FF Maneet Scenes- after marriage Updt Pg 20 - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
OMG.....dese updates r awsum...
i read all 3 jst nw....dey r gr8!
luvd romantic part btw maan n geet ;)
n thn dis was awsum........
nt tried on maan 1st n thn dev....lolzzz dis was tooo gud!!!
nw nxt plz cnt wait :D:D
i can imagine d scenes in my head ....hehhe
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
hey pallu i was reading ur latest update and was like wow.........can dis b incorporated in d actual serial........such beautifully written lines and i wish u update d next part very soon....waiting waiting and waiting......

i have always thought of beautiful scenes like these........i wish CV's read ur posts and get inspired......its perfect no flaws......for me its d best thng coz MAAN and Geet r together........dats i always want......

thnx once again n hope u update d next part soon, very soon.......
Edited by maanmeet1 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

Scene – Maan's surprise!

Maan made few phone calls and straight went to his room. Geet was still sleeping. A smile formed on his face. He admired his sleeping beauty for few minutes. Having an urge to kiss her beautiful lips again, he was provoked to wake her up. He sneaked inside the comfortor, and hugged Geet.

"Ummm. Maan, let me sleep."

Wake up, lazybones." Maan planted a kiss in the nape of her neck.

Geet groggily opened her eyes and was captivated by the most intense eyes, she has ever seen. Not having any more patience, Maan swooped down and took her lips into his. Geet moaned. Kiss lasted for 10 minutes. Maan moved down and kissed on her chest. He was in only with an intention of a lip lock, but things seem out of control for him now. What to do? Geet does it to him. He covered her body with kisses.

"Maan, please. Not now"

"Why not?"

"Because its still not night and anyone can come?" Geet replied shyly.

"So you agree that every night, you are all mine."

"I am all yours forever Maan." Saying this, she engulfed him in her arms. Maan laid his head on the nape of her neck and inhaled the exotic perfume of his lady love.

"Geet get up and start the packing." Jerking up, which made a distance between Maan and her, she asked "Where are you going?"

Maan did not like the distance and immediately pulled her close to him and replied "Not me but us."

"Where?"

"Well, that's a surprise."

"And your work?"

"I have given the responsibilities to Sasha and Adi. They will handle everything. And we are going for 3 days only. So, no big deal. "

But Dadi…."

"Geet, she has a great friend circle. And to tell you the truth, she is one who insisted that we should plan this."

"Oh! So you do not wish to go with me but you are compelled huh?" Geet pouted.

"Well, I never wish to go out with you because I love spend all time in bed with you." Maan replied cheekily.

Geet certainly did not see that coming. She tried to hit Maan who was too quick for her. He held her hands and kissed them.

"chalo, lets start the packing we have to leave tonight."

"tonight! Baap re!" she hurriedly got up and got to the packing. Maan "helped" her which further delayed the packing. Geet was not upset about NT anymore. It always happen. Maan shower her so much with love, that she gains to strength to face anything.

They reached airport. "Maan now toh atleast tell me where are we going?"

Maan knew that now she will know where they are going anyhow. So its better he spill the beans.

"Geet we are going to Shimla. I have a farmhouse there. And we are going to stay there."

"Shimla!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Wow! Maan you know, I have never been to Shimla. Actually, I had never gone out of Hoshiarpur. Daarji never let me go…." Her voice sounded sad. Maan hugged her. Though, he had seen the most of the world, due to his business expansion but this tour is going to be the most special one.And he did not want to start on sad note. So to cheer her up, he changed the topic.

"Geet you know there is a place called Kufri, where you have to reach via horses and an apple garden comes at the top which has lot of secluded places.So……"

Geet gave him a elbow hit. "All the time, you think about this only."

They reached Shimla. Maan's car was present at the airport. Reaching farmhouse, Maan and Geet deiced to take rest in night and go for sightseeing tomorrow.

End!

Precap- Maan's plan and Geet's passion.

I know it is short but just felt like writing. I know its not that good. But I will write a passionate one, next time. So please leave long long comments! I love them.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

hayeeee How can u do this 2 me i just feel like i have a heart attack so damn stupendous

ek din mein 2-2 updates haye marjawa

I just love the naughty/passionate/lover Maan Thanks A lot yaar

I hope tum roj aise hi 2-2 baar update karo😆 Sorry but can't get enough 4 it!!!

I Dont have words to praise your work so i'll just👏 i think this is actually less.

*Hats off*

x

Edited by Jotz_92 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
awesome update.loved it.
maan is too naughty.
continue soon....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66
Haila!!!!
Aik din main 2 2 updates...
Love you for this...
Waise it was a nice part so dont think it was bad...
The only fact bad about it was that it was quite short...
Anyways...
Continue soon
Cant wait for the next part...
Thanx for the PM

Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67
beautiful update... luved the naughty maan n his surprise.. do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
wow yaar, it was really awesome and waiting for next one. bye tc.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
superb
too good
love ur fiction
update next part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
i want him to b like dis only.........u r superb.........d update was small bt really nice one.......waiting for d next........take ur sweet time bt dis time pls write long update.........

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