U R MINE! ( mayur ff)upd part 26 on pg 112 6/ 2 - Page 35

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Auroni.92

Awwww this wz soo sweet...
Loved to see the concern of nupur for mayank...
She wz crying for him whom she hates the most...Now dont think she actually hates him na...😆😆
Truly amazing part...Waiting badly for the hotttt part...
Cont soon and thnx for ur lovely comment...


hey auroni!!!
thank u soooooooooo muchh honeyyyy!!!!
yap thats the beauty of love which make u forget every thing !!!!!!!!
thats mayanks love which make nupur to forget her hateness towards him!!!
yap i will update soon!!!!


love
komal❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -sam-

First of all a big sorry 😳

I didnt comment earlier,
I used to read this early morning on my way! so wasnt able to comment! nd exams were going on! 😊


Coming to the update!
I loved the progress in Nupur..
She is finally understanding him!

I just love this Mayank!
Do continue soon!

With Love
Sam !



hey sam!!!!!!!!

i m sooooooooooo happy to saw u back on my ff!!!
i miss u yaar!!!!! dont be sorry i understand u must be busy with ur studies!!!!!
thanxxxxxxxxx alot for liking it!!!!
yap i will cont soon!!!
love u tooo !

komal❤️
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update yar just loved it
really awesome
loving it
update soon
i was pretty busy so read it late
waiting for the next
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Posted: 14 years ago
love u jaan .were is update dear.😃
wasay hi mjht ki ending rumore nay dimag kharab kiya hai.😡
our jaan app update bhi nahi hai.
juldi karu jaan.
i want too knew what is next hapen to mayur..😛😛😛😛😛😛😛
i m waiting jaan .do it soon .please please please please.
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Posted: 14 years ago
not fair😔
i want an update
update it
maine tumhe kidbape karne ka idea drop kya kar diya tum to update hi nahi karrahi par mere pas aur bhi kai khatarna k plans hai 😈🤣
so update soon warna...........😡
and want a super hot update
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: komal991



hey aruna!!
thanks for calling me sweet honey!!! i have to kept my promise
akhir mayank ki fan jo hon!!
oo thanx now u satisfied with the speed of ff!!
yap thats another hit dialogue n u catch it once again!!! bygod why dont u join cricket team??? lol
yap thats mayanak love who made nupur to think and now she is believing on his love!!
i m sooo glad to saw ur descrptive analysis on my update once again!!!!
totallyy loved it!!!!!!! do comment on my next update i will wait for it !!!!

love
komal❤️

Hey Sweety ( hope i can call u this)
if not let me know dear
I obviously wold love to comment
pahle update to karo
even i am a crazy mayank fan re
and i love the way u potray the story
indian ckt tem will be flpo show
i am good here at least some one is liking my comment na
if i ll go who will give descriotive comment 😆😆😆😆
Chalo take care and update when possible
Luv,
Aru
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: arunabehere

Hey Sweety ( hope i can call u this)
if not let me know dear
I obviously wold love to comment
pahle update to karo
even i am a crazy mayank fan re
and i love the way u potray the story
indian ckt tem will be flpo show
i am good here at least some one is liking my comment na
if i ll go who will give descriotive comment 😆
Chalo take care and update when possible
Luv,
Aru


hey aru!!!
u can call me any thing !!!!!
ya ya i will update tonight or by tomorrow!!!
haha cricket team i know but i m so happy u always catch my hit line!!! that y i said!!!😊
firstly i want to say i not like ur comment coz i loveeeeeeeeeeed it!!!!!
offcourse dear never go any where untill my ff will complete other wise who gave me descriptive comment!!!! 😛

love u!!!
komal
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Posted: 14 years ago
THANK YOU GUYZ!!!
DEAR FELLOWS!!!!!!!!!
THANK YOU SOO MUCH GUYZ!!! 4 LIKING MY UPDATE😃! I M SOOOOOO HAPPY GUYZ WITH UR RESPONSE😃! I TOLD U GUYZ THAT U ALL WILL LOVE MAYANK AND SEE U ALL LOVE MAYANK NOW😆!!!! I M UPDATING MY FF SO READ AND GIVE UR PRECIOUS COMMENTS!😳



LOVE
KOMAL❤️


Edited by komal991 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
PART # 15

new morning arise not only in sharma mansion but also in nupur's life, she get up early in the morning n saw mayank he was hugging a pillow on his chest ,he was sleeping like a innocent kid, a beautiful smiled came on her face, she covered him with a blanket and move towards bathroom.
mobile ring with a loud voice n mayank jump with a jerk he saw mobile in so much anger he push yes button and roar with annoyance
M: who the hell is their?? after a while a voice came!
U: steady!! steady jahan pana! heart attack ho jay ga mujhay!!! mayank's temper raise again n he blast again
M: udayy!! why the hell u r calling me so early in the morning??? uday laughed then he clear his throat and said again serious tone..
U: jahan pana!!! its not early morning!!! ab tu afternoon honay wala hay!! kher come office fast u have to attend very important seminar!! bye!!! mayank saw towards the clock it was 1: pm he jumped out of the bed and run towards the bathroom, he take a shower, after that in his room he wear his jeans and shirt but he cant close his shirt's button due to the bandage which was almost covered his fingers he try but the pain arise in his palms
M: ooohh!! a moan of pain arise frm his mouth
N: wht happened?? he listened a sweet voice with lots of concern, he did n't relaised when she came in to the room, he turned back to see her and said
M: nothing!!! i just try to.... he saw his open shirt n try again but nupur said
N: let me do this!! she move towards him, but mayank said with love
M: its ok jaan!! i will do it my self! nupur looked him, she take a step forward and remove his hands frm his shirt and start closing his shirt's button, mayank could not believe on his luck, her lady love is standing so near to him, her eyes were lower, she look so beautiful he only stare her with his passion of love! nupur feel his intense gaze on her face but she has not courage to look back in his eyes so she kept her eyes lower, as she finished she take a step back and looked him he was freeze in his place n staring her with love, nupur smiled a bit then she said
N: mayank! no response.. she again said with raising her voice little more
N: mayank!! still no response she take a step forward and scream loudly..
N: mayankk!!!!!! mayank take a jerk and he is back frm his statue position he said back with concern
M: wht happened??? nupur lowered her face to hide her smile then she said in her serious tone
N: nothing!!! ur breakfast is ready!! come fast! she said and move out frm their bedroom, mayank smiled on his act he petted his back side of head with his hand and move toward dining.


he sat on his chair and saw his cheese sandwiches he take one but damn this bandage he cannot hold a sandwich, he cant move his fingers little, he shook his head and thought i have to remain hungry, he stand up and about to move when nupur came infront of him and said
N: wht happened?? she saw his plate an said again
N: why didn't u take ur breakfast?? mayank saw here n there then after a while he said
M: actually i m not feeling hungry !! nupur observed his facial expressions, she shook her head and folded her hands around her chest and said
N: when u don't know, how to speak lie then don't try that!!! mayank was shocked by listening that , he not know that nupur understand him that well! nupur make him sit on the chair again and move toward next chair to him she start feeding him with her hand, mayank jaws dropped he never expected frm nupur his eyes not blink once he thought its dream if he blink his eye once the dream will be over!! nupur said nothing after finishing breakfast she wiped his mouth with a tissue and move away frm dining, mayank was in still position after she gone he saw his empty plate with his wide opened eyes, he cant believe wht was happened?? how he reached his office he didn't know he was totally loss in her thoughts.......

nupur was happy she like to do his work by her own hands, she make his breakfast first time, but when she listened his moan of pain he felt pain in herself, the way he was staring to her she always feel annoyed with that but now she liked it! when he was lost he looks so cute, when she fed her breakfast he was not blinking once his eyes was staring to her and she feel so warm in his gaze, after so many days she was feeling so much light and happy...

a month passed just a blink of eye now they both were talk with each other, sit together, they also went for business dinner for twice, nupur was now so comfortable with him there is some thing smooth and ease arised in their relationship..

she was waiting for him since 2 hours but there is no sign of him, her head was hurt so badly she don't know why, she try to walk but she felt whole room move round n round she sit again and dig her head on her hands , as mayank enter in his room he saw nupur sitting on bed digging her head he said
M: hi!!! as nupur listened his voice she get up quickly mayank saw him and moved toward him he said with concern
M: wht happened to u? why r u so red?? nupur looked him and touch her cheeks she don't know wht happened ? confusingly she said
N: i don't know!!my head hurts badly! mayank touch her forhead he jumped backward!
M: OMG! nupur u r burning like a fire!! come on lay down properly i call the doctor! he covered her with blanket and call the doctor....

doctor give her injection and some medicines he suggest her some rest, mayank set beside her he was so worried about her ,he place his hand on her forhead and said with love
M: h r u feeling jaan? nupur opened her eyes and saw him she smile a bit and said
N: better! but i m feeling so cold!! mayank saw her and make him sit and said
M: drink that juice come on love! nupur looked at juice and made faces she shook her head and said
N: noo!! i cant drink that! i m feeling cold! she about to lay down again but mayank hold her arm and said
M: jaan plzzzzzzzzzz!!! nupur looked him then she has no choice she drink whole juice in one breath, then take her medicine after that she start shivering badly
N: whhyyy iss sssoo ccoldd??? she said while shivering mayank wrapped her with blanket properly and said with love
M: jaan u take medicines na!! now u will be fine!! come on love try to sleep!!! he lay beside her n run his fingers on her hairs,, sooon nupur fall in deep sleep.....

nupur get up in the morning she was feeling so much better daiimaa came in to her roomshe place her hand on her cheek and said with concern
DM: h r u feeling??? nupur smiled to her and said
N: i m fine daaimaa!! but where is mayank?? daaimaa hesitate to say something but then she remain silent!! nupur felt something wrong she said
N: wht happened daaimaa? tell me where is mayank?? daaimaa petted her hands and said
DM: i will bring ur breakfast!! she about to move but nupur hold her hands and said
N: firstly tell me! where is he?? daaimaa take a breath and said
DM: he is in hospital!! nupur jumped out frm the bed ,tears come in her eyes she said with heavy heart
N: wht happened to him? is he alright? tell me! daaimaa hugged her and said while petting her head
DM: he is fine!!!............ ur father got a stroke last night! he is with ur family!!! by hear that nupur was in deep shocked.........





sorry guyzz for not giving any hot scene their becoz i thought it will be too early so have patience!! u will get intimate stuff in next update or is baar pakka!!! till then sieonaraa


love
KOMAL

Edited by komal991 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi jaan thanks for update and PM.
Nice and cute update.No hot stuff its OK but u promise for next time cso dont broke it.L
With love Dhanak
Edited by DhanakZ - 14 years ago

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