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Posted: 15 years ago
Maha,
Kahan ho tum??
Its a lil unusual to see you nt coming online for so many days... :|
Hope everything is fine...
Reply soon....
Luv
Shatakshi..
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Posted: 15 years ago
Maha cum back..... we miss u :(
r u sure Armaan has really not kidnapped u as Nidha di and k_anjali was saying... lol
Maha hope u r fine and dng well but do cum back soon and update.. :)
Preet <3
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: k_anjali12

ATTENTION!!!EVERYONE!!!


I KNOW .. I know u guys r all damn waiting to read Maha's ff .. Actually the problem is .. SHE is kidnapped.Dnt believe me ???? .. SOURCES R SAYING LIKE : She is kidnapped by none other than Armaan Malik .. The Special officer whom Maha introduced in her ff ..

CAUSE : AS she is trying to destroy his lover boy image to : at first as a Kidnapper n now .. as an officer who treats his clients sooo badly .

IF ANYONE FOUND HER .. PLEASEE INFORM TO HER FRIENDS ON IF .. ALL R REALLY REALLY PRAYING FOR HER WELL BEING ...

WE ALL LOVE U MAHA .. WE MISS U

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Hmmm
Yeh to Hona hi Tha 😆😆😆😆
Ab aise Character Par Gussa hi aayega na Yaar !!
Well Maha jab return aa jayegi Tab Armaan ki Lover Boy image Justify Zarur Karegi
But Please Usko aane to Dou !!

Maha Come Back Soon !!
We Alll Love u alot n miss u😭😭

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: nidha1983

If some got any information about Maha plz inform us. Who ever give information about her get reward worth Rs.1 cr from us.......



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Whoaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa !!😆😆😆😆😆😆






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Posted: 15 years ago



GUSSA !!! Never yaa .. I can never get angry on her .... haan
haan' .. Maha even feels like that 😆 (but thats my way with my loved ones .. baki sab ke saath yei sab nahi karsakthi na' 😊) its just 'm worried about our friend n waise .. 'm happy with this angry Armaan only .. I like that change in him 😃

n about Maha .................. wheree r uuuuuuuuuuuuuu ... 😭😭 ..

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hima ROOFFLL , you know i when i was reading i was like :O WHAT she has been kiddnaappedd , and then i read by Armi LOL :P
hehe seriously yaar where is sheee :'((((
Kahaann hoo Mahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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Posted: 15 years ago
HAI GUYS

THIS TIME I'M REALLY SERIOUS SERIOUS .. PROMISE

ITS MAHA'S MSG FOR U ALL

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hey guys,
i m actually stealing my neigbhour internet by wlan. So i want to inform dat my internet is cut of bcoz the one dat is supplied at my home is disconnectd by the labour as managment of my internet is not fululling their wishes

totally filmy but dats true,
i dont know how long i can steal this wireless lan of neighbour but i wanna tell tht dis mite take i dont how long

plzzz do wait for me nd for my ff

ps: dont forget to curse managment of internet'


i will try to reply all once i get back promsie
i m good nd healthy...
Love you
maha


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Posted: 15 years ago
oh ..hope internet problem gets solved soonnn

update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: RaatkiRani




It is sweet of you to write a fanfiction, but your sentence structure and grammar need a lot of work. You are using words unnecessarily and so half the sentence makes sense.

I am not saying this to be mean. I genuinely regard people who make an effort to write. All I am saying is - keep at it, and get someone to edit it before you put it online!




Sorry to say dear .. I'm as a regular reader of ffs can say that .. As a writer she is doing excellent work .. agree there r some grammatical mistakes .. who dnt do it .. its not like writers have only work to write ffs .. they also hve to do their own issues .. n in regard to all this this .. she is doing her best to give the regular updates..most probably . n she is even mentioning her cause of not editing.

n moreover she is not a new writer .. she is in this section from the past year n writter of no.of ffs n OS .. n everyone appreciates her work to the most ....
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n about sentence fulfilling .. its against IF rules to use the inapp. words.. thats why the writers leave the lines in middle .. n she is not the exception.

JUST thought to say that .. as a regular reader .. I DNT hve any problem with this writer n I really appreciate her for her contribution to IF .

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Edited by k_anjali12 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Ok here is the part
i won't be a regular updater till my internet get working, i am updating this on after purchasing two hours internet and dat to on mobile, which is ultimately conected to mobile.
I hope the fight ends soon and my internet gets working again, till then u have too wait, all of you.Updating on hima's insistance. !
I read ALL the comments, and you all r crazy! who can kidnap me ! seriously you people r crazy i feel like coming to your place beat the hell outta ya !😆, esp Hima - Nidha di( i can't beat you,.... u elder than me 😕, so you r excluded) and that Pagal Salman !!😛😛😛
and yes, telling again - update won't be soon - i don't have money to buy internet ....😆 wait for the roits to get over
For the time being read this
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PART 5

10:00 PM, The moon glowed.

There was a shriek which Made Riddimaa and Rahul look around. "who would it be?" Rahul stood up. Pulled his shot pocket gun from his back, "You! one move and I shot you dead" Rahul pointed at her. She meekly nodded and settled properly on couch. Rahul turned to go out with his gun aimed at door, when the door apart and the driver – constable Raghu fell with bullets fired up on his back. He was dead, with blood oozing out.

"RAGHU!" Rahul ran while Riddimaa stood up with shock, her hand reached up to her lips "Omg.." she mumbled. Soon Rahul ran out to see – the four faced covered man walked in with guns.

"don't move or I will shoot you" One of them aimed Rahul.

"Kon hou tum log?" Riddimaa shrugged as one of them took hold of her arm "Chalo" she heard a voice boom from inside the mask, as the one of them asked her to come along. "Nahi... chodo mujha..." Riddima winced and kept on dragging her self-back "Dheko..." another man tried to talk. Riddimaa fell on floor and pull herself back

"I won't go.... leave me... ! Chodoo" one of the angry one walked and slapped her across the face. Making her fell on couch

Shoot Shoot SHOot. Shoot.

Arman and Atul aimed and killed the two of them. Rahul gaining the situation killed the other two who were near Riddimaa.Riddimaa on the other hand, placed her palm over her ear, and shouted in terror. The three Stood with burn in their eyes – looking at 5 lifeless bodies. Riddimaa soon closed her mouth when the voice of gun stopped; her hairs were all wandered over her face and her head moved down on her lap with hurt – pain.

"I Can't believe IT ! We Have TO GET OUT of Here NOW!" Arman's voice boomed very closely in Riddimaa mind, it hurt her more, the shouts were paining her ear drums along with her brain. He walked up to her pulling her by her arm, she winced as his finger burn her arm in pain.

"uhm... You." Arman stopped as he saw a innocent face with blood oozing out from the corner of her lips and her cheek had started to get purple and red with pain. Well whose cheek won't hurt after getting three slap's in a day and that to from a muscled – hard core men.

Leaving her arm at once he saw her falling on ground as her body was tired and she was getting more weaker in a period of 1 day. With tears, she sobbed "Rahul... we need to get out of here. Inform chief to look up to these bodies." Arman turned his back to Riddimaa, who cried a bit loudly that really made the three look at her with sympathy.

Ignoring her, yet again with heavy heart, Arman grabbed the keys and her arm, pulling her up from the ground... tolling out of the house. Rahul and Atul made some call while walking behind them.

"Did... you met my Father?" she hold up the courage in her throat and asked to which Arman looked at her angrily, as if that was his reply.

"Bring the cloths and tie her... I don't want to hear her voice anymore!" Arman blasted on Atul's face. Glaring back at her as he spoke to Atul – she looked in his eyes with pain – and hurt. He pushed her on the front seat making her break the trance.

Atul walk up to her to tie her when she meekly, faintly smiled and look down at floor, she turned her back as him while sitting in the car and joined her hand behind her back as she allowed him to tie her.

He felt bad but did as he was told to do. Placing a cloth around her lips, he saw blood stain on her lips. "Arman, she is hurt how should I tie her?" Atul exclaimed.

"why are you being so... soft haan? Liking her? Is love blossoming up? What ? Gonna dump Anjali for her" Arman blasted at him, to which Atul glared back in anger and Riddimaa passed a disgusted look.

"Arman you are bas***d." Atul spitted on floor and went forward to tie her.

"you..." Arman move forward to get even with Atul when Rahul hold him back.

"Leave it here. Please we have to rush before anything else happen." Rahul spoke. ARman shudder his hands away in anger

"I will drive." Arman mumbled. Atul harmlessly tied her even her eyes. "Just relax ok" he whispered to which Riddimaa nodded and pulled her legs inside the car, while Atul closed the door, sitting behind with Rahul the Car rushed on road.

After few hours,

Sniff ... Sniff. Her head touched the back of her seat. Her chest kept on jumping up after quite intervals. His eyes turned towards her, while driving. Rahul and Atul had fallen into a nap. He licked the corner of his lips, moving his eyes on her face - he saw tear rushing down from her cheek.

"Turn..." Arman spoke "Turn your back at me... hurry up turn around !" he spoke again. She did as she was told to, with one hand on wheel steering, He Snapped the knot and pulled the cloth of her hands. She relaxed and brought her body back to its place on seat rubbing her wrist, she felt his warm fingers brushing her face, he pulled the cloth away from her eyes. She moved back in her seat away from his hands, when he moved forward to take the cloth away from her lips. She moved back, even more.

He cocked his one eye brow at her to see her looking at him with fear. "I won't hit you. Relax" he spoke and tried to pull the cloth of her mouth, when she hit his hand away and pulled the cloth out, herself.

Arman ragged in anger ' How dare she hit me... as if that hurt me?' he thought with chuckle. She looked at him err glared at him and at his chuckle.

"You angry at me..?" he teased to get more of silent glare.

She tried to open the window. "No..!" Arman said. "I want to get fresh air..." Riddimaa spoke

"DO you want me to tie that mouth of yours AGain?" his eyes fired up on hers again. She meekly replied in No.

"Good. Then settle down quietly." Arman replied and concentrated on driving.

After few more hours they reached destination.

He placed his hand on Horn. "What the F......" Atul quieten, as he saw Riddimaa staring at him, turning her head back at them.

"Sorry about that" Atul apologize to Riddimaa for curtsey sake. To which Rahul cocked his eye brows and so did Arman.

"What? She is a Woman..! We should be in our limits while speaking or doing anything!" He retorted "Unlike you too - i don't hit innocent victims." Actual added and strolled out of the car. Looking at their new house or hide out. Arman and Rahul pass a look to Riddimaa and soon the very second, all three of them came out without a word.

"I wanted to know..." Riddimaa started

"Tum phir boli...?" Arman walk up to her.

"Par Kyun naa Bolun? Kya HAI HAAN???" She shouted her lungs out. Arman moved a step back at her out burst right over his face

"KAb sa...? i have been ASKING you! WHAT HAPPENED? WHERE WAS MY FATHER? WHAT DID YOU GUYS TALKED TO HIM... But no... I will tie you up ... i will tie. you.. ! as if you could hurt me any more than you already have !!!" she sighed and walked up to Rahul, Clutching his collar in her fist pulling him down to her level.

"I AM NOT SCARED ANY MORE KILL ME. RIGHT NOW!" she shouted over his face, who jerked himself away and placed fingers in his ear. "Humph" she stomped her feet and walked in the house.

"Lol... she should get a pat on her back... Finally Arman and Rahul, someone actually and That too a Girl insult you both on your bloody sickening faces" Atul laughed loudly and ran in the house as Arman moved forward to hit him.

"Teri tou..." . Arman and Rahul looked at each other and shared a chuckle.

"we been hard on are ? ain't we?" Rahul asked walking towards the house. "I guess so..." Arman stepped with him towards the house pulling his hand in his jeans....

to be conti....
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Hope this part makes you happy...

Maha😳
Edited by Hello_01 - 15 years ago

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