Wishful Thinking -2 Upd - 01/27 pg 80

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Posted: 14 years ago

#601

Loved it, Vru! 😳 Would really like a scene where Geet goes to outhouse and Maan comes behind her. Keep writing. 😊

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Posted: 14 years ago

#602

thanks shah10

and shreya thanks...

Edited by -RushTrip- - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#603

Originally posted by: --Nargis--
Thanks again for this scene....as always..I love it. I am so glad you are connecting to your writing again....wooohooo!!🤪As far as the scene....i would have like to see more romance....it was thier first time...so perhaps a little slower...more drawn out with some conversation....you know I am not imaginative at all...so i need it all spelled out for me!!😛

oye nags..

tu badi demanding hai yaar...ab tujhe convo aur romance dono chahiye..

hmmm theek hai..milte hain break ke baad!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#604

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

oye nags..

tu badi demanding hai yaar...ab tujhe convo aur romance dono chahiye..

hmmm theek hai..milte hain break ke baad!!

I have to keep you on your toes...lest you get all old and rusty!!😉😛

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Posted: 14 years ago

#605

bas ab yehi baaki reh gaya..hai..

amma bani meri saas...!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#606

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-
bas ab yehi baaki reh gaya..hai..

amma bani meri saas...!!

Of carse...i wouldn't want you to miss out on any pertinent experiences...you know!!!!😉😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#607

Haan haan!

bhagwaan ne mujhe baksh diya..tha....lekin the mortals on this earth feel i need to get the experience..

hmmph..ab toh insaan bhagwan ke phesle se bhi khush nahi hai...

hai raam!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#608

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-
Haan haan!

bhagwaan ne mujhe baksh diya..tha....lekin the mortals on this earth feel i need to get the experience..

hmmph..ab toh insaan bhagwan ke phesle se bhi khush nahi hai...

hai raam!!

Pehle kab khush the ke ab honge....hasn't that always been the case...we want more than we have...always!!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

#609

haan magar..mein toh khush hoon bhagwaan ke phesle se..

unko pata hoga..ki mujhe aise experience ki jaroorat nahi hai!!

par meri amma..hi..meri saas bane toh beti kya kar sakti hai

kiye jaa sitam par sitam
ye bhi seh lenge...

gam toh kayee hai zamaane mein
ye bhoj bhi dho lenge!!

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--Nargis--

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Posted: 14 years ago

#610

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-
haan magar..mein toh khush hoon bhagwaan ke phesle se..

unko pata hoga..ki mujhe aise experience ki jaroorat nahi hai!!

par meri amma..hi..meri saas bane toh beti kya kar sakti hai

kiye jaa sitam par sitam
ye bhi seh lenge...

gam toh kayee hai zamaane mein
ye bhoj bhi dho lenge!!

Dhone se na mitenge na yeh daag na yeh sitam
Umeed ker ab to sirf Khuda se mile tuje Rahem...

Edited by --Nargis-- - 14 years ago