ff(maneet)Cause we Hate each other updt 48 note 54

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

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Posted: 14 years ago

#271

Geet drove him to her house without uttering a word to him. Tears were flowing from her eyes. Maan was staring at her. He forwarded his hand to wipe her tears but her glare stopped him.

She tugged her with her in house. Indicating him to sit on couch, she went to bring first aid box.

Maan sat. she came back sat beside him & started cleaning his wounds. Maan stiffens as she cleans his head wound. Geet leans & blows air on the wound.

Her eyes were full with tears.

Geet: dard ho raha hai? She asked concernly.

Maan: mujhe ya tumhe? Maan asked looking directly in her eyes.

Geet lowered her eyes & stopped blowing air.

Maan:" ouch. Tht hurts." Maan teased her.

"Accha..gud aur lo" saying so she starts beating him on his arm.

"geet, kya kar rahi ho?" maan tried to catch hold of her hands. But she was fast.

Maan somehow catch hold of her & leans to her pinning her in couch. Their eyes met & gazed locked. They were in a kissable position. Maan tugged her hair behind her ears. Geet closes her eyes.

Then maan realizes what he was doing. He sat up from geet. They were embarrassed.

Geet took the box & went to put it on right place.

Geet's phone rang snapping out her from trance. She picked up the phone.

Geet: hello.

Pinky: tu kaha hai?

Geet: ghar pe kyu?

Pari: abhi tak ghar pe!

Geet: ghar pe nehi toh merlion ki mouth pe rahungi kya?

Pinky: aree yaar chillati kayko? Hum to tera wait kar rahe hai.

Geet: kyu? Meri bina raat nehi hogi kya?

Geet was really pissed off.

Pari: tera mood kyu kharab hai? Accha chor. Adhe ghante mein aa ja.

Geet : kyu ? adhe ghante mein kya teri shaadi hai? Congrates.

Pinky: iski shaadi hogi bhi nehi kya pata…ouch..pari…

Pari: madam, its Halloween night. Party. Remember?

Geet: oh….i'm not coming. Goodbye & have fun.

PP: u have to come babes. U promised.

Geet: really. But I don't remember.

PP : geet jaldi se aaja. Aaj dhamaka hone wala hai.

Who to meri dill mein ho raha hai, geet murmured to herself.

PP: hello, geet..u dere? Listen come fast. We need u here Now.

Uff ye now ka baccha picha nehi chorta, she groaned.

Geet: ok. I'm coming.

Geet hang up the phone. She turns & saw maan few inches away from her.

Geet steps back in shock.

Geet: tum

Maan: haan, main….tumhe kya laga?

Geet: kuch bhi nehi.

"Party hai. I'm going. Tumhe bhi to jaana hai na. go & change.actually aise hi chale jao. Bhoot lagoge." Geet mocked him & starts to pass him.

He grabs her wrist & pulls her close.

Maan: not until u answer my questions.

Geet: what questions?

Maan: geet, why did u took such a drastic step? U put ur own pride at stake only for me?

Geet: tumne kya kiya? Tumne bhi apni jaan dao pe laga diya. Only to punish dev. Do u realize, agar tumhe kuch ho jaata toh….

She stops.

Maan: toh

Geet: I wouldn't be able to forgive myself.

Saying so she ran to her room & closes the door.

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precap: let the fun begain😉

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i will update in a while....the most awaited part....😉

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Sweta

@crazy_sweta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#272

yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzz update can't wait

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

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Posted: 14 years ago

#273

i'm on my way......wrote half.....will update in a while....

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wajiha-1

@wajiha-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#274

awsesome
excellent update
precap😳
waiting for next one

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Pratima Singh

@Rocks.Dhara

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#275

Originally posted by: _maan_
i'm on my way......wrote half.....will update in a while....

I love ur FF a lot......i read the update and it was awesome ....can't wait for next one as precap is very exciting.......pls pls pls include me in ur PM list..........and pls update soon.😊

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#276

Geet entered the hall. Hall was decorated nicely.

Geet: waah..kya bhutiya place hai.

PP came & tried to scare her.

Geet: oh…please u scary pple stay away from me.

She said giving a fake scared look.

Adi: my dear princess, u shall have to be very carefull cause any demons will try to steal you

Adi said in style taking geet's hand & giving a peck.

Geet was dresses in a long gothic black gown. She was looking like a princess.

Geet: adi, flirt band kar. Pinky churail kha jayegi.

They all laughed. Geet was looking for maan. Ye larke toh larkiyo se bhi jyada time leta hai.

Pari: geet pata hai..

Geet: kit u pari hai?

Pari: geet !! main toh maan ki baat kar rahi hu.

Geet: maan?

She looked interested.

Pari: dreamy is looking dreamy…he is the gothic prince. & tajjub ki baat ye hai tht u r the gothic princess.

Geet felt her cheeks going red.

Geet: chor…meri idea chori kiya hai isne.

Maan: r u talking about me?

Geet turned & found maan standing arm crossed .

Geet lost her voice seeing him. He was actually looking Adonis. Black was complimenting him. He was looking like an land lord. Land lord of her heart.

On the other hand, maan was lost in her. She compliment the word beautifull. She was looking like an angel dressed in darkness of the night.

"see I told u na…he is looking dreamy" pari whispered in geets ears enough to come her to sense.

Maan , adi & yuvi group hugged. Maan was continuesly looking at her.

Yuvi: dude, u have to be carefull tonight. Very careful.

Maan: why?

Yuvi: girls…dude naughty hottie girls.

Pari: ahemm…ahemm…

Yuvi: sorry.

All went to get some drinks. While walking geet dashed into someone.

Geet: srry. I didn't see u coming.

Guy: its ok young lady. Btw, I'm rahul. & u r?

Geet: & I'm seriously not interested. Excuse u.

Saying so, she went to PP. they start to dance.

Samera,tasha & sasha at bar.

Samera: today maan will be mine. Only mine. Tasha?

Tasha: yes samera.

Tasha mixed some drugs in a drink.

Sasha handed the drink to waiter & asked him to give this to maan only.

Waiter gave the drinks to maan. Maan was thirsty so didn't mind.

He drank the whole drink.

Rahul mixed something in a soft drink. He handed this drink to a girl.

Girl went to geet & offered her drink. Geet accepted the drink & drank.

She felt unusual. Her mind was not working. She saw maan on the bar.

Maan was struggling with him. His hormones were out of control. Samera came near him & asked for a dance. They both went to dance floor. Samera was dancing closely.

Geet came to bar. She was trembling. She saw them dancing. Anger shoot down to her spine. She gulped a drink. Rahul was watching her from a corner.

rahul: geet…u deserve it babes for putting my bro behind jail. Tonight u will pay for what u did.

Maan was feeling strange. He seemed out of control. He was geet drinking. He went upto her & sat beside her. Geet looked at him then turned away.

"stay away maan, u sting" geet said. She was out of her sense. Drug was affecting her.

Maan came closer to her. "I wont"

Geet: go & dance with that samera.

Maan: nehi…mujhe meri geet partner ki saath dance karma hai.

His drugs were affecting too.

Geet turned to him "sacchi?" her face lightens up.

Maan nods his hand & give her his hand. Geet takes it happily

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next one in a few minutes....adult contain so....i have to put a warning...😉😳

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Audiwalia

@Audiwalia

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Posted: 14 years ago

#277

U r so bad u know dat...!!!lolzz..... I've been litterlly waiting nd my mom is yelling at me now....... Plz update soon

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wajiha-1

@wajiha-1

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Posted: 14 years ago

#278

awesome excellent update
waiting for precap😉
continue soon

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despicable_me

@despicable_me

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#279

----Statutory Warning in place --17 and over only----

They moved on the dance floor and started dancing.

I know you've suffered but I don't want you to hide

It's cold in lovers; I won't let u be denied,
The soon then, I'll make u feel pure
And trust me, you can be sure

I want to reconcile the violence in your heart
I want to recognize your beauty is not just a mask
I want to exorcise the demons from your past
I want to satisfy the undisclosed desires in your heart

you trick your lovers that you're wicked and divine,
you may be a sinner, but your innocence is mine

Please me
Show me how it's done
Tease me
You are the one

I want to reconcile the violence in your heart
I want to recognize your beauty is not just a mask
I want to exorcise the demons from your past
I want to satisfy the undisclosed desires in your heart

Please me
Show me how it's done
Trust me you are the one

I want to reconcile the violence in your heart
I want to recognize your beauty is not just a mask
I want to exorcise the demons from your past
I want to satisfy the undisclosed desires in your heart

geet stayed very close, touching maan occasionally, dancing very erotic. they moved closer to pinky and adi. It seemed that geet was up to something but maan didn't knew what nor did he care' dancing with geet was great and I just wanted to enjoy this experience. geet didn't only get them closer to pinky but she also danced much closer to him, contact wasn't occasionally anymore but constant and he felt how hard I got'

Geet started to embrace him, maan felt her breath on his neck and the bulge in his pant pressing against her body. While dancing even closer, while feeling his erection growing, her lips touched his ears' some air was blown over his skin, it felt like electricity. Soon she started bitting and moaning softly in his ear while he had the feeling that an orkan was storming through his body and that his manhood would rip the pant apart. The lack of space was uncomfortable but this strong erotic feeling' he didn't want to miss this, didn't want to stop.

The light dimmed. No one could see them.

The song stopped and geet used the short break to look in his eyes. maan felt electrified and had the urge to kiss her. However, the decision was taken from him' geet kissed him softly' he looked again in her eyes and this time it wasn't a soft kiss but they locked their mouths, their tongues played with each other. ages passed' they don't know how long they kissed but geet broke the kiss.

he felt her arms around me, her soft kiss against his throat and than she broke contact.

She was like coming to her sense. She rushed to the bar.

Maan couldn't find geet. He was confused with his own feelings.

Rahul came near geet & droped a drink on her dress.

Rahul : I'm so sorry. I spoiled ur dress.

Geet: kamine tu'ill-luck kahika'aab main aise kaise rahungi?

Rahul: if u don't mind u can use my room to fresh.

Geet: ok'.khote de puttar'chabi la'

Geet snatched the keys from his hand & went upstairs.

Rahul: now geet. U'll get most lovable fun of ur life. When I'll use u as my slave.

Saying so he went to get a drink.

Maan hears him talking. He was not in sense but could sense that geet was in trouble.

Maan looked for her everywhere. He then found her entering a room. He hurried & grasped her hand.

He entered a room pulling geet with him.

geet : kya hai maan?

Maan: what was u doing with that guy?

Geet : main job hi karu tumhe kya?

Maan pulled her close & pushed her on a wall.

Maan: geet r u out of ur mind?

Geet: maan r u alright?

Geet chukled causing maan angrier.

Geet came near him. Seducing him. Maan got scared. Scared tht he'll get carried away.

Geet: haha. Maan darr gaye.

Maan: main nehi darr ta. Samjhi tum?

"Maan larkiyo se darta hai'.".geet was jumping.

Geet: darpok maan

Maan: shut up geet.

Geet: darpok'darpok

Maan: shut up geet varna..

Maan warned her.

"Maan is a'."

But she couldn't finish her line. Maan took geets mouth.

He pushed her on the wall. Pinned her hand & started kissing her like a hungry man.

Geet was taken aback. But she started kissing him back.

Her hand captured his neck. Pushing him more to her.

Maan caressed her back with his free hand. He pulled her dress's strap. He nuzzles her neck thn again returned to her mouth.

Geet pulled off his shirt & pushed his vest up, they had to break their kiss so she could push it over my head. She pushed him a bit back and opened the buttons of his pant, pushing them together with his boxers down. She dropped down on her knees and he felt the soft touch of her lips' it was so exciting, he though it was a dream and suddenly he would wake up alone in bed.

Maan carried her in his arms . laid her carefully in bed.

maan hugged her, and undid her dress. he slowly undid each of the buttons on her gown.he ripped her dress. Thn he took her bare breast in his hand and grabbed and it and tugged and it almost hurt but at the same time it felt so good. This turned geet on so much she lifted up his head to her and began to make out with him.

His lips move to her neck and make their way down to in between her breasts. His hands move underneath her and pushed her into him.

Maan mounted her. He entered geet. Geet moaned. She was in pain too.

he thrust. geet screamed in pain. tears starts flowing frm her eyes.

He leans down and kisses her with such urgency,she lead him in again. This time it does not hurt much. It was starting to feel magical. He recognizes this, and starts penetrating faster and faster. His arms around her and kissing her face and neck.

they were in heaven. geet felt complete with maan's every thrust.

Atlast they were heading at climax. And it came. Maan laid on geet exhausted and breathing hard. Both collapsed & relaxed on each other.

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precap: next morning 😲

done......now i want lamba choura comment....😉

Edited by _maan_ - 14 years ago