FF: EHSAAS-THE FEELING Thread 1 - Page 83

hey hw r u?

maan trying to make geet jealpus i hope it doesnt back fire

Where is your update? you said u will defiantely update ...where is it?? i am soo waiting for that...pls update soon! and take care

its been vry long...... whn r u updating nxt?

WHERE IS THE UPDATE STILL WAITING..............

Hey Sweeety,

hey when r u going to update?.................really waiting for the next part eagerly............plz update as soon as possible.

update pls yaar////so so long..

Hi guys! ok ok nw Dont Throw Eggs, tomatoes nd Chappals on me! oh!!........ Ouch!!!!........ Sorry Sorry Sorry!!!!!!....... i know i m very much late in updating. i Promise i wont repeat it Again. But there was so many hardles Between me nd My FF from last few days. First i was not Well, den i got Busy in Diwali's Preparations nd nw My house is Full of Guests due to my Sister's Baby Shower Ceremony (she's my Cousin but i love her more den my real sis). So i was not getting tym to update it. nd Nw i m saying Sorry by holding Both my ears. pls Forgive me. i know i had kept u all wait for so long. So nw here's d Part 30 of my FF. hope u all will like it. pls feel free to criticise if u all dont like it

Part 30:

Whole ride was went silent. Maan looked at Geet from d corner of his eyes who was sitting restless. He decided not to disturb her. after 30 mins. Of journey dey both reaches to Coffee Shop. Maan parks d Car nd dey both headed inside d cafe where Savy is already waiting. She was happy to See Maan nd Geet together. It indicates that her plan is working. Geet who was running away from him is nw accompanying him. Meanwhile they both reaches to her.

Savy: Hey Maan!

Maan: Hey Princess! Not bad. Time ki Puntual ho gyi ho.

Savy: Hhhmmm Ab MSK ke sath meeting thi to punctual to hona hi tha. Infact main to 15 min pehle hi aa gayi thi (den turned to Geet) Oh! hi Geet. Sorry I didn't notice u

Geet: Its OK Savy.

Savy: Anyways y don't we sit first

Geet: ya Sure.

Suddenly Waiter brings two mugs of Coffee which surprises both Geet nd Maan.

Savy: wo, I know that MSK doesn't like to waste his tym so maine pehle hi order kar diya tha. But Geet mujhe nahi pata tha kit um bhi aa rahi ho (she said pretending that she doesn't know about Geet's arrival nd was surprised to see her here) warna main tumhare liye bhi order kar deti.

Maan: Actually Savy Geet yaha meri help karne aayi hai. Rite Geet?

Geet: ya.

Suddenly Geet Notices that the Coffee that waiter has brought was cappuccino

Maan: wat happen Geet? U look so surprised

Geet: Wo... Coffee.....

Maan: ya

Geet: I mean its Cappuccino

Savy: oh dat. Wo I had ordered for me nd Maan. Should I order the same for u also?

Geet: But Maan use to have Black coffee.

Savy: oh! I didn't know dat?

Maan: its ok Savy. No problem I can have it.

Geet: but Maan. U like Black coffee

Maan: Geet, ab Savy ne itne pyaar se order kiya hai so hw could I refuse to her (den turned to waiter) pls get a black coffee for d lady

Geet: No...... I mean I too like to have cappuccino

Maan(amuzed): R u sure?

Geet: ya y?

Maan: Because its quiet bitter in taste. U may not like it

Geet: hw can u say that I'll not like it

Maan: because u only drink black Coffee so dat means u wont like any other flavour

Geet: I don't drink any other flavour because I don't want to. That doesn't mean that I don't like it

Both Waiter nd Savy were looking at their Arguments confused

Maan: So u want to say that today u want to have dis flavour

Geet: Maan, if u can Drink Cappuccino with her den y cant I Drink dat wid u?

Maan has a smirk on his face nd Geet too realizes wat did she just said

Geet(trying to cover up): I mean I too can have cappuccino

Maan(with fake anger): fine. Baad me mat kehna dat I didn't warned u (den turned to waiter) Cappuccino for d lady

Waiter: R u sure Sir?

Maan: yes

Waiter nods nd goes from dere. Meanwhile Savy nd Maan discuss about the show nd Maan has given her few contacts which can help her. Geet too suggests her few ideas for her Show which Savy likes. She gestures Maan for his Gr8 choice to which Maan only smiles. In d meanwhile Waiter brings d Coffee for Geet. Maan knows dat Geet will not like its taste so he tried one last tym

Maan: Geet think once again

Geet: Maan I m confirmed

Saying dis Geet sipped d Coffee nd as expected she spits it out at first Sip only nd started Coughing as it was Bitter in taste. Maan got so worried wen he looks Geet in dat Cond. He quickly rubs her back to make her calm.

Maan(anxiously): Geet!! Geet, r u fine? I told u that u cant able to drink it, but u never listened to me. Nw See wat has happened?

Geet looked at his Face which was full of Worries nd concern about her. he has forgetten d World Around him. He has even forget that he has came here to met Savy.

Geet: Maan, I m fine nw.

Maan: R u sure?

Geet(with a smile): ya.

Saying Dis she was again going to sip d Coffee wen Maan stopped her by holding her hand. She looked at him

Maan: Not again Pls.

Geet: I m not feeling well. I need to go home.

Saying dis she gets up from d chair nd Rushes outside.

Savy: umm.. Maan I guess Geet is really not Feeling Fine. Nd u should be with her this tym. I guess kuch zyada hi ho gaya. Just take her Home

Maan: R u sure? I mean wat about meeting?

Savy: Let it be Maan, it can be done afterwards also nd moreover she needs u rite nw.

Maan: Savy u r saying dis? u have only said na that I have to be strong during dis whole Mission as its important

Savy: Ya I told u nd I m only saying to u to go to her rite nw. Maan today wat I saw in her eyes was just not only Jealousy, but the Pain, the Fear of Losing u to any other girl. Thasy I m saying go to her. we can carry forward our plan afterwards also.

Maan: I guess u r rite. Thanx Savy.

Savy: Anytime Maan.

Maan smiles nd left from dere leaving Savy behind Smiling

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Geet was in Parking Lot standing next to Maan's car. Trying to recollect wat she has done inside. She couldn't believe that she has gone so much Insane in her jealousy.

Geet(To herself): wats Wrong wid u Geet? U knw it very well that u wont like its taste den also u tried it. Maan was stopping u but u Argued wid him nd didn't listen to him. Y m I doing all dis? Wat I wanna to Prove? Does I want to Prove dat I m better then Savy? Y m I feeling so much insecure from her wen I know that Maan was not going anywhere Far from me.

Her trail of Thoughts have been Broken wen she felt someone tapped her Shoulders. She turned to look back nd saw Maan standing in front of her.

Geet: Maan! Tum yahan?

Maan: ya Geet hw r u feeling nw?

Geet: much better

Maan: u were going home na den y r u standing over here alone?

Geet: ummm..... Wo,...... I was going only.

Maan: C'mon I'll Drop u.

Geet: its ok Maan. I can Go

Maan: Geet, kabhi bina zid kare meri koi baat maan sakti ho?

Geet nodded her head innocently in yes

Maan: hhmmm Good. Nw lets go

Geet: but ur Meeting?

Maan: Geet, it can be done afterwards also. Nw c'mon sit in d car.

She nodded nd sits in d car nd Maan started driving.

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It was about 6:30 PM wen dey both reaches to the outhouse. Maan opens d Door for Geet nd Geet slowly comes out. She was still lost in her thoughts. She wants to get out from all dis. She wants to get out from her insecurities, from her weird Behaviour, from her Anger. She is realizing that she has punished enough Maan infact more den it needed. Enough of listening to her mind, nw its tym to listen to her Heart which always say to Forgive Maan. Maan was about to go back to his car wen Geet calls him

Geet: Maan!!!

Maan turned around nd Looked at geet

Maan: Wat happen Geet? Is everything ok?

Geet: ya...... Wo......... I want to say something to u

Maan: yes Geet (he said while coming to her) Wat happen?

Geet: wo.... Coffee Shop me jo hua uske liye...........

Maan: wait a Sec Geet, agar tum uske liye Sorry bolne wali ho to rehne do because ye tumhari Aadat hai ki pehle galti karo aur fir Bolo Sorry

Geet (furiously): Tum kabhi meri Poori baat sun ke react kar sakte ho. Jab dekho tab aadhi Adhoori baat pe React karte ho.

Maan: Ab tum har baat bolne me itna tym logi to main kya karoonga?

Geet: Tumse to baat karna hi bekaar hai.

Maan: To mat karo, waise bhi tumne mujhe bulaya tha, maine nahi

Geet: Galti ho gyi, jo maine aapko bula liya. Pls Go

She said while making a Face nd turned her back towards Maan angrily, maan too was furious at her behaviour. He also started to move towards his car. Suddenly Both of Dem realizes that dey were again Arguing instead of talking peacefully.

Geet(To herself): Paagal ho gayi hai Geet, tune use baat karne ke liye roka than d u have started fighting wid him. C'mon Girl Grow up

Maan(To Himself): ye kya kar raha hai Maan? Itni mushkil se to kuch bolna chahati thi aur tu usse lad raha hai. Wats Wrong wid u

Dey both turned around Together to look at each other.

"Sorry" Dey both said Together nd den smiles

Maan: Ajeeb Baat hai na Geet, hum jab bhi baat karne ki sochte hai to ladne lagte hai

Geet: Maan, I m tired of fighting wid u. I guess I had overreacted for d whole Situation nd was punishing u more den it needed.

Maan: Geet, dnt blame urself. If I was at ur place den may be I should have also done the same thing.

Geet: No Maan, mujhe bhi sochna chahiye tha, afterall u have done all dis for me

Maan: Its ok Geet. Lets Forget about everything ok.

He said dis nd about to leave wen Stopped by Geet's Voice

Geet: Kya hum Fir Se Dost nahi ban sakte?

Maan freezed at d spot we he hear dis. he couldn't believe on his ears. Does Geet just said him to be her friend again? Does she wanted to give their Relationship another chance. He quickly turned back to face her.

Maan: Wat did u just said Geet?

Geet(under her breath): Ye lo itni Zor se bola fir bhi nahi suna, Abhi Savy ne bola hota chahe Dheere se hi sahi turant sun liya hota. Dusht Daanav (Den to him) I said Cant we Be friends again?

Maan(tapping on his ears): No I was checking was my ears r working or not. Geet Malhotra has asked me to be his Friend again. Wow!

Geet: Maan. Stop irritating me.

Maan: Geet, it was not me who has broken dis friendship. That was u, so hw can I decide for our friendship? U have to decide for it.

Geet thought for a While nd den extends her hand towards him

Geet(innocently): Friends?

Maan Smiles nd meet his hand to hers

Maan: Friends. Nd is baar hamesha k liye.

Geet said nothing but smiles. Somewhere in her heart she was feeling light.

Maan: Nw yaha khade khade smile karti rahogi ya Coffee bhi Pilaogi

Geet(amuzed): Coffee?

Maan: ya nw we have became friends so For Celebration atleast a coffee is must. Hai na. moreover I didn't have it at caf also. Thanx to u.

Geet: Wat? Did I said u not to Drink. No na. den y u didn't have it over dere

Maan: Ah! Rite y didn't I have it over dere? Let me remember. Ab yaad aaya? U were not fine over dere nd u expect me to enjoy my Coffee over dere rite?

Geet: u Left because of me? (she said wid both surprised nd touched)

Maan(realizes wat he said): Ofcourse. I mean ab tum to apna khayal rakhogi nahi to kisi na kisi ko to hona chahiye na warna tumhari wajah se Dadimaa mujhe daatengi.

Geet: So u have done dis for Dadimaa?

Maan: ya ofcourse. Wat else did u thought?

Geet (frowns): Nothing

She said dis nd About to leave wen Maan Stops her by holding her hand nd comes closer to her. Geet's Heart skipped a Bit wen she felt Maan so close to her.

Geet (To herself): Damn! Dis Person crashes whole my System nd Drives me Insane nd After dat Skips away happily leaving his Effect of Proximity on me.

In d Mean Tym Maan turned her towards him

Maan: Bura Laga?

Geet didn't said a word nd looked at the other side. Maan raises her face through her chin to face him.

Maan: Bolo na Geet, tumhe Bura laga?

Geet looked straight in his eyes like wanted him to read her eyes which were confessing her love, her Insecureness to him. But den she quickly looked away. Maan too smiles nd looked away.

Maan: Acha baba Sorry! Geet hum abhi abhi Dost bane hai to fir lad kyun rahe hai.

Geet gave him a look.

Maan: ok Baba nw I'll not irritate u anymore.

Geet: Promise?

Maan: yup Promise

Geet smiles at dis. Maan was so happy to see her smiling after so many days

Maan(to himself): uff I can do anything to make her smile

Geet: u said something

Maan: umm.... ya I need Coffee. So shall we

Geet: ya sure

Both headed towards d Outhouse

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Both stepped inside d house. But the whole house was dark

Geet: y its so Dark over here (she said while trying to Switch on d lights)

Maan: wat happen?

Geet: I don't know but lights on nahi ho rahi

Maan: hhmmm nothing to surprise

Geet: wat do u mean?

Maan: jaha tum ho waha koi problem na ho aisa to ho nahi sakta. Tumhare sath life life nahi balki ek Roller coaster ride lagti hai

Geet: Maan not again. Nd if u have so much proud on urself den y don't u do something to bring d lights back

Maan: hw can I? I m not an electrician

Geet: Dekha Suggestions dena Aasan hota hai. kar ke dikhao tab pata chale

Maan: o Really! Nw see wat MSK can do

He takes out his cell nd started dialing d no. of d Securities

Maan(shouts): Hello! Wat d hell is happening? The Lights of Outhouse was not coming since long nd u guys were just sitting.......... I don't care if d Lights were not here within 10 mins. Den just u all have to start find new Job. Got it

He said nd cuts d call. Even in d Dark Geet could Feel hw much angry he was. She decided to make him calm

Geet: ummm..... wat happen?

Maan: nothing d lights will be here in few mins.

Geet: oh! But hw will we able to manage till den. I cant see anything in Dark

Maan(sarcastically): Acha! Is it? I was not knowing it. Geet, no one could able to see in d dark. Its not unusual

Geet(make a puppy face): I know. But u knw na that I had a phobia from Darkness.

Maan: Ah! Yes I remember, Geet Malhotra is scared of Darkness

Geet: I m not scared ok. Bas ghabra jati hoon

Maan: kyun? (he said while coming closer to her)

Geet:Aise hi (she said while moving backwards)

Maan: u think that some kind of Ghost will cum

Geet (scared): Maan Please! U know dat I m scared of ghosts

Maan: but just nw u said dat u r not scared of anything

Geet: ummm.... ya but.....

She couldn't complete her sentence wen she felt Maan's Arms Around ger waist which were giving her goosebumps. Maan Pulled her closer to him. She didn't realize that dey were standing near d window nd d Moonlight was Falling on dem. All she could Sense is Maan's Presence around her, holding her. the whole World around her seems to stop. Unknowingly she placed her hands on Maan's Bare chest which was visible through his Shirt where his heart was pounding hard which has made a chill ran down her spine. Maan too was mesmerized seeing her in moonlight. He didn't wanted to let her go away from me. He makes his Grip Tighter on her waist as she tries to withdrew herself. The wind that was coming through the Window was making her hairs blow to her face. He gently removes her hair from her face behind her ears caressing her soft Skin. She closed her eyes to his soft touch. At that moment she didn't cared of anything, she didn't cared that she was angry with him, She didn't cared that her relationship with him has again changed from love to friendship, all she knows is that she was melting, she was melting in Maan's Arms. Both stayed their in d same posture not willing to move wen Maan has started coming closer to her. Geet closed her eyes as she felt his breath on her face wen he whispered

Maan(Whispers): u don't need to get scared Geet wen I m wid u

Geet opens her eyes nd sees Maan so close to her. there was only a inch difference between their lips. Geet came into Senses nd tries to withdrew herself again but didn't realize dat Maan's Grip was too Strong on her Waist nd dis made her Lose her as well as Maan's Balance nd Geet ended up falling on Maan. Together they hit d floor. Geet's hands were still on his chest while Maan's Hands were tight around her waist not wanting to break d Hug. Everything happened so quick nd unexpectedly that Geet couldn't realize not even Maan but both were enjoying d moment wen dey were so close to each other. Both were waiting for dis moment. At dat Moment Maan wanted to kiss her, to feel her Rosy Lips, but something in her mind stopped him from Doing so.

Geet struggles to get up once again but Maan tightened his Grip again which loses her balance again nd fall back on Maan's Chest wid a jerk nd Geet Unexpectdly kissed his bare chest. Maan closed his eyes d moment he feels Geet's Lips on his skin. He hugged her even more tighter not wanting her to go. Geet too gives in nd rested her head on his chest. Dey Didn't realize for hw Long dey were in dat Position or dey didn't wanted to realize. Dey just wanted to be with each other. Suddenly the light in d outhouse came bringing Geet back to her senses. She looked at Maan who was still holding her in his Arms.

Geet(softly): Maan!

Maan: hhmmm

Geet: Lights have came

Maan: So?

Geet: R u going to stay like dis Whole nite?

Maan(mischievously): Well I don't have any Problem Geet

Geet(Blushes): Maan Pls Leave me nw

Maan noticed her uneasiness. Nd dey both get up

Both looked away from each other to regain their senses den looked back to each other nd lost in d Eye lock wen it was broken by Shilpa's Voice

Shilpa: Ahem Ahem! I hope I m not Disturbing d love Birds

Both looked at Shilpa nd gets a bit Embarresed, geet more.

Geet: ummm Shilpa its nothing like dat. Maan was here for Coffee nd i......

Shilpa: nd u were serving him rite?

Geet: ya...... No.... I mean.....

Shilpa: Relax di! I was only Kidding, u were getting Nervous like I caught u both Red Handed (Den turned to Maan) So Jiju did u had ur Coffee?

Maan: umm No Shilpa! U know ur Di is very Slow

Shilpa Giggles nd Geet irritates before she could say something she notices d Lipstick Mark on Maan's Chest nd gets worried. She didn't want Shilpa to see it. She tries to signal her from her eyes about the mark but he didn't able to understand wat is she trying to say

Geet (To herself): ye Lo! Babaji kya karoon main is Insaan ka? Maan For God sake cover ur Chest.

In d mean tym Shilpa notices d Mark. She smiled Mischeviously nd was Happy that the things r getting Better between Both of dem

Shilpa: ummm Jiju I guess Di has Served u many other things then Coffee

Geet gets Nervous nd Maan Confused

Maan: wat?

Shilpa: I mean Snacks. Did u know di really makes Snacks very Well

Ok Geet Cant take ot anymore she knows very well wat Shilpa is trying to say.

Geet(intervenes): umm Maan..... whom r u listening? U know she's so stupid. C'mon lets have coffee

Maan was abpout to Say Something wen her Cell phone rings. His face was lite up wen he Saw Savy's name over dere

Maan: hey Princess wats up?

By Hearing word Princess Geet understands who could it be but she tries to control her jealousy

Savy: Where r u Maan?

Maan: I m at outhouse? Anything Serious?

Savy: ya I wanted to meet u. remember we have to go to the organizer

Maan: oh Ya! Dnt worry Princess I'll be there in few mins. Sorry to kept u waiting.

Savy: ok Bye

Maan: Bye See u.

Geet was listening impatiently to their Converstaions nd was waiting for him to finish.

Maan: umm Geet I need to go rite nw

Geet: But Coffee.............

Maan: Some other tym Geet. Rite nw Princess needs me

Geet: but atleast have a cup of Coffee den go

Maan: Geet u know, I cant make savy wait. She's so important to me. Ok I need to go nw. Bye. Bye Shilpa

Shilpa(smiles): bye Jiju

Geet(frowning): Bye

Maan left nd Geet has again got Fear in her heart

Shilpa: Hhmmm Seems Savy is very close to jiju

Geet: wat do u mean?

Shilpa: See jiju has left everything for her

Geet: shut up shilpa. Its nothing like dat. She was just his Good Friend nd Maan was only helping her. There's nothing between dem.

Shilpa: Relax Di! Y u r so much over Reacting. I was only Kidding

Geet herself Didn't know d reason for her Behaviour. Not evern she able to understand Maan's Behaviour. One tym She feels that Maan was only hers but another moment his Concern Towards Savera makes her think Twice.

Shilpa: Di! Kaha kho gayi

Geet: ummm Nothing Shilpa Sorry.

Shilpa: its ok Di. Acha can u prepare a cup of Coffee for me pls.

Geet ya sure! U get Fresh I'll make it

Shilpa: thanx Di

Shilpa left nd Geet too lefts for kitchen to prepare Coffee

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In D mansion Maan was getting ready wen he notices d Lipstick Mark on his chest. Den he recollects d moment in which Both of dem were so close to each other. Den he remembers hw Geet was guiding him about the mark but he didn't understand at dat tym. He smiles at his stupidness nd Geet's Innocence

Maan(To himself): Hhmmm So Dis is wat Geet trying to say. But Geet u can hide dis mark but hw will nd how long u'll hide ur love for me. I know very soon u r going to Confess about ur Love.

He said nd start getting ready again

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In D outhouse Geet has Prepared Coffee for Shilpa nd dey both were Having it wen Something Struck at Geet's Mind

Geet: umm Shilpa

Shilpa(watching TV nd having coffee): Hw can we gain a guy's Attention Towards us

Shilpa has almost spits out her Coffee wen she heard Wat Geet is saying she looked at her Shocked

Geet: I mean. Wen did Guys Seek interest to any other girl

Shilpa: Di! U r asking me dis? I mean u didn't have any interest in all dis

Geet: ya I was asking generally

Shilpa: really? Well anyways Di A guy gets interest to any other girl den only wen D Girl with whom he was doesn't Shows her Interest towards him

Geet: Matlab?

Shilpa: See di. Its very Simple if we cant give tym or interest to our Love den defunately he'll look somewhere else where he can get d same Love wat he wanted. For instance Take u nd Jiju. I know u Both r Perfect wid each other but if u didn't give any interest to Jiju or u didn't Respond to his feelings den definitely A Girl like Savera or any other girl will gain his Attention towards her nd he'll like to spend more tymn wid her den u

Geet: So Wat should a girl do in dat?

Shilpa: Well she has to give tym to her love moreover she has to tell her love that she didn't love him less than he did. As simple as dat

Geet: ok

Shilpa: But wait a sec. y u r asking me dis? I mean is everything ok between u nd Jiju

Geet: ya Everything is Fine. Wo........ Preeti was asking me

Shilpa: Preeti Di? R u sure?

Geet: ya y?

Shilpa: no I mean since wen she needs to know hw to gain Guys Attention towards her. afterall Every guy was dying for her

Geet: So cant She asked for dis?

Shilpa: ok baba Fine. Nw dnt get irritate again.

She said nd again started watchoing TV. Geet gets up from dere nd moved towards d Window

Geet(To herself): Can it be true wat Shilpa has just said? May be? But y d hell I m thinking all Dis? maine to Maan se dosti kar li hai na. den y I m still getting insecure from Savy? Because wat I feel for Maan is more den a friendship. Den y m I stopping myself from not telling him. Is dis is d Reason y Maan is getting too much involved wid Savy? O God! Maan ye tumne mujhe kaha Fasa Diya. Na to main tumse Door reh sakti hoon aur na hi kisi aur ko tumhare paas dekh sakti hoon. Nw only God will know wat will happen Next

Precap:

Trip to Alibagh

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