..Pyar dosti aur mohabbat'MJHT FF'..Ep 6 pg 51 - Page 35

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: baby_doll_2305

Awesome update jaan! Loved the prank that Mayank and Samrat had planned! But of course, Uday had to come and ruin it all! Lolz! Gr8 yaar! Do continue soon! And thx for the pm!

hey thanks a lot di=)
will update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver

awesum update @ pg.42 ...

thnx 4 d pm...
-supriya

hey thanks supriya=)
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey fellas.Hope you all are doing good.I,m finally updating my ff after a long period and I hope you all will like the update.And firstly I would like to thank all my readers for reading and commenting on my ff and same goes to the silent readers who keep pressing the like button.Ok here,s the next part.

Pyaar,Dosti aur Mohabbat

The party went very well on yesterday's night and everyone enjoyed every bit of it.Now there,s another beautiful morning and Gunjan had just woke up to find no nupur !."ye subaah subaah di kahan chali gayi hai.Kal raat to meray saath hi soyi thi na"Just then her thoughts were interrupted by some awful noise.It looks like someone was quarrelling with Mayank But who can it be and that to be at 7 in the morning.

She quietly moved out of her room and moved towards the kitchen and there she peeked from the side of the wall so that she could see the whole scene in front of her eyes. And what she saw was the usual thing. Mayur were fighting and quarrelling with each other for what he had tried to do with nupur in the last nights party.

Mayur

N:Kal to main chup hogayi thi magar aaj tumhaari khair nahi.Tumnay mera dress kharab karna chah than a aaj main tumharay saaray baal kharab kardoongi.

M:Dekho Nupur baalon ko mat choona aur waisay bhi wo ek mazaak tha so just chill.

N:Mazaak my foot.Acha hua tum mujhay yahin mil gaye ab tum dekhna kaisa maza chakha ti hoon.

She took the bailan from the corner and start running towards mayank in the whole kitchen.

"NAhi chorooongi aaj tumhay"said nupur trying to catch Mayannk."Pehlay pakar kar to dikhaaao"Mayabk teased her while running but accidently Nupur slipped due to the water which was spilled on the floor but two strong arms caught her and she held those arms tightly and closed her eyes.

Nupur,s Pov

Just a few seconds before, I thought I,m going to have a major fall but his arms caught me before I hit the rock bottom. I don,t know why his proximity always effect me.Even if he,s a slighter close to me,some kind of woozy feelings starts to take place inside me but as soon as he escapes my sight those feelings also disappear with him.I wonder why?And this has been going on from the past years when we first met in our childhood.Nupur please he,s your cousin so you should not take him so much seriously and by the way your raj kumaar is still waiting for you so how can you think about this monkey?POV ends

Nupur stepped out of her thoughts to find mayank staring at her.She felt a little uncomfortable and tried to escape his hold and finally succeeded.

Finally gunjan entered with a bright smile on her face to find an embarrassed mayur.

"Oh to meray peechay ye sab hota rehta hai.Mujhay nahi pata tha ke do log jo ek doosray ki har waqt taang keechtay rehtay hain wo sab ki peet ke peechay…"she was cut off by NUpur."Tu pagal hogayi hai gunjan main to bas….main to basss. She was a little confused and embarrassed to that what to answer cause her sister had seen every thing.Woh main iss Sadu ki kichaayi kar rahi thi aur galti say mera pair phisal gaya aur mujhay iss tarzan nay mujhay bacha liya"And then both the sisters broke into laughter.

"OK enough of your jokes go and get ready cause we are going to be late for the college.Today is your first day so I don,t want any one of you to be late so go and get ready"Mayank ordered while gunjan nodded but nupur spoke again"Haan haan monkey jaa rahay hain khud to tayyar bhi nahi hua hai aur humain baashan suna raha hai"GUnajn seeing that the fight might start again that,s why she grabbed nupur,s hand and lead her to their room back.Whiler maynak was fuming in anger after listening Nupur,s words.

The three had their breakfast and left for their college soon.On the way,Nupur keep blabbering things about her Morena and their traditions and e.t.c . e.t.c. To make her shut up,Mayank took a sudden brake causing nupur to fall down from the front seat."Uffo iss Monkey ko gaadi chalanaay ko kiss nay dedi.Tumhaari asal jaggah jungle main hai.Jaakay wahan pe tree ki ek branch say doosri brach par jay a karo tumharay upar zayada suitable hai"Mayank thought that this break would make an end to her convo but it turned out to be more worst as she was now speaking ot the top of her lungs,Creating as much noise as she can.

Finally they reached college and mayank showed them their classes and handled gunjan to Dia who was going to be Gunjan,s classmate and left with Nupur to his class.

"Hey gunjan dear,to tumhara aaj college main pehla din hai so main tumharay saath tumhaari saaya ban ke rahoongi as per mayank,s order warna wo meri chutti kardega"Gunjan nodded and both giggled that mayank can be so protective for her and her sister.Both Dia and gunjan were walking towards the hallway.

Suddnely Dia,s phone start ringing and she received her call."hello"Dia spoke on the cell."Hey Dia it,s me benji.Yaar I,ve been waiting for you since half an hour.Where are you?Didn,t we decided that we will be bunking today."An angry benji spoke on the phone."OH haan main to bhool hi gayi thi.Zara ek minute hold karna.She turned towards gunjan and spoke"Umm Gunjan dear I,ve to go.Main tumharay saath class attend nahi kar paaongi par main tumhay akela bhi to nahi chor sakti kynkay mayank nay mujhay tumhay sambhaalnay ko kaha tha"Lookin g at Dia,s worried expressions Gunjan decided to let go Dia ."Koi baat nahi Dia main Class khud chali jaaongi.Aur main ab koi choti bachi to nahi hoon ke apna dhayaan na rakh paaon.So you can go Main mayank ko bol doon gi I,ve sent you so don,t worry"Dia thanked gunjan and went away on her own.

Now poor gunjan was now on her own.Although she knew the way to her class cause mayank had already shown her but still,still she was worried,confused and a little terrified.As she walked towards her class,she noticed that many people were looking at her as if she was an alien from Pluto.She clutched her book tight and continue to walk towards her destination.She entered her class to find all the students busy chatting with each other,not even noticing her.She calmly went and set on an empty seat.She started to read her book when a guy entered who looked familiar to her but she was not able to recognize him clearly.Some thing was changed.That beard and those glasses,he was some kind of a teacher.Yeah maybe he is a teacher.He reached towards the teacher,s desk and straightened his glasses which were falling on his nose and spoke loudly.All the students stood up including gunjan but something looks suspicious to her.She thought that there is something wrong with this teacher but she kept quiet and then the students said"Good morning Mr Saxena"

That teacher raised his eyes,they were totally chocklate brown and some kind of mischievous spark was hidden in his eyes(.OK you all must have guess who is this so I won,t tell now.Let the guys complete his prank then I,ll reveal his real name)He cleared his throat and answered"good morning class.Plesae be seated and…wait!"He pointed out gunjan who was just going to sit but due to his voice she stood again in a very shocked expression."Ji sir"the innocent Gunjan answered now getting more terrified that why did he stopped her only."So aapp hain Miss gunjan bhushan,Mayank Sharma ki cousin and the new student of this class.Yahan ke kuch rules hain"Saxena said while observing gunjan,s nervousness and smirked inwardly."ji rules?"she asked confused

"Yes rules har college kay rules hotay hain waisay hi yahan kay bhi rules hain so come here infront of the chalkboard"She stepped out of her seat and walked towards the board while everyone kept staring her every moment.Finally she reached his side and he spoke again"hmmm dikhnay main to aap bohat intelligent lagti hain par ye toh mujhay ushi waqt pata chalega jab main aapko ye task complete karnay ko doonga"Gunjan,Looking towards him"kaisa task Sir?""Aap ko ye picture banani hai,it was a picture of a donkey with specs,aur iskay saath main likhna hai shukla"

Gunjan was shocked that how stupid task that teacher was giving to her but she agreed as she was too innocent to able to see the person behind that look so she started to draw.It was almost 8 when she was just going to finish when she saw that guy sitting beside her seat and now in his real form.It was SAMRAT.And she was shocked that she was going to faint cause she had already felt that maybe she is in a big trouble.Samrat smirked and spoke"Miss gunjan aapka ka kaam khatam hua aur dekho shukla sir bhi aagyae"GUnjan didn,t knew that shukla was the teacher of this college and then she was terrified after seeing shukla sir entering the class.She kept standing on the same spot waiting to get punished for the very first time on her life and it,s only because of that Master prankster.She mumbled"Ab to bhagwaan hi mujhay bacha sakta hai.Samrat shergill main tumhay iskay liye kabhi maaf nahi karoogni"

Ok guys here,s the update.Comment and criticisms are opened so please leave in your views.And you can even give me any suggestions that you want for the couples.

Love

Ash

Precap:Some scenes of Benia,Mayur getting an assignment and Some cute moments of sajan.😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Not feeling so gud yaar...iss liye maybe will take a while for me to edit...sorry about that....


Edit!

Ashiiiii!! Arre yaar, tune tho kamaal hi kar diya aaj! Just loved it! MayUr were totally cute! Man, I could just imagine her running after Mayu with the belan!🤣 man u made my day sweetie! And then sammy playing a prank on poor Gunji! Hope she doesn't get punished yaar!

Hope Sammy saves her and takes the blame!! Godddd! Tu humesha mujhe SG land kyun bhejti hai?! But am very happy now!! Yaar, plz continue it soon...for my sake!!! I can't wait to read more!!!! An really wanna see the sajan part in ur precap!!! Hayye!!! Ok, while u read this comment, I'm off to see SaJan! 😍
Reply wonderful update Hun! Continue
Soon!! Luv ya!
Urs,
Sanju!
Edited by baby_doll_2305 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow lovely part continue soon with some cute moments between SAJAN😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Res! will edit l8r dear. gtg...! sry😊

*Edited*


Hey Ashi,

I finished reading all ur parts just now, n they are excellent.
And the 6th episode.... the PRANK....😆
That was amazing... Sam is such a nuts!! n poor gunji........
BTW in ur ff , is she good with drawing also 😉
Now wat will shukla do?
I hope sammy saves her..............😳

All in all... good parts dear and continue soon...


Edited by amy00487 - 15 years ago

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