FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet thread 2 - Page 48

Hmmmmm....no update yet.... i keep checking to see if there is an update.. but did not find one yet😭😭😭😭..... i guess muskan is writting 3-4 long parts for the weekend ahead..😳😳😳😳😆😆😆.... plz post soon as we all cant wait.....

😭🤢dying for another part please update soon. Will go crazy waiting for it By the way this ff is really good

LOL I want Maans plan to backfire just so that he can get irritated LOL

I logged on simply to tell u how amazing i'm finding ur new track in the ff - as i havent commented for ages I should sum up what all the previous and latest parts have made me feel like and believe i am alll smiles =D =D
excellent excellent Excellent update after update! Ur ff is just soo lovable! I couldnt believe the way maan took things into his hands, but I totally appreciate how u were tryina portray his frustration - he felt helpless and needed geet to believe him, and since then maan has become even hotter! the way he's tryina convince geet is just mindblowing!! altho i love how u've crafted geet and made simple and sweet i wish she does actually begin to realise that maan is all hers and she shouldnt b hell bent on tryina make him and priya get back together - i hav a question for u tho. muskan, u c how priya and maan oviusly hold a special place in their hearts for eachother i can c that maan will never forget that she was his first love but is now completely in love with geet - and i love him for that! however, i'm unsure as to whether priya has gotten over maan - like does she Still love him?? although she's encouraging maan to win geet's heart, at the same time i feel like maybe she's come back into their lives to become part of the family again and i really hope that that is not the case. i want maneet only lol i totally love everything about this ff so i cant complain about anythin! i'm so excited bout what u'll b writing up next!! =D cannot waittt =D !! xxxxxx

cant wait update ASAP... 😔

Muskaan ji, update karna bol gayi? :P

muskaan its my half century of checking for ur update .

where r u??????????????????????????????????????????????????????
u want me to call 911 and find u😭

Plz update karo na .it has never happened that u didn't update on time,is everything ok just bit worried sorry to bother u

part 58

maan walks into the bedroom...
geet - aap ka sur dard kaise hain
maan - abhi bhi hain(pretending)
geet gets worried & makes him lie down on the bed..
she quickly grabs the balm..& sits next to his head..
maan slides his head in her lap ..geet applies the balm..
geet - how are u feeling..
maan cuddles into her lap...kissing her stomach..while his
hand making its way up under the dress..& says much better now..
geet snaps out of the bed & says..aap ko mazak sujraha hain
i was so worried for u..maan kisses her cheek & gets ready..

priya knocks the door..geet wonders & looks at maan..he was
looking into some files...priya comes in...
geet - aap ko knock karne kya zarroorat hain..
maan gets pissed off with wat geet said.. & turns his face..
priya - I was planning if we all could go for shopping
and then dine out today..
geet - that will be great
priya ignores her answere & walks to maan ..wat say..
maan looks at geet (who looked confused)..maan sanps..I am getting late
for office..
maan - geet mera breakfast laga do...
geet walks out...to the kitchen
priya - tum sach main paagal hoo maan!! that was such an good plan..
maan - priya please ..yah sab kuch jada ho raha hain
I don't like all this...geet is fine..she will take time to understand
my love..but I am sure she will..doing all this will only misleading her...
maan goes to the kitchen..he looked into geets eyes..they seemed angry
maan - kya hua geet?(he hugs her holding from waist)
geet - aap ne di ko kyu mana kiya?(she shied looking down)
maan - aacha kya chathi ho tum..(he placed his fingers below her chin
& slowly lifting her face..to meet her eyes)
geet - aap bhi chaloo na..
maan - theek hain..get ready..then
geet gets excited & hugs him & kisses on his cheek..& runs to her room
maan touches his cheek & smiles..sach much pagali hain..
priya wore a lovely saree & looked like a perfect elgant lady
geet walked out in a pair of 3/4th lenth jeans & t-shirt..another kidoo..
all set to play with krish the whole day!!! maan looks at geet & krish
involved & complementing each other..he could'nt be happier..

as they walked to the car..priya..went to sit in front..maan glared at her
geet - di aap aghe bethoo..mujhe krish ke saath bethna hain
she jumps in with krish..pushing him..
geet & krish wispering..& fightig over a sms
geet - mujhe dikhao.
krish - mom please let me read it first..
geet - mujhe dekhna hain...
krish - mom nahin..let me atleast read it..
geet - main dad ko boloon doonghi
krish - loo..har baat pe dad ko bich main lane ki kya zarroth hain
geet - "Sweetness can be defined without honey.
Fragnance can be defined without Rose.
But, friendship can't be defined without YOU."
says it loud wah wah & starts laughing
maan - wat happened..kis baath pur wah wahy ho harhi hain
geet - nahin kuch nahin..krish is following his fathers suggestions pritty well
she smiles at krish & says friendship can't be defined with out you!!!
umm!!! wah mera Jr.Mr.Lover..bilkul sahi ja rahe ho..(krish is blushing pink..)
babaji lakin mera Mr.lover kya hoga??? use main bhi thodhi samjh dal do na..

as they reach the mall..geet & krish step out immidiately..
geet - aap loog shopping kar lo main aur krish fun zone ja rahe hain
maan - geet rukhoo ..ek min...
geet - ji..
maan - holds her haand & says..I came here for u ..aur tum..
geet comes close to maan and slowly puts the ring in maans pocket & says
- be good..mooka milthe he..give her the ring...
maan gets angry & turns his face ..geet runs to catch up with krish
Maan shouts at priya..yeh looo...pehn loo ring..
I told u...uska dimgha ulta chaltha hain...ise aacha to main office chala jatha..
priya - seriously yaar..she is impossible..
maan - do ur shopping I will be at the coffee shop..shall work on my laptop
priya - umm..

after some time geet calls maan
maan - kya hai!!(he snaps)
geet - ji kuch nahin & cuts the call
maan calls back...
maan - aacha ..kya hua bolo?
geet - nahin woh!! humko..woh!!
maan - where are u..
geet - 5th floor..fun zone...
maan - wait we are coming there..

maan comes with priya...geet notices the ring in priyas hand & looks at maan
maan - nahin main ne nahin....(& closes his eyes in pain..)
geet looked happy but it did bother her a bit..maan noticed that ..in her eyes
maan looked deep into those eyes which would tell him every thing..deep in her heart
which she is unawarre of..there was sudden jolt in her eye..as if some one
just stabbed her heart...she did'nt react for a while..she knew it coming..
rather wanted it ..to happen
but probably did'nt know it could hurt her..or even bother her widest of thoughts..
the change in her eyes hurt him more than..it was bothering her..she probably did'nt
even realzie it yet..but maan was hatting the thought that it was all because of him..
he hatted himself for being part of all this..maan tried to distract her..
maan - why did u call geet..
geet - ji woh! mujhe..(words did'nt flow..her heart was filld & confused)
maan - kya baath hain geet..he tried to compose her
krish - dad hamare sare paise khatam hogaya.. please card refill kara do.
geet - han woh! card refil..she blabbered..
maan - umm..

precap
maan really hurt!!

please do reply love muskan

great update

loved it!!! so finally Geet feels a little jealous. The precap seems interesting. Keep up the good work. I just love the plot of your story. your so creative. 👏