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Originally posted by: dolly18

sara when r u updating hun???

r u busy?

m not busy dear
have severe eye prob
so thats y
have written the next part
but waiting for sana
wo approve kar dy then will update
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PART 5
dedicated to sana n sanju 😳
love u both
another smaller one
sorry guys me not well
next time will try
Second phase

The sun was shinning right on their top n they were standing in the middle. Towards one side was never-ending pure blue water of sea forming waves, trying the level best to left the sea n the other side was sand with a few trees around.

Mayank nupur entered the place admiring the loveliness of it. Suddenly nupur place her foot unconsiously on the stone n was slipped. She tried her level best to hold something around n suddenly came across with a hand holding her tight. Next moment she was in the arms of mayank, with his one hand on her back with their eyes fixed at each other. Both get a glimpse of the feeling they have for each other about which they r unaware even now. The eyes were enough to potray the feelings of their hearts.

Samrat n gunjan were following them n were seeing all this from far behind. Samrat looked in gunjun's eyes n said

"doesn't it seems that love is around us in front of our eyes, holding each other like love birds" he turned towards mayur but gunjan's gaze was permanently on her hand holded by samrat unconsciously n a sweet smile was on her face

"hmm" she said with her gaze still there "holding each other like love birds"

"kya???"

"kuch nae" she said with a smile looking towards samrat

"is really something exists" gunjun thought looking towards samrat left her behind "or this me who always try to see something in ur eyes, to search my place in ur heart. Y I always find ur eyes devoid of any feelings, y cant I read ur eyes like the way u read mine, really u r a brilliant actor"

She gave a pause to her thoughts over here n start moving behind him

"nupur" mayank said still holding her "u wanna say something???"

Mayank questioning eyes were making her feel curious.

"mayank chor dy usy" samrat said "isi condition mein baat krna zaroori hy kya???"

Samrat's words make them realise in what condition they r standing. They at once shattered their unusual thoughts n stand like they were trying to hide something either from samrat or themselves.

Next day

Gunjun n nupur were sitting peacefully when mayank came over there

"samrat kahan hy"

Both of them looked towards each other n then towards the camp

"kya" he almost shouted "abhi tak so raha hy, is larky ka kya karon mein"

Mayank moved in

"samrat chal uth hamein jana hy" but there was no response so he continued after a little pause "to sun raha hy mein kya keh raha hn???"

"nae sun raha" samrat replied

"samrat m waiting for u outside just come within five minutes"

"tujhy mery ko sath lana zaroori tha" sleepy samrat said moving with mayank

"han last time gunjun gae thy, to is bar mein tujhy ly aya simple"

"to to nupur ko bhi to la sakta tha na, us k sath akely aty hue shram aty thy tujhy"

"to nupur ki baat kyun kar raha hy??? "

"kyun nae kar sakta??? "

"nae" mayank said trying to get rid of the sort of conversation going on in between

"oh u feel possessive, ok ainda mein baat nae krn ga bhabi ki???" samrat said trying to irritate him

Mayank stoped giving an angry look n about shouted

"SAMRAT ,enough of this rubbish"

He continued "or to ye chal kesy raha hy, don't try to act sleepy janta hn tery noutanky ko, or aj jitna marzi natak kar ly jae ga to hy samjha"

Samrat give him childish angry look n start walking with him without uttering a single word

They were moving leaving behind the foot prints on the sand. Mayank stopped beneath a tree there, looking behind where samrat was coming really fast like a turtle

"samrat is speed mein chaly ga to kal pohnchy ga"

Samrat's expressions changes suddennly, he run towards mayank holding his hand n pushing him back. Suddenly the cone hanging on the tree fell exactly at the place where mayank was standing a second ago.

"dekh k" samrat said to mayank who was accepting the situation looking towards the tree

"dosron ko bolta rehta hy khud bhi dekh lia kar"

"samrat wo"

"mein tujh sy baat nae kar raha"

Samrat said still trying to act like he is angry with mayank

"tub bhi nae jab mein kaho we have done with it"

"what"

Mayank pointed towrds the tree.

It was a tall tree with four needle like scaly leaves with the distance of 90 degree between them, exactly giving a cross.

"oh really " samrat said with excitement in his tone "thnx God now can sleep peacefully"

"to kab badly ga".

"nupur kahan hy???" mayank ask gunjun who was there alone

"wo to sony chaly gae shaid"

"un dono ka sony k ilawa koi kaam nae hy"

Mayank said seeing the box

Mayank unlock the box, he found a few hours ago. Present in it was a precious, shiny metal. He hold the metal in his hand n handled the box to gunjun.

"gunjun there is something written on it"

Gunjun moved her gaze from the box n was now waiting for mayank to unreveil the statement written on the metal piece can easily be written even in the dark night because of the sparkling surface of the metal

"the key is hidden beneath the"

He stoped midway

"its incomplete" he said searching the whole piece carefully twice

Both for a few seconds thought of the statement

Then gunjun draw the attention towards the box she was holding n found something at the bottom of the box but it was difficult to read it in dark, she tried her level best to read it but in vain

"mayank something is mentioned over here too"

She asked mayank driving his attention towards the box

Mayank move in n bring the torch from inside n flipped the light. The whole box was enlightened n the statement was now clearly seen at the bottom

She looked towards each other as the statement was enough to increase their curiosity

the mystery will b reveled at 100 degree

Edited by chilluppp - 14 years ago
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awesome awesome awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
gunji has a feeling for sammy
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
party time woppieeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee🥳
oh ho here too sammy is dhakan man
he can see mayur love
but not his love for gunji
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh is ladka ka kya karun mainnnnnnnnnnnnnn
urrghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

anyways all in all superb update
every thing is prefect
with briiliantly written
muhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
lov u do continue it son
n thanx for the pm

ur's love
Sanu
Edited by sana_sajan - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: chilluppp

m not busy dear
have severe eye prob
so thats y
have written the next part
but waiting for sana
wo approve kar dy then will update


issh tu aur teri approvation
huh jani
update kardiya kkar
dont wait for me
i alwys love ur updates
u know that
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Posted: 14 years ago
@sana
i want u to comment first
love u
n me a worst writer to kamazkam tujh sy approvl lena zarori hy
oh apny duty sahy sy kar
nakhry karny ki koi zaroorat nae hy
jab tak mein update krn gy
tujhy ye karna pary ga
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Originally posted by: chilluppp

@sana

i want u to comment first
love u
n me a worst writer to kamazkam tujh sy approvl lena zarori hy
oh apny duty sahy sy kar
nakhry karny ki koi zaroorat nae hy
jab tak mein update krn gy
tujhy ye karna pary ga


fainttttttttttttttttt
is this call LOVE😆

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