The Hard Reality of Life (AR FF)Note - page 122 - Page 76

Originally posted by: shininggal2008

I knw m super duper really late for the comment but I hope chalega for this time 🤣 starting with chapter 6:

Ok truth n dare maana parega bhai, jaha aap jate ho waha par ye game to definitely hamesha hoga hehe yay sani turns for T&D ( mai itna excited kyu ho rahi hu 🤔 ) okies truth, awww that dream was a cute one, especailyl i loved its ending. Amazing job with sanis dream 👏

"chup ho ja warna aaj tere saare daant tor dungi" 🤣 this was so funny, maine aaj tak yeh damki kisi ko diya nahi hai but it really does sounds to be a working damki so ya agli baar ye hi try karungi. but for sid great going with the damki's liner.

wo kamina sid ka to sachi mai band bajana padega. us ko sani ki fikar nahi thi balki us gadhe noor ki fikar thi, just a looser man. m sure wo bi khudh ek noor hi hoa. bhai aaise kaise ho sakta hai ki shin ne abhi tak uss kamine ko tappad nahi mara 😆 u should try some physical actions to u knw 😉 well but yeah love ur dialouges.

""My wife has run away, please help". ROFL 😆 no wonder yeh FF liner ka hai. kyuki aaise dare srif aap hi ko aasakta hai. jeez bhai, aap ka T&D k baba hai ? 😕 sorry mai to bhul hi gayi aap to sach mai tantrik baba ho anyways coming back to the ff 😆

awwww vini felt bad for sid.. poor gal but its so sweet to she her caring side. usse thori na pata hai ki sid kis mitti ka bana hai 🤣 but yeah she give him water thats really polite mai hoti to jeher deti 🤣🤣 ( yes u can expect that from shin, i think😕😆 ) and then we move along our dear parandas's confession. it was really nice way to make vini confess abt her feeling for sid. i loved ur way. 😊

I was just curious to knw one thing, "was vinis upposed to be the bali ki bakra for that update ?" 😆😆

"oh that's very simple in childhood I wanted to be a biology teacher" 😡😡 when i read this line i felt like throwing my keybroad on the writter of this ff. kaun kamina hai ye FF ka writer ? agar kisi ko pata hai to please mujhe bata dena mujhe uss ki akaal thikane pe lagana hai ( but wait why m i gettign angry ye to srif ek ff hai nah ? ) 🤣 jo bi ho SHIN can never think abt liking bio n then bio teacher ? MY FOOT 😆

And lastly as always who on earth is this man yaar ? ab to ye ridz k picha aaisa laga hai ki UFFFFF...

Overall as always FANTABULOUS job 👍🏼⭐️👏 LOVED IT

P.S. Part 7 ka comment is on it way. The security guard told me that US se India pohocne mai thora time lagega so yeah part 7 comment kaal karungi. 😆😆

Originally posted by: i_clueless

Hey PJ!

Fabulous jab as always! very entertaining part..and quick update too! AR nok jhok in the bike ride was really sweet and cute..loved all the stories of Riddhima's boyfriend..indeed she is a very fast girl! Armaan is in for a lot yaar!- the date will be one to remember..😆 Armaan's going to make it special aye..? can't wait for it..😳

looking forward to the next part..promo looks very promising..umm.. Sid/Vini scenes and AR at Riddhima's house...the mysterious stalker wasn't in this part..thank god!..what a relief..😛

~Miya~

Kk m back with part 7 comment:

Originally posted by: shininggal2008

Kk m back with part 7 comment:

Right in the beggining i must say that i simply enjoyed the part.

The entire AR part was interesting and fun to read.

I dont really think that i break it down to long comment and tell you fabulous it was.

From the beginning itself it sounded so exciting and yes it definately was.

In the starting; jab tak kohi convo suru nahi karega to baat kaise suru hogi bolo bolo ?

Its common sense yaar i think ab mujhe aakar in AR k dimag mai common sense dalni padegi 🤣 and then that crush of Ridz, awww she was just 6, thats just sound super duper cute 😍

And yes, how can i forget THE flirting partners 😆😆 sachi mai i love the concept of "flirting partners" its just so much entertaining, exciting and interesting to knw the other side of both armaan and ridz. Armaan seems to be dedicated on his work but here for a dare we see a total opposite side of him and yes ridz as well. She definately sounded to be like a fun-loving (which is good) but care less about stuffs types but here she is like the sweet-charming gal. M lovin AR.

Hehe, one thing i found the most funny was, jaise armaan aapna bike check kar raha ta nah,

i left he was going to america from india.. man ab ek larki ko ghar drop karne k liye itna sab kuch check karna parta hai, date pe lagte waqt kya karenge maharaj ?

lol that was dam cute tho.

Yes i defo loved the part in whole & enjoyed it a lot.

Continue sooon.... waiting for the next part 😃 😉

Love yaa !

Originally posted by: Sani_Rani

res AAAHHH vini tera to mein khun pi jaungi😡 EDITED

bhai ever since i red the precap, i was waiting for this part and trust me u lived upto my expectations. it was so awesome. u know ur ff is one of it's kind. i mean ur ideas are so innovative that i haven't red in any other ff before. haha riddhima to pakka armaan ko bigaar degi week khatam hote hote😆 i am guessin that armaan will go thru extreme changes after that 1 week (after the bet finishes). i want to see that naughty armaan now and he makes riddhima shocked by his new avatar. it will be fun to watch blabber mouth riddhima toungue tied in front of armaan😆

and armaan was so nervous when riddhima was gonna sit with him. bless bhai can i pull his cheeks plz🤣 i mean he was like awww cho chweet😆 i love his simplicity and honesty and riddhima haha madam ka kya kehna. i saw a different avatar of her in this part. she is not that spoilt as she shows herself to be. she is a good girl😆 and hahahah it was hilarious when armaan gave his bike full service before dropping riddhima home. socho agar sirf ghar drop karne pe armaan ka yeh hal hai, to jab date pe le jayega to janaab ka kya haal hoga😆😆😆

and ooooohhhh riddhima was seducing armaan on the bike😆. ridzy bbz that can get utterly dangerous if armaan looses his control😆 bechare armaan ka bura haal hua tha when riddhima was seducing him😆.

and ah how can i forget flirting partners😆 bhai i loved that idea of flirting partner thing. it makes me laugh. riddhima taking full advantage of armaan's helpless state and bechara armaan getting annoyed😆. i was like wow after listening to riddhima's BF's story. good she slapped that ravi kamina😡 and man she's has got too many BFs😆. ur ff is a perfect example of opposite attracts. excellent part bhai and am egarly waiting for the next update when both chunnu munnu will go on a date😆😆😆. sorry for the late comment bhai. NOW DON'T GET ME HANGED AND EAT MY BRAIN😆

love

sani

Originally posted by: hnisha

Finally i m here to comment on your 'THE HARD REALITY OF LIFE" .

So from wer do i start??? Hmm.. the first thing i liked the concept which u chose..its based on MNC and not on hospital..Nice way to attract readers😆 kuch alag mila padhne ke liye😆

Here Armaans character is slightly different from the real dmg character..not the prankster but very friendly.. he knows wats his destiny etc etc.. nice.

Siddhant is slightly confused about wat he want..

Arey ye kya sani, nattu, vini and shin ko bhi laga diya FF pe..😆 The main highlight of your ff are their talks yaar..😆

but kya sachme shin ko itna gussa aata hain?? i dint knew dat.😊

Nattu -the trainer..lol..interesting.. i am sure aadhe se aadhe talks uske pati parmeshwar ke hi honge.😆

Sani apni 50 hubbies ki story kabhi nahi chodti na..😆

the whole 7 parts were really gud, comedy bhi thi, pyar bhi tha, sabke feelings bhi the and most important is bahut maza bhi aaya padke..

AR ki flirting bahut hi zyaada hain..show them the way to love now.

and who is nazar daaling on riddhima ..reveal it soon too..ok..

and and and continue it soon..😛

Nisha😊

Originally posted by: shininggal2008

Update kaha hai ? 😔