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stuti

@stuti123

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

lovely OS mou ................. loved it lotssssssssssssssss

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Marium

@maloo19

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

awww really cute OS.😳.......

seems very realistic😉

loved it completely😳

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Divya

@MyInspirationz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

Mou... I am speechless.. you have written it extremely well.. and I hope that you do continue to write like this everytime..

@Divzzzzzzzzzzzzz:- everyone's inspiration... 😊

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315925

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#34

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO 🤗
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeks!!!

Man this is crazzzyyy!

Loved it

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Amazing

no words 2 say

loved it

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Payal-15

@Payal-15

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#36

Wonderful OS Mou!!!😃

Loved it😍

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Sabah

@a little faith

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Dearest Mou,

Two people you said! I suppose I should have inferred more subjectively than objectively.

Here are a few delights that compelled me to go back and linger longer,

"Though he was really nor able to find anything special about it" As we discussed before, honour is where you place it, as are special people and places, we do not really choose them, destiny does that for us.

He just couldn't possibly hide that glow in his face & that shine in his eyes whenever he is with her,his happiness automatically comes out in his face & also in his mouth 'he just can't stop hinting to her abt that!! How often our heart's reveal our secrets despite ourselves?

She never really judge him on the basis of those differences..she always looks into the real person he is'.& that thought actually managed to carry a ray of hope in his mind, always. We always hope to surround ourselves with people who understand our reality so that despite those 'pretenses' we adorn ourselves with for the battles of life, if we wound our souls and fail to recognize, they help bandaged back to life our light, which we only hope to keep lit for them!

He didn't know what to feel as he was not even recognizing his own feelings.Heart yah haath?! :)

Mou, I liked the substance and the pace was superb, it matched every beat of my heart and forced it further and faster onto the next 'verb'! Lovely!

Love Sabah

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sriravali

@lovely.ravs

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#38

awesome mou...

loved reading u r OS .......😊

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yashasvini

@Yashh...

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Mou. 🤗
loved reading u r OS yaar!...
good job😊

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AmyArTiMayUr

@AmyArTiMayUr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#40

Mou..WOWWWWWW!!!!!!!!! 👏⭐️👏 And you said you are not a writer...seriously girl😆😆

The whole OS was sooo out of this world...it seemed so real and i felt as if i was standing just nearby watching every single thing that was going on😳😳 i wish i was😛😛

The lines in the card were lovely...but i loved this line the most-- Life was not bad for them individually before, but with the gift of togetherness it just became a lot more beautiful for him, for her & for them!!!!!!!

It is BEAUTIFUL....😳😳 Please please please do write more😃😃🤗

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