SS-how dumb can my WIFE be?UPDATED PG-21 - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
really awesome....the way you protrayed
everything so nicely....i must say
you are really nice.....awesome writer..
do keep writing....will wait for next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was naughty and i was 😳☺️😍.............i was on cloud nine thinking abt dem..........i could see dem literally..........wow what a write up........

cockroach ki jai ho...........it scares me too bt for wht happened later uske liye i dont even mind dem............😉

now again wht happened????????? is geet going??????? after all dis???? oh god fir tension till next update......

update soon.


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Posted: 15 years ago

fabulous u[pdate

never imagined in my wildest dreams that cockroach could be put to such a good use..........cockroach maharaj ki jai ho.........
loved the updates
reva
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Posted: 15 years ago
AIRPORT CHASE
MAAN was lying comfortably beside his sweet wife thinking about the sweet moments happened between them.........
he had a magical smile and closed his eye thinking thats how they have always been................
geet will do something stupid.....maan will get adamant..........geet resist........maan angry........geet finaly gave in..........
he thought about their airport chase 5 months ago......
thats where the story really begins..........ha
5 months ago.........
maan driving as fast as he could through the busy traffic of delhi........
cursing geet......
'how could she?how could she do that?just leave me like that???
that dumb,silly girl........
par uske begair meri zindagi chal bhi to nahin sakti,i wont let her leave me like this..................

airport at last..........
en-query......
emirates flight 2006 London walih flight ki satus kya hai.......
its just 5 min away from closing sir..........
ran maan if you want to save your life's happiness...........
you are not permitted to go in there sir........
ha there was no stopping him his life was at stake......
he tackled the guards running like hell,no one could touch him...........
he smiled........playing rag bi in college came handy........
stop........munde...........dont try to be a hero.........
that head of security shouted.........
but MSK was at his destination............
he was there in the right time geet was the last one in theline of giving her boarding pass to the gate......(late latif like always)
GEEEET........SHE turned her face........
maan followed by 12-14 security guards
and got stunned there ........her worse night mere coming true........
she knew she cant get ahead , line was too long...........
she ran away side ways as fast as she could.........
i have to get out of here before that ravan catch me...........
now its a three way chase......geet running away..maan chasing her...the guards tried to chase both of them..........
people of the boring airport saw this life drama///////
the mouse and cat game.....
but who's mouse who's cat......who cares ...

some where shocked.....every one else amazed.......where do you get such free entertainment...certainly not any airport
geet saw a lot of empty carts coming from right
.......yeh.......i just have to run past that,,,,,,,,
ravan and his toli will be stuck........

college running champion running to save her life.........

geet passed those turned her face happily,
maan was still behind her...guards were stuck in the traffic..........
BANG!!!!!!!!
she collided with a piller..............saw stars ........
''sweatheart!!!didnt anyone ever tell you never to look back when you are running away??''maan
'''(i am so dead now)
what the hell you think you doing......maan started.shouting.......
oye munde........behle tu batta...........
oh no!!!!!!!!!
security caught up with them,,,,,,,,,,ready to give them good dholay........
geet you are not hurt are you???
you shouldn't run like that,mein to sref batt karne ayyatha...

maan softly said
geet was confused in his change of tone
mujhe kuch nahin sunna..........
she said to the guard..
....i have a boarding pass.......i want to board my flight............
Geet how could you do that......to us........!!
mera nahin kamsekam bacha ke bareme to socha hota....
...
kaunsa kiska bacha..........her mouth now open shocked
geet hamara bacha tumhara aur mere jo tumari...........
(hesitated for a moment.......iye larki mujhse kya kya karwagi)
jo tumahari pett mein hai.............

meri pett mein kuch nahin hai ....let me go..........
batt kya hai munde.........
the security guard asked....
she is 3-months preg ..........doctor told her not to travel.......still she for her job......kya hoga itna paisa ka geet...come on honey lets go home sweetheart....
securing her in his arms he says........
he is not my baccha ka bap.......
maan look at the guard with heartbroken look...
then at geet..said .
.ye yehpe tum kaise ulti sidhe baat kariho..ghar chalo...........
guard looked at them and smiled knowingly.........
apni gharwala se aisa nahin karte kurri....oo tujhse kitana pyar karta hai...tere liye kya scene diya...apni 20 saal ki Carrier ajj pehli baar asa dekha hai,,,,,,,,,
mera flight.........
o to geya..............
the guards turned away started going...
maan thanked his stars........
he was thinking if he get arrested..or the word gets leak to press...
(MAAN SING KHURANA NE AAJ BOHOT TI FILMY TARIKE SE KISI LARKI KO AIRPORT PE ROKNE KI KOUSISH KI,LARKI KAUN HE BATTA NAHIN CHALA LEKIN POLICE NE
UNHE APNI GERAFT MEIN LELIYA.MAAN KHURANA DELHI KE SABSE ELIGABLE BECHALOUR MANE JATE HAI...ISS GABAR SE SEHER KI LARKIO MEIN HALCHAL MACHCHI HUI HAI
AUR JAAN TE HAI HAMARI SONGVAD DATA O SE............)

maan came back to reality with geet's voice..........
at the guards
suniye meri.......
to the guard
.if you say one more word i will kiss you right here.......right now...
what......

yes its not like i like your lips or something just its the only way to gag you in this public place
now shut up and lets go.......
i wont go anywhere with you.........
frustrated he pick her in his arms said
if u fight or try to create a scene remember i dont give empty threats..................

PRECAP:
MAAN::WHAT IS A HOME TRAIN ARCHITECT,I DIDNT KNOW ARCHITECTURE CAN BE TAUGHT In a KITCHEN....🤣
🤣
GEET::LET'S GET MARRIED SHALL WE??😲
😲


Edited by PIYA12KA4 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

imagine d scene really happens in d serial.......i mean d story den had to b lil different........it would have been amazing.........1000000000000/10..........OMG imagine MAAN saying all dis........oh god u made my day dear..........m smiling and i cant stop it.......

loved it.........one of d best part of ur story............waiting now pls update soon............
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Posted: 15 years ago
thanks 4 liking my ss so much.........
love all of your comments........
...............
and............
the airport chase was inspired from jaanu tu ya jaane na......
airport chasing.........
imagine....maan sing khurana....
running...jumping like imran khan🤣
it is one of my all time fav scene
thanks so much once again


Edited by PIYA12KA4 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
great one sweet heart !!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hilarious 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yaar both the Parts are so Hilarious🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Loved them so much
Wow Loved the Ms.F.C. Part🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Loved the Airport chasing Scene🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Thanq sooooooooooooooooooooo much for the PM🤗
Eagerly waiting for the next part
Pls Update Soooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago

wow...what a scene....hilarious,superbbamazing,brilliant,fantastic

CVs should take tips from the writer of IF................
simply superbbbbb
plzzzzz update soon
reva

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