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Posted: 14 years ago
hope love is in the air for Mannet and Armaan-Shilpa..
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved it.....its just awesome.....hope even shilpa feels the same....maan and geet were cool in this part...the note pad writing was just amazing....plzzzz update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

OMG Im so delighted

Actually I really Love Ur FF soooooooooooooooooooooooo much
It gives me a lot of Happiness.
I alwez keep waiting for ur updates
Thats a Fabulous FF


aww dear dats really a gr8 comment for me that u were waiting for my updates
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Dear,
Thanks for pm n such lovely update daam cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee yaar when u update the next part pls update na I m waiting plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 14 years ago
so sweet yaar
maan took care of geet , he loves her soooooo much]
thanks for pm
do continue soon......
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice sweet part
LIked Maan's care for Geet
Maaneet's feelings are changing n evn Armaan's also for Shilpa
Lets c who excepts 1st n confessess also
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hi dear all thank u so so so much for ur gr8 Comments. that really made my day. i knw i was suppose to update my FF by now but i was in a gr8 Mess. Actually i got d Presentation stuck up in d Office. My Sadu, Khadoos Boss 😡 has given all d responsibilities of presentation to me. Dusht Daanav 😡 nd m not lucky enough like Geet 😭. Finally today i got free. nd i promise dat i'll update it by Tomorrow. i m already working on it. thanx for ur Co-operation till nw. luv u all😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
loved da update do continue
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi guys! first of all So so So so Sorry nd Thank u to all of u. Srry Because i got late in my update nd thanx because of ur Co-operation till but last two days were really hectic for me. Nw finally i was able to write Part 11 of my FF so here's it. I dont know whether u all going to like it or not. Pls feel free to criticise if u all dnt like it😊

PART 11:

3 days has been passed nd finally d day of presentation has came. A new day nd a new beginning for veryone. It was a gr8 day for Geet as Maan has asked her to give d presentation. Waise its d gr8 day For Both Maan nd Armaan also no no not because of presentation but because of d new Feelings arising inside both of Dem. Waise guys dnt u think dere must be a song sequence on their situation. So here's dat song.

[Music]

Maan is getting ready for office. He's in front of d mirror brushing his hairs wen he saw Geet standing behind him smiling nd as he turned to look she's not there

sili sili tapti raaton mein
jaltan hoon mein barsaton mein

dooba dooba har pal yaadon mein
dil kya kare

Maan realizes that he's hallucinating. He smiles at his hallucination nd remembers d moments he spend wid Geet while getting ready.


apney mein hi khoya rehta hoon

kehna hai kuch kuch kehta hoon

pain ajab sa sehta hoon dil kya kare


He remembers how he use to lost in her thoughts everytime. Maan singh khurana who has never said lie to anyone has lied to her Dadimaa because of her. Hw much he got concerned wen he came to know that Geet is not well. All dis thoughts had automatically brings smile on his face nd he knows that he has completely lost it he has lost his heart to Geet.

Ho... aankhon aankhon mein


He notices Geet giving him d project file which he has forgot


ho... baaton baton mein

nd giving him his cell Phone as a typical wife do.

ho... le gaya koi

He holds her wrist while she was about to go nd pulled her towards him


ho... de gaya koi


He started coming closer to her nd was about to kiss her wen again she vanished from dere.


salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq


Maan realizes that he was hallucinating again. He smiles at his thoughts nd brushes his Hair from his fingers.


[Agar ye tha Maan ka Haal to Armaan bhi tha Behaal. Kaise? U'll come to know soon]


din bhar kuch miss karta hoon

jaane kaise khwaahish karta hoon

bheed mein tanha rehta hoon
dil kya kare

Armaan is lying on his Bed with his eyes closed thinking about shilpa. Hw there was a transformation From a stranger to a Friend nd nw may be more den a friend of Shilpa is dere in his life. Nw he don't need anyone else except her. Whats happening to him.


bhool gaya main din saal mahina

january mein bhi aaye pasina

aata hai aaraam kahin na
dil kya kare


In his thoughts he had completely forgot that he has to Get ready for d hospital. He quickly gets up from his Bed nd started getting changing his clothes but couldn't able to understand in which colour shirt he looks d best. Oh god! He was never Fussy about his dressing so much before.

ho...aankhon aankhon mein


He was in front of d mirror checking d first shirt wen he saw Shilpa behind her Rejecting it by putting her thumbs down.


ho... baaton baton mein

He threw dat shirt aside nd picked up another shirt to which she gives d expression like okay-okay types.


ho... le gaya koi hoooo


finally he picks up a black shirt to which Shilpa gives a bright smile nd Gives a Thumbs-up to indicate that this is d best.


ho... de gaya koi


he turns back to look at her nd found that dere was no one. He looked here nd dere nd he found himself alone in d room.


salaam-e-ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq

he realizes that he's hallucinating. He smiles nd hits his hand on his head nd started changing.


[music]

Maan reaches to office nd saw Geet is already present over dere near d conference hall. He goes to her to say something but she indicates towards d client coming. He watches her welcoming Clients everyone is seetled up nd Geet starts her Presentation. Maan wishes her Good luck through Smile.

ho ..main jo baithoon toh baitha rahoon der tak


As Geet was giving her presentation Maan was lost in watching her. He didn't concentrate on d single word wat Geet has said all he could saw was Geet face nd her expressions.


Ho..... chal padoon toh mein chalta rahoon door tak


He unknowingly started walking towards her. He didn't care that what if everyone Notices it.


ho... chaayi bekaraari udd gaye totey
hanss deta hoon rotey rotey

memory mein koi jaagtey sotey
dil kya kare

Geet watches him puzzled as he snatches away d file from her nd throw it aside. Gripping her hand Maan swirl her around him nd pushed her away keeping d grip fixed on her hand tight nd pulled her back.. nd bent her like a Flower.


ho... aankhon aankhon mein

He came back to his Senses nd Found himself Still sitting on d chair.


ho... baaton baton mein hooo


nd saw dat Geet Still giving d presentation nd everything is normal like before.


ho... le gaya koi

Geet gestured him by raising her eyebrows to ask Wat's wrong?


ho... de gaya koi


To which he Nodded his head in negative to say "Nothing" Geet smiles at him.


salaam-e- ishq ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq

he again smiles at his Hallucination nd tap his head by his hand.

[music]

As Armaan entered inside d Sanjeevani she saw Shilpa in front of him wid other Interns (dis tym its not hallucination). He Followed her Everywhere she has Gone Finally stand outside d Children's Ward where she's playing wid a Kid. He smiles at her innocence. Den he notices someone tapping his shoulders. He turned around nd Saw Shilpa who was indicating to come Behind her nd he hypnotizingly Followed her nd reached to changing room.


hoo...raaastey bhool jata hoon mein
kyon bhalla

He found himself standing at d changing Room wen he was supposed to be at rounds.

bewajaah gungunaata hoon mein
kyon bhalla

He dnt know d reason why he always use to smile wen he Sees her. Y is she affecting her so much


nikloon mein phati jeans phenke

shirt ke na hosh button ke
bajjte hain sab sur dhadkan ke
dil kya kare


As he was about to leave she felt someone holding his hand nd he saw dat it was Shilpa. He smiles while she Adjusts d Collar nd buttons of his shirts. He was so happy finding Shilpa so close to him. Shilpa Too smiled nd den winks at him nd has started to leave from dere.

ho... aankhon aankhon mein


As she was about to leave from dere he holds her wrist to stop


ho... baaton baton mein

nd pulled her towards himself.


ho... le gaya koi


he tucked d hair strands behind her hairs which has falled on her face.

ho... de gaya koi


Shilpa gently kissed on his face. He smiles nd closed his eyes.


salaam-e- ishq ishq salaam-e-ishq


he opens his eyes nd found no one over dere. He touches his cheeks nd den smiles at his imagination.


ho... aankhon aankhon mein hooo


at khurana's everyone praises Geet's Work. Maan was happy to see her smiling.


ho... baaton baton mein


He congrats her nd left for his Cabin


ho... le gaya koi


Armaan came to locker Room


ho... de gaya koi


nd laid on d bench wid his eyes close nd smiling


salaam-e-ishq... salaam-e-ishq ishq


Maan too in his Cabin rests himself on his chair wid his Eyes close nd smiling

salaam-e-ishq salaam-e salaam-e
salaam-e-ishq salaam-e salaam-e
salaam-e-ishq salaam-e salaam-e

salaam-e-ishq salaam-e salaam-e

salaam-e-ishq

salaam-e-ishq oho....

Both of dem thinking about their Lady Loves Maan thinks about Geet nd Armaan about Shilpa. Both were remembering evry single moment that dey have spend wid their partners. None of dem could believe dat dey can ever fall in love. The thoughts of their respective partners has brought a wide smile. They both were lost in d aroma of love.

"I love u Geet" Said Maan slowly

"I love u Shilpa" said Armaan slowly


[p.s. Guys forgive me for weird Imagination nd pls play d song while reading dis.]


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Geet came inside Maan's Cabin nd saw him Smiling wid his eyes closed. She wondered wat made him smile so much.

Geet: Maan....

Maan opens his eyes nd saw Geet standing in front of him. He smiles nd shrugged his head in disbelief nd again closes his eyes. Geet couldn't understand his gesture.

Geet(dis tym quite louder): Maan.....

Maan opens his eyes in jerk nd notices dat Geet is actually standing in front of him. He quickly gets up from his chair.

Maan: Geet.... u?

Geet (in dramatic way): Yes Maan. Me.... Me.... Me.....

Maan: no I mean.....

Geet: wats wrong Maan? R u okay?

Maan: ya Y?

Geet: no I mean dat u left d conference hall so soon nd here u were smiling like u have got something very precious. I haven't seen u so much smiling before.

"Yes Geet I got something very precious. Its u" Thought Maan.

Geet: Maan.. r u listening to me?

Maan(smiles): ya Geet. I m listening only to u (he said while moving towards her).

Geet started moving backwards as he moves more closer to her. She didn't able to understand wat was happening. Finally she fixed against d wall nd maan was so closer to her. They looked at each other's eyes. Geet couldn'table to understand wat she lookedin his eyes. The feeling that he had never seen before. She don't know whats happening to him nd whats happening to her too. She was never been so uncomfortable around him infact she used to do her Bak-Bak but today it seems dat she had short of words.

Maan(slowly): Geet......

Geet (looking towards him): Maan wats wrong?

Maan came back to his senses realizing wat he was doing he taken a back nd looked towards Geet who was feeling awkward. He decides to make d atmosphere light. He knows Geet cant able to handle it rite nw she needs some time. By thinking this he started laughing at her which makes Geet even more puzzled.

Geet: Maan.. y r u laughing?

Maan: omg just look at ur expressions. Geet wat do u think only u can play pranks on others.

Geet nw came back to her original avatar, she hits Maan hard on his shoulders.

Geet: omg Maan u had almost taken my breath away.

Maan: really?

Geet (not understanding d feeling behind his question): ofcourse! I m not going to leave u for dis.

Maan: nor did I?

Geet: wat?

Maan: nothing. By the way u were saying something?

Geet: o ya. Mr. chopra has liked our designs very much nd he wanted to start dis project as soon as possible nd for dat u have to sign some papers. I have already told Tasha to get dem ready so dat u can go through it nd we mail dem today itself.

Maan: ok Geet. Waise bhi I dnt need to worry wen u r in dis project.

Geet: Maan, dnt get too much confidence on me otherwise I'll get nervous.
Maan: I'll never let u to be nervous geet.

Geet said nothing but smiles. Suddenly Maan get a phone call from one of his client so Geet decided to go to her cabin nd let him do his work. As soon as Maan finished with his Phone call he notices dat Geet has gone from dere. He saw her through d glass nd smiled.


Maan(to himself): Geet, I know that u still treat me as ur friend nd I'll never force myself on u. U need some time to understand my feelings towards u nd I'll wait for d moment wen u also feel d same wat I feel for u.

****************************************************

On the other hand Armaan too lost in Shilpa's thought wen he realizes that someone is shrugging his Shoulders. He opens his Eyes nd saw Shilpa over dere. He smiles nd started raising her hand to touch her to believe whether she's actually dere or he's again imagining. Shilpa couldn't understand his weird behaviour.


Shilpa: Armaan......, wats wrong wid u?

Armaan got up from bench couldn't able to understand wats happening. Is Shilpa is actually dere?

Shilpa: Armaan I m asking u something?
Armaan: nothing.
Shilpa sits next to him. She thought that Armaan is in any kind of problem.
Shilpa: Armaan wats wrong? I m noticing u from couple of days. U were nt like dat u were before. Is there any Problem? See u can tell me. May be I can help u.
Armaan looked at her. He saw d real concern in her eyes. After Riddhima it was she who has been so much concerned towards him.

Armaan: No Shilpa. Everything is fine.

Shilpa: I don't think so Armaan. Pls tell me.
Armaan: Trust me Shilpa. Everything is fine.
Shilpa: R u sure?

Armaan: ya.

Shilpa decided to not to ask him further though she was not fully conveinced with his answer but she thinks that she'll ask him later wen he'll be in good mood.
Armaan: By d way Shilpa u wanted to say something to me.
Shilpa: o ya. Actually Dr. Kirti has said to me to convey u her msg. We have to leave for Lonavala Orphanage tomorrow for d regular check-ups of children over dere.
Armaan: We?

Shilpa: ya. U nd Me.
Armaan smiled after listening dis. He was happy that he was going out wid Shilpa. Shilpa notices his smile.
Shilpa: Armaan agar mujhe pata hota ki outing ki baat se tum itna khush ho jayoge to maon Dr. Kirti se pehle hi keh deti is trip k liye.

Armaan: Really Shilpa! My smile matters to u so much?

Shilpa: ofcourse Armaan. Nd nw dnt ask me y because u knw d reason.
Armaan: ya I knw. Acha I will pick u tomorrow from ur Home okay.
Shilpa: okay.
Armaan: acha nw I m going for rounds. Bye.
Shilpa: bye.
By saying dis Armaan left from dere. Shilpa dnt know y but she felt happy after seeing him smile.
Shilpa(to herself): Thank god finally he smiles. But y does it matters to me so much. Y I couldn't able to see him in worry. Stupid! Because he's ur friend no best friend.
By saying dis she also headed towards general ward.
*************************************************
2 days have been passed by. It was 9:00 am in d morning. Shilpa was out of town nd she was supposed to come back next day. It was Geet's off day from office. Maan has just came out from Shower nd getting ready for his breakfast wen he heard his cell phone ringing. He was happy to see Geet's name on it.
Maan: wat a start of my Morning! Nothing could be more pleasant then hearing her voice. (he picked up d call).
Maan: Hello!

Geet (worried): Maan!

Maan: Geet wats wrong? Y r u sounding so worried.
Geet: maan m in gr8 problem. Pls help me out. Can u pls come rite nw to outhouse (she was almost in tears).
Maan: Geet...... Geet dnt cry nd dnt worry I m coming rite nw. ok. Pls stop worrying.

Geet: ok Maan! Come soon.

She hangs up d call. Maan couldn't even imagine her in trouble. He quickly rushes towards outhouse. Savitri Devi tried to stop him for breakfast but he said dat there is an urgency. He can't stop nd started heading towards outhouse. Savitri Devi Shakes his head nd thought that he'll never change.
On d way Maan was just praying that dere must not be a big trouble,

Maan(to himself): oh god! Pls help her. I can't see her in trouble. I hope d problemn is not that big. Geet dnt worry I m coming.


Precap:

Maan cames to know what the problem is. Armaan tells Shilpa about his past.


hey guys hope u all like dis part forgive me if i couldn't able to lived up to ur expectations. I'll PM every1 tomorrow because rite nw i have to rush somewhere. pls hit d like button if u all like it. nd do leave ur comment/criticism.

Luv Aakriti
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Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hiii Akriti🤗

awesome update👏
Loveddddddddd itttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttttt😳😳😳😳
u written it beautifully😊😊😊
beautiful song selection 😊😊n lovely imagination😳😳😳
loved Maaneet and Arsh scene😳😳😳😳
eagerly w8ng for next part😊
pllllssssssss cont soon

Luv
Naina🤗

Edited by Kool_Naina - 14 years ago

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