Maneet FF: You are always on my mind. AN on P 150 - Page 45

hey....u r writing is so beautiful👏.....the emotions.... the dialogues....every characters use are so great.......(just a request could u make GEETA n MAAN share good relationship before geeta find out about geet past......like father-daughter relationship...but....without geeta knowing who maan really is?.....ONLY IF U WANT TO DO SO.....
BUT even if u dont do this...please keep writing....

its beautiful piece of writing i have ever read....tht includes books👏

please PM me....when u update "your always on my mind" part 23

thank u......please continue👍🏼
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Hey Polki,

wonderful.. i was waiting for ur update...

Hey.... Polki...

This one of urs is an amazing FF.... I jut loved reading it... Reminded me of my fav movie veer zaara... even being soooo different frm it... Loved it to the core...

hey poli,

can we expect an update plzzzzzzzzz

Luvd u ff .cmpltly different outluk...........read in one go.....update soon plzzzzzzzzzz

wow dear i just love your sasha
she is so sweet
vicky and raj are good
do continue
my office internet is cut down so i m commenting from home so a little short comment i wll try to write more
bye sumi

Originally posted by: crazzy-girl

i loved it..omg ur making sasha a positve character!! ..like it..the way she is feeling bad about geet and all!!n vicky:)

Thank you, I am glad that you like Sasha as a positive character. Although she feels bad, we too must feel bad for her, since like any warm blooded woman all her crime was that she liked Maan when she was younger, what is sad is that even though she is not the reason why Geet left, she still thinks that it was because of her that Geet left. But I am glad that because of this guilt she is trying to bring Maan and Geet together.

Polki

Originally posted by: kinno

continue soon. really love the idea sasha being a positive character. 😊

Thanks

Originally posted by: vinithaa

oh my god!!! what a terrific update loved it to the core👏👏👏 atleast shasha got her brain back...hopes she succeeds in getting them together...

Thanks. Sasha always had her brains, she was just infatuated with Maan when she was younger, can't really blame her, considering how awesome my munda is. I too hope that she has a hand in bringing Maneet together.

Polki