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Posted: 15 years ago
#81
wow it was awesome update.....
loved samrat and gunjan's meeting at sanjeevani!!
do continue soon!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#82
vry nice update
cant wait 4 d nxtttt update p lz do cont. soon plzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
#83
part-6
samrat came home late....n saw nupur waiting for him....
s=bhabi..ap abhitak jag rahiha??????
n=to aur kya karu??? samrat kaha tha tu?? pata ha kitni derse tear wait karahi thi..mayank bhi ghar agaya.,...sirf tu nahi aya...kaha tha tu??????
s=woh bhabi...me....actually....bhabi..
n=kya bolraha ha?? thek se bolna.....
s=are bhabi..ye lo.....mom ki reports...
n=are ha...le aya..thanks....ha bol kaha tha itni der??????
s=are kuch nahi bhabi..ye reports leneke baad gunjan ko ghar drop karnmeme thorasa der hogaya.....
n=ahem ahem,.....gunjan ko drop??? are ha...woh bhi to sanjeevanime kaam karti ha..so...mr shergill...kaise rahi date????
s=stop it bhabi....koi date nahi thi...bass raat thi..isiliye usse ghar choddiya...
n=ha ha...aadat daal raha ha....very gud......wase...bolna..kya baate hui???
s=bhabi....plzz...
n=aaccha..chal..tujhe to mujhe thanks kehna chahiye..na ma tujhe sanjeevani janeko kehti...aur na tu usse milta aur nahi tu usse.,....baat kar pata..aur nahi lift deta....
s=theek ha..thanks..
n=ese nahi..treat chahiye...
s=fine...kya???
n=kaal subhah jab tu joging pe jayega....tab mere lie.....garma garam jalebi layega..samja?????
s=wat??? jalebi?? ye kahase launga??????
n=umm...park ke pass...ek mandir ha...waha pe milti ha..samjha???
s=par.....
n=no ifs..no buts....only yes...
s=theek ha...devar hu na...uthalo fayda....
n=chal....ab hath mu dhole....ma khana lagati hu....
s=bhabi apse kitni baar kahunga ke....ap sojaya kijie khana rakke...ma khalunga..
n=mujhe ye karneme koi problem nahi ha..kyuki ye to meri dut kuchhi dinoki ha..uske baad to gunjan ane wali ha...
samrat blushed..
n=accha ab ye sharmana band kar...aur ja jaldise fresh hoke aa
s=abhi aya...
bhushan house...
gunjan was brushing her hair....when dia comes..
d=gunjan??? tum kab ayi???
g=thori der pehle.....kyu??
d=nahi..bui tumhare bareme puch rahi thi...wase....ab sogayi..par aj itni late kasie hogayi????
g=are kuch nahi.,..woh aj armaan jaldi chala gaya tha...aur isiliye uski cases mujhe handle karni pari....aur uparse samrat aya...
d=wat????? jiju aye the???
g=dia..itna excited honekei kya zarurat ha?????
d=are chodo na...bolo na..kya kaha jiju ne???
g=kuch nahi..bass ghar tak chodaa...
d=sach?????? woh..mujhe nahi pata tha ke jiju itne romantic ha...
g=uff.isme itna romantic honeki kya baat ha?????
d=comeone gunjan....tum bhi na...ab ma tumhari behen ho..mujhe to bata sakti ho na...jiju ne kaise i love u kaha??
g=dia.....shut up..bohot bolne lagi ho...mujhe neend arahiha..sona ha...
d=gunjan...
g=hatho..mujhe sona ha....
d=accha ab madam samrat ke naamse....sorry jiju ke naamse sharmane bhi lagi ha???
g=nahi....(blushing)
d=mujhe to kuch aur hi dikh raha ha....
g=gud nite....
next morning......samrat wakes up early...n goes to jogging...for nupur......he was jogging in the park...n was now searching for jelabi....when he saw gunjan walking b the road....with flowers in her hand....he was surprised to see her so early...
s=chashmish??? itni subhah??? kaha ja rahiha????
he follows her....but doesnt call her....gunjan was looking fresh...samrat sees her enetering a orphanage....
s=ashram??? par chashmish yaha kya karne ayi ha???
he follows her...n hids behind a wall...n watches her...gunjan was talking to a woman..who was the cartaker of the orpahnage....then a sweet little girl comes n sits on gunjans lap.....
g=are.....princess ap itni subhah uth gayi????
p=ha gunjan didi...agar nahi uthti..to apse kaise milti?? apto meri lucky charm ha na....
samrat was watching her from the window.....he was loving her smile.....how she was loving the child..n playing with her....but princess saw samrat staring at gunjan...samrat pointed her not to tell gunjan...princess smiles.....samrat gave her a flying kiss.....
g=accha aunty..ap in bachcoka khayal rakhna..ma kaal subhah phir aungi..
au=thek ha.gunjan beta.....
g=bye princess....
gunjan walks out...samrat again foloows her...now gunjan went to the mandir...samrat saw her taking the pooja thal..n went to the mandir.....he was watching her from far...
s=chashmish...itni innocent ha......sabke bareme kitna sochti ha.......itni subhah subhah?????
gunjan takes the thal...n takes a auto n heads for bhushan house......samrat ses the time...
s=oh shit..bhabi mujhe mar dalegi.....
he byes jalebi..n rushes to home....shergil mansion..mayank n shilpa aunty(samrats mom=sm) were having breakfast but nupur wasnt..
m=nuput..nashta karona.....
n=nahi......pehle samrat ko ane do...
samrat comes...he was still thinking about gunjan..he sits beside mayank...
n=samrat??? tu jalebi laya???
s=ye lo..
he gives her the jalebi...but they were very cold....
n=samrat...ye itna thanda kyu ha/?? mane tujhe kitni subhah janeko kaha tha...aur tu itni late ake...itna thanda??? kaha tha tu?? itni derse wait karrahi thi..
s=..........................................................
sm=samrat....
s=ha....mom..me fresh hoke ata hu..mujhe der horaha ha......
m=isse kya hua???????
n=pata nahi........
in the office.....samrat is not working...he was thinking..n wanting to talk to gunjan....but he wasnt able to do that..
s=phone karu?? ya nahi????? karu ya nahi????damn.....kuch samajh nahi araha ha...kya karu????
then he dials the number of...sanjeevani......shilpa was infdront of the phone..she picks it...
sh=helllo..sanjeevani hospital...
s=ab..heelllo......woh ma....actually...
sh=ap bimar ha???
s=nahi..
sh=apne check karwaya ha/???
s=nahi..
sh=apk appointment ha???
s=nahi baba.,...
sh=to phone kyu kia??? khamakha time waste...bye...
s=are par......ajeeb ladki ha...bina sune..kat dia......phirse karta hu.....
this time...armaan picked it....shilpa went from there...
ar=hello...dr armaan malik..sanjeevani...
s=ji ma..woh...actuaaly....chashm.....
ar=sorry wrong number...ye koi chashme ka shop nahi ha...ye hospital ha...galat jage number dial kia ha....bye...
s=are...ajeeb ha sabke sab.......chashmish..bolne bhi nahi dia.....last time..
g=armaan..tumhe shilpa bula rahiha...
ar=ok....tumhara file....
samrat dialed the number.....this time..luckily gunjan pciked it....
g=helllo......
s=......................................
he was lost in her voixe.....he wasnt able to speck./..
g=kaun bol raha ha/?????
s=...........................(in mind)kaise kahu???
g(in mind)kahi ye samrat to nahi????
samrat was thinking how to start the convo..when mayank entered n called samrat..gunjan heard that....samrat discoonnected the line...
g(in mind)=mujhe pata tha...ke ye samrat hi ha......
s(in mind_shit..kahi chashmish.,...ne sun to nahi liaa......kya karu??? usse milna paregaa.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#84
res! ME FIRST!!
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Hey maisha!!
awesome yaar!! loved it!!
specially nupur-samrat convo at nite!!
Nupur wanted jalebi and samrat got her cold ones...hahah!!
Too good yaar!😆
Gunjan goes to orphanage and sam sees her!! 😃
Love this ff alot!!⭐️⭐️⭐️
Hmm.. you sent me to sajan dreamland!!
haha the shilp-armaan wala scene was funny!!
n finally gunjan picked up but mayank had to come na....
hahaha!!
awesome updatee!!
waiting 4 the next one...! sams gonna meet gunjan!!
YAY!!😃😃
Thanx 4 the pm!!
Love
Manjari
Edited by Mjhtrox11 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#85
Sorry for souble posting!!
anywayz superb update maishaa
continue soon!!
Edited by Mjhtrox11 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#86
Amazinngg Part!!
Loved It...
You Are Such A Creative Writer...
Just LOVE LOVE LOVE This Concept And FF!!
Pllzz Cont Soon!! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#87
wao awesom update
it was really sweet cute
n outstanding update dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
#88
Awesomee update hun..
it was beautiful😍
awww sam was following gunjan😳
Loved it to the coree
pllzzz do cont soonnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
#89
AWESOME YAAR FANTASTIC LOVEOT WRITE SOON
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Posted: 15 years ago
#90
hey maisha...
amzinggggg
totalyyyyy rpckng update..
loved ech part of it..4m d mrng walks..2 d temple 2 d phone thng..
evrythng was amzinggg
cont soooooooon n thnx 4 d pm..

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