No Road Towards You MN FF(Epilogue:Pg145|06.07.11) - Page 43

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Posted: 14 years ago
sorry jaee..4 commentin so late....
totally messd up wid my studies right now.. so cudnt read ur updates..
2day i got sum free tym..so i'll try & read all ur updates...

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just read d part 8..
aww.. it ws so cute..
MN ridin on a bike in rains!😍
i'm luvin it!
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chp.. 9.. a big smile on my face!😃
sum1 is fallin 4 sum1!😳
reminds me of MN's A'bad trip!😍
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chp 10.. totally adorable..😳
aww.. my khatron ke khiladi.. Nups.. sucessfully climbd d wall..👏😆
Mayu's thots abt Nups... issh.... wen wil dey confess.. i'm so excitd!😍
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chp. 11.. interestin!
wowie.. naya kabab mein haddi..
Rohan.. betwn MN..
luvly.. i'm so excitd 4 d next part!
rush 2 read it!
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aww.. jaee.. luvd d promo..
i'm really excitd 2 read d next part!
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awesome update!!
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cont soon😊
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amazing part jaee.
beautifully written.
loved it.
continue soon.
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When I came to India-Forums, this was my first writing piece - 21st September 2010, I had never imagined that I would get such a loving response from all of you here who praised this story so much ... Thank you guys, for the every bit of encouragement - the curiosity towards the story, the beautiful words which you all write while commenting ... The pms I get to update it soon ... Frankly, if I wouldn't have seen such a response, I would have never continued this story or would have opened others - you guys rock!! This bond between a writer and the readers is of give and take - I write something but it's your response to it that makes it more beautiful ... I promise you all would love this Mayank and Nupur as well ... Another thing, before I forget -
There are more 5-6 parts before the flashback ends and then the present would begin - right after their first meeting which was before Bin Tere ...

With a lot of gratitude in my heart, thanking you,
Jaee Demello ...
Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago
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Chapter 15

Nupur was staring at the rainfall, the smile from her lips was just not ready to leave ... Her eyes were glittering not with tears but with dreams, hopes and happiness ... She put her hand out of the window and felt the drops of rain on her hand - with the touch of every drop, the strings of her heart were being touched ... She had always loved rainfall but today, she was just loving it more and more - this rain was something different, it was endearing and probably the best rain ever in her life ... She turned to look at Dia who was peacefully sleeping, maybe meeting Benji in her dreams - Nupur chuckled at her thought process and again gazed at the rain and she immediately rushed towards her cupboard - pulled out Mayank's t-shirt and tracks which was still lying there ... She gazed at it and walked inside the washroom to change ... As she came out of the washroom, she blushed and hid her face in her palms ...

She walked towards Dia and placed a note saying she is out in the garden and slowly moved out to enjoy the rain ... Just like a kid she ran out with open arms to welcome the rain and the smile developed into a huge grin ... She let the rain come down and wash her mind of all the worries, all the negativities and just let her heart clear so she could understand her heart more ...

She slowly opened her eyes and got the answer to the questions roaming in her mind and dominating her heart for two months now - she saw Mayank standing in front of her, flashing his trademark smile - walking towards her ... He stood in front of her while she kept staring at him with a beautiful smile on her face and slowly tears came out of her eyes ... He gently touched her face and wiped those tears with his thumb, Nupur immediately lowered her eyes ... She suddenly looked at him when she felt his hand crawling over her waist, he smirked and pulled her close .... Her hands touched his chest and she blushed as he was wearing his vest ... He slowly bent near her ear while her heartbeats increased ...
Mayank (huskily) - Ek baat kahun?
Nupur - Hmm (was all she could say) ...
Mayank - Tum mere kapdon mein bahut pyaari lag rahi ho ...

She blushed; smiled and pushed him away but he held her wrist and slowly came near her ear while her heart was ready to leap out ....
Mayank - Ek aur baat kahun?
Nupur (shyly) - Kya?
He left her hand and softly husked ...
Mayank - Tumhe mujhse pyaar ho gaya hai ...

She immediately turned towards him but he was nowhere to be seen ... she twirled and swirled but he was nowhere ... Nupur's smile had no bounds as she giggled, laughed getting drenched in the rain ...
Nupur (hysterically) - I love you Mayank, yes I do and it feels fantastic!!

She jumped and enjoyed the every bit of the rain ... It was ironical how she always craved for love and now herself had fallen in love and she felt like being on the top of the world - She was no more scared because somehow she felt Mayank would be there for her always and maybe he too had some feelings for her ... maybe ... but she was firm that even he didn't, she would tell him what she feels and knew he would never ever hurt her ....

She ran inside the building, shivering and when she entered her room - she saw Dia standing there ... Dia gasped looking at Nupur while Nupur blushed and felt caught red-handed ... Dia smirked and as Nupur looked at Dia's face - she knew, Dia knew about her feelings and she just ran and hugged her tight ... Dia felt immense happiness seeing that indeed Nupur was in love with Mayank and just prayed that he too reciprocated the same feelings ... She would not be able to see this innocent soul - broken heart ....

Remember, this is the fifteenth chapter so from 10-15, what's the best part - do mention ....

Chapter 16 - Page 74
Edited by -jaee- - 14 years ago

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