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PART 8
They four were now in the living room of their home

"ajeeb baat hy yar" samrat said "baat suny nae or "

"really yar" nupur said "m really surprised with his behaviour"

"mujhy nae lagta k wo hamein under jany dy ga" gunjun said "ab kya krein gy???"

"krein gy kya chashmish I have an idea"

"tery pass n idea" mayank said surprisingly

Samrat explained them the whole thing

"shut up samrat" gunjun n mayank said in union

"to or tera fazool sa idea" mayank said "no one is going to obey it"

"but v don't have any other option yar" nupur said

"exactly" samrat said "mery baat mano to"

Mayank n gunjun left the place before the completion of his sentense

Samrat shouted from behind

"mayank b ready kal raat v r going its done"

After one hour gunjun was standing on the roof in the world of deep thoughts. When someone from behind put a hand gently on her shoulder making her put her thoughts apart. She turned around n standing over there was mayank trying looking her constantly

"tum ho" gunjun said

"kisi or ko expect kar rahy thy???"

"nae kisi ko bhi nae" she said looking towards other side

"don't lie" mayank said confidently "I know tum kisy expect kar rahy thy n sorry wo is time ghar mein nae hy"

"kyun kahan gya hy???"

"so u agree tht was thinking about him???"

"nae mein ny asa to nae kaha"

"wo or nupur baher gae hein kahan I too don't know"

"ok" gunjun said

For few seconds there was a complete silence then mayank said

"gunjun"

"hmm"

"do u like samrat???" mayank asked reluctantly

Gunjun was not expecting this from him

"tumhy kya lagta hy???" gunjun said with poise hiding the nervousness inside her

"mujhy lagta hy u boh r really lucky means it's a pleasure to see u together"

"tumhy lagta hy samrat likes me???" gunjun asked with hope of listening a positive answer

"lagta nae hy m sure, that he likes u" he said n continued after a little pause "just wait he will admit this"

Gunjun smiled "u r talking about me n samrat, apny baat karo when r u going to propose nupur"

Mayank smiled "so u too know that"

Gunjun noded

"hmm have tried hard to do so but wo itna bolty hy k mujhy bolna ka chance nae milta, its not an easy thing to do" he said smiling

The atmosphere that was really calm was now sounding like a bus stop as soon as samrat n nupur entered the house.

Gunjun n mayank left the place n join them both, who were holding a lot of shopping bangs in both hands

"gunjun tujhy dekhaty hn" nupur said "itny dino baad shopping ki mein ny "

"or ye dekh" she pointed towards her watch looking gorgeous in her wrist "samrat ny dilae hy, achy hy na"

"buhut " she smiled seeeing it

"ok mayank plz ye sab under kamry mein rakho na mery sth plz"

"ok" n he hold the bag n left the place

Gunjun was about to leave the place when samrat hold her hand tightly from behind. N take out another piece of the same watch nupur was wearing n put it on her wrist gently. Gunjun looked at her with a glitter in her eyes

"kya hua chashmish" samrat said "kya soch rahy ho???"

"kyun" she replied "u always use to say that u can read my eyes, to tum bolo na kya what r they saying to u???"

"that v r tired"

"what" gunjun almost shouted

"ur eyes r really feeling sleepy yar, go take rest good night"

After saying this he left the place leaving her alone.

Tears starts escaping from her eyes

"samrat cant wait more, plz bol do na plz. Kyun nae bol dety. Aik bar do try to read my eyes. u always use to say u can read my heart n now even my tears r invisible for u. y is it so??? I beg u plz last time, promice will never demand anything, will never ask samrat will never ask"

Samrat standing on the roof with his eyes fixed on the bright city but his thought stuck some where

"chashmish I can see the love u have for me, n i do respect it too but gunjun plz asa mat kro khud k sath, v r not made for each other , I don't deserve u, n u deserves the best."

He closed his eyes letting his tears leaving his eyes, making his shirt wet

"mayank ye wala dekho na" she said with excitement

"bol dn kya???" mayank thought "I think I should say her that m in love, ok I think I should"

"nupur m in love" mayank said gaining all his courage

"WHAT" nupur almost shouted

"with the watch u r wearing" mayank said changing the topic "its really lovely"

"yup it is" she said with smile holding her wrist

"now just shut up" mayank said to his inner feeling that was continously repeling the voice of his heart "just come on yar itna darny ki kya baat hy, if she don't likes me than what she will say no that's it, its not a big deal"

"no how can she say no, its not possible, oh God abhi alleast there is an option that she is loving me too"

"u have to do this today come on ok 1, 2 , 3"

He was going to say when nupur again interuuped in between.

"see this, mein tumhary lie laey"

She said tying the band on his wrist

"FRIENDSHIP band" nupur said "symbol of our friendship"

Mayank gave her a confused look "friendship"

"ab aa kar friendship kar rahy hy, to pyar to agly janam mein kry gy"

"kesa hy"

"acha hy" he said n move towards the door thinking "sara confidence hilla dia, bola tha gunjun ko she will never give me a chance to say anything"

He shut the door leaving behind nupur confused "isy kya hua???"

Black sheet covered the whole world, n samrat n mayank were moving towards the house they visited in the morning

The expression on the faces of both were really opposite

"samrat still m saying y that v r doing wrong"

Samrat replied calmly "just relax na yar, its not a big deal"

"not for u but it is for me"

"ok" samrat stopped "to idhar hy ruk, I will do it on my own fine now"

Samrat strting moving forward but mayank join in soon

"lekin tujh py bilkul trust nae hy"

Samrat smiled on his reply "I know that, to chal"

Now both were standing beneath the house n looked towards each other

"mein pehly jata hn" samrat said

He climbed the wall of the house that was not that high n was standing on the wall. From there he hold the pipe n within a few seconds was on the roof.

He looked beneath towards mayank, who was standing over there watching him with terrifying expression

Samrat gave him a green signal to do the same thing

Mayank was going to climb the wall when he changed his decission n jumped back

"tujhy kya hua" samrat said in low voice "aa ja na its not that difficult"

Mayank tried his level best to tell him that the old man is standing behind him but samrat was unable to get him

"i cant get u yar, come on"

His sentense was incomplete when someone put his hand on his shoulder

Edited by chilluppp - 14 years ago
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wonderfullllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll,beautiful mind blowing fantastic fabulasssssssssssssssssss yupdate but yeh sam urrghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh cant he just say i lov e u n be happy forever

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anyways update was prefect
looking forward to read the next part soon
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Edited by sana_sajan - 14 years ago
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awesome update dear!!!!!!!!!
totally loved it!!!!!!!!!!
mars are in love!!!!!!!😳
y can't sam say he is in love😕.........
do continue soon!!!!!!!
n thanx for the pm!!!!!!!

luv ya
deepti🤗
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nice update dear.................loved both sajan and mayur.........................................
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I LOVED this part...........👍🏼
gud job Sara
Poor MaJan!!! 😔
God!! SaNu are dhakan here also......esp Sam!😆
liked d SaYank scene a lot
updt soon!!

Luv Adz! 🤗

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