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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow jaanu..... the update was super duper rocking ......⭐️⭐️




it was marvellous....mm.... just so romantic....😍 😍 loved each n every bit of it...😳😳

Nupur thought mayank is not in the room..... but then saw him lying beside her....😆😆.... it was lovely yaar....😉

loved the scene when she tried to wake him up by hitting him with pillow.... but got wrapped herself in his arms....😆😆....

and then she trying to say something.... but he pretending to be asleep..... lol....🤣..... loved these cute nok-jhok moments of mayur 😳..... which i'm missing badly these days.....😭😭

omg... she pinched him.....bechara mayu...😆😆

loved their fight.... n nupur again lost her balance....n fell over him....😆😆.... lucky mayu...😉

Mayank is so romantic yaar.... loved him.... he's so cute too..... loved his lines when he said...''common am feeling so sleepy, we will romance later...now sleep''...... lol.... it was so hilarious yaar....... 🤣🤣

but it still it was a damn romantic part dear......😍😍



oh my gosh.... mayu kneeling down..... n saying ''sorry'' to her..... it was so sweet of him to do that.... wherein there was no mistake of him.....😳😳

wow... so he loved Nupur from before.... chased her.... he admires her a lot..... to him... she's his angel.....great...lovely yaar....😳😳




love last part dear.... when mayank gives all the explanation.... he's too sweet yaar...😳😳.... loved all his talks... his actions.... i have just fallen in love with him.....😍😍😍



he loves her so much....😍... which wife doesn't want a husband like him....... i know our nupur will return too.....😉

yaar please jaldi update kar.... now really i just can't wait jaanu.....🤔

u have to update it soon......

perfect.... mindblowing update darling....👏👏

love u....🤗
varshu

Edited by -krazyriya- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
sure i wll love to wait for ur comment u know it...now am gonna edit lil by lil only after finishing i will pm u...!
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hiiiiiii Jeni

update was awesome yaar
loved all mayur scenes
mayu nups ko i year se follow kar raha tha
u written it beautifully n lovely
it should be happy ending dear
do cont soon
thnx for pm

Luvs
Naina
Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hii Burfii,
I completely loved this ff
totally enjoyed it
it was hillarious, funny, all in one
Awesome updates....
u took much time
par chalta hain
i loved it to the core
bye

With love
samu









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Posted: 15 years ago
u are bad!!!

Posting in parts

i want to hate u, but i cant





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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -krazyriya-

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hey jeni.... yaar yeh tune kya kar diya.....
😲

awaited comment jaanu!😉

ab main tere previous update ke liye kya likhu..... i'm just so spellbound.....
🤔
take ur own time i can wait....u knew it right!

i dont have any words to describe how beautiful it was.... i'm struck.....
🤔🤔
not at all u had expressed ver well honey.!
wat imagination yaar.... u have left me so mesmerized.....i'm still drooling over it yaar....🤪🤪
funny imagination right i do get over imaginable😆😆😆
wat a twist yaar..... i have never ever expected this..... fultoo surprise.... loved it !! 😳😳

i too enjoyed that funny twist😆

the update was just so amazingggggggg........😍😍😍



it was marvellous....fabulous.....fantastic.... superb.... lovely.....stunning...... outstanding.....mm... simply awesome jaan...(sorry aur words yaad nhi aa rahe..)
thats tooo cute....isnt more words needed than this
omg...Nupur scared of being locked in the room....😆😆

loved the window scene yaar.... nupur opened the window to get fresh air.... mayank too came n was enjoying himself.....😳😳

Nupur acting to sleep..... covered herself fully thinking that....mm.... but mayank came n kissed her forehead.....😆😆.... n whispered those words in her ears... ..aww... it was too cute of him....😳😳.....

thanks jaanu!

wowww.... i just loved the way u showed mayur getting married..... it was mindblowing jaanu...👏👏...... n i love u for that...🤗... n ur creative mind too....😉😉



aww... bechari nupur... she was trying to get Sajan married.... but herself got married....😆😆

loved Sajan's entry....seeing Sammy behind Gunjan, the trio was shocked like hell....🤣

and... the officer... he was so stupid... he thought Nupur to be the bride.....lol...🤣🤣

but glad he did that mistake..... atleast hamare Mayur toh mil gaye.... they got married...😉😉

loved Sammy's words.... '' by mistake''..... 😆😆

but bechari Nupur.... inn sab mein uss ke sath kya ho gya... she couldn't get it.... she was struck.... couldn't get what all happened with her.....

but on the whole.... the update was rocking !!! ⭐️⭐️



i loved it.... n enjoyed it to the core dear.....😃
😃
n i know u'll not like my 'sorry''..... so i'm giving u a big hug for that.....

good love u for not saying sorry....bigs hugs from me too




love u a lot....🤗loads
varshu..jeni




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Posted: 15 years ago

off yeh spamming bhi na

bahut time laag gaya reserve karne ke liye hi
but it was worth it
mayur hamesha ki tarah were..........



and as usual you wrote such a perfect update
everything was so cute
by god mayank is so romantic.......
wow nupur you are so lucky
all the scenes were great
the acting to sleep scene was so cute
and mayank saw nupur signing the wrong place
wow...... and he too signed
mayank wanted to give a chance to the marriage


mayank down on his knees and asking for a chance
now nupur...... i am jealous yaar
jenni this was really perfect
continue soon
luv
mahima


Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
bye got to go will get back within an hour...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hold on Hold on
Maa u said ull update both the parts togther n end the SS
But u ended on such a crucial point Maa how culd u
Im so muuch angry wit u
Cuming to update
It was lil romantic
Mayu really loves her a lot
Liked the way he was controling himself
Nups likes him but is jus angry nthg else i feel
Nups walked leaving him alone
Hop evrythg gets well
It better u update Maa today only
Warna i wont comment on ur FF's nor talk to u
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Posted: 15 years ago
wowowo really nice part loved it alot plz cont soon and thx for the pm

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