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Posted: 15 years ago
before you read the update, i have to ask a favour 4om you guyz which, i have a cusion lives in london, and he has a great voice, and sings songs, he sang alehendro (lady gaga) in his own version which was a huge hit on youtube, nw he has sang conceptual love, which is out on itunes and youtube and almost eveywhere so guyz plz listen to it... and do comment and wen u comment on youtube rite source 4om momina... and i have to warn you guyz... my cuzion is a total GEEK, yes u read that rite he is a geek and before you guyz start thinking im sumthing like him... it is not true... we both mayb related but are totaly different personality!!! nways you guyz dont reali have to watch the vidoe if you dont want too... bt i would reali appercaite if you would... it would reali bost my cuzions sprit... he even particpated in x-factor infornt of simon and did go up to three rounds bt then got elimated cuz of the tough compitation
anways much much to do here is the link https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dxVZBsiIm5s hope u guyz like it and here is the UPDATE and yea i would onces again say... we are related bt are totaly different personalitys!!!😉 plz u guyz dont believe me, i can show you my fb pictures for sumthing😆😆 just saying!!!😳
PART 22
OKAY GUYZ GET READY FOR A BIG UPDATE!

recap: geet thinks: i have to sumhow avoid going, as i dont wana see maan

maan thinks: this will be a gr8 chance to talk to geet, to make her understand how i feel, to say the truth and nuthing by the turth.....

pinky: so telme how was ur stay at one the most xciting cruises of all times?

geet: its was realii gud and fun

pinky: gud and fun.. bas?

geet: well yea we had to work... and i got the waitress job...

pinky starts laughing waitress??

geet: pinky, plzz

pinky: okay okay fi9, so did u meet any hot guy??? HMMM telme

as geet herd hot guy onli maan's face passed b4 her eyes

geet: nhai, kuch nhai

pinky: oh ho, geet tum bhi na, agar main gayi hoti toh maine jur kisse hoti ko doodh layna ta!

geet: kya?? likan dev?

pinky laughs: arey im jking, gosh tum bhi serouis ho jati ho, nways how about u rest for a while and then i will wake u up wen its time for the meet up wid the gang!

geet: yea abou the meet up, i may nt go, as i have a headache

pinky: dats why im saying u go to sleep for a while and then i will wake u up... and till den i will be wid dev-- pinky blinks at geet turns da lites off shuts the curtain so geet wouldnt be ditrubed by the sun and goes away

geet thinks: i have to get out of this... likan kasey, main kay bahana banu?? bt i guess i cant adviod maan all my llife... toh phir should i go... likan agar maan ne sub kay samney kuch kha deya phir?

maan on the other hand was happy about seeing geet... and had dicided he will make geet believe dat he reali reali loves her, and maan even had a plan for dat!

geet thinks: toh phir main nhai jaon gi... finally, bt wot do i say?

geet lost in her thougth, arguing with herself doesnt relazie but it is time for the meeting up and pinky comes in

pinky: are you sitting the way i left you?

geet: yes... i mean no i just got up

pinky: great lets get ready....

geet: ummm, woh pinky

pinky: is there a problem?

geet: haan... nhai, i just dont feel like going

pinky: what are you saying... have you lost it, it has been so long scine we all have hanged out together, so I won't take a no for an answer... got dat? now cum on get ready already!

geet gets up to get ready and prays for the best and gets ready into jeans and a pink coloured tang top wid a black coloured easy jacket(so she doesnt have to take it off)

while maan and dev get ready into jeans and t-shirt looking cool as posible, adi shows up

adi ah-ha-ha: you guyz look gr8

maan and dev look at adi who is wearin a black dress pant with white dress shirt and his big black framed glasses

maan: look adi if you hang with us den u will have to change your clothes

adi: change?

dev: yea how about you wear something of what i own or maan, come here i will show you

dev give clothes to adi making him look cool

geet, pinky and neha meet up downstairs waiting for the boys to come

the boys cum down,

geet is nervous, pinky is veri happy, and neha is getting a love swing 4om maan to adi!

dev: chalay?

pinky and hold hands and walk inthe fornt while adi and neha have a convo, followed by geet and rite behind geet it is maan!

maan: geet, plz sonu

geet moves up to where pinky and dev are stand in between them, dev gives a sad look to pinky, bt pinky just smiles it off

soon they all enter the club 102 and sit in a round table... which sumthing looks like this dev, pinky, geet, adi, maan, neha and again back to dev

dev: this club is really good

pinky: yea, but it is quite far from our uni

adi ah-ha-ha: this is the frist time I m in a club like this one

maan: and please dont make it last by laughing like that

ever1 laugh at other maan notices geet who is sligthy smiling

pinky: oh maan tum bhi na

maan: kya it is true...isnt it?

pinky: yea he may be the loser among us, but the really loser and the most boring person is geet

maan: geet - maan looks at her

pinky: yea, you guyz now, she was not willing to come here, just becuz she didnt feel like it

geet: no, it is nothing like that, i was just tried after the cruise

neha: and yea you now pinky, geet even missed the last lunch at the cruise, and when the teacher said we are going to two day earlier geet was happy about that, while the rest of us were sad

pinky: gosh geet, wots worng wid ya???

geet: arey kuch nhai, wot matters is dat im here rite, and nw enough about me you tell us pinky and dev how was your 3days without us

pinky: romantic-- pinky starts to tell everone what they did while maan thinks: all these things can only mean one one thing which is that geet is advioding me, where ever i am, she doesnt want to go thier, likan geet maney maana ka mujse galti hogi thi, likan kya geet mujhai khabhi bhi nhai maaf kar gi?

dev: okay okay guys, in short words we had alot of fun without you guyz

neha: hey thats mean

pinky: no we did have fun, but we also had missed you guyz alot!

geet: so sweet

dev: okay if the sweetness is done, ms. pinky would you like you dance with me?

pinky nods her head and devky leave

neha: cum maan lets go and dance

maan: no i dont feel like it

neha: but i feel like dancing then take adi

geet: nhai nhai, i want to dance with adi

adi ah-ha-ha: i have had never two girls fite on me, bt ladies the problem is i dont now how to dance

maan: oh then geet can dance with you- maan was reali angryy

geet: kyun?

maan: cuz incase you have forgotten but you dont nw how to dance either

geet remebers the time wen she had danced with maan, and gets a teary eye and maan sees that

neha: well then that settles it, adi doesnt nw how to dance i will teach him and maan you can dance with geet and teach her

saying that neha takes adis hand and goes to the dancefloor leaving maaneet alone

maan: toh chalay

geet doesnt say anything

maan: look geet, plz just listen to me, i want-

geet gets up: i dont want to listen you, eik dafa sona ta na... cruise pay... ab nhai

maan gets up as well: but please give me a chance, I can prove myself

geet: maan just please, please leave me alone i pled

geet again gets teary eye and goes out of the club followed by maan

maan: geet please mat roh, give me a chance, i promise i can make it up to you

geet doesn listen and walks maan reaches upto her and holds her wirst

maan: kya tum mujhai khabhi bhi nhai dekhna chati hoon apne zindagi main??

geet doesnt answer

maan: telme if you dont then i will go away form here, for good

geet: kya mutlab?

maan: i will end my life just for you, so can you live peacefully

geet: just shut up, i should have ended my life, over you, after what you did, but i didnt do that becuase i knw dats sumthing the corwards do, and out of all the people I would last think that the GREAT MR. MSK will end his life like a corward

maan: but just for you, i... is there anyway we can start over again, from the start, and not rembering anything that happened in between us before... PLZ

geet shoved her hand out of maans hand: you think it is that easy to foget what happened? HUH

maan: i knw it is not easy but we... i mean you can try please,

geet was abou to say something wen maan cut her off

maan: and you dont have to answer me rigth nw, i can wait for your answer, my whole if you ask...

geet was stunned

maan: cum abhi kay liya under chal ta hai, b4 the guyz find us missing

this time maan walked ahead and geet followed him into the club, they both went and sat down, maan put his eyes in geet and was not moving... geet on and off looked at maan who was staring at her, she felt akward but still was relaxed, she felt secure ones again wid him

geet thinks: yeh kasey assah(feeling) ho jo main phir se feel kar rahi hoon, does maan reali mean it this time, likan woteva he said to me, he is still dating neha... toh iska kya mutlub ho sakta hai?

maan: i knew it

geet looked at maan who for a change was looking at the dancefloor geet turned her head around and saw neha and adi kissing

maan smriked: mujhai pata ta, 4om the time in the cruise neha aur adi ka beech main kuch jaur ho hara tha...

geet just looks at maan stunned and thinks: well dat solves the neha problem... likan i still have to sure b4 i can trust maan again

maan is still staring adi and neha making out wen adi looks at maan and lets go of maan gf's lips

adi: neha... maan?

neha: i will talk to him...

nedi(neha and adi) go and talk to maan where he is siting

maan: congrats guyz!

nedi are shocked...

adi ah-ha-ha: thanks man, i knew i werent bad...and for you geet im sori, likan mujhai neha pasand hai

geet looks at him confused: kya mutlub

neha: mutlub yehi kay... me and adi nw dat u have been crushing on adi for a long time... so geet plz no hard feelings

maan starts laughing

geet thinks: maan ko jalaney ki liya i would be by adi, bt i neva though that, it would give worng singals to adi

maan is still laughin

geet is mad and embrassed

nedi are confused!

adi ah-ha-ha: wots so funny?

maan: nhai nhai kuch nahi, u guyz go and dance... and have fun

neha: geet u sure koi hard feeling toh nhai hai

geet smiles: offcourse not... njoy

nedi go back and start dancing!

maan is lookin at geet who has turned red cuz of anger and embrassment

maan: koi baat nhai geet... no need to be embrassed or angry...

geet looks at maan who is staring her again

geet: i am not mad nor embrassed, i m just feelin hot

maan laughs again: the a.c and spilts are on... just admit it

geet: no im reali feeling hot

geet takes of her jacket... and for the 1st time he sees geet in a tank top

maan: wow.. tum wakey main hot ho...

geet looks at him... fusterated, geet was so mad and embrassed she forgot she was wearing a tank underneath which had a low v neck to it

devky and nedi cum, cum guyz... cum and dance

pinky: we all nw, you guyz have issues but still, all of us 6friends dancing together will be fun... so plz cumm

neha and pinky take geet to the dancefloor while maan cums wid adi and dev

adi goes to neha

dev to pinky

and

maan happyly goes to geet!

maan holds geets hand starts singing (im preaty sure u guyz have listened to this song before, as it is 4om the famous movie khabhi kushi khabhi ghum.. your are my sonia)!

maan:

Dekha tumko jab se, bas dekha tumko yaara, Tumse koi achha hai na tumse koi pyaara,

geet truns around, bt maan is still holding her hand

maan:

Yun nazre na phero tum, mere ho mere tum

adi:

She's what I want, she's what I love She's sent to me from the heaven above She's so cool, she's so fine Out of ten I'd give her nine --

maan spins geet around and start dancing, as well nedi and devky

dev:

Keh do na, keh do na, you are my soniya, keh do na, keh do na, you are my soniya

pinky:

Keh diya, keh diya, you are my soniya

maan:

Teri mohabbat mein yeh dil deewana hai, Is mein hai meri kya khataa ?

maan wants geet to reply likan neha replys to adi

: Haan, yeh dil churaane ka achha bahaana hai, Mujhko hai pehle se pataa

adi:

Milne mein humko kitne barson lage hai yaara

neha:

Aisi khushi ke pal to phir na aaye dobaara

dev:

Aisi khushi mein yaara yeh nasha kya kam hoga

maan:

Keh do na, keh do na, you are my soniya

maan waits for geet to reply bt instead pinky replys too dev

: keh diya keh diya you are my soniya

maan:

Hey, paagal banaaya hai teri adaaon ne Mujhko to hai tera nasha

maan again waits for geet to reply bt neha replys adi instead:

Hmm, maine bhi palkon mein tumko chhupaaya hai,Tu mere khwaabon mein basa

Dev:

Betaabi kehti meri aaja baahon mein bhar loon

pinky:

Jeena hai teri hoke, milke yeh vaada kar loon

adi:

Dono ne kasmein li hai, pyaar kabhi na kam hoga One, two, three, hey!

maan to geet ones again tires his luck hopeing geet would reply him:

Keh do na, keh do na, you are my soniya

geet smiles:

Keh diya, keh diya, you are my soniya

maan is reali happy:

Dekha tumko jab se, bas dekha tumko yaara

geet:

Tumse koi achha hai na tumse koi pyaara

maan:

Hey yun nazre na phero tum, mere ho mere tum Keh do na, keh do na, you are my soniya

geet:

Keh diya, keh diya, you are my soniya, You are, you are my soniya

MAAN gets reali happy after geet has replyed him, he feels on top of the cloud

geet goes away as soon as the singing finishes, and maan is lookin for her wen he asks pinky where is geet, pinky replys she is at the bathroom

maan smiles and he goes to were the bathrooms were in the club... to wait for geet, in about 5mins geet cums out

maan in a veri x-cited tone: geet, u could have told me where u were goin, i was worried, bt anyways main aj bhoot kush hoon, bhoot bhoot bhoot kush hoon kay tum ne mujhai maaf--

geet: tum kya baat karay ho?

maan gets confused: woh tum gana gay rahi thi... mera saath dancefloor pe...

geet: woh isliya cuz i herd neha tell adi kay geet is sad dat she is nt even singing... mayb we should have given her time to tell her about our dating and adi was getting worried, and so i thot kay if i would sing it will make adi think i m over him... and im happy dats all

geet goes back to the table and sits down while maan gets sad and feels trieble

maan thinks: bt i should give her time, i should just be happy ka geet ne mujhai time dena se inkar nhai kiya

maan also goes out and sees nedi and devky still dancing while geet is back in her jacket sitting on the chair alone, maan just stares her, 4om the back 'geet kitney udass lag rahi hai, woh bhi sirf meri wajaah se...'

b4 maan talk to her devky nedi go to her haves drinks and go back to thier hostel...

Nxt Day

geet is still sleeping while pinky wakes her up

pinky: get up sleepy head its time for classes

geet: i dont feel like goin

pinky laughs: get up, aur haan aj friday hai... aur phir saturday aur sunday... hoildays

geet gets up: gosh i have already have made plans for saturday and sunday

pinky: reali wot?

geet: to do nuthing

pinky: nuthing... well dats imposible as neha's bday is this saturday... so we have to help around... oh by saying neha... im sori for wot adi did wid ya... bt just remeber one thing love can neva be one sided, love has to be from both sides... as me and dev or nw neha and adi

geet: arey... pinky tum bhi na, i dont like adi... i mean i like him bt i have neva loved him

pinky: KYA?

geet: haan pinky, adi sirf eik acha dost hai, aur kuch nhai, and i dont even nw wen adi started getting wrong singals 4om my side

pinky laughs

geet: why are you laughin?

pinky: woh is liya cuz i knew ur choice can neva be adi... i always knew your choice has to be someone like... hmmm, someone like MAAN, a total hunk

pinky gigles: i would have said dev, bt he is taken

pinky laughs again, and geet also gives a sligth smiles

pinky: okay anyway i will met u at campus today at lunch k .... dont go missing on me again...K

geet: yes ma'am!

pinky leaves geet gets ready and also leaves...

geet thinks: phir se wohi class... maan ki, gosh

geet gupls down her spits and enters and is shocked to see adi sitting wid maan on the rite side of class 'yeh kasey hogaya?"

adi: geet cum here, and sit down

geet ones again sits down where she sat on the 1st day of the class rite infornt of maan, bt at that time she didnt nw, dat the gurl beside her was neha!

adi ah-ha-ha: gosh rite side is just so much then the left side

geet: its the same... no different

maan: geet... let adi enjoy, and adi wot have i said about your laughing.. again and again

adi ah-ha-ha: sorry i will try to keep in my mind for the next time

neha: i like the way adi laughs!- neha blushes, and so does adi!!!

teacher: okay so students i have this project for you guyz where u will need to team up wid sum1, and ur project have to be of a dream house... which will be made on blue prints... which will be provided... okay nw make teams and cum and get the blue print papers...

neha: will you be my partern adi?

geet: i was thinking kay-- maan cuts her off

maan: offcourse i will be your partern geet

nedi go to the teachers

geet: i was goin to say, kay i wanted neha to be my partern

maan: kal tak toh bari perwa(care) thi nedi ki, kay you sang a song with aur ab, you are not going to make nedi a team...

geet thinks: maan ne jo khaha sahi kaha...

geet: i guess ur rite

maan: toh chalay... blue prints ka paper layna...

maanEet get the paper... and as they get the paper the bell rings

teacher: OKAY students leave ur blue prints here, we will work on them on monday till then, have a great weekend, and dont forget to wish neha happy brithday!

maaneet and nedi meet devky at thier lunch area...

adi ah-ha-ha: guyz i wana show you a place, geet and maan have been already but i wana share it with you guyz as well

adi takes ever1 to the top of the roof of the uni, all them reali like it

devky find it romatic

geet finds it quite

nedi find it romantic as well

maan is sad and thinks: cuz of me i have changed such a bubly gurls personality...

uni get over and ever1 gets up early for nehas bday,

pinky and geet decorate a hall, they rented for nehas brithday well they didnt rent it, maan onli rented it, as he was the rich one so they decided to give the money part to maan! the hall renting was sumthing neha didnt nw about...

pinky and geet were busi decoratin it...

pinky: yaar yeh adi, dev aur maan abhi tak nhai aya

dev: apne yaad kiya aur hum sara ah gaya

pinky and geet trun around to see the boys standing and gets happy

pinky: thank god u guyz are here, we reali need al the helping hands we can get

soon all of them get busi in decorating the place, devky go to one coner, while adi and maan are working in one corner and geet is working alone

maan: adi i will get sum water k

maan walks by and sees geet on the ladder puttin

up the banner, wen her feet sleeps off and she is about to hit the floor wen maan catches her in the nick of the time, geet wraps her hands around maan's neck, as she is reali scared and burrys her head in maans rite shoulder, maan just wants to stay like this foreva...

bt geet cums to her sense and looks at maan who is holding her up

geet: woh sori aur thanks

maan: dont mention it

geet looks at maan: woh mujhai neecha--

maan: oh haan

maan safely puts geet down on her feets

maan: do u wna get sum water.., or juces i look tried... juce will freshen u up...

geet think: im tried... "umm okay"

maanEet leave to get suthing to drink

geet thinks: why did i came wid him.... i shouldnt have

maan thinks: she came wid, mayb she is trying to forgive me... bt still i dont want to rush, she has all the time in the world...!

they get thier juices and maan asks if she wants any chips or anything

geet says no and both go back to decorate the hall

after sumtime they get done... and all look at the hall, it is beauitful

adi ah-ha-ha: it is lovely, we all did a wonderfull job

all of them get happy

pinky: okay here is the deal ever1 is invited at 8... so we have to make sure neha is in the hall around 8:10...

geet: yea adi can make sure of that... rite

adi ah-ha-ha: offcourse

dev: and i think the rest of us... other then adi we will all meet here around 7:45ish

maan: great idea... i was just thinking did we get neha present??

devky and geet are stunned: PRESENT?? OMG HOW would have we missed out on that...

pinky: okay lets not panic it is 2, we have pently of time to buy the gifts and met for the party...

dev: but ur so tried pinky

geet: how about i wil go and gets gifts for neha on ur guyz behalf...

pinky: wot u do dat... dat would be reali sweet

adi: how about maan u go wid her... as u reali didnt do anything here

maan: heyy, i rented the whole place

adi ah-ha-ha: great this hall can be neha's present 4om her side!

maan: gosh... i will go with geet

geet: no there is no need

maan: i said i will, which means i will goo

geet: fine, anyways you guyz telme wot u wana gift her, so i can go and get it

ever1 tells geet wot they wana gift her... and geet goes wid maan in his car and start driving

maan: so i think we can find all these gifts at sunridge mall...rite

geet nods her head

geet remebers all the time she was in maans car... thier accident, the hot songs that kept on playing

maan a force of habbait truns on his buffer the volume is to the max which makes geet jump on her seat for a sec

maan lowers down the volume: sorii

geet: koi baat nhai, i nw u like loud music

maan: and i nw u dont like loud music

geet: u dont have to care for me

geet puts the volume high

maan: i nw i dont have to care about you, bt i want too

geet doesnt say anything

i have to go will update soon

hope u guyz like it, plz do comment! and thanks alot for the pervoius comments, they reali mean alot to me so plz plz plz do comment again!!

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update!
luved it
can't wait for d party!
hope sumthing gr8 happens....
lyk geet forgived him..or atleast plans on doing soo....
update soon

luv
Navpreet
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Posted: 15 years ago
thx for pm...amazing aewsome update..continue soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow Maan winning Geets heart !! hope geet realizes it fast
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved da update
do continue
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Posted: 15 years ago
your ff is great,btw Have a Safe Journey
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Posted: 15 years ago
yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
ok ok ok ermmmmmm i duno hu to side
erm erm erm geet is right at her side but maan is trying - guess hes gta wait that lil bit more :P
cnt wait for more
P.S will check out those vids n c if i can comment on them
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Posted: 15 years ago
Tat was an amazin update plz update soon wit more maneet romance!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome update............loved it.......waiting for them go become one again.....plzz update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved the update............great update...as always

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