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sana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#321

its very interesting cont soon
add me to ur pm list

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aishwarya

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Posted: 15 years ago

#322

hey mahak..nice parts..sorry for the late comment..

nupur had a dream where someone was kissing her..hot..but she was awoken by suzanne..n she blabbered smtn in hindi which she couldn't understand..lol..what a way to curse someone!..

mayank needed alice for the meeting but she quit the job..n he was furious..he needed to find another one so he left for the orphanage..

nupur went to the orphanage where she met HIM!..she'd never seen him here before, so it was a surprise for her..n she shouted at him in hindi thinkin he won't understand..

he was getting attracted to her..n he knew he needed to get her!..uh-uh..

she was totally shocked when he suddenly kissed her..but it was hot..she didn't protest until some time since she liked it..but later pushed him off..when he enquired she just brushed it off with a lie..smart..

she didn't ever want to meet him again..n he knew it was his mistake..but they def will..

thnx 4 d pm

update soon

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Nikki

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Posted: 15 years ago

#323

errrr I'm really late aren't I

well I went to the Taj Mahal

and I couldn't get on sooner

then wouldn't you think I would've already commented?
LOL

loved the part

the whole part was really "unexpected" 😆

but I liked how you changed the point of views

and I loved the last sentence

keep on rocking Mahi

btw I need to send you a pm

I'll try to send that in a couple of days

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stuti

@stuti123

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Posted: 15 years ago

#324

amazing update mahek i am loving this ff more nd more do cntinue soon cant wait to read the next part ...............

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_ArTi4ever_

@_ArTi4ever_

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Posted: 15 years ago

#325

simply wonder update mahek..loved it way too much..plzzz continue soon..cant wait 4 the next part

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....Anchal....

@....Anchal....

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Posted: 15 years ago

#326

yaar yeh kya hai?

nupur toh itni achi hai!

and sweet bhi

ek baat batao?

tum kya kisi bhi nupur ko galat nahi dikha sakti ho?

why has nupur to be always very sweet?

oye hoye!

mayank se attracted nupur

hey listen

main abhi thodi der baar comment karti hoon

mummy bula rahi hain........i think she is going to check my cell...and u know that he wud kill me if i delete his messages.

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Jassi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#327

OMG!! pehli meeting me kiss?? lol Loved it a lot!!!!!!! Pleaseeeeeeee updat soooooooooon! -Jassi

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Deepali Seta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#328

Fabulous updates dear..............
just read dem now...........
really sorry d late reply................
but fantastic work dear...........
Keep rocking!!!!!!!!!!!

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premana

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Posted: 15 years ago

#329

areeeeeeeeeee wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tussi to super fast nikle.kisssssssssssssssssssssssssssssss on first meet!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! to fir jab pyar hoga tab kya hoga😉 or agar main jo soch rehi hoon wo sahi hain to shadi se pehle hi free me dono ko baby mill jayega😆anyway wonderfullllllllllllllllllllllllllll update.