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Posted: 15 years ago
#41
lovely ff....
loved it
v nice
cont sppn
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
awesome luved it!!!!!!
plss pm me!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
awesum update Dakshu...šŸ‘
luvd jor dar entry if Anjali, Mayur & Neha....😳
luvd it 1 d bits...
thnx 4 d pm...
pls update soon..
luv ya....šŸ¤—
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Mayank-Nupur, Anjali and Mayur enter a big bungalow......its Sharma Mansion.....

"Beta fresh ho jao....main khaana lagati hoon" Nupur said

Everyone dispersed to their rooms.......

Mayur entered his room...... he looked around at the walls, on the floor, his bed, everything was same as he left..... his childhood memories started flashing......

A small boy was pulling a girl's hairs and the girl was pulling his hairs....

"Bola na main nahin jaaunga" boy said

"Eeee....Mayur tu jaayega" girl said

A quite bigger girl trying to separate them.....

"Mummy......mummy ye dono lad rahe hain" she shouted....

Gunjan and Nupur arrived in the room......

Gunjan pulled the girl and Nupur pulled the boy......both trying to come out from their grips......

"Mummy ye bohot shaitaan hai" boy said

"Nahin mummy ye bohot shaitaan hai" girl said

Then Gunjan and Nupur together said "Anjali....ye kyun lad rahe hain"

The girl wearing a pink coloured frock with two ponytails....said taking a deep breath

"Hum ghar ghar khel rahe the.....aur Neha ne Mayur se kaha ki wo office jaaye....aur phir dono ladna shuru ho gaye"

Nupur turned Mayur towards her....she started making his hairs which were ruffled because of the fight "Mera Mayur toh nahin ladta kisi se....phir ab kyun lad raha hai"

"Wo humesha mujhse kehti hai bahar jaane ko....main nai jaaunga" Mayur said quietly and hugged Nupur

"Toh tum ghar mein khaana banana......aur main aur didi chale jaayenge" Neha shouted trying to come out from Gunjan's grip

Anjali was quietly standing there listening to her kins.....

"Neha....bilkul chup ab ladna band tum sab milkar nahin khel sakte" Gunjan said

Anjali smiled and nodded her face "Kabhi nahin....ye dono saath mein kabhi bhi nahin"

Nupur and Gunjan laughed.......

Anjali kept her hand over Mayur's shoulder and he came back to the present.....

"Kya soch raha hai" she said

"Kuch nahin" he said and smiled

He kept his bag on the bed and took out a laptop......

"Ye aapke liye" Mayur gave it to Anjali

"Isski kya zaroorat thi" she said

"Issmein naya studio software.....abhi India mein 6 months baad launch hoga.....aur mujhe pata hai aapko issi ka intezaar tha" Mayur said

"Thank you" she said

"World ki best Di ke liye ye bohot chota sa gift hai" he said

"Accha ab neeche chal.....mummy dantengi warna" she said

After that they came back to the dining area.......

Everyone was quietly eating the food.....but something was going on between Mayank, Mayur and Anjali through the eyes..... they were making faces wanting to say something to Nupur, Mayank nodded his head in NO.....

Nupur looked up and all three looked down.....

"Yahaan kuch chal raha hai kya" Nupur said

Mayank looked up "Kya....kya keh rahi ho Nupur.....kheer toh dena"

"Ek minute tumhein kheer kabse acchi lagne lagi......kheer toh mere Mayur ko acchi lagti hai" Nupur said looking into Mayank's eyes.....

"Ab beta tu bol de.....mujhse chupaya nahin jaata.....Nupur mujhe pakad hi leti hai" Mayank said

"Sach sach bataao yahaan kya chal raha hai" Nupur said

"Maa......mujhe aage padhaai karne London jaana hai" Mayur said and all three closed their eyes in fear....they knew now Nupur is going to burst out.....

And same thing happened....

"Abhi toh aaya hai.....aur abhi jaana bhi hai" Nupur said

"Par maa....abhi..." Mayur said

"Ruk pehle main keh rahi hoon na......tu kahin nahin jaayega.....jo padhna hai yahin padh Mumbai mein..... jisse dekho....ye ghar koi dharamshaala hai kya.....koi rehta bhi yahaan.....ek hain jo subah jaate hain raat ko aate hain aur ek aaya nahin ki jaane ki baat kar raha hai.....meri toh bas Anjali hai" saying this Nupur took a deep breath.....

"Accha maa....gussa mat karo....main nahin jaaunga.....ab toh muskura do" Mayur said "Maa.....please"

Then all three said together "Please"

Then Nupur looked up and smiled.....

Here in Sehgal Mansion.....

Samrat, Gunjan and Neha have finished their dinner......

"Mom Dad....aapki love marriage hui thi' Neha said

"Ye kaisa sawaal hai" Gunjan said

"Bataao na......please" Neha said

"Arrange marriage" Samrat said

Gunjan looked at Samrat and smiled

"How boring!!" Neha said "Main toh love marriage karungi"

"Kya.....tujhe kuch sharam hai tere mummy papa saamne baithe hain" Gunjan said

"Toh kya hua.....mere papa mujhko samajhte hain....haina Papa" Neha looked at Samrat

"Aur kya" Samrat looked at Neha and smiled....

"Koi dhoond liya hai kya toone" Gunjan said

"Nahin......par jaise hi milega aapko zaroor bataaungi" saying this she got up and went to her room

"Hey bhagwaan iss ladki ka kya hoga" Gunjan said

"Sab theek hoga.....pareshaan mat ho" Samrat said

Mayank and Nupur were in their room.........

Mayank was lying on the bed and Nupur was resting with her head on his arms........

"Mayank aaj Mayur bhi aa gaya.....sab kitna accha lag raha hai na" Nupur said

"Hmm...par main abhi bhi keh raha hoon tum Anjali ko further studies ke liye London bhej do....wo bohot bright hai" Mayank said

"Nahin Mayank tum toh jaante ho.......jo mere saath hua.....main nahin chahti wo meri Anjali ke saath ho" saying this Nupur had tears in her eyes but she wiped them off....

"Tum abhi bhi un baton ko lekar baithi ho" Mayank said

"Nahin Mayank aisi baat nahin hai......mere saath toh tum the....Anjali ka saath kaun dega" Nupur said

"Pehle toh ye ulta sochna band karo.....kisi ke saath kuch nahin hoga....hum sab khush hain aur humesha rahenge" Mayank said and he pulled Nupur towards him......

"Arre kuch toh sharam karo......itne bade bacchon ke baap ho" saying this a blush crept over her face.....

"Mujhse keh rahi ho aur abhi tak tumhaare gaal laal ho jaate hain" Mayank said

Then he pulled up the blanket.........

Next morning.......

It was Adhiraj and Suhaani who came to Sharma Mansion......a girl wearing a kurta and jeans also followed them from the back.....her hairs were open...fringes coming over her forehead.......

"Oh......dekho bhai kaun aaya hai......Adhiraj.....ya eid ka chaand" Mayank stood up from the couch and welcomed all three of them.......

"Aur ye Avishi haina.......kitne dinon baad dekh rahi hoon" Nupur said

"Namaste Aunty......Namaste Uncle" Avishi said

Mayur and Anjali came downstairs.......Anjali knew Avishi, she was junior to her in college....

Mayur asked Anjali "Di kaun hain ye"

"Ye Adhiraj uncle hain unki wife Suhaani aur beti Avishi" Anjali said

Anjali and Mayur greeted Adhiraj and Suhaani.....

"Accha mummy Mayur ko kuch saamaan lena hai toh main isske saath jaa rahi hoon......warna wo apne hi shehar mein begaanon ki tarah ghoomta rahega" Anjali said and smiled

"Issko bhi le jaao apne saath.....ye yahaan akele kya kargei.....jaao beta tum bhi chale jaao" Nupur said to Anjali pointing towards Avishi.......

And then all three of them left from there......

Keep reading and enjoying because I like writing this one......aur aapke liye bhi shayad naya experience hoga......so kaisa laga Waiting eagerly for ur comments...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
I am the FIRST one to comment...

I am so happy!

Aww.....kitna cute scene hai...

Yaar i hates staying in home in that game......i was like main kyun bahar nahi jaa sakti hoon?

Aww....ek laptop? kaash mera bhi koi saga bhai hota!

Kya baat ho rahi hai?

Mayank toh nupur se kuch bhi chupa nahi sakta hai....

Nupur kitna ladti hai!

Typical mummy style!

Hmm......i hate love marriages......but not when parents have no problem with it....

Nupur is so afraid......aur hona bhi chahiye.....

Thank God avishi mil gayi!

baaki couples ko bhi milva toh do....

And PLEASE...........no shuruvat with fighting.....

i hate that!

beautiful update

jaldi udate karo

love,
Mahak


Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
very nice part plz cont soon and thx alot for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

I am the FIRST one to comment...

I am so happy!

Aww.....kitna cute scene hai...

Yaar i hates staying in home in that game......i was like main kyun bahar nahi jaa sakti hoon?

Aww....ek laptop? kaash mera bhi koi saga bhai hota!

Kya baat ho rahi hai?

Mayank toh nupur se kuch bhi chupa nahi sakta hai....

Nupur kitna ladti hai!

Typical mummy style!

Hmm......i hate love marriages......but not when parents have no problem with it.... Mahi!! didn't you like MN's marriage then????šŸ˜‰

Nupur is so afraid......aur hona bhi chahiye.....

Thank God avishi mil gayi!

baaki couples ko bhi milva toh do....

And PLEASE...........no shuruvat with fighting.....

i hate that!

beautiful update

jaldi udate karo

love,
Mahak




Hey Daksha!!!!
luvvvly upd8!!!
it's really sumthing diff.....
luvvvd it!!!!!! 😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
Lovely part Daksha..
Gr88..
Awesome..
Thnx for the PM..

Love from

^^Hina^^

😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
awesome update
loved it
it was great
loved hte table scene
and kheer lol
do cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
Totally Different Concept..
And I Like It Very Much...
Very Sweet Update...
But Pleashh Have SaJan Equally Too...😳
Cont Soon..
Thnnxx For PM...

*Sana*

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