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part 24

Both came back to senses'''''

Pari came back as MSK is staring at her''''..

She moved from there

And he is still there

He came back to the cabin''..

And put his hand on his head''.

At that time pari isthinking

Oye''''.yeh''.insaan ki problem kya hay

Yesa dekh rahaa hya'''.ki kabhi zindagee.mein ladki nahii dekhii'''.

And she is blabbering''bumped with him'..

He is start staring''''''

Oh god'''''.

And she looked at her watch'''''..

Aaj poora din karab''aur mera locket''.nahii.mil raha hahy.

Are uss aurat ko city hospital mein admit kiya tha.

Let us go there and find out'

At that time'''''..

He got a call'''..

Haa.dadimaa'..mein ara raha hoo.bas 10 minute mein nikhal raha hoo'''.

He saw pari.coming''''.to the direction'''''''''

She went out'into the lift''.

He enter into the lift'''''''''.

Both are in lift''

Pari is tensed''''''.'

At that time''''''''

Lights go off''

Pari is shocked''''''''

Msk looking at herr,,,,,,,,,

Pari''..relax donot get nervous''''''.

Do not get scared/////////////////////

And she is tensed

Without knowing''''.she hold his shirt''

The eyelock session continues..

And the lift door opens''''''''

She runs from there'''''''

And maan comes out.

Without asking questions'''.

And she runs for taxi'''''''''''

And drives to hospital

And she reaches the destination''''''''..

And she asks something for reception''''''''''.

On the other hand''''''..maan reaches to the hospital''''''''..

And pari'..asks for savitri devi'''''.

And maan enters into the dadimaa's room

Maan:Dadimaa'''.aap ne medicines leliya hay

,maan:Aap ne tie deer kiya'..office gaya kya'

Dadimaa:Aap ne abtak juice nahii pii'.

Aap ne'''''''.khana kaya.

Nahii'

He gets a call'''.

And he comes out from the room

At that tim e pari enters

Hello dadimaa''

Kaise hoo aap'''..

Sorry us din thodi jaldi mein tha

Aur pata hai mere dress bhi karaab hogayee.aur mera sadoo boss ne muje kitna kuch suna hay

And she sees that dadimaa is looking at her without a blink''..

Are beta'aap apne super fast thoda kum khijeee.aur ape puara sa naam thoo bata''..

Jii.mera naam pari''''''

Aur apka

Ji beta mein savitri devi;

Lagtha hay beta''''..tum apni boss se darthe hoo

Sorry SD

Mein uss sadoo se nahii darthe..waise who ankhoonse bahut darane ke koshish kartha hay.

Remembering his staring sessions'''''''''

SD??????

Jee mere adadat hay'''..mere nani ko bhi mein ne shortform bulati hoo..RD

Toh apko bhi agar apko boora naa lage tho'

Sorry''

Teek hay beta''''''.

You can call me SD ok

Thank u'''''''.on the other side'''''''.

Maan finishes his call''as he is about to enter into the room.

One nurse stops him

Sir:yes

Aap ko in papers par sign karni hogi''''.

And he follows her'

Pari.looks at her watch''''..

Oh sorry SD im'''''..getting late'''''''.

See u take care.

And do not worry..

And take care and bye.

She comes out.

Dadimaa'''.kitne pyarri ladki hay''''.

And bahut acchii bhi hay'''''''''''''''

And she comes out

And MSK coming in other direction

Part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#52
nice update. post more soon
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😆Awesome pls more update soon ......waitingggggggggg😍add PM
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part 26

He turns back and finds pari'.going side

Her duppatta flews

He turns and thinks pari''''''

Why this girl following in my dreams

He enters into the room

Dadimaa:Are maan:tune uss ladki se mila tha kya

Maan:kaun ladki''''''

Dadimaa:wahi..jisne '.hume girne se bachayaa..aur muje hospital men admit'''bechari mere wajah se unke dress ke karaab hogayee.aur office nbe late paunchii''''

Maan:he remembers pari'''''.dress spoiled and arriving late'''''

He brushes

At that time dadimaa observes maan is lost in thoughts

Dadimaa:kya baat hay maan.aap kiske khayalo mein kho gayaa hoo''''''''

Maan:kuch nahii''''''''.

And he leaves from there''

Thinking of anklet'''''''.

He tooks it'''''''..

As pari is worried about her anklet

And she remembers''''''..his mom's gift for her''''''

She is so worried'''''''.

She comes to office''

Rahul comes to her '''''.

Pari smiles at him''.

Maan sees this and his eyes fill with anger'''.and wonders why he is feeling so''''''..

Pari at the after noon..leaves the office

As maan also need to attend meeting'..

He finishes his meeting'..and find''pari'''''''.

She is wearing a skirt.and top'different from other dress'''''..she wear in office'''''

He wonders why'''''''

He crashes with a waiter''''.

And he sees pari''''''''.into the lift'..

he follows her'''..

as she entering into the room'''..

dekhiya'''''.mein apko respect karhti hoo..isliya.

agele baar mein apse milne ke liye nahii aungi.aur please muje ere zindagi'..mein''''''''''''jeenado''''..

maan sees pari.coming from the room''..

she is rubbing her eyes'''''''..and her hair also spoilt''''''..

she is cursing the waiter.who crashed with her'''''.

As water splashed on her''.and on her eyes''

Maan got very angry'''''''

What a girl'.

Itne bhooli who dikthe hay.woh hay nahii''''''

Aur''''''rahul ke saath'''''..

Aur yeha''''''

He goes to the reception.

As asks for details'''

The person..came from Mumbai.and his name is vrishab'''''''..

Maan''.enters into his room''.

He is very much angry'''''''''

On the other hand''..

Pari''is very angry.

She comes to office'''.

She is in serious tone''''''..

On the other hand'''''''''.

Maan''''''''.comes to the office''''.

Pari.cuts the phone''''''..

He angrily talks to the person

He calls pari.

Starts fuming at her''''.in venge'.

Pari'''''''..gets''''''''''..furious''''

Hello miss pari''..apke pass phursat milgayee''..

Laghta hay mein ne zindagi mein sab se ghalat kaam''..yeh kiya ke'''.mein ne tume '''..appoint kiya''''''.

Pari..gets angry.she also'.

Nahii mr MSK galti mein ne kee'''.mere wajah se'''

And she gets a call'..

As..she sees''''.

And gets anger'''''..

She comes to the room

As MSK comes down''''''.and sees'''''..

That there'''''''''.is a'''''''

He listens to the conversation

Aap lakh koshish kijeye''..apne dostho ko bej dejeye''..par mere decision kabi change nahii hoga'.

Pari hamesha wahi karthe hay''..jiska ''''''uska mann hoo''''''..

Aur haa,'''''..apne admii.ko mere peeche'''''lagana.band keejeeyee''..samjee'''..aap/////////////

Now leave me alone''''''

For god sake''''''..

Pinky''..comes ''..and sees pari'.in tension''''.

Oye pari kya huwa''''

Pari:oye kuch nahii'..

Pinky:are pinky.kuch nahii'''''

And pinky'''

Pari''''.kya rahul tumara boy friend'''.hay''

Pari:rahul arm era boy friend'''''.

Chup kar'.yaar''''..

And she leaves''''.

Part ends

Edited by srilu_123 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#55

nice update.

small suggestion dear try to write in one format the current update make it difficult to read it n it kills the flow.

sorry


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Posted: 14 years ago
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when u will update next waiting yaar😍
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part 27

pari entered into maan's room

rahul came there

and he smiled at pari'

pari looked at him.and smiled''''''''''''.

At that time.confused ramu bumps with pari.

Are pari madam apne rahul sir ka ghar ka number kyon manga'''''.mein thoda confused hoo''''''''.

At that time''''.

Pari'''''''''..chuckles'''''''..

And she drags pinky/////////////

As pinky is busy in eating food''''..

Maan listens to the conversation''''..as he knows

He calls pari tohis room''''''..

there is a party at the place

I want you to organize the party'''

It is a official party'''..

I think u should concentrate on your work''''

Pari'''.looks at him confused''''..

But she leaves the room

Maan looks at her''''''''..

On the other hand..tasha and sasha looks at her

And sasha '''..

Miss pari'''''..let sus check out how you will come out the problem''''''''.

Pari''.is wondering'''.and she is moving into her cabin'''.

Yeh babaji.what is this there are problems in my life

I don't know why''..

She answers the call'''''''''..

She sees the number

She looks at her bag''

And quickly opens and put another sim card in the bag

She sees''''.

Hello''''pari'''..

Adi at the door'''''

Pari:yes sir''''''''..

Are u ready

Pari:for what

Adi:are pari'.for party''''''

She sees..it

And tooks the file ''.and starts work on it''''''.

At the evening'she completes the file'''''''.

She closes her eyes''''''''''..

As she is tired'''''''

Maan walks in his cabin'..

He sees windows ar eopen

And he comes to close the windows''''''..

He sees''''''''.into the direction

He sees pari

He comes to her room

He sees '.her position.

He bends to collect the papers.as they are drawn through ''''''.

He collects and lifts his head'''.to find pari face

Curls on her face'''''

Just like a beautifull painting drawn by a painter on canvas'''''.

An angel in the chair''''''..

She is so tired''..as tiredness shown on her face''''

Her clip is loose'.as hair is flowing''''''''

He immenses in her beauty'''.

He is completely lost'''''''

Unknowingly,,,,,,,,,he touches her hand'''and he takes'back as it is so hot''''.

As she is running out temperature'''''''''

He runs into his cabin'''..and he took the keys''.

And he lifts her up and took to his car''..and he takes her to the doctor

Doctor:examines'''..

Msk:is she ok

Doctor:she is so weak/'''.i think she had not eaten from the morning''''''..

She need s rest

i had given her medicines'''''.

Lot of stress'''''''

Maan '''''he thoughts''yes she is very busy from the morning''.stupid girl cannot take car e of herself'''''waise badi''''''badi baat karthe hay''''

And he thought yes..he yelled on her..he is sucha monster''''..

Yes she kept a nice name to him,'''..DDJ'..he is justa animal''''''..

At that time''phone rings'''''.

He sees the number'''''''''.

Pinky:oye pari''.kaha ho tum.pata hay.tohsubha se kuch nahii kayee'''''aur upar se toh office mein bhi bahut busy..jaldi ghar ajaa'''''''''.. accha mera battery low hay''..witha sec ''''she complete and cut the call'''''''

Maan without answers//////

Oh no pinky'''''''.

And he calls again'but phone switched off''''''..

He don't know what to do

He carries her to the car'''.

And he stops the car''''

Looks at pari'..

Who Is sleeping at his side''.

The car stops at the huge building

Khurana''''.house''''''''''''''

Edited by srilu_123 - 14 years ago
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Part 28

He took pari in his hands

She is still sleeping

A touch feeling different……………….

Why always when he touches her……feels like she is very close

And that time…………

A stranger……………….sings

The sanyog ne banaya tum dono ko………..

Milthe hay har baar………….

Tere saath jud gaya iska bandhan………………..

And he brings to the out house.

First time he bought girl to his room………..

The moon light on her face………..

Like he is carrying another moon………….

He puts her into the bed……………

Pari is mummering in the sleep

Sorry mama mein ne apke akari nishani ko dee.,,.

Jaanthi hoo mama…….usmein apke ashirwaad hay………………

Lekin tension mat lijeye……mama..mein who locket dond loongi…………..pls………mere help karna.babaji se keha kar……..pls mama………

Maan..listens………..locket…kis locket ke baaremein baat kar rahi pari………………..

And why she is so worried…………………………..

And he goes into the mansion………………….

He changes his clothes……………………….

He close his eyes…………………………..

His dreams……………………..

He is running…………………..

He want to hide……….

He hides behind the tree.and suddenly he felt some hand…………………………dragged to the side……..

He open the eyes………..

And finds a pair of eyes……………….looking at him.

He opens his eyes………….he find pari……………….

Why she always…………..in my dreams………………………

Why I cannot think beyond her……………..

And he opens his ward robe and finds the locket………………….

He looks at the locket………………..

Suddenly he listens to the screams……………………..

And he runs to the room…………

Kakimaa……..mama…..mama…………uss room mein hay

Muje usse milna hay…..unne dekjhna………..hay.

Pls………..pls……..ek baar une dekhne dijyee.

Mein shararat nahii karungi………….khana timepe kaungi…………..bilkul parishaan nahii karungi.mama ko.

Pls…kakimaa……………..mama ke pass janedijyee…………..

She is crying……

Maan comes to her

And she hugs him…………………..

Tightly………….

He shocks and gives a return hug……………………

He makes her to sleep………..

And he sees.her…..

She is sleeping…………………

He sees and removes curls from her face…………………

He feels happy…………………………………

Anjana se rishta….magar lagtha hay……

Koi door hay.baand rahe…………………………………………

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GREAT UPDATE ...
PLS CONT SOON.....
WAITING.....
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Part 28

Pari is still in sleep

She is screaming

Don't kill……….

Pls save her……………

No nothing happen to u geet……………..

And pls………………..

Somebody……save

I lost my mama………….

I cannot lost u,……………………

Ur my sister………………………

Pls……

Donot leave me…………………………………

Pls donot leave me………….

Pls geet……………..

Don't leave me………….

I will kill that bas***d

Im not going to leave him

I will find him…………………………..

Pls……..

She is screaming………

Maan enter into the room…………………

He is seeing pari is crying like a hell………………….

He came

And pari hug her……

Pls save her……

She is in trouble…………….

Somebody call police…………………………………

pls save her……………….

She is my sister………………………..

Pls………………………

Daimaa………………sana didi………………….

Pari hugs maan………………………..

He is completely confused…..

But hefeels something inside is worrying…….her…………………………

After sometime she bends to sleep

He covered with her covers…………………………………..

He comes out…………..

Next day morning…

Pari find himself ina room

The room is completely black and white……….

She sees the sourroundings..

Pari kaha hoot um…….

And she comes out of the room

It is outhouse……………………….

She comes out..

And finds the garden…………with flowers

She runs into them

Maan comes inside the room……..finds the bed empty…

And he sees the window…..

He sees pari is running and playing in garden……………

She is smiling…………..

Maan………………..

Is she mad

Sometimes cry…………

Sometimes laugh

And how .

He is confused………………………………..

Part end…………………

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