only for writer concept on pg11 from angad-kripa#1 - Page 11

Originally posted by: dolly18

hey i really liked the concept

nn hmmmm

mehr do all 10 of us post individual concept???

i have one should i post it

Originally posted by: Angad-Kripa#1

Mehr, this is what i think we should do: All the writers that want to share their concept: post them here and then after that one of us could make a seperate poll with all the concepts? Good?

Originally posted by: dolly18

i agree with jot

what say guys

n concepts kab tak post karne hain???

Originally posted by: missinguonly

hi everyone
my story concept is something like that
i think it will b on mayur cuz they r leading now

so yeahh

its all started when a girl was 6 years old watering her plants in california n met a boy....the boy was an average but bother others so others can run after him and beat him...same with the girl.....after girl met him she was doing the samething...and they start meeting everyday beating each other n alwayz together!!
as far their friendship get better...girl has start sharing his secrets with him....and the boy stay quite only listens...in their skool they have seperate friends..but in home they tell each other what happen in skool and all that. one day girl told the boy the guy i liked has hurt me. n the boy was just lyk everything gonna be all right....on that day boy makes that girl very happy...n the girl start thinking its not only a friendship...there is something else that she liked about him too....and after thinking over night...she figure out that thatz the friend kinda thing that she was feeling.
and they have study in middle high skool even after graduation the were firends..but girl was still feeling that there is sumthing between them...even they have different dates on the graduation day....after all this boy and girl also has spend their night together on graduation....all they were doing was sitting n watching stars n talking about what they wanna do.....girl was keep looking in his eyes when he said what his dreams were....to be rich n successful n settle down my family...and girl could do it was jst set her dreamz n cuddle next to him....
the girl go home hurting because she didnt told him how she feels...she was in luv with him...n now he has to go for his job in new york....the girl was happy n sad....she was happy cuz he get the job..but sad cuz she never told him about her feeling...she even try to tell him in collage but everytym someone is with him...and he left for new york...after that girl cums @ home crying n saying at least once i should tell him how i feel
well after he left for the job....girl has find a job for her as a secatary too....and next month she got a invitation for a wedding and it was his wedding....girl was happy and sad @same tyms n go in his wedding next month....n decided that he will never b hers now they can only stay as friends....she was killing from inside by watching that boy happy with the bride,,..but showing her happiness for that boy n bride,...n she met the bride n of course that boy too....
after that girl left the new york....n thinking that she have done right thing....now many yearz ago girl wrote a letter to him about howz his lyf going?? n all that...but he hasnt reply...girl was worried y he is not rpelying even i have send 6 letters to him....n after that she just hope everything is fine...after a month girl received a note saying meet me @ fence....the fence was where they were use to sit n talk to each other!!
and when she goes there she sees him...and he told her about the divorce..boy who is crying a lot...and asks her marriage
than they got marriage in new york...but the boy never ever get happy....and the girl was trying to get him happy but the boy never n was living as wife n husband but there was nothing between them no love nothing....even their friendship was almost end

so that waz it n i think readerz will enjoy that cuz its showing them that never get late to tell someone how much u luv them!!

hope u all lyk it=)

Originally posted by: dolly18

nice concept mehr

here's mine

its basically a story where a girl who works in an orphanage , meets a boy

in the most unimaginable circumstances n life changes for bth of them

not only was the situation such that it gelled these two people together

but also there was sth that sparked between them from the starting..

here read this>>

this wasn't gud.. how could this happen to us ???

suddenly everything has been destroyed

what was i going to do..

i looked around myself

rumble n more rumble

everything in my sight had been completely destroyed in this natural disaster

why was i alive??

why couldn't i be dead among my people too ..

ehy was i left to see the mangled dead remains of those i once loved..

everything felt numb

everything

i knew i was hurt

but i couldn't feel the pain of my injuries..

i closed my eyes , tears running down them freely..

n suddenly an odd ringing in my ears grew louder

much louder

what was hapeening..

i looked around . but everything i saw was a blurr

n then

"NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOO.. NOT U"

n with that scream i felt a strong arm around my waist

and then suddenly i was pulled back wards ....

my head hit sumwhere

i knw i was blacking out

the last thing i saw b4 fainting was that a heavy stone archway had fallen precisely over the place i had been standing few moments ago

::::::::::::::::::::

here was it

its basically that a boy looses his sister in the tragedy n his best friend too .. but when he sees this girl ,abt to die , he saves her risking his own life

this tragedy brings them closer n marks the begining of their love story

is this one fine guys??

Originally posted by: missinguonly

concept kal tak post kardena plz=) only if u have one😃
srry for late reply was very busy!!

Originally posted by: dolly18

i posted the concept dear its on page 13

n guys abt the poll topic can i get the topic name or link pls

n also guys pls dont make it a multiple voting topic pls