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Posted: 14 years ago

Oye,Neeru,eethee ki kar rahe ho..........😛.............go n join Geet story writers team,they r giving chance to the new ones.....😉......RUN,Baby RUN.......😃.....

Seriously,no words for this fantabulous update 👏,when i was reading the update,i actually played the song & then heard single single line of the song accordingly with ur updates twice n thrice 😍 & buddy,bygod,my goosebumps were dancing on the tunes & the update scenes were just floating in front of my eyes as if Geet is singing this song.......☺️.......Mindblowing,Raappppchiiiikkkkk,Outstanding,Awesum,Heart-throbing,mmmmmmuuaaaaaaahhhhh........👏⭐️👍🏼😛❤️☺️🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: wiinie_pooh


hahhaah

sheetal touch wood....

mai abhi soch rahi thi.....

why u still dint comment karke...???

and see....." think of sheetal.... and sheetal comments...."

hahahah And DD..... ohhhh...

well, im updating now.......😉

Well Darling...Tongue.....dusht danav ke saath kaam karti hoon toh yeh quality toh aayegi naa 😉,Think of Devil n it appears,so m I......ROFL......
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Posted: 14 years ago
👏Amazing part dear winie...The song was very sweet. Apt for the occasion. I felt like singing and dancing with them. 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

hahahhahha wow gr8 update! cont soon🤗

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Coolsheetal

Oye,Neeru,eethee ki kar rahe ho..........😛.............go n join Geet story writers team,they r giving chance to the new ones.....😉......RUN,Baby RUN.......😃.....

Seriously,no words for this fantabulous update 👏,when i was reading the update,i actually played the song & then heard single single line of the song accordingly with ur updates twice n thrice 😍 & buddy,bygod,my goosebumps were dancing on the tunes & the update scenes were just floating in front of my eyes as if Geet is singing this song.......☺️.......Mindblowing,Raappppchiiiikkkkk,Outstanding,Awesum,Heart-throbing,mmmmmmuuaaaaaaahhhhh........🤗



Ohhhhhhh Sheetal

Meri JAAN......🤗

what shall i say about ur comments????

They make me dance on cloud 9......🥳
Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago



Originally posted by: whitepearl

👏Amazing part dear winie...The song was very sweet. Apt for the occasion. I felt like singing and dancing with them. 👏



Originally posted by: 't_skit

hahahhahha wow gr8 update! cont soon🤗



Thank uuuuuuuu 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rsroopali

thanks for inviting for maaneets marriage
atlat they got married nw waiting for d next update



Hahahahhahah😆

Nice........

Well the next update will be up soon😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
hi....
came across ur ff....
it took me 2 days 2 complete ds ff...
must say u r a superb writer.. 👏 👏 👏 loved evry update of urs...
i tried sendng u a buddy request bt a dnt knw y is it not goin, 😕 plz add me in ur buddy list n pm list.. i dnt wanna miss out any update... n plz dnt 4get 2 pm me... thnx.. n do cont soon.. 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: SaJan-SaJan

hi....

came across ur ff....
it took me 2 days 2 complete ds ff...
must say u r a superb writer.. 👏 👏 👏 loved evry update of urs...
i tried sendng u a buddy request bt a dnt knw y is it not goin, 😕 plz add me in ur buddy list n pm list.. i dnt wanna miss out any update... n plz dnt 4get 2 pm me... thnx.. n do cont soon.. 😊


Heyyyyyyyyy

welcome to my FF....

Thank u sooooooo much for liking my FF.....Dear...

and ur added to the pm list... so u dont worry

i will pm u regularly...

and i have sent u the buddy request too...so no worries...

next update will be up soon😛

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Posted: 14 years ago



PART- 41

They stood in each other's embrace.........for a really long time......😳

Neither of them spoke to each other...... Its their heart beats which expressed what they
were feeling at that moment......that was the moment when they found solace in
each others arms..... They would stay that way forever....in silence.... experiencing
their eternal love....

Maan sensed that Geet was tired ..... the stress she had gone through for the past
few weeks was very well visible... she stood still... resting her head on his shoulder...

Maan lovingly kissed her forehead... and tried to break the silence...

MAAN : Geet... [ he said lovingly ]

She dint react...... which made him feel tense....After few more trials...
finally Geet gained her senses back.... and slowly freed herself from his embrace....
She turned around to see all the gifts spread around her..... she wished to see
what her dear Sonia gifted her on this memorable occasion...But Maan insisted
her to go off to bed... she needed rest... she was terribly tired...

MAAN : Geet.... tum yeh saare thofey kal dekhlena... ab chalo...
tum bahut thak gayi ho....
tumhey araam ki zarurat hain...

She was yawning........ going weak... minute after minute... but she was Geet Handa...
she would never give up....So she started to move towards the gifts...

MAAN : Geet... meri baat suno......
kal subhey mai khud khol ke bataaunga...
tumhey apni sonia ka gift...
ab chalo...

He said soothingly....... but no use...... He was loosing it....
his concern overpowered his patience....he never wished to shout at her today...
this day was memorable... the best day of his life..... but he was not left with
any other choice.....so........?

He walked towards her..... patted her shoulder....
She knew he would ask her to rest... she refused to turn to him....
In the next moment.... her feet could no more sense the ground....
He carried her in his arms..... headed towards their room....which he
decorated himself... he watched his innocent wife... who fell asleep
in his arms....... he gently placed her on bed... not to wake her up...
covered her with a quilt..... and laid next to her taking her to embrace...
so as to protect her for life time.........

It was almost midnight...... when Geet woke up .....she was really curious to see...
all her gifts.. gifted by her dear ones... she slowly tried to free herself from Maan's
arms... without waking him up..... but she failed... even a slight moment of her's
would wake him up... and make him check if she's fine.....

MAAN : Geet... kya hua???

GEET : kuch nahi... wo... mai... pani... pani ke liye uth rahi thi...

she tried to make an excuse... as she knew wat his reaction would be...

Does Geet Succeed in
opening her gifts tonight????
Well, ....U need to wait... ;) 😆😉
Good night dosto...
Thats for tonight...
next part would be
longer.. Hopefully...😉😳

Edited by wiinie_pooh - 14 years ago

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