New Mayur ff: in luv twice?? chap 5 pg17 - Page 4

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Hey:) Nice Introduction... Please carry on it's really good 👏
Please update chapter 1 soon and do add me too you PM list.. thanks:)

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Originally posted by: SweetRozie123

Hey:) Nice Introduction... Please carry on it's really good 👏
Please update chapter 1 soon and do add me too you PM list.. thanks:)

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thnx im glad u lyk it

part 1 In luv twice
guys i edited a line in de concept u dun need 2 refer 2 it its jst dat sameer is nt 2 yrs old he is 5 yrs old
hey guys im here wid de first part
In mumbai
the episode starts wid................ nupur shouting
N:Di Diiiii kidhar ho tum???
D: NUPUR!!!! tell me one thing hw many tyms should i tell u 2 STOP SHOUTING???
NM: Dia Nupur plz girls
D&N: sry mom
D: nw tel me y were u shouting
N:di did u c my bracelet de one adi gifte
D: ohhhhh!!! celebration huh??
N: Diiii <Blushing>
D:acha baba wo sameer ne pehni hai
N: to di aap ne usse li kiun nahi
D:kiun ki wo tumhara shahzada hai kehta hai " maasi kehti hai unka sub kuch mera hai to jab tak wo nahi kahegi main nahi utarunga"
Nupur laughs :wo kidhar hai"
D:tumhare kamre main hai
N:gr8
Nupur goes 2 her room n sees sameer playing wid her jwellery
N:sam watcha doin kiddo?
S: maasi hw am i lukin?
N: well i must say ur lukin pretty
S: maasi boys r handsome
N: yes dey r handsome if dey dun wear jwellery lyk dis cmmon take it off
Meanwhile nupur's mom wz goin out n saw adi who wz abt 2 ring de bell
A: Arre namastey aunty
NM:adi beta namastey kaisay ho?
A: main theek hun aunty nupur hai??
NM:han main bulai hun
stopping her..." nahi aunty main jaata hun"
NM:ok baccha
he goes in n bumps into diya
A:oh sry
he wz leaving when diya stopped him
D:arrey arrey itni jaldi bhi kia hai
A:plz di jaane do na
D:acha yaar tum bhi kia yaad rakoge
A:thnk u so much
he leaves n when he enters nupus room he sees nupur n sameer playing
A:ahem ahem.... sameer rushes n hugs adi
A: hey lil buddy
S: hi
A: hey nupz
S: hi
A: to chalein
S:nahi aaj masi kahin nahi jaaygi aaj wo mere saath khelegi
N:sry adi aaj sameer jo kahega wohi hoga
A:hmmmm..... lil buddy agar main tumhe do chocolates doon to kia tumhari maasi ko lejasakta hun
S:(in his mind)hmm... adi bhai ko tang karne main kitna maza ata hai lekin agar zyaada tang kia to wo do chocolates haath se nikal jaayengi
S:theek hai
Adi hands him 2 chocolates n leaves wid nupz
Same time in london a guy is studying when his phone rings
Guy: hello
Lady: hello nahi bolte Namastey boltey hai mayu
M:maa pehle to its mayank second main london main kisi aur ka bhi phone hosakta hai maine naam dekhe bina uthaya tha
MM:acha baba koi baat nahi maine to ye poochne k liye phone kia tha tu apna dhyan rkhraha hai na ya teri shaadi karwaoon k koi aur tera khayal rakhe
M:maa aap phir shuroo hogaiye maa kitni dafa kaha k no girls
MM:acha yaar anywz i hav 2 go u tc
M:yess maa bye
MM:bye
Mayank continues his work when the bell rings its Samrat
M:hi Samrat
S:hey mayank me going 2 disco care 2 join me?
M:no
S:plz tum mujhe apne bestfriend ko mana karoge (Doing full nautanki n melodrama)
M:bas bohat hogaya tumhara melodrama band karo ye sab
S:acha apart from jokes plz join me na plz
M:(sighs)fine when?
S: gr8!! in 5 minutes
M:sam y do u do dis 2 me??
S:(innocent face) wat did i do?
M:(frustrated) arghhhh... dis innocent face of yours u knw i cant say no 2 u lil buddy
S:hey im not little
M:bt u r 4 me........ ur 3 yrs younger 2 me n i knw u since birth
S:ya ya i knw lets go
M:fine lets go
they go 2 de disco n where samrat is enjoying wid a pretty girl whereas Mayank was sitting n playin a game on his mobile as he dznt nything else 2 do when a drunk girl cums up 2 him
G:hey sexy
M:xcuse me?
G:cmmon lets dance
M:umm... no thnx not interested u c dat guy ... pointing 2 sum random guy dancing like a maniac...... he's ur perfect match now if you'll plz xcuse me
Girl wz quite offended n she left
Mayank goes to Samrat
M:sam i think v should leave
S:kia yaar mayank itni jaldi bhi kia hai?
M:tujhe aur kitna tym chahye
S:1 hour
M:unbelievable ek ghanta sam u hav got 2 b kidding me
S:plzzzzzzz
M:tu baad main aajana main jaa raha hun
S:par tum kaise jaaoge
M:jaise aaya tha
s:to main kaise aaunga
M;not my concern
S:hey not fair
M:to chal mere saath
S:urghhhhh..... fine
M:sry sam bt tune suna to hoga na tit 4 tat
S:yeah yeah watever

dats it guys long n boring na??

Hey Fiza! I really like your concept and the first chap was such a boost up! I so very like it ! Continue soon

-Natasha

Originally posted by: -ArTiMaNiAc-

Hey Fiza! I really like your concept and the first chap was such a boost up! I so very like it ! Continue soon

-Natasha

loved ur first part

Originally posted by: jainypatel

loved ur first part

it was amazing

thnx alot 4 pm

ur welcum yaar

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

lovely part fiza

continue soon

thnx dear im glad u liked it