Life without youu!! (update on pg 139) - Page 12

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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow wow awesome update so wow ridz said yes to going on date wid armaan wow n den sajan god dey fight too much jst like mayur in mjht hehe n den wen in midnight loveeee sajan convo man so cuteeee n den haha mayu his dream lol poor him do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kashndsel4eva

awesome update

loved the couples scenes
cant wait till the next part
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

Thanxx!!
Glad youu liked it!!
Loved your comment!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

part 3-

madly in love with ur ff
it is so cute
mayur were amazing
sanu were rocking

Thanxx alott mahima!!
I always wait 4 ur comments and that picture you always attach wid it!!!
Lovee youu!!
N im glad ur liking my ff!!!!
--Manjari!
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Posted: 15 years ago
fabulous update...mayanks dream about nupur was funny....sajan fight alot.....arman and ridhima going on a date sounds interesting.......cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
tht was sooooooooo awesome part
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Posted: 15 years ago
wonderful update...keep going ..continue soon..

Divya
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Posted: 15 years ago

Heyy guys...

Thanx for your wonderful comments! This is one is a mixed update! No sajan mayur ar !! its altogether!! Hope you'll like it!! ..................................................................
Next day College..
Mayank was sitting in the CANTEEN waiting for nupur to come...Armaan came and sat next to him..
A: hey dude! aaj tumhari tabiyet toh theek hain na!
M: haan.. kyun?
A: tum LIBRARY ke siva CANTEEN main?? kaise?
M: woh main nupur ka wait kar raha hoon!! aajaye bas!
A: oh ho.. mayank..aur larki ka wait! wah! time badal raha hain!! ab log mujhe library main padte hue dekhenge!! (he says sarcasticallyy)
M: shut up armaan!!
A: haha!! aur kya kahoon!! par seriously! achha hi hain! thodi der toh uss safocating room se bahar aaya!! gosh!!
M: very funnyy!! aur woh achi jagah hain..
Nupur comes... She sees mayank sitting wid armaan.. her eyes are stuck on mayank she keeps walking walking walking... and BANG! she bangs into a table..!!
N: oopss sorryy!!
M: nupur!!
N: (in mind) kuchh toh garbar hain! mayank canteen main hain!! samrat kaha ho tum!! pakka dad ne isse kaha hoga! mujhe sudharega na yeh! main isse bigaadkar rakh doongi!!
M: hi!
N: (with a fake smile) hi! waise tum yaha? canteen main? library ka raasta bhool gye kya?
M: nahi! main tumse baat karne aaya hoon!!
A: Oh! hi guys!! plz have a seat!!
N n M sit!
N: toh mayank kaho?
M: dekho nupur.. hamesha larne se achha hain ki hum dosti kar le!
N: main itne jaldi dosti nahi karti!!
M: jaldi nahi hain koi! bas please try and cooperate! you know tumhare dad ne mujhe kya bola?
A: hey! tum dono kya bol rahe ho mujhe samajh nahi aa raha... par anyway.. gunjan aa gayi kya?
N: haan woh.. umm.. yahi kahi hogi!!
A: thanks.. bye mayank.. bye nupur!!
N amd M: bye!!
M: haan toh main bol raha tha..
N: dekho... mujhe nahi badalna! aur tumne mere dad ki baat mankar bohot bari galati ki hain!!
M: I realised that!! isliye keh raha hoon!! cooperation please...
N: haha... mujhe pata tha.. waise tum chhod do main dad ko keh doongi ki tum mujhe nahi sudhar sakte!
M: fine keh dena! main khud bhi sir se baat kar loonga!!
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Armaan goes about finding gunjan but he bumps into samrat!
S: hey! watch where your going!!
A: ya sorry.. kya tum mujhe bata sakte ho ki gunjan kaha hain?
S: main gunjan ka bodygaurd dikhta hoon? mujhe kaise pata hoga ki woh kaha hain?
A: apna aur mera time waste karne se toh achha hota ki tum mujhe bas seedhe seedhe nahi bol dete!!
S: fine.. nahi! happy?
A: you know dude! agar tum thode aur sweetly baat karoge na.. toh shayad tumhare koi friends ban jaye college main aur tum itne akele nah raho!
S: thanx 4 ur free advice.. waise gunjan woh rahi.. he points behind armaan!
A turns around..
A: gunjann!! help pleasee!!!
S: (in mind) gunjan.. hah... armaan gunjan se help bhi leta hain? weird! par kal sach mujhe kuchh toh hua tha..
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G: hi armaan... (her eyes were looking at samrat. until he left the corridor)
A: gunjan mujhe help chahiye!
G: kya hua kaho? (still looking at him talk to nupur)
A: mujhe riddhima ko date pe lekar jaana hain!!
G: hmm.. par di samrat se kyun baat kar rahi hai?
A: what? GUNJAN!! (shaking her!!)
G: haan.. sorry main tumhe 5 minutes main canteen main milte hain! waha baat karenge.. ok?
A: fine!!
he left!
G walked up to them..
G: di..
N turned
N: haan gunjan bolo?
G: woh di aaj riddhima dinner pe ghar aa rahi hain.. toh hum jaldi niklenge!!
N: mujhe toh kaam hain.. main baad main taxi se aa jaoongi!!
S: par riddhima ne toh mujhe nahi bataya?
G: oh! main bata deti hoon! ridz dinner pe ghar aa rahi hain! hum thodi der padhenge aur phir main usse drop kar doongi!!
S: ok..
G: theek hain di.. phir tum khud hi aa jana!! waise chalo na canteen chalte hain?
N: nahi gunji.. tu jaa..mujhe samrat se kaam hain!
She left but she managed to hear "par dad ne kaha tha usse.."
G in mind: di samrat se dad ke baare main kyun baat kar rahi thii!! pata lagana padega!!
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She goes to the canteen and sees armaan and riddhima talking.. she thinks she should come later but then
R: hey gunjan!! aao na!
She comes and sits...
G: hi riddhima!
A smiles at gunjan..
G is confused!
R is confused too!! why were they staring at each other?
R: mujhe class jana hain.. main baad main milti hoon!!
A:(catches her hand) hey! baitho naa!!
R: nahi.. plz mujhe jana hoga!
A leaves her hand..
A: par aaj raat pakka ha!
R: dekhte hain!! pehle bhaiya se toh permission lo! waise bhi aaj main gunja ke ghar ja rahi hoon!
A: woh sab main dekh loonga!
...Ridz goes...
G: toh.. riddhima ne.. tumhe.. date ke liye haan kar di??
(excited)
A: main tumhe corridor main yeh hi toh bata raha tha.. aur tum uss sadu samrat ke baare main baat kar rahi thii!!
G: woh itna bhi sadu nahi hain!! achcha insaan hain! seriously!
A: god! you sound like riddhima!
G: argh! nahi yaar! samrat sachme achha hain!!
S: seriously?
G turns to find samrat standing behind her!
G: woh.. um..
S: thanks.. alot...
G: um.. your.. welcome..
(In mind) shitt!! yaar!! he must be thinking ki kitni bholi hain n all!
S smiled
A: gunjan.. where were we...
S leaves..
G; haan.. date!
A: plz plz.. meri help karo! mujhe ridz ko date pe lekar jaana hain aaj!! woh tumhare ghar aa rahi hain na! toh waha se main usse date par le jaunga!
G: cool! par ridz ne haan kar di na?
A: haan yaar!
G: good! toh uske liye kya gifts laye ho?
A: gifts?? kyun??
G: pehle date par kuchh toh doge naa!!
A: oh haan...
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Nupur and sam were walking when mayank came..
M: nupur.. woh.. tumne baat ki sir se?
N: woh aaj nahi aye hain.. main ghar par baat kar loongi!
M: nahi chhod do.. main hi aakar unse baat kar loonga!
N: tum!! ghar par??
M: haan kyun?
N: nahii.. woh aaj main samrat ke saath date par ja rahi hoon na.. isliye.. jab tum aoge toh main nahi rahoongi!
M: tum.. samrat ke saath?? (he was younger to her wasnt she?)
N: haan.. you know main aur samrat.. (putting her hand around him!!
M: hmm.. watever.. main.. woh.. khud hi baat karlunga!
Mayank leaves..
S: what?? hum date par??
N; nahi yaar!! ridz dinner pe aa rahi hain na.. toh tum bhi aa jana!!
S: what??
N: haan.. kya problem hain?
S: fine.. main.. ridz ko batake aata hoon!!
N: fine.. then hum sab saath main hi chalenge main gunjan se baat kar leti hoon!!
S: cool!
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Precap: G n A plan everything... A goes 4 shopping to get something for R.. he forgets his cellphone in the car!!
G meets S and he tells her that even he is going! R is scared!!
M comes to their house and Mr. bhushan asks him to stay for dinner!! A lott of hungama!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome blossom .......cool !!! keep it up ...loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
lolz cute update
really looks like hungama update next will
be keep continueing
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow that was like superb plss continue soon

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