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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: pinky901

nice part.

Thanks Pinky....๐Ÿ˜›
chalo acha she realises that she needs to knw everythg before doig somethg drastic which can be harmful for her n her dear n near oesHmm....Ashna decided to be a lil careful....before she hurts those wonderful ppl....(Adil's family) ๐Ÿ˜‰.hope she will get a chance to knw true adil wit her journey to knw everythg.Of course she will....๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณwell its gud dat shekar clarified her that what were the viewpont of her father for her n the expectation frm her relationship wit adil.also dat her father hold a grt place in adil's heart.Shekhar's words unknowingly did the wonder....hai na? ๐Ÿ˜†adil is jus like sujal who believe in doing the work rather then express them to someone.he loves his family very much . Hehe....yeah...I guess so....Adil reminds of Sujal a bit...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜‰
grt going dear pls cont soon. Thanks Pinky....glad u liked reading the part....will continue soon....thnx for leaving the lovely comment!! ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜Š

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Reply for part 4,
Gud one.
So Adil was also not ready to marry Ashna but because of Mr. Sehgal he has to marry Ashna. Yeah....he didnt want to force her actually!! ๐Ÿ˜†Still he doesn't want to give her any pain because of Mr. Sehgal n when she decided to join his office he made all the arrangements for her. And also for himself I guess...๐Ÿ˜†
Good that he bought Ashna with her and next thing first time i smelt a bit romance too. Because i felt that Adil has started just liking her whereas as usual he would never say anything. He was lost after seeing him n when he recalled that he is Adil so how can he? Hehe....glad u sensed sum romance....becoz yes...there's gonna be sum romance for sure...๐Ÿ˜‰...and again....u r right...he is Adil....cant afford to be lost....ryt? ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
He again became that Adil. He was not ready to leave his place when Ashna said that he is not going only saying. Hehe....๐Ÿ˜†....thanks for the detailed comment Vertika...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ณ


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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Gud part 5 yaar. Thanks dear...๐Ÿ˜›
Finally she joined office n Adil has Shekhar too keep an eye over her.Hehe....cant let her be just lke that na....๐Ÿ˜† She doesn't want to be called mam, finally one thing i come to know that she is soft from heart. Yup....that she is...๐Ÿ˜ณ
She is mixed well with Shekhar but i didn't like one thing in previous update that she said Adil not to join his father's bd pooja.Awww....she is so mad at him....kya kare?๐Ÿ˜• Shekhar is very cooperative. He is a sweet guy actually...๐Ÿ˜Š
That scene when Ashna tried to find something and that's y she entered in store room and when lights got off she got scared and only that time Adil was there and he helped her.
Their closeness was nice Glad u liked the scene...๐Ÿ˜ƒand i think she must think once again before taking any wrong step. Hehe...am sure u got ur ans in the next part...๐Ÿ˜‰That scene of cockroach was quite cute, the touch the feel everything was nice. Am so glad u thought so.....thank you Vertika...for ur lovely words....๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ณ

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Mahak Sinha

Hey finally caught up u with replies. Yeah....as always....congo btw....u did a hard job...๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Actuaully maine pehle hi padh liya tha but reply karne me late ho gayi. Ohh....u read it earlier....thats nice...lekin late to bilkul nahi hua yaar....I mean....u r faster than my update na...๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰
Lovely update, really different. Glad u thought it to be different...๐Ÿ˜›
So Ashna finally realized that apart from being close with Adil he has temperature it means he is unwell and i really liked her caring attitude for her husband. She is really soft from heart.And I guess...u liked that fact....hai na?? After all she is now caring for Adil...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰
But what was the need for Adil to say like that he doesn't need of her care. Adil kab kyun kehta hai....kya pata yaar??๐Ÿ˜†Finally he is feeling week and went to home. Ashna came and had a check on her and called the doc.
That was really like a good wife, Hmm....๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰dadi was also concerned about him but he said a lie. I liked that statement that kisi se nafrat karna asaan nahi hota hai. Glad u liked this very statement...๐Ÿ˜‰Sameer is here in the fic. Yup...he is playing Rishabh here...๐Ÿ˜‰
Y all of them don't like Adil? Buddhu hai...isliye...๐Ÿ˜†Ashna k mana karne par bhi vo bahar gaya but not his office on Sehgal's office and when she returned back she found him on his place. Smart....hai na? ๐Ÿ˜‰
This time she heard whatever he was murmuring Ab itni zor se murmur karega to sunegi hi na...๐Ÿ˜†and finally good decision by her that first she must try to find out the truth about everything than she should take any decision. Hehe....guess she listened to u Vertika...๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
update soon. Sure dear.....glad to see u caught uo wid the fic.....and replying to all ur comments was wonderful....thank you sooooo much for taking the trouble...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜ƒ

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Fizzylicious

hello my dearest friends sumaiya ,
i am waiting ur next update dear

Hey Ayesha....sorry to keep u w8ing dear....am gonna UD soon.....thnx for being patient anyways...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜›
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Posted: 14 years ago
chinmayi, pinky901, hinal60, Sur_Singhania, princessyogitha, ammuakhi, Kool_Naina, vvdn, sweet_shona, sania_58, nisha1984, PrincessFlavia, shiropa, Dhara_s, suhana_dixit, spvd, dazzling_glory, rmanu7382, golu_1677, ronojoy_ria, Revolutionbreez, Puri_2711, Sweet-Lioness, Mahak Sinha, monikaseth,
Hey....thanks for pressing the 'like' button guys....it was gud to see almost all my readers hav read this part...๐Ÿ˜†....๐Ÿ˜ณ...thank you all.....๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Luv,
Sumi.๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rituka7

can't wait

update asap

Sorry Ritu....and Naina........I was abt to UD yesterday night only....but my electricity went off....and I didnt realize when I fell asleep....๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜†........sorry for the delay guys...๐Ÿ˜•...๐Ÿ˜•
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Posted: 14 years ago

Part # 7

Next dayโ€ฆ..in the eveningโ€ฆ.Ashna is bak at homeโ€ฆโ€ฆand she thinks of ways to knw abt Adilโ€ฆ.

Main kaise pata laga sakti hu ki Adil mujhse asal me kya chhupa raha haiโ€ฆโ€ฆ.he is a liar for sureโ€ฆ..lekin wo jhooth kis sach ko chhupane ke liye bol raha hai?? Kyaโ€ฆ.koi aur mujhe iss sawal ka jawab de sakta haiโ€ฆother than him of course!!

Just thenโ€ฆ..she takes a look on the clockโ€ฆ.and she realizes it was tym to give Adil's momโ€ฆ.her medicine!! So she leaves for her roomโ€ฆ..but she sees her taking the medicine alreadyโ€ฆ..well she wud do that mostlyโ€ฆโ€ฆyet Ashna liked to check if she took it or notโ€ฆโ€ฆin fact she loved being wid a 'mother'!! Ashna smiled seeing her and thought of leaving so that she takes sum restโ€ฆ..but GR (Gayatri Raichand) had seen her alreadyโ€ฆ.and so she enters the room!!

Ashna: Achha hua aapne khud hi dawai le li Maaโ€ฆ.

GR just smiles and indicates if she had not done thatโ€ฆ..Adil wud hav been cross wid herโ€ฆโ€ฆ.again Adil might call any moment to varify the fact that she has taken the medicine!!

Ashna cant help smiling to see the sweet bond she shared wid her sonโ€ฆโ€ฆshe seemed to listen to anything and everything he saidโ€ฆโ€ฆ.just for him!!! There was no doubtโ€ฆโ€ฆher world was centred by him!! Suddenlyโ€ฆ.Ashna thoughtโ€ฆ.if she cud be of sum help for herโ€ฆ.to knw more abt Adilโ€ฆ..but then she had to be careful so that GR doesn't doubt her in any way!!

Ashna: Maaโ€ฆ.Adil se bahut pyar karti hai?? (she smiles and nods in a yes) Kya aap bata sakti hai kyun?

At this GR stares at Ashna blanklyโ€ฆ.as if she never had an ans to this questionโ€ฆโ€ฆyesโ€ฆ.she cud never ans herself why Adil mattered so much for herโ€ฆ..but the fact was he did!! Suddenly Gr gets up from the bed and went for her cupboardโ€ฆ..she took out sumthing and came bak to Ashna!! She had brought along a photo albumโ€ฆโ€ฆand she showed Ashna sum pics of Adilโ€ฆ.when he was almost 9-10 years old!!

Ashna took the album in her handsโ€ฆ.and carefully watched his photoโ€ฆ..he did look innocent and sweetโ€ฆ..and anyone wud love that kid!! An automatic smile adorned her lipsโ€ฆ..as she saw the photosโ€ฆ.where the whole Raichand family was thereโ€ฆ.all 6 of them!!

Meanwhileโ€ฆ.GR writes sumthing for Ashna in the paperโ€ฆ.and gives it to herโ€ฆ.it read:

Adil me hamesha se wo apnapan raha hai Ashnaโ€ฆ..uski aankhon me hum sab ke liye itna pyar haiโ€ฆ.ki usse pyar kiye bina hum reh nahi sakteโ€ฆโ€ฆ..hamara ek ahem hissa hai woโ€ฆ..mera bada beta hai woโ€ฆ..pyar to karungi na!!

Ashna smiled after reading the linesโ€ฆ..GR was rightโ€ฆ.Adil does love his family a lotโ€ฆ..so it was no big deal for GR to love him so much. Now Ashna begins to stand up so that she can leaveโ€ฆ.but GR holds her handโ€ฆ..and signs her sum thingโ€ฆ..but Ashna was not very much used to all her signsโ€ฆ.so she was confusedโ€ฆโ€ฆ.and so GR finally writes down wat she saidโ€ฆ.. "Take Care of my son"

Ashna's smile is wiped away after reading thisโ€ฆ..and she looks up to find GR looking at her wid utmost expectations in her eyesโ€ฆ..Ashna cud not stand that anymoreโ€ฆ.and excused herself wid a half-hearted smile!!

Jaha bhi jati huโ€ฆ..sabhi Adil ke liye fikr karte haiโ€ฆ..sabko uski parwa haiโ€ฆ..kyun?? Kyun koi nahi dekh sakta usne mere saath kya kar diyaโ€ฆ..mujhe kaise bandh liya usne!! Kyun??

Next dayโ€ฆ..at homeโ€ฆ.

Dadi: Rashiโ€ฆ.tum Manali jaa rahi ho??

Rashi: Haanโ€ฆ.mere frnd ki shaadi hai!!

Dadi: Wo sab to thik haiโ€ฆ..lekin tum aise akele kaise jaa sakti ho?? Tumne socha bhi kaise tumhe iski ijazat mil jayegi??

Rashi: Maine AB se baat kii hai Dadiโ€ฆ.he said I cud go!!

Dadi: Wo hota kaun hai permission dene wala?? Tum kahin nahi jaogi Rashi โ€ฆ.โ€ฆ.bas!!

That nightโ€ฆ..Adil returns home earlyโ€ฆ.and found everyone (Dadi, Rashi & Ashnaโ€ฆ..Adil's mom was mostly in her room only) having the dinnerโ€ฆ.

[Ashna wud always come home earlyโ€ฆ.as it was Adil who was fond of working till late night]โ€ฆ..

Adil: This is ur ticket Rashiโ€ฆ.kal subah 9 baje ki flight haiโ€ฆ.

At this Dadi looks up at him angrilyโ€ฆ..while Rashi takes the ticket being confused.

Rashi: But ABโ€ฆ.maine aapko phn kiya tha naโ€ฆ..wo Dadiโ€ฆ.

Adil: I knwโ€ฆโ€ฆbut the thing isโ€ฆ.tum jaa rahi hoโ€ฆ.thats it!!

Dadi: Jab maine mana kiya haiโ€ฆ..tab tum kaun hote ho usse jaane ki permission dene wale??

Adil: Shayad aap bhool rahi haiโ€ฆ..iss ghar ka har decision main leta huโ€ฆ..and I don't need to ask or consult anyone before deciding anything!! Maine jo kahaโ€ฆ.wo hogaโ€ฆ.thats it!!

Dadi: Tumhari itni himmat!!! Tum mere faisle ke khilaaf jaa rahe ho?? Hote kaun ho tum???

Adil: Aap bhale hi mujhe apna pota naa maneโ€ฆ.lekin Rashi mujhe apna Bhai maanti haiโ€ฆ.

Dadi: Uske maanne se kya hota hai?? Wo bacchi hai abhiโ€ฆ..sacche rishton ko pehchanne ki samajh nahi hai usmeโ€ฆโ€ฆlekin tum to jante ho naโ€ฆ..tumhara humseโ€ฆ.hamare iss parivaar se koi rishtaa nahi haiโ€ฆ..tumhe hamari zindagi me shaamil karna mere bete ki sabse bari bhool thiโ€ฆโ€ฆjiski keemat usse apni jaan se chukani padiโ€ฆ..

Adil looks down at his feet with this mentionโ€ฆ.while Rashi is already in tearsโ€ฆ.and here Ashna is utterly confused abt wat was going on!! But soon Adil looks upโ€ฆ.

Adil: Aap bas mujhe oppose kar rahi haiโ€ฆ..aap Rashi ko isliye jaane nahi dena chahtiโ€ฆ..kyunki main usse jaane dena chahta huโ€ฆ..

Dadi: Agar tum aisa sochte hoโ€ฆ.to yehi sahiโ€ฆ.

Adil: In that caseโ€ฆ.aapko shayad ye ehsaas nahi haiโ€ฆ.aap meri wajah se apni poti ko hurt kar rahi haiโ€ฆโ€ฆbut u knw wat?? Main kisi bhi wajah se apni behen ko hurt hone nahi de saktaโ€ฆ..I sayโ€ฆ.she is going and wat I sayโ€ฆ.is final!!

And he walks awayโ€ฆ..leaving everyone dazed!! After thisโ€ฆ.Dadi just went into her roomโ€ฆ.while Rashi also rushed into hersโ€ฆ..here Ashna was not really able to make out much of all thisโ€ฆ.

Dadi's words were ringing in her earsโ€ฆ..

sacche rishton ko pehchanne ki samajh nahi hai usmeโ€ฆโ€ฆ

lekin tum to jante ho naโ€ฆ..tumhara humseโ€ฆ.hamare iss parivaar se koi rishtaa nahi haiโ€ฆ..

tumhe hamari zindagi me shaamil karna mere bete ki sabse bari bhool thiโ€ฆโ€ฆjiski keemat usse apni jaan se chukani padiโ€ฆ..

Iska kya matlab tha?? Dadi Adil ko iss parivaar ka hissa nahi maantiโ€ฆ.aur to aurโ€ฆโ€ฆapne bete ki maut ke liye bhi Adil ko zimmedaar thehra rahi thiโ€ฆkyun?

However she follows Rashi to her roomโ€ฆ.as she feels she was upset and needed sumone by her side!!

Here Adil is in his roomโ€ฆโ€ฆhe was sitting on the window paneโ€ฆ.closing his eyesโ€ฆ.he remembers the fateful dayโ€ฆ.that changed his course of lifeโ€ฆ.once againโ€ฆ..snatching away someone closeโ€ฆ.once again!!!

Mr. Randhir Raichandโ€ฆ..his 'baba'โ€ฆ.whom he used to look up toโ€ฆ.for each n everythingโ€ฆ..Adil really loved himโ€ฆ.and so did he!!! In factโ€ฆ.perhaps he had always trusted Adil moreโ€ฆ.if not loved more than his other kids!!! Adil had been a dream child for themโ€ฆ..just the perfect son!!! And for Adilโ€ฆโ€ฆdonno how or whyโ€ฆ..but he cud only open up to his 'baba'โ€ฆโ€ฆand none elseโ€ฆโ€ฆnot even his mom!!

Adil was mere 16 years oldโ€ฆ.when Mr. Randhir Raichand died by an accidentโ€ฆ.it was mostly because he had wanted to save Adil from the rushing truckโ€ฆ..but he cudnt save himselfโ€ฆ.and Adil watched him breath his lastโ€ฆ..just before his eyes!! When he returned home wid the news of his deathโ€ฆ..it was as if hell had broken down upon the familyโ€ฆ.an accidental death always does thatโ€ฆ..out of nowhere it takes away a dear person from uโ€ฆ..and u just cant do anythingโ€ฆ..even cant blame anyone other than fate!!

Andโ€ฆ..This was painfulโ€ฆ.to hav none to blameโ€ฆ.just having the question 'Why'โ€ฆ..but getting no answer in returnโ€ฆ..this was definitely painful!! Who better than Adil himself knew this?? He had always lived his life in that painโ€ฆ..of never really having anyone to blame..โ€ฆ.or to shout at!! Even that dayโ€ฆ.he surpassed his pain within himselfโ€ฆ.he did want to cry out onceโ€ฆ.but how?? How cud he do that?? Looking at his familyโ€ฆ.he found all of them devastatedโ€ฆ.His mom was not speaking upโ€ฆ..not crying as wellโ€ฆ.whereas his Dadi along wid Rishabh n Rashiโ€ฆ.were crying hard!! Amidst all thisโ€ฆ.how cud he afford to lose himselfโ€ฆ.when he had promised his Babaโ€ฆ.to take care of all??

"Wada karo betaโ€ฆ..tum sabka khyal rakhogeโ€ฆ..meri har zimmedaari ab tumpe haiโ€ฆ.ghar ka bada beta hone ka farz ab tumhe nibhana haiโ€ฆ..Uโ€ฆhav toโ€ฆ.take careโ€ฆ.of allโ€ฆ.karoge na Adil??"

"Haanโ€ฆ"โ€ฆ.

He had just managed to say this muchโ€ฆ..and Mr. Randhir Raichand cud not hold his breath anymoreโ€ฆ.he had passed awayโ€ฆ.

And Adil had always fulfilled that promise made to himโ€ฆ.even when his Dadi did not want him to perform the last ritesโ€ฆ.Adil did not budge and performed it along wid Rishabhโ€ฆ..he had to fulfill his son's duty!!! But from that dayโ€ฆ.Dadi had become all the more hostile wid himโ€ฆ.at first Adil didn't understand why his Dadiโ€ฆ.who used to love him so muchโ€ฆ.suddenly started behaving so rudely wid him!! But eventually he got the pointโ€ฆ..it was because she had found that 'sumone' to blameโ€ฆ.she might not be rightโ€ฆ.but was not completely wrong as wellโ€ฆ.even he had this feeling within himself that his Baba died in order to save himโ€ฆโ€ฆbut it seemed his Dadi had held onto that portionโ€ฆ.and did not want to blv anything but that!! She wud always talk rudely wid Adil and wud not like to see his face as wellโ€ฆ..but Adil didn't mindโ€ฆ.somehow he began to think thatโ€ฆ.blaming himโ€ฆ.was lightening his Dadi's griefโ€ฆ.he knws one feels a lot lighter if he can blame someone for any mishapโ€ฆ..and if he was that someone for his Dadiโ€ฆ.he wud willingly be so!!

Thus he started to go by her wishโ€ฆ.of not showing her his face all the whileโ€ฆ.instead he began taking care of other thingsโ€ฆ.like his momโ€ฆ.who had gone into depression because of her husband's deathโ€ฆ..gradually she had overcome a lotโ€ฆ..though Adil cud not bring bak her voice till now!!!

Not only thisโ€ฆโ€ฆRandhir Raichand's will had declared Adil to hav the power of attorney of everythingโ€ฆ..so Adil had to take care of the business as wellโ€ฆ.after his Baba's deathโ€ฆ..the condition of the business had worsenedโ€ฆ..Raichand Estates was already incurring lossโ€ฆ.and after that fateful accidentโ€ฆ.it seemed to hav lost every hopeโ€ฆ.no one was willing to invest on a sinking ship!! Adil had got many offers to sell the companyโ€ฆ..but he did not!! He cud not sell away his Baba's dreamโ€ฆโ€ฆhe had somehow managed to get a degree in business managementโ€ฆ..and joined the office himselfโ€ฆ.but till then it was not easy to keep everything on a rollโ€ฆ.along wid the burden of a shut down companyโ€ฆ.he had to take care of his familyโ€ฆโ€ฆ.pay for the studies and his mom's treatment as wellโ€ฆโ€ฆthe money they had been left wid was not that muchโ€ฆ..so he had to spend every penny wid much care!! And even after his graduationโ€ฆ.it was not easy to start off Raichand Estatesโ€ฆonce againโ€ฆ..but he did not lose hopeโ€ฆ.he worked hard to harder to hardestโ€ฆ..only to start afresh wid Raichand Group of Industriesโ€ฆ..which at present is known as RGIโ€ฆ.and Shekhar had been much of help to him in this regard!!!

Adil might hav taken care of the professional frontโ€ฆ.after much hurdlesโ€ฆ.but on the personal frontโ€ฆ.nothing seemed to hav improvedโ€ฆ.his Dadi was still cross wid himโ€ฆ.and to add to that Rishabh was also not in gud terms wid himโ€ฆ..he basically didn't like the idea of everything being given to Adilโ€ฆโ€ฆ.he felt sidelinedโ€ฆ..so in order to express his anger he chose to cut himself from all theseโ€ฆ.he let Adil 'take care' of everythingโ€ฆ.all aloneโ€ฆ.as per his father's wish!! Perhaps he didn't realize how much his help wud matter to Adil at that pointโ€ฆ..Adil had wanted to transfer the property in his name tooโ€ฆ.but he cud not do that before 24โ€ฆ.and till he turned 24โ€ฆ..everything had changedโ€ฆโ€ฆ.Rishabh didn't want to take Adil's 'mercy'โ€ฆโ€ฆ.he wanted Adil to keep it all in his nameโ€ฆ..whereas he himself wanted to leave for Canadaโ€ฆ.away from all theseโ€ฆ.and all Adil cud do was to fulfill his wishโ€ฆ..moreover somehow Adil didn't feel Rishabh wud handle everything wid utmost careโ€ฆ.seeing Rishabh's carefree natureโ€ฆ..Adil was in a doubt abt himโ€ฆ..so he didn't really force him muchโ€ฆ..again Adil knew his brother was better not be forced!!!

Now Adil opens his eyesโ€ฆโ€ฆ.and acknowledges the present!! Watever happened few minutes backโ€ฆ..was not sumthing gud for sureโ€ฆโ€ฆ.he knws he hurt his Dadi by going against herโ€ฆ..but then he cudnt let Rashi suffer just becoz his Dadi didn't like him!!

Adil went to check on Rashiโ€ฆ.he knws how much all these incidents upset herโ€ฆ..and so he mostly tries to avoid such argumentsโ€ฆ..which makes everyone sad and upset!! Howeverโ€ฆ..as he enters Rashi's roomโ€ฆ.he finds Ashna thereโ€ฆโ€ฆand it seemed Rashi was better nowโ€ฆ..perhaps after talking to Ashna. He simply stared at Ashnaโ€ฆโ€ฆas he cudnt really understand why she was hereโ€ฆโ€ฆ.consoling HIS sister!!

Here Ashna also looked at him as he enteredโ€ฆโ€ฆhe seemed so tired, disturbed and DEFEATED!!! It was strange to find this guy at this stateโ€ฆ..who always seemed so stone-hearted and emotionlessโ€ฆ.and sumtimes ruthless!! Ashna didn't knw if she shud feel elated to find Adil so defeatedโ€ฆ..or shud she try to go deep in the graveness of his eyesโ€ฆ.but then that was not being possibleโ€ฆ..as she found it hard to stand his gazeโ€ฆโ€ฆso she simply looked awayโ€ฆ..and got up to leave the room.

Rashi: ABโ€ฆ..aap wahi khare rahoge kya??

Adil: (goes towards her and sits by her side) I'm sorryโ€ฆโ€ฆmeri wajah se atmosphere aur bhi kharab ho gaya na?

Rashi: Don't be so self-conscious AB!! Aapko hamesha aisa kyun lagta hai sab aapki ghalti hai?? (Adil tries giving a small smile at her words) In factโ€ฆ.iss baar ghalti meri hai ABโ€ฆโ€ฆ.mujhe shayad pehle hi Dadi se patiently baat karni chahiye thiโ€ฆ..I'm sorry ABโ€ฆโ€ฆmain to soch rahi huโ€ฆโ€ฆmain naa jau Manali!!

Adil: Don't even think like thatโ€ฆโ€ฆtu jaa rahi haiโ€ฆ.aise hi ye sab argument kiya kya?? Nahi naโ€ฆโ€ฆthen u r leaving tomorrowโ€ฆ.aur phir waha jayegi to tera mood achha rahegaโ€ฆโ€ฆinn sab tension se durโ€ฆโ€ฆ.enjoy kar payegi!!

Rashi: (hugging him) But I'll miss u ABโ€ฆ..

Adil: Don't worryโ€ฆ.I'll not let u miss meโ€ฆ..jab ek protective brother ki tarahโ€ฆ..har din 4-5 baar phn karungaโ€ฆ..tab tu hi kahegiโ€ฆ. "mujeh baksh do AB"โ€ฆ..

Rashi: No waysโ€ฆ.I'll never say anything like thatโ€ฆ..aur haanโ€ฆ.aap phn karoge to mujhe achha hi lagegaโ€ฆ.though I doubtโ€ฆ.aap apni busy schedule se mere liye tym thodi nikaal paogeโ€ฆ.ya nahi!!

Adil: (looks at her affectionately) U knw naโ€ฆ..tere liye sab kuch chhor sakta hu mainโ€ฆ..

Rashi: I knwโ€ฆ.isiliye to aapse itnaaaaaaa pyar karti huโ€ฆ.

Adil: I knw u love meโ€ฆ..and I love you too shonaโ€ฆ..ab chal so jaaโ€ฆ..warna kal flight miss karegiโ€ฆ.its already very late!!

Coming out of Rashi's roomโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ.he slowly moves towards Dadi's roomโ€ฆ..and peeped in secretly to knw if she was f9โ€ฆ..she found her lying on the bed facing the opposite directionโ€ฆ..he knws she was not sleepingโ€ฆโ€ฆ.in fact she was upset and disturbedโ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆit hurt him to see her like thisโ€ฆโ€ฆ.but as always he was helpless!!

He then goes towards his mom's roomโ€ฆ.but was surprised to find her asleepโ€ฆโ€ฆ.though it was a gud thingโ€ฆ.he didn't knw if she had taken her dinner and medicines or notโ€ฆ.Rashi was also asleep nowโ€ฆ.and he didn't want to wake anyoneโ€ฆ..being confused he turned his faceโ€ฆ.to see Ashna standing there!! She was actually watching him from quite a long tymโ€ฆ.since the tym he had stepped out of Rashi's roomโ€ฆ.and also when he checked on Dadiโ€ฆ.

Adil: Woโ€ฆ.do u knwโ€ฆ.Mom ne khaanaโ€ฆ.(he asked cautiously as he didn't knw if she wud like to ans him or not)

Ashna: Khaa liya haiโ€ฆ.aur dawai bhi!! Maine unse kaha haiโ€ฆ.tumhare ate hi I'll make sure tum khaana khaa loโ€ฆโ€ฆso don't make me a liar like youโ€ฆ.and just have the dinner!!

Ashna left saying thisโ€ฆ.but Adil was still standing there. He looked at the dining tableโ€ฆโ€ฆfood was still thereโ€ฆfor him to have itโ€ฆ..He so didn't want to take the dinnerโ€ฆ.but as she saidโ€ฆ.he didn't want to make her a liarโ€ฆ.so he quickly had some food!!

After thisโ€ฆ..as he entered the roomโ€ฆ.Ashna was making her bedโ€ฆ..while he was trying to find words to thank her!!

Adil: I wanted to thank youโ€ฆ..tumne Mom ko sambhal liyaโ€ฆ.and Rashi ko bhiโ€ฆโ€ฆ

Ashna: (cutting him) U don't need to thank meโ€ฆ.coz maine kuch bhi tumhare liye nahi kiyaโ€ฆ.in factโ€ฆ..inhe main tumhara parivaar nahi maantiโ€ฆ.main inhe apna maanti huโ€ฆ.isiliye inki care karti huโ€ฆ..kya karuโ€ฆ.tumhari tarah selfish jo nahi huโ€ฆ..pata nahi kyunโ€ฆ.inhe dard nahi pohucha saktiโ€ฆ.ye jante hue ki inhe dard dene se hi tumhe dard hogaโ€ฆโ€ฆ.par mujhse nahi hota Adilโ€ฆ..pata nahi tumse kaise ho gaya?? Shayad ehsaas nahi hai tumheโ€ฆ.kya kar diya hai tumneโ€ฆ..khud ke liye aisi zindagi kabhi nahi sochi thi maineโ€ฆโ€ฆ..kabhi nahi socha thaโ€ฆ..ek simple normal married life ke badleโ€ฆ..kuch iss tarahโ€ฆ.ladte hueโ€ฆ.zindagi guzarni padegi mujhe!! Kabhi kabhi lagta haiโ€ฆ.kash main tumhari tarah hotiโ€ฆ.tumhari tarah jee patiโ€ฆโ€ฆsirf apne bare me soch patiโ€ฆ.bas apne khud ke rishto ke bare me soch kar dusro ko tadpa patiโ€ฆ..kash main Adil Raichand jaisi hoti!!

And feeling extremely disgusted she leaves to change into her nightwear!!

Nahi Ashnaโ€ฆ.tum meri tarah jeena deserve nahi kartiโ€ฆ.U deserve sumthing much betterโ€ฆโ€ฆU deserve every best thing Ashnaโ€ฆโ€ฆ.kyunki Uncle sahi kehte theโ€ฆ..tum sach me dil ki bahut achhi ho!!

By nowโ€ฆ.Ashna cums out getting changedโ€ฆ.and she just eyes at himโ€ฆ.as he was still standing there!! However she ignores himโ€ฆ.and lies down wid her thoughts.

Everything is just so strangeโ€ฆโ€ฆ..aaj jo bhi huaโ€ฆ.wo sab kitna ajeeb thaโ€ฆโ€ฆupar se Adil ka behaviourโ€ฆโ€ฆ.why is he always so stressed yet so calm?? Aur uski aankheinโ€ฆ..its impossible to look into themโ€ฆ..ajeeb sa dard hota haiโ€ฆโ€ฆ.uffโ€ฆ.pata nahiโ€ฆ..meri zindagi ne ye kaisi mor le liโ€ฆ..par aaj jo bhi hua uske baad main sab kuch janne ke intezaar nahi kar saktiโ€ฆ..main kal hiโ€ฆ.nahi nahiโ€ฆ.Kal nahiโ€ฆ.Rashi ke lautne ke baad main usse baat karungiโ€ฆโ€ฆyehi thik hogaโ€ฆ..kyunki agar main sab kuch pata chalne ka intezaar karti rahiโ€ฆ.to kuch hasil nahi hogaโ€ฆ.mujhe Rashi se aamne saamne baat karni hogi!! Only she can tell meโ€ฆโ€ฆI knw that!!

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Posted: 14 years ago

Umm....jab ek part likhti hu tab kitna kuch kehna hota hai....lekin type karte waqt main sab kuch bhul jati hu....๐Ÿ˜†....anyways let me start by apologising...."I am sorry"....main kal raat UD karn hi wali thi ki mujhe kuch add karne ki sujhi....and as I was doing that...electricity chali gayi....and neend aa gayi....so I fell asleep....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜ณ....

However this part goes to....Golu & Chinmayi....๐Ÿ˜ณ
And now....abt the part....as I said...it wud be a revealation...so it was sort of one for sure....๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†....but yet sum things might not be clear....as to this 'hatred theory' of Dadi & Adil also....๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†.....but lets see....if it gets any clear ahead!! ๐Ÿ˜‰
And yeah....am sure none can actually make out wat Adil or even Ashna is thinking as they do all these things....or wat they want by concealing things (Adil) or by bursting out at the other (Ashna)......but then lets just say....not every1 knws wat they r doing and why.....๐Ÿ˜‰....sumtyms ppl r vulnerable!! ๐Ÿ˜†
Achha....filhaal mujhe samajh me nahi aa raha hai....main kya keh rahi hu....so I'll stop right here....thanks all for the patience and the lovely comments....and also for pressing the 'like' button everyone!! ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜›
Luv,
Sumi.๐Ÿ˜ณ
P.S. Till this part.....Droplets was almost ready in my laptop.....but part 8 is partially written....and right now....am very busy!! So guess....u can expect the next part......NOT NEXT WEEK....but perhaps during the Puja....๐Ÿ˜† (hav to UD NRI in btwn na๐Ÿ˜†)
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Posted: 14 years ago
....................thinking what to comment .............. ok soch liya..............๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ......

u made my adil sad ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก.........kahin mere FF ka badla toh nahi le rahi ๐Ÿ˜†...............

on a serious note ....๐Ÿ˜Š....lovely part ...๐Ÿ‘.........& must say a emotional one too........๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ................... feeling so bad 4 Adil................. ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ...............wanna come & give him a tightest hug ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š............... he was so alone after father's death..........๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ.................. even now he is..........๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ..............main aa jau....๐Ÿ˜‰....... ashna toh bhav nahi de rahi.....๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก ๐Ÿ˜ก...... upar se comments mar rahi hai on my adil ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ ๐Ÿ˜ญ...........

adil the best bro...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ... to rashi........... he loves her so much ........... i guess after his mom Rashi only person who really cares 4 adil ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ.........

dadi ๐Ÿ˜ก........... how can she be so mean ........... adil needed support at that time ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ.......& she blamed him only ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ..............really kudos to adil ๐Ÿ‘..........how he managed everything business studies family ๐Ÿ‘..............

mom..........๐Ÿค—.............. she is a sweet heart ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ............

so overall an emotional update ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ.................... adil was so close to his father ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š.......
hope.............ashna finds the truth soon .................. & starts understanding adil........... ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ........as his mom said to ashna.......me also wanna say ..............Take care of my adil ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ.........
as usual update soon ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›...........



Edited by Puri_2711 - 14 years ago

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