Hey, I just read the story...8 years later, I guess! Haha. Well, I absolutely loved it. You put all of Shilpa's feelings into words and I'm glad that's Shilpa could put on a brave facade in front of Armaan, concealing her real feelings about the situation and be an amazing friend at the same time! Time for Armaan to return the favor and help her out now. Shilpa's been lonely all her life and you penned her desperation really well in the moment when she cried all night clinging on to the letter from her Masi at the orphanage. Of course, we don't know what Armaan is up to but he sure as hell can wipe those tears and give her a good time as a friend. All that whispering between Sid and Armaan has me suspecting but at least, Armaan's over Riddhima now. Sid's genuine concern for Shilpa has me all Awww and I think I like Riddhima in here as well, although she's only had a cameo so far, haha.
Since, the thread has been reopened, I couldn't help but comment. This is quality fiction and I'd love for you to give us a few more parts even if you want to keep it brief! And it'd be amazing to read more from you as well. For now, I'll hop onto your other work, can't help it but you must know that you have an eager reader awaiting!
PS- Is Shilpa going to save all that Riddhima material from the bin, just in case? Idk why but I've been wondering.
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