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shalini

@wow123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#71

Its very lovely part khush.I liked it how u expressing both their fears to accept the love they have for each other.

Its good ur saving time by writing in school recess.

After reading ur i m desperate to post mine.I can't believing that i m writing ff.

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27dhanno

@27dhanno

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#72

Oh my goodness!!😲😲😲😲😲😲You have no idea what you have done to me....I'm just spellbound, speechless..and I don't know what else...praises are even less to what you have written👏👏👏👏👏👏👏...I'm TOTALLY & COMPLETELY in love ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️with your scene.

"I'm not trying to hurt you. I'm just trying to protect myself."

This line is like everything to this part...This hurts a hell..a hell lot to fall in love, once again, with the person whom you have hurt...

I'm just so proud of you,Goddie!!!🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

Yeh tune kya kar diya??? Ohhhhhhhhh.....you are simply superb jaani....even more than that!!!❤️

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ratika89

@ratika89

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+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#73

ohh...that was so good Khushbii...once again..I felt the pain...so put them so beautifully in ur words...I loved it..hats off to you..!👏
although I wanted a kiss...since I am not sure whether i will be having one in mine or not...😆
anyway..even then it was amazing...👏

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#74

Aishwarya I like ur ff ... it seems diff from all other AN ff's i have read till date ... the cocept seems diff !

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cherry

@cherry_an

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#75

Hey guyz 🤗🤗

first of all I apologiz 4 commnting so late1 m so sorry bt waz really bussy wid collg n pracs!😳
Bt omg look at ths place! ths AN wrting challenge thrd is hottest place in the earth! ☺️☺️ (causing globl warming)😳😳
A huge round of applause 4 each n every participant! you guyz really rock!👏👏👏⭐️
u all r doing gr8t job! keep rocking, jumping, bouncing ..... !😃😃

lov ya all!❤️❤️❤️

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cherry

@cherry_an

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#76

@Rati- (part 1) oh dear fantastic scene !toally lov the title whch is so true! n jus lov the beggning! nikki being J wid ammy- ridz clossness !nd then her detaild descrptn abt the effct she waz havin on herself waz too gud 👏👏👏 thn typical nikki who hatz dr.modi to the core!😆😆 n then being confused, then evn 4 that blaming him, n saying ullu da pathha waz totaly cool! i agree abhi iz real monstr bt hiz Hot Handsom Stylish monstr!☺️☺️ (lov him)

oh i jus lov the whole part! nice work ratz n really wel writtn!👏👏

thanx dear !lov ya!TC! jhappizz!🤗

@Annie-(part 1) hey ths is chaitali! omg ur scene is totaly awesom dear! n evn u hav added sad+b'ful vm in it which shows u hav taken so mch of effortz 4 the challnge! n song completly suitz ths ff !!👏👏jus lov it!

jus lov ths part, She wanted him to understand her fears.
She wanted him to understand how important he was in her life
and how important it was that he gave her time to overcome her fears.
u made me cry 4 ths one!
(ths is so true😳)and if looks could have killed, Niki would have been dead by now. I really wantd smthin like this to b happn in dmg!bt expcting somthing lik ths from cvz is foolisness!
bt thank u so mch1

(n ths is totally nikki pehlwan!)She wiped away her tears and made up her mind ... she was going to fix things between them.
. She was going to stick around him, haunt him,
do whatever it took to convince him to forgive her
and make him fall in love with her "Dr. Modi, abhi dekho toh sahi, agey hota hai kya. Dekte dekhte hee tumhari akkad niklegi".😉😆😆

really lov the way u hv startd n evn the end of ths part is totally cool! keep rocking gal ! thanx!Tc!

jhapizz!🤗

Edited by chaitali_an - 15 years ago

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cherry

@cherry_an

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#77

@Annie- (part 2) awww abhi again misundrstood nikki!

( had paced his room like a caged tiger) Itz purrfect description

4 THE ABHIMNYU MODI 😉😳😳

N abhi is getting mor n mor jalous! jus lov jalous, angry abhi!😳

itz gona b fun now!😉😃😃

thanks dear! tc! jhappizz1

@Rati-(part 2)omg rati u rock man!Really well writtn dear!itz too gud!⭐️

N then abhiz entry mst b dhamakedar na!
lov hez style of consoling othrz i mean only nikki 😳

" You will dehydrate, better you stop crying."😆😆😆😆

aww jus lov hez each n evry adaa!😳 lov him soooo mch!
n now we wil get to read paligaon incidence! aww waz missing those b'ful daz!
love you 4 that yaa! jhappi pale!🤗🤗

jus lov th way u hav described nikkiz inner turmoil ! awesom👏👏👏

our hands met yesterday, his eyes chained me at nurse station this morning,
he was sad for me, he wanted me to fall in love with someone else,
he caught tears rolling down from my eyes.........
all I had wanted was this, WHEN I FALL, SOMEONE WOULD PROTECT ME..

too gud ya👏⭐️

really nice one ratz ! keep rockin gal! lov ya jhappizz! tc!🤗

Edited by chaitali_an - 15 years ago

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mitzification

@mitzification

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#78

i am not here for sat sun .. at least till sun eve ..... !

see u guys sun eve .. just fill up the pages!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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ratika89

@ratika89

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: mitzification
i am not here for sat sun .. at least till sun eve ..... !
see u guys sun eve .. just fill up the pages!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

when u come back do PM me..I will write scene only then..

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cherry

@cherry_an

Stunner

Posted: 15 years ago

#80

@Annie- (part 3)Aww another b'ful part dear! itz lovely!👏
aww feelin vry pitty 4 nikki! poor nikz! bt atlst she haz ayesha wid her!
just lov nikki-ayesha relatn!Aysha held on tightly on to her other hand as if she would never let her go. aaaaaww so cute😳😳
n abhi-ayesha calling each other BF GF is soo cute!😳😳wch shows abhiz softer side!aww too gud!lov it!
He had a hard time holding himself back, from moving the stray hair from Nikki's face.(i wantd ths to b happn ya😉😳)
waise i want so many thingz😆😆😆 jus lov how u hav describd purity of ther beauty!accrding to abhiz vision! awesm dear!⭐️
thankz ya! keep it up! tc!jhappizz1

@ sheena /Rhea (part 1) omg y is it happening? rohan wedz nikki whose rohan??😕😕😕

wat happnd betwn AN that nikki brok up wd abhi??
bt i hav complete faith in sid n ridz! i knw they wil do smthing to mak nikki realiz her mistak !biggst mistak! m i rite?
awww m restless now hav to read next part ASAP! gr8t goin galz! u shocked me!

diffrnt concept!n i lov it !⭐️
really nice 1 !👏 thank u dear! TC sheenu n rhea ! lov ya ! jhappizz!🤗

Edited by chaitali_an - 15 years ago