Mayur - A love story *NEW* part1b- pg13- 22/7

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Anamika.5

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

Hey Sam

Loved the Concept and CS

Update soon

I am waiting dear

Love,
$hrey@

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abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

hey sami,

Sahi concept hai

Mayank knows how to win over if he likes something

would love to read

and need not to tell that i am in dear

Luv,

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shweta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Sam.....i love reading real stuffs😃....n though it might be simple i assure u that i'l love it😳

Continue soon

Love,

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

update soon !!!!
you told that ull be updating today 😡😡
wheres the update😡😡😡

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-sam-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#35

Hello my lovely readers.....

Thank you for reading, liking and commenting.

I am extremely sorry , I couldnt reply to all the comments

but I read them all, and you all make me fly with such wonderful comments....

Thank you very much....

My mood was really bad, actually worst today but after chatting with someone, a sweet person, it became normal...Thank you....

And Pebzy scared me😆

so I had to update...Sorry Pebzy I made you wait.....

Noe enough of my blabberings....

Please scroll down...

and a good news- I am updating Horoscopes finally, tomorrow, no more lame excuses.....
And Another Chance too...so enjoy....

Edited by -sam- - 15 years ago

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-sam-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Aru dii, he tujhyaasaathi........😃

Nupur's POV
Finally I am home. Though I love my school, to teach students, and love to spend time with them, I eagerly wait to reach my home. Home sweet Home. Whose shoes and sandles are this? By God! that means some relatives are there inside. How to enter now? I really hate to enter when some guests are there. , they will look at me, enquire and then I too need to talk to them. Kya karu main? I get so nervous when I have to meet people. However confident I may be, but I am always nervous. Not nervous, I feel shy.And that I am wearing this red salwaar, I wonder why maa asked me to wear this out. I am not tired, but still. Kisike saamne aise jaana accha bhi to nahi lagta na.
"Hey Nupur!" Here comes my brother, Samrat, to say he is 2 years younger to me but acts like 4 years elder to me.
"Chal, andar aa." He is smiling. something is fishy. Are, obviously there are some guests inside. "Haan, aa rahi hu" I said taking out my sandles. I dont know why am feeling so uneasy. My sixth sense I guess, something is going to happen now.
I entered my house, my maa is smiling more than required, another danger sign. She is wearing one of her new saree. "Are Nupur beta, tu aagayi, inse mil yeh hain Shilpa ji, " "Namaste " I said, joining both my palms, and smiling sweetly. She too is giving me a warm smile. She is good. "Aur yeh hain Ravi ji" " Namaste uncle!" I said again smiling. I dont have to force myself to smile, it automatically comes. "Namaste beta" He said with a smile. I turned around to see a guy staring and smiling at me. What is it? Who is he now? I hate people staring at me. I so hate it. "Aur yeh hain Mayank" said my maa placing her hand over my shoulder.
"Ratna, Nupur ko fresh to hone do" I saw my father finally, sitting on the chair, opposite to the guests. My father is strict, but I know he loves me.

Mayank's POV
This is my 15th proposal. Gosh! I only cant believe it. From last two years I cant find a perfect girl for me. I want a sweet simple girl,
and am here today. The house is big and neatly decorated. They are reach, I hope Nupur is not proudy. The house, I must say simply decorated. "Hello Mr. Mayank Sharma, I am Samrat Bhushan" I guess he is Nupur's younger brother. Maa had told me. "Hello Samrat, Nice to meet you" I said shaking our hands and giving him a warm sign. He is not proudy, is simple, I guess she is too. We are settled now. Where is she? Oh! so aunty is telling maa, she is not being informed. I guess she wont get angry and all.
Samrat is going out. I guess she came, why am I getting nervous? She entered. Wow! she is looking heavenly beautiful in the red salwaar kammez, her long hair tied in a long plate. No makeup and all. Even after a tiring day she looks so fresh and relaxed, that means she loves her work. The way she is smiling at maa and papa. Its so sweet, oh she is looking at me. Her deep brown eyes.Her eyelashes, no makeup. She is the one for me. Her name is so nice. Mayank - Nupur. I know she is the one. Yes! she is the one. She is not like others. She is different. Other girls, they used to be sometimes fake, drooling over me . But Nupur, I can see the sparkle in her eyes. Mayank! come out of the trance, she is uncomfortable. oh! she is going inside. I want to shout wait!.....

P.S.- I know its really a very short one....
I will update tomorrow itself. This is really close to my heart. I am really nervous. This actually happened....like this only...
I asked them, they were lil shy 😳 to tell me....
Many more thing on way....

Should I write this in same manner. Its different from others...or like the same old manner?

And yeah GOOOD NIGHT 😆

Edited by -sam- - 15 years ago

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abb01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

Majhya karta dedication ,just loving it

aaj sakli Deepika cha OS aani aata tujha he dedication ,Majh divas kharach khub chan hota ga

aani hi update tar aata mala pahle bekhsha jast aavdi chi karan majhya karta he faqt FF nahi pan khub mahtavachi gosht aahe ,

Manjhe aunty pan Nupur sarkhyas asas ka kas ,sami?

Nupurla kahi hi mahiti nahi aani tili koni stare karnar aavdat nahi ,khar aahe na

pan mayank baddal tu sangital "tyla je aavadte the tho tyavarti vijay karacha praytn krte "

I am done with marathi comments

now back to track

Thanks a lot for the dedication ,though it was short but conveyed a lot to me

It has two unknown people coming together to go along

aur ek ko to kuch pata bhi nahi hai ,nupur bechari

Nupur cha fresh face pahuns Mayank "dreaming"

Aani aata next update cha khub eagerly wait aahe mala

Update soon and loads of love Sami

ek gosht visarale hote

mala he style khub aavadale ,aata tula decide karacha aahe ki tu kashyat comfortable aahe

Tujhi,

Aru Tai

Edited by arunabehere - 15 years ago

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mayur_bigfan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

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hey di..
this was so sweet..
i would like you to continue in this manner only..
this was really wonderful..
plz update soon..
and thanx for the pm..

Edited by mayur_bigfan - 15 years ago

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Beet

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

Aww, Sami 🤗

It was such a cute update. I am totally in love with this Nupur. Awesome update. Well written and quite interesting. It was quite adorable how Mayank likes her already. 😃

Great Job.