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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hi ! im new here fan of mjht 1
ab tak silent reader thi ab jaa kar active hui hu
luv mayur awesome update n cont. soon😊
add me in ur pm list also 😊

Naina

Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Here goes my second part…actually when I wrote this part I was not in my own mind set…so don't bother if u find it to be rubbish…!
Part two

She looked at his eyes which were watching her playfully somewhere she hated it a lot, giving a glare who was standing in front of the door blocking her way she turned to the opposite direction of him ..how can he talk this much cooly…done such a big mistake and yet how dare he come in front of me…?and says that am his wife..

She heard mayank taking further steps she slowly moved in front not looking back leaving a little bit space not wanting him to touch her once again... so are you ready for the interview then

Who said ? she turned angrily

No one you the one turned towards the room…but one thing you should be cleared it's your company so there is no need to attend any interview..

Just stop blabbering okay , how dare you and now leave way for me she said glaring at him angrily for blocking her way…she doesn't even want to stand with him and arguing

You can go he said still not moving and standing in the same direction simply loved her getting irritated...

Your much more irritating me Mr.… she said warning him…seeing him smiling…she lost her temper just tried pushing him holding his shoulders, she only lost her balance just holded him tightly for a support , she couldn't pull him at last leaving all her trials …she gave an angry look at him your too heavy

oh really i guess i should work out little more and will try to loose out some weight😆
seeing him winking at her just then she realized..she was in his arms…tried to lower her eyes slowly but avoiding her cheeks becoming red tried ...
leave me please...she tried pleading him
nupur look am not holding you...smiled at her raising his hands...
she felt bit awkward removed her hands which she was holding his shoulder tried to move a step back was stopped of mayank holding her waist tighter and once again brought her more closer than before😳…this time it was very much hard for her to avoid her glowing red..

But you are not…I like you in my arms like this….not only now but forever ..yet you look cute when you blush

Am not blushing she tried to be frim enough balanced herself moving out his grip forcefully said I never found this much irritating fellow in my life…she throwed something she got in her hands yet less in weight at him in anger and exited.

She walked fast took stairs not willing to wait for the lift in a hurry, she was angry on herself a lot for feeling secure and protective in his arms.She took the bus which came ...it was not much crowded she went and sat near corner of the seat relaxing herself..she had many questions running within her(as u guys question me😆)..

She remembered the way he was holding her ..her face turned red in thinking of that moment..yet how dare he to hold me...!😳

Hello excuse me jii…take the ticket and then dream..!

Just she skipped out of her dream world looked at the ticket collector ...she scolded herself for being so stupid looked for her hand bag

God I came in pep and y did i took the bus..?

where do you want to go madam!
and shit my purse…she remembered her throwing something on him, once again her heart only blamed him ..she looked at the man who was standing she was in trouble..😆she looked fearingly towards the conductor rolling out her eyes...

Excuse me give 2 tickets for taj..!

She looked at the man once again crossing her world, yet felt light of escaping in a trouble..…!is he there to disturb her or something else...hold on till 2mrw...!😆

Shall I stop here…I should because…I know it was boring don't want to bore anymore...

and mahak please stop to black mail yaar...u no me and varshu wont leave u to give small update...anywaz buddy 2mrw is there nah...i would update bigger one may be next 2 parts in one go what say dear...!but u update bigger one...please...i had updated before 3...hope u like it...!
loves
jeni...!

waiting for your pleasurable comments....!

Edited by jeniluvmayur - 15 years ago
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*edited

Yipee....yipee ....wohooooo....

I came first again ...... seems ur FFs are very lucky for me jeni....😳😳😳😳

Now...

woww.... what an update jeni....!! its just marvellous.... simply lovable !! 😳😳😳

by god nupur ka gussa.... haye... i'm fida on it yaar !! 😍

and mayank.... continuously irritating her.....but still love his cute acts.... 😳😳

omg... nupur lost her balance.... but held him....great.... ..mm... so romantic... 😍😍😍... finally she blushed on his touch.....☺️............. but aww... mayu is too heavy to pull.... lol..😆😆 bechari nupur..... 😆😆

again.... he started teasing her on this.....😆😆

oh... so nupur threw her purse on mayu....😆... n now she don't have money.... .. again came mayu as a saviour.... i'm just loving him in this....😳

but why is she angry with him....?? what mistake had he done ?? and ....why is she so angry with him ??

anyways.... hope to i'll get my answers soon.....😆😆

fantastic.... mindblowing update dear......👏👏👏👏

sorry yaar.... main janti hoon.... aaj yeh comment bahut bekaar hai... ise padhkar tere face pe smile nhi aayi hogi.... but yaar i'm not in a mood to do anything..as u must hv read my pm till now...... still ur fantastic update attracted me to post my comment......

cont soon....

love u forever....🤗
varshu



Edited by -krazyriya- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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not fair vashu! but anyways, reserved!

*edit*

why does she hate him so much?

well, even i love when he irritates her!

he is too heavy!!😆😆😆

how romantic!

me blushing!

he loves holding her in his hands!

she felt protected in his arms!

oh man!

she threw her purse at him?

and then she didn't had the money!

and mayank gave his money na?

i can kill u for stopping here!

ab dekho main bhi chota update hi karoongi!

but i lovedddddddd this part!

brilliant!

and i loved it!

but why is she like this?

and mayank?????

how is he like this?

and i love the part like WOW!

what a romantic part!

u better update longer one jeni!

and jaldi na......

love,
Mahak
Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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add me to ur PM list.......
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Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur

not fair vashu! but anyways, reserved!

to be edited later!



yipee....i came first !!

sorry dear... but its luck...😉.... and i think aajkal god jeni ke FF ke liye mujh par kuch zyada hi meherbaan hai....😆😆
😆
yaar tu toh itni baar.... itne saare FFs mein first aayi hogi.... its my second time only....😔

next time tu.... pakka... ok... now be happy !!

love u both....
varshu

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -krazyriya-



yipee....i came first !!

sorry dear... but its luck...😉.... and i think aajkal god jeni ke FF ke liye mujh par kuch zyada hi meherbaan hai....😆😆
😆
yaar tu toh itni baar.... itne saare FFs mein first aayi hogi.... its my second time only....😔

next time tu.... pakka... ok... now be happy !!

love u both....
varshu



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pehle comment tu kare ya main!

khushi toh same hi hogi!

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Posted: 15 years ago
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yaar yeh to had to gayi hai!

jeni saare updates likh chuki hai phir bhi itnq time le rahi hai!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Now... i seriously have to go guys....

will read ur update jeni later..... sorry...

will reply later.....

bye n tk cr...

love u both...
varshu

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