Maaneet FF: A Twisted Fate #1: Link Pg. 148 - Page 49

Naina

That was really good yaar. I loved it 👏 👏 👏

Maan refusing to help until he sees the competition 🤣 ......typical and then he goes all possessive on her 🤣

But him consoling her was soo cute 😳......wonder what is waiting for them 😉

Waiting for update 😃
Jhan

Naina 👏 and that was fast 👍🏼

Loved how you've started bringing them closer :-)

uiiiiiiiiiiii naina!!! fast update - and am Alll smiles about it! lol

hayye, loved that ur bringing maaneet closer 'for real' now, if u know what i mean... they've had some rather romantiiique-ishly yummy moments before which i hope shall continue lol but here, the heart's slowly wanting to take part tooo! mmmm am loving it!!! wonderfully put together!

seeing a jealous maan was awesome - i cant believe u brought in the ex-flame rahul as her wanna-be hero..!! LOL well, of course its not her ex-flame but u know exactly how i mean ;) lol fabulously included in the part, + maan's reaction to it.. fannnn-tashtick!! =D i'm all up for a possessive maan ;D

now i gotta tell u.. i love love love lovvvvvvvvve that u have maan calling geet a 'sherni'. i just love it lol and the way he was tryina keep her calm cos she was afraid in the plane, awww bless him! i cant believe it made her blush as well - awww!!!

would it be rude if i tell u that omg, i'd totally forgotten that she was pregnant!! lol i totally forgot so i was happy that u reiterated that fact in this part.. ! for a moment i thought she was going to the washroom to throw up, but then the actual reason, was so lovely!

Uh-ohh, maan's planning to go all 'kadhoos-a-fied' on her again? i'm sure its gonna be in a sexy way - there's no way he's gonna resist her lol

All in all, AWESOME part my lovely!!!

Great to see you continuing this and that too pretty speedily ;D
I was Supposed to go to bed a while ago, but then i couldn't ignore the pm... i just had to read this!!! and the OS i already hav as u know.. and i loved that too hehe

keep up the fab work!! am dying from fatigue..
i bid thee a beautiful-night, and the sweeetest dreams!

lotsa love,
Saz
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AAWWEESSOOMMEE AAMMAAZZIINNGG FF & PART ! =D I'm only commenting cause yu think-said that nobodie reads it - I NO I DO =D

Awesome........ I always loved jeolous maan....... Glad u update soon....otherwise i have to wait 4r a whole week......... Plz on ur pm 4r ur SS i loved it.... but could'nt able to coment at that time.

awsome..

maan and geet need some romance to lighten up a bit ;p

It was the best update ever! it was perfect! muah muah loved it i was surprised you updated i love the storyline naina it was wonderful anxiously waiting for more!!!