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bhargavi

@gopi06

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#291

lovely updt
thanks for the pm

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sariska sujaini

@sariska_mnarti

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#292

Omg mahak

pehle meeting mein hi kiss?????

Agar aise hi milte rahe to pata nahin Kya Kya hoga by god

aur agar yeh shuruwat hai to aage aur bhi hai

eagerly waiting for ur next update

do cont soon

sariska

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Mariyam Ghaffar

@..Mariyam..

Sparkler

Posted: 15 years ago

#293

fantabulous update...
loved ittt...
continue it s0000n...

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#294

Aww Mahak that adorable girl in the end, who is asking for sharing our views is sooo adorable. Wow what an update, you took me on a roller coaster just like N was taken by M, I would have slapped him hard hehe man, N was really kind what could she do, her heart has already started connecting.

Amazing update, keep it up!

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shweta

@cool_shwets

Inactive

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Posted: 15 years ago

#295

Mahak.........🤗

Kya zabardast update tha....😳😳

OMG!!...first meeting mein hi emotions out of control ho gaye...to fir aage jake hoga kya😍!!!😆

Super duper update dear...wo kehte hai na......ummm....zameen phaad dala!!👍🏼

Jaldiiiiiiiiiii update karna...

Love,

Shweta

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Faria Ferdousi

@Faria.

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#296

Mahak after long time i read ur update
haye what an update mahiiiiiiii
just rocking yaar.
u r back with ur awesome update as usual
i loved it so much.
Mayur meeting and then their first kiss - uff brilliant update.
i m drooling over in mayurish land.
i loved nups confident and i loved everything of this update.

fabulous update janiiiiiiiiiiiii

i alwz love ur update.
u r just a wonderful writer.
keep ut up.

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#297

Good going Mahak Liked the part

Evn i didnt expected Mayu will do sumthg lik this in their 1st meeting

Nups really uses Hindi as her power n speaks it wen she knws ppl wnt understand it at all

Love her for that

Lets c how their ways will collide

Waise update was Short sweety

Plz lil long update next tim

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jasmeet

@jasmeet khaneja

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#298

BRILLIANT UPDATE!!!!!
This story...is truelly unexpected.

Pheli...MEETING mein kiss....that was so UNEXPECTED.
BuT I'm liking it........

keep surprising us.....

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mjht_admirer

@mjht_admirer

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#299

oh god mahak !!!! i can feel goosebumps all over my body. yaar if their first meeting is like this then what it would be like when they actually fall in love???? Yaar apni toh band baj jayegi. n u know, u were right, actually romantic stories are easy to write.

Anyway, it was as usual an awesome update with so much passion and romance in the air. totally loved it.

thanks for the pm and for your sweet reply too.

loads of love

vinu