko uthane jata hai )

sumit= akshat utho collage k liye deer hogaie hai

akshat=yes bro main uthta ho
(who wash room main chala jata hai )
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GAREWAL MANSION
Komolika enter kumkum,s room


Komolika=kumkum ab tak soo rahi hai kumkum utho office k liye deer ho rahi hai
(bcos kumkum raat ko deer se soie the kam ki wajha se)

kumkum= good morning mama

Komolika=good morning

kumkum=mille uth gaie mama

Komolika= nahi who ab tak soorahi hai
(kumkum office k liye tayar hone jaate hai)

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AT WADHWA HOUSE

sumit= good morning evey 1,maa papa kaha hai nazar nahi aarahi hai

veena= un ke shooting savere thi who savere chali gaie
(who nashta kar rahi hai )

akshat= good morning main aagya mera nashta kaha hai

veena= aaj deer kiyon kar k aaie ho

akshat= sorry mom ainda issa nahi hoga

sumit= maa main chalta ho deer ho raho hai

akshat= ha bro ab to deer hogi na kiyo k

sumit= chop karo akshat

veena= yeh kiya ho raha hai dona baheiyo main

sumit= kuch nahi maa ok main chalta ho
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GAREWAL MANSION

(kumkum neeche aate he)

kumkum= hi papa chali

Anurag = chlo chlte hai

Komolika=ari nashta to karke jaio

Anurag = beta tum ne nashta nahi kiya hai ye achi baat nahi hai chalo nashta kar lo main w8 karta ho

Kumkum =magar papa

Anurag =agar magar kuch nahi jalde se nashta kar lo

Kumkum =papa aaj ek zarore meeting hai sumit mera w8 kar raha hoga meeting main jane k liye

Aunurag =main abhi sumit ko phone karta ho

Kumkum= nahi is ki koie zarorat nahi hai main nashta kar lite ho

Komolika =yeh hoie na mere achi bite
(kumkum nashta kar k office jane k liye nikalte hai to sumit us ko phone kar ta hai kaha ho tum) kumkum = main abhi nikalte ho kumkum papa chale ok by )

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AT W&G GRP OF COMPANIES

Sumit =kumukm tum aab aarahi ho jalde karo meeting k liye deer ho rahi hai

Kumukum = ha bas main aapni cabine se tender ki file lilo

Aunrag = good morning sumit

Sumit = aree uncle good morning
Anurag = dheek raha ho k tum aur kumkum is companie ko aur bulande per puchane k liye din raat ek kar rahi ho

Sumit = nahi asi koie baat nahi hai hum to bus apna kam kar rahe hai
(Kumkum enter the sumit cabine )

Kumkum = sumit chale

Sumit = ha chalo ok uncle by
(anurag smilling)

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MEETING
(kumkum sumit w8ing 4 companie's MD )

Rohit Sinha's entery

Rohit = Hi every 1 im sory 4 w8ing u

Sumit = are rohit tu

Rohit = are sumit kumkum tum dono yaha

Sumit = ha who meeting k silsily main yaha aaie the

Kumkum = humie kiya pata tha k is companie ka MD humara dost hoga

Sumit = to meeting start kare

Rohit = yes why not

(meeting khatam honi k baad )

Rohit = kumkum sumit tum dono ko congrec tum ko yeh contract mil gaya hai to is khushi main tum dono ko mujhe ek treet dene hogi

Kumkum = sure 9 OClock at the same restornant where we meet in collage time

Rohit = ok done

Sumit = kumkum chale abhi office main kaam hai mujhe ok rohit by shaam
Ko miliange .
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AT WG GRP OF COMPANIES

(9 bajrahe hai kumkum sumit ke room main)

Kumkum = sumit chalo

Sumit = kaha

Kumkum = mujhe pata tha k tum bhool jaioge hum dono ko Rohit se milne jana hai

Sumit = haa chalo

(sumit change karne challa jata hai )

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AT HOTEL

Rohit W8ing 4 KUMKUMSUMIT & KUSU enter the hotel

Rohit = itne deer se main aap ka intizar kar raha ho aur tum dona the kaha

Kumkum = ab to hum yaha hai na challo kahi chall kar bathte hai

Sumit = ha challo

(dinner k baad )

Rohit = ab mujhe challna cahiye OK BY

(sumit coffe ka order diya )

Kumkum = deer hoagie hai

Sumit = coffe k bad chal te hai

Kumkum = OK

(coffe k bad)

Sumit = challe

Kumkum = let's go

Kumkum sumit ek saath ek car main jate hai aur achanak sumit car ko rok leta hai aur apni dil main kehta hai k aaj kumkum se ILU keh donga &sumit come out of car &also kumkum suddenly barish start ho jati hai aur bijli grajti hai kumkum ja ker sumit ko hug kerti hai sumit bhi kumkum ko hug kerta hai thori deer k bad kumkum opens her eyes & say

Kumkum = sumit mujhe bijli se bohat daar lagta hai

sumit = kumkum main who mujhe ………….

Kumkum= ye kiya keh rahe ho mujhe kuch samaj mai nahi aa raha hai
(Sumit close his eyes & say)
KUMKUM I LOVE U……….. WILL U MARRY ME……..

kumkum = kiya kaha tum ne

sumit = wahe jot um ne suna
KUMKUM I LOVE U……….. WILL U MARRY ME……..

kumkum=sumit itni si baat kehne k liya itna waqt lagadiya tumne
Kumkum=
I LOVE U TOO
& THEY HUG EACHOTHER
sumit =tumne mere sawal ka jawab nahi diya

kumkum = kon sa sawal

sumit = WILL U MARRY ME

kumkum = is k liye tum ko mere papa se milna hoga

sumit kiss her on forehead & hug again suddenly………………….

This is a END OF THIS PART

This is 1st part of my story I hope u like it im w8ing 4 reply

OK BY TAKE CARE
LOVE & BEST WISHES
FROM
SONA (HUJU KI DEEWANI)
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Posted: 19 years ago
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HI every
I HOPE U R ALL RIGHT here is 2nd part of STORY I hope k aap ko ye part acha lagega so start the part of story .

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Sumit kiss her on forehead & hug again suddenly kumkum ka cell phone ki ring hote hai & kumkum REC karti hai

Kumkum = hello

Anurag = kaha ho tum beta itni deer hoagie hai

Kumkum = who papa humare car khrab hoagie thi likine sumit ne sab theek kar diya hai

Anurag = sumit tumare ssath hai na bas thek hai OK jalde aaio main ab phone rakta hoo

Kumkum = theek hai papa OK BY

Sumit = challe

Kumkum = ha

Sumit = aaj maine bohat kushi ho kumkum kiya k aaj mujhe mere pyaar mil gaya hai

Kumkum = mujhe bhi
(kumkum ka ghar aagya )

kumkum = sumit OK BY
(sumit came out of car who kumkum ki tarf aata hai )

kumkum = sumit hum ghar k bahir hai kise ne deekh liya to

sumit sing soung JAB PYAAR KIYA TO DARNA KIYA PYAAR KIYA HAI KOIE CHORI NAHI KI

Kumkum = sumit papa

Sumit = kaha

Kumkum start smilling

Kumkum = gaio na chup kiya kiyo hoagie ab tak to kahi rahi the
JAB PYAAR KIYA TO DARNA KIYA
Kumkum jate hai aur sumit peche se kumkum ko deekh raha hai
Kumkum ne sumit ko deekha sumit ne us ko fly kiss ki aur chala gya apni ghar
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WADHWA HOUSE

Veena door ke samni chakar laga rahi the &

Akshat = mama bro aagaie ga

Veena = itnideer us ne kabhi bhi nahi ki isse liya mujhe us ki fikar hai
(sumit car ka break lagata hai )

Akshat = lo bro aagaya
(sumit enter home )

veena = itni deer kiyo lagade

sumit = mama who Rohit mil gaya is liye itni deer hogie

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GAREWAL MANSION
Kumkum enter the house

Komolika = bete itni deer

Kumkum = mama who car ki wajha se deer ho gaie hai

Komolika = are tum to pore beeghi gaie ho tum bhi na bacho ki traha ho barish hoie nahi tum us main beeghi nahi jaio change kare k aaio main khana lagati ho

Kumkum = mama main dinner kar k aaie ho

Komolika = tum ko kitne bar mana kiya hai k hotel ka khana mat khaya karo

Kumkum = mama theek hai asia phir nahi hoga
(KUMKUM apne room main jate hai )


MORNING
WADHWA HOUSE

Sumit so raha hota hai

Veena = sumit utho subha k 9:00 baj rahe hai

Sumit open eyes
Kiya 9 baj rahi hai sumit tayar hok office jata hai

Veena = nasht ato kar k jaio

sumit = nahi mama im La8 OK BY

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AT WG GRP OF COMPANIES

KUMKUM w8ing 4 sumit
Sumit enter in kumkums cabin

HI kumkum

Kumkum = hi

Sumit =kumkum kiya hoia naraz ho

Kumkum = nahi kush ho kab se w8 karahi ho

Sumit = who subha utha deer se waha deekho TEBLE per

Kumkum see & sumit kiss to kumkum
KUMKUM SMILING

Sumit = ab main bohat kush ho

Dono smile kate hai & sumit hug to kumkum

Kumkum = meeting k liye deer horahi hia chale

Sumit = ha chalo

(After meeting)

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(After meeting)

anurag came to office

he saw kumkum sumit togather

sumit = hello uncle

anurag = hello bete kise ho

sumit = acha ho by uncle mujhe kaam hai

anurag = ok by bete

sumit kumkum ko kahita hai k sham ko tumare liye surprise hai ok by shaam ko mile ge

kumkum suno to kon sa

sumit = shaam ka intizaar karo
kumkum apne cabin main jate hai

COMING UP
Sumit call kumkum & sumit kumkum ko kahita hai k kiya hum shaam ko mil sakte hai kumkum say kiyo nahi sumit kahi aur kumkum na aaie aisa hoie nahi sakta aur nahi hoga

AFTER
SUMIT ……………………..

This is END of this part

Mujhe bataie ye ga k aap ko ye part kisa laga
Im w8ing 4 u r reply
Ok by take care
SONA

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