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hey Tia dear.......................read the story and its really awesome..................like the Maan and Geet and Dev character in this ff........................infact all the characters are good and happy ones.................cont soon and pm me...................

Originally posted by: nisha_bh

hey tia.....nice update.....👏

such a happy family.....loved d portrayal of brij's character too....😊

Thanks Nisha! I wanted a diff Brij!😉

Originally posted by: shalini_s

loved the last line Tia.. Hope Maan joins them too..

Thanks Shalz! Yup, let's hope so!😛

hey tia.... u r online./.... are we lucky enough today to get an update? 😳.......plz plz plz update soon... cant wait

Originally posted by: sallulover

enjoyed reading but please Add Maan in to the story more lolz

Thanks dear! Sure!

Originally posted by: brba

Hi welcome back...nice part with family patchup....
bt missing maan....so soon take maan into d family....

Thanks hun! Maan'll be back soon!😉

Originally posted by: dhrashtee

hey tia.... u r online./.... are we lucky enough today to get an update? 😳.......plz plz plz update soon... cant wait

Yeah, Drashtee, I hope so! Inshallah, will update in an hour!😛

Originally posted by: Chotii

oye hoye! that was a Fun packed part but... but firstly.... Dios mio! have u actually updated.. or am I imagining it??? 😆

Although u seem displeased with it, I have to let u know .. it was a smashing part woman!! Realllly sweet with all the family members and everything!

I simply LOVED Adi in this, poor guy! hahaha. U painted his character really well!
my fav part actually had to be the little kiddies.. they were sooo adorable! i wanna pinch their cheeks lol i loved their intro as geet got into the car - real cute Tia - loved it!

picturing brij like this was tough but funnnny! pinky-geet-brij are a super sweet trio and it was surprisng but to awesome to imagine him behave / look in this way.. i was in the same position as all the other supposed ppl in the fic who know of brij as the 'rude' guy... if he was the same guy from the show.. he woulda roared "OYE!!" as soon as geet-pinky lifted the cake, heading towards him lol

Everything was wonderfully described, with super lovely details, just making it a really enjoyable read! Fab Fab Fab update once again! Now that u'v updated this much, u'll have to continue soon 😉

Aww.. lovin this!!

xxxxxxxxxxx

Sazzy!🤗

Thanks for the super lovely comments!😛 oh, yeah, I did update!😆 I tried to experiment wid Brij and looks like it succeeded!😆 oh, the Brij frm the show wudn't have been celebrating Geet's return in the first place! Thanks again, chica! Will update in an hour!

Originally posted by: maansi007

luved ur ff plzz add me to ur PM list
THANXXX

Thanks Mansi! Sure, will do that!😛

Originally posted by: lallulal2010

your ff is defo fab...................gal u've got all the stuff...............amazing dev.............and lovable, adorable brij and lovely grand old man daarji.................they look so harmless in ur fic...........and in the serial my my!!! Loved the update to the core of ma heart...........hoping to see the nxt one with Maan soon......... 😊

Thanks dear! I didn't need unnecessary drama in the fic by other charachters! Maan and Geet are enough!😉 😆