DOSTI AUR PYAAR(second thread) - Page 25

Created

Last reply

Replies

527

Views

69.6k

Users

129

Likes

1.6k

Frequent Posters

Mahima_13 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail A Bag Full of Love OS Contest Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
fantastic update

finally mayu's mom knows

hope aab sab thik ho jaye


Shafy_Kaira_MN thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 14 years ago

😲yaar mayank ko sabki nazro mein itna mat girao puri galti uski bhi nahi thi please aur ye lovestory mein nupur ko bhi realize hona chahiye ki galti uski bhi thi

i don't felt gud ki mayu ki mom ne use thappad mara
no 🤢
aur ye baat please kisi ko na pta chale varna humara mayu he blame hoga hamesha
no no
sky86 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
its awesome please update soon.👏
maxhot thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update .
continuous it.😛
spreadingsmile thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 14 years ago
waah hazra,you also write a good one,and waa you are making us desperate with your ending"ab kya hoga"typical writer😆😛,wow hazra ,mujhe to kuch ata hi nahi,thanx for pm ,ab jaldi age ka likh,
Edited by monayafan - 14 years ago
_Monu_ thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
hey hazra poor mayur
but at least uday n mayu mom
know abt that
nice updt
see yaaa
anjali_34 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update .
continuous it.😛
hazra66 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago

hi guys...updated next part...i hope u like it...dont forget to comment...read n njoy..

she slapped mayank....
mm-sharam nahi ayi tujhe....😡
m-maa meri baat to suniye...😔
mm-kuch nahi sunna hai mujhe......😡
m-maa....😔
mm-😔
m-maa...mujhe maaf kar dijiye...
mm-ab sirf ek hi raasta hai....
m-kya??
mm-tujhe nupur se shadi karni hogi.....
m-kya....
mm-aur koi raasta nahi hai...😔
m-par maa..😔
mm-chup kar mayank....mujhe tujhe apna bete kehne se sharam aa rahi hai...tune aisi ghatiya harkat kaise ki...itni badi galti tujse kaise ho gayi..😔
m-maa......
mm-kya nupur ne ye baat kisi ko batai hai??
m-pata nahi maa...par mujhe nahi lagta ki nupur ne ye baat kisiko batai hogi...
scene shift to other side..
g-di...kya soch rahi ho??
n-kuch nahi gunjan.....
g-di...ap thick to haina??apka chehra itna utraya kyu hai??
n-kuch nahi gunjan......gunjan mai clg nahi ana chahti hu....
g-di apki tabyet bilkul thick nahi hai...mujhe doctor ko bulana hi padega...
n-nahi gunjan...thick hai chal..mai ati hu..
g-nahi di..apki tabyet thick nahi hai...ap aram kijiye...aj mai bhi clg nahi jaa rahi hu...mai yaha apke paas rahugi..
n-aree nahi gunjan..mai aa rahi hu...chal..
g-par di apki tabyet....
n-aree gunjan..mujhe kuch nahi hua hai...chal ab chalte hai..
g-thick hai di...
both went down...
d-hey girls..lets go..
g-ha diya...chalo....
they went from there..after sometime..they reached clg....
g-di mai class mai jaa rahi hu....kuch bhi kaam ho to mujhe call kar lena..thick hai...
n-thick hai gunjan...
gunjan went in her class...other side...samrat was waiting for mayank.....
s to himself-yaar ye mayank kyu abhi tak nahi aya...aj to mujhe usse baat karni hi hogi...hamesha to jaldi ata hai aur aj aya hi nahi...
uday comes..
u-hey sam...tu yaha kya kar raha hai??
s-mayank ka wait..
u-mayank ka wait..par kyu??
s-kuch kaam hai...
u-kya??
s-aree dude...itne sawaal mat puch yaar..
u-tujhe mayank se kya baat karni hai??
s-uday...tu itne sawaal kyu puch raha hai....
u-mai to sirf aise hi puch raha hu..
s-aa gaya mayank...
samrat went from there...
u to himself-agar mayank ne sam ko sab kuch bata diya to nupur problem mai aa jaegi...mujhe ye sab rokna hoga..
samrat went to mayank...
s-hey mayank...aj itna late..sab thick to haina dude...hamesha to jaldi ate ho...
m-vo.......aj late ho gaya..
s-acha mayank..mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai....
m-samrat..ham baadme baat karte hai...mujhe class mai jaana hai..
s-mayank...par..
mayank went from there..
u-sam...tujhe mayank se kya baat karni hai??
s-yaar tu itne sawaal mat pucha kar..
samrat also went from there..
u to himself-mujhe mayank se baat karni hogi...mujhe use ye kehna hoga ki vo ye baat kisiko nahi batai..
after sometime...
u-mayank....mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...
m-uday..mera abhi baat karna ka mood nahi hai...
he was leaving from there but..
u-ruk jayo mayank....
m-kya hai uday??
u-mayank...mujhe sab pata hai...
m-kya pata hai...
u-tumne jo meri behen ke sath kiya uske liye mai tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karuga...😡
mayank was shocked...
m-😔
u-mayank....nupur ne mujhe sab kuch bol diya hai...aur agar tumne ye baat kisiko bhi batai to mujse bura koi nahi hoga...😡
m-dhamki de rahe ho tum mujhe....😡
u-jo samajna hai samjo par agar ye baat kisiko bhi pata chali to...😡
m-to kya kar loge tum uday....ek baat sunlo...galti tumhari behen ki bhi hai.....aur ek baat...ye baat ek na ek din sabko pata chalne hi wali hai...😡
mayank went from there...
u to himself-ye mayank ne aisa kyu kaha...ab mai kya karu...agar ye baat sabko pata chal gayi to nupur ka kya hoga....😔
other side..
m to himself-ye nupur apne ap ko samajti kya hai...uday ko bata diya....vo samajti hai ki sari galti meri hi hai.....jaisi ki uski koi galti hi nahi thi...mujhe usse baat karni hi hogi...😡
he was in a very angry mood..he went in the class but nupur was not there..
m to himself-abhi to yaha thi..kaha chale gayi ye ladki..😡
he went in library to find nupur but she was not in library...
m to himself-kahi vo ghar to nahi chale gayi....
then he saw nupur...he went to her..
m-nupur..
n-tum....😡
she was going from there but mayank caught her hand...
n-mera haat chodo mayank..mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni hai...😡
m-par mujhe tumse baat karni hai...😡
n-mayank mera haat chodo...😡
mayank took nupur in the music room and closed the door of music room...
n-mayank......tumne...tumne darwaza kyu lock kiya...😔
he went close to nupur..
m-tumne uday ko sab kuch kyu bataya??😡
nupur was going back and mayank was coming closer towards her...she was afraid of mayank...
n-mayank.....mere karib mat aao..😔
m-jawab do nupur...😡
n-mayank....mayank dur raho mujse..😔
but he didnt listend her and was coming closer towards her..
n-mayank....mayank....tum..😭
he stopped....
n-mujhe tumse dar lagne lagi hai mayank.....i hate u..aur mujhe tumhari shakal se bhi nafrat ho gayi hai....😭
she was going from there..when she opened the door she saw samrat....
n-samrat...
mayank turned to see him...
s-nupur..tum yaha music room mai......aur vo bhi mayank ke sath...
n-vo........
she went from there..
s-mayank....tum dono yaha kya kar rahe the??
m-vo......kuch nahi samrat...
he also went from there..
s to himself-kuch to gadbad hai...pata to karna hi hoga.....
samrat called gunjan....she received the call..
g-hello samrat...kaha ho tum??
s-chasmish...tum jaldi se music room mai ayo...
g-music room..par kyu??
s-tum pehle aao fir batata hu..
g-thick hai samrat...
after sometime...gunjan went in music room...
g-samrat....kya hua??
s-chasmish....aj maine mayank aur nupur ko ek sath music room mai dekha...aur door bhi lock tha....
g-kya...
s-ha aur nupur bohot dari hui si thi...
g-kya.......
s-ha chasmish..kuch to gadbad hai...aur jab maine nupur se pucha ki vo mayank ke sath kya kar rahi thi to vo chali gayi aur mayank ne bhi kuch kaha nahi aur chala gaya..
g-samrat...mujhe bhi lagta hai kuch to baat hai jo di mujse chupa rahi hai....
s-tumhe nupur se baat karni hogi...
g-ha samrat...mujhe di se baat karni hi hogi..
s-ha chasmish...tumhe nupur se baat karni chahiye...aur vo tumhari behen hai..agar koi baat hogi to vo tumhe zarur bataagi..
g-aj mai di se baat karugi..
s-hmmmm....
g-di kaha hai??
s-pata nahi...hogi yahi kahi..
g-di ka phone..
she recieve the call..
g-hello di..
n-gunjan kaha hai tu??
g-di mai samrat ke sath hu...ap kaha hai??
n-mai clg ke bahar hu...mai ghar jaa rahi hu...tujhe ana hai??
g-di ap mera wait kariye..mai abhi ati hu..
n-thick hai...
both cut the call..
s-kya hua chasmish..
g-mai di ke sath ghar jaa rahi hu samrat....bye..
s-par chasmish itni jaldi...
g-samrat...mujhe di se baat bhi karni hai..
s-ok chasmish....bye..
gunjan went from there.......other side...nupur was waiting for gunjan...at that time she saw mayank....and turned her face so that mayank dont see her..gunjan comes and put her hand on nupur's shoulder...she thought that it was mayank...
n-mayank apna haat hathao..😡
g-di.....
n-gunjan tu.....
g-di kya hua??
n-kuch nahi....mujhe laga.....chod ye sab....ab chal...😔
g-thick hai di...chaliye...
both left from there....
hey guys...here ends my part...i hope u like it...dont forget to comment....so kya hoga ab??kya karegi ab nupur??kya hoga jab ye baat sabke samne aa jaegi??kya gunjan degi nupur ka sath??janne ke liye wait kijiye mere next update ka...love u all..
hazra
Edited by hazraluvarjun - 14 years ago
KaSh-Maneet-Fan thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 14 years ago
hiiii
awesome update
loved it
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
priya_27_23 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
THODA JALDI UPDATE KARTHI REHNA PLZ
NICE UPDATE

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Aleyamma47

2 months ago

Pyaar Ya Rebound? ~ Rumya SS [Completed]

Intro: Rudra fakes a relationship with his best friend Soumya to impress glamorous Bhavya-but ends up falling for the one girl who truly knew...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: desidillse

4 months ago

ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed} ArShi OS : Pyaar Ka Naghma {Completed}

[NOCOPY] P Y A A R. K A. N A G H M A. "Friends?" a little boy extended his hand towards a girl which she responded. They smiled and embraced...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: heavenlybliss

5 months ago

Pyaar Ka Tropefest - My Series Of 5 Crossover Couple One-Shots

Hello everyone! I will be posting my 5 one-shots over here which I sent in for the Pyaar Ka Trope-fest contest. They are all standalones and...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Koeli

5 years ago

Comment Migration Request Thread #1

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".