life changed when i found u mayurff part 3 pg 23 - Page 6

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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
awesome concept..!!
really loved it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
nice concept
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
add em and don't forget to pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

hey saher and kulsum!!...........amazing concept.....really loved it!!!......... wow i'm so excited to read it !!!!!!............... plzzzzzzz update it soon and add me to ur pm list!!.........

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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
thnx to alll our lovely friendz and fellow
who liked our new ff so much

thnx a lot
i cannot comment on urall post
but i loved them
all
we wil sooon cont this
maybe this weekendz
til then take ur specialcare

and once again

luv sehr and kulsum

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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
hey sehr
wow kya concept hai
kul ke sah me that so sweet
vaise i am angry with Kul
Ask her why ???
she knows it better
Luv to read update aur i am already in rt
Luv,
Aru
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: arunabehere

hey sehr

wow kya concept hai

kul ke sah me that so sweet

vaise i am angry with Kul

Ask her why ???

she knows it better



Luv to read update aur i am already in rt


Luv,

Aru

hey aru di...are di aap ka gussa toh kaafi unchai pe pahunch gaya hai... 😲..mein ne sehr ko reason bata diya hai...yup di ur already in warna hamara ff incomplete rahegana.... 😊
Love u muuah.
Kul
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
loved the concept pm me too
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
awesum concept sehr..
so sorry 4 replyin so late..ws stuck up wid my studies....
luvd it 2 d core...
thnx 4 d pm..
pls update soon & add me 2 d pm list ..
luv ya..
-supriya
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

Part1

A girl is shown peacefully sleeping on her bed.

Then alarm rang and girl was still in deep sleep and in this condition she switched off the alarm forgetting that she has to wake early as today is her last day here in Canada and she is leaving this country and going back to India to complete her further study . in india she has got addmisiion into world known college THE EXCEL COLLEGE.

It was now 9.00 am and girl was strill in deep sleep th sumone knock at her door.

Girl still sleepy: kon hai

Maid: madam jee me hu coffee layi hu le lijye

Girl: kiaaaa ktne baje hai

Maid : wo nupur madam 9 baj gaye hai

N: oh shit …ab kia karu maine to sab ko 8.30 pe bulaya tha yr shit…

Thn nupur opened the door and took coffee from maid nad ordered her to tell driver to be reay in 5 minute

Thn nupur turned to her wardrobe and took out photo of sumone

N: hey good morning maa .kaisi ho .ek to tum raat ko hi aasmaan me dikhti ho din me to tumhari photo se hi bt karni parti hai .waise me aj tumhe ye btana chati hu k me India jarhe hu apki dost k ghar.phir me wahi parhai karugi . aur ha ye mat sochna k me tumko miss nhe karugi.me tumhe bhi waha saath le jaugi .bus bechare papa yaha akele reh jayege but wo apna khayal rakh sakte hai hai na mom. Acha chal o me tayar hojao warna phir meri light miss hojayegi .abhi india jana jo hai .. hchalo mom ab india me tum se aat hogi luv a lotttttttttttttttttttttt.

Thn she packed her all stuff and went to her father and hugged her from behind

N: papa kaise hai ap

Nd: me thik hu meri pyari bachi aj to meri gurya mjhe chor k jarhe hai na

N: [papa ap hi to mjhe bhej rahe hai

ND: ha jaanta hu but apna waha der sara khayal rakhna aur shararat nhe karna

N: papa me aur sharart( making puppy face)

ND: me jaanta hu k meri beti kitni shareef (wink at nupur and nupur wink back)

N: chalo papa jaldi chalo warna flight misses hojayegi

Thn nupur and her father went to airport and nupur left for india

Meanwhile nupur father called india

ND namastey shilpa jee hai

MM: ha baat karhe hu

ND: me Rajeev baat karha hu

MM: ha bhai sahib kaise hai ap .

ND:ha bhabhi thi thak maine ap ko ye kehne k liye phone kiya tha k nupur india ane k liye nikal gaye hai

MM: jee bhai sahib ap fikar na kijye me us ka ache se khayal rakhugi

ND: jaanta h bhabhi ap ho to mjhe nupur I koi fikar nhe

MM: thik hi bhai sahib ap befikar rahye

ND: thik hai

INDIA

Sharma house

A boy is shown sitting on the bed resting his head on the pillow..he was carrying a photo in his hand..His eyes was filled with painfull tears...The pain of loosing someone special from his life forever... His fingers were tracing the photo which his other hand was holding... And he was looking at the photo with the moist eyes.. And was speaking with the photo in a broken tone...


"Eisha kyun chali gayi tum mujhe chod kar....kyun Eisha kyun....??woh bhi hamesha hamesha ke liye.....mein ji nahi sakta tumhare bagair....agar tum mujhe chod kar dusre shaher chali jatii toh itni takleef na hoti joh ab mehsoos horahi hai....mein iss umeed mein bait tha ke shayad tumhe mera pyaar mujhse milne ke liye waapis le aata....agar tum na bhi aati toh mein khud tumse milne tumhare paas chala aata...par tum toh mujhe hamesha ke liye chod kar iss dunya se chali gayi ho....ab mein chah kar bhi tumhare paas nahi aasakta na ke tumhe apne paas le sakta hoon.....Mayank totally broked down in tears....he was sobbing badly and was repeating the same line continuesly while sobbing...
"Eisha mujhe bhi apne paas bulalo Eisha apne paas bulalo...mein tumhare bagair adhura hoon..."

Then a lady entered the room and saw her son sobbing badly while hugging the photo which have became the daily routine of her son from past 10years...she did not become shocked or depressed seeing this condition of her son as it has become her habit...she slowly moved towards her son n placed her hand on his shoulder...
Shilpa.:mayu...hosh mein aa...yeh kya karraha hai tu...apni haalat dekhi hai tuu ne kya bana rakhi hai...?bilkul apna hosh kho beta hai tu..
Mayank simply looked at his mother n slowly wipes his tears..while shipla continued her talk.
S:kitni baar kahu mein tumhe ke hosh mein aaja...tumhe kaise samjhaun ke Jo log hamein chod kar dunya se chale jaate hain woh kabhi waapis nahi lot te.....aur tumhe yeh sach qabul karna padhega beta....bhul ja use...
M:mein kya karun maa jab bhi use bhul ne ki koshish karta hoon uska chehra saamne aajata hai..
S:acha beta uske chehre ke bare mein chod ab khud apna chehra dekh aaine mein....Mera itna hansmukh aur jawan ladka ab bilkul sadu aur akdu ban gaya hai...Shilpa told to lighten the atmosphere..
S:aur beta meri frnd ki beti arhe hai se pick karne jana hai
M:par ma

S: no par war jaldi ja

Shilpa asked oops forced mayank to receive nupur from airport

Mayank tried hard to refuse but all end in vain

So he has to go to pick her

Mayank was waiting for nupur at airport

but when she pass by him he didn't realize tht its her.and lyk this mayank was unable to find nupur

soon both bump into each other

but no reaction instead of this they started figtig

N: oye mr aankhein hai ya button dekh k nhe chal sakti …

M: ap mme etiquettes hai kisi se bt karne ki

N: jee ap se zyada

M: plzz shut up

N: no u shut up

M: dekhiye madam plz apni zuban ko lagaaam dijye

N: oh plzzz ek to india me log kitne badtameez hote hai ,kaise ghoorte hai

M: to itne chote kapre na pehna karo

They continue fighting until stopped by airprt staff

Staff: madam ap kis k saath jayegi

N: pta nhe koi mayank sharma aane wala tha

Staff: oke hum announce kardete ha k job hi mayank hai inhe le jaye( in mind: so tht we shuld bee free from their fight)

M: wait kis ka naam liya

N: oh to tumhare kaan bhi khrab hai ab

M: tum mom means shilpa Sharma ki frnd ki beti hoo

N: ha means k tum …

M: wait

He quickly put cotton bud in his ears

M: ab shor machao

N: nheeeeeeeeeeeeee………………

Frndz thts it

I knwwe r late

But I m so busy now adays

So plz bare with me

Luv

Kulsum and sehr

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